书信类英语作文写作高分锦囊妙计(高分套路+中间段写作+结尾段写作)
No.1 高分套路
高考英语作文
但凡应试书信,逃不出三种段落:
一、开头段:四大内容
1、问候;
2、自我介绍;
3、写信背景;为什么会写这封信
4、写信目的;写这封信想达到什么目的
二、中间段:具体问题+具体分析;
三、结尾段:客套话。
口诀
开门见山说意图
咨询建议 123
不同内容可分段
感谢客气不可少
期待回信成老套
经典套话
一、开头段:灵活地去写四种内容:
1、问候
How are you doing?
How is everything going?
How is life treating you?
2、自我介绍
I am LiHua, a 17-year-old boy currently studying in XXX middle school.
I am LiHua, who...
李华同志的个人简历
由于我们在考场上的身份几乎年年都是李华,因此我们在这里有必要了解一下李华同志
的一些个人情况。当然,这位同志的个人情况是可以有我们自己人为设置的。为了给阅卷老
师留下一个好印象,我们将李华同志的个人简历概括为:一个人见人爱的好孩子。
hardworking
diligent
help my parents to do housework
take part in CCTV national English speech competition
won the second prize in CCTV national English speech competition
vice monitor
vice chairman of the students’ union
worked as a volunteer for the Olympic Games
worked as a volunteer for the 21st century
have many foreign friends and often chat with them happily in starbark.
3、写信背景(写信的缘由)
I heard that ...
My teacher told me...
I am informed that...
I learned that...我得知...
I read in your newspaper/ micro-blog /website that...
You said in your last letter that...
4、写信目的
Now, I am writing to do sth.
Now, I am writing this letter to do sth.
Now, I am writing these few lines to do sth.
七种最常见书信的“写信目的”部分的最佳写法
自荐信:
Now, I am writing to apply for the job/position.
感谢信:
Now, I am writing to show/ express my heartfelt gratitude to you.
邀请信:
Now, I am writing to invite you to join/enjoy/suffer/experience the....(as our
guest/ judge/ instructor).
建议信:
Now, I am writing to give you a hand.
求助信:
Now, I am writing to ask you to give me a hand/ do me a favor.
道歉信:
Now, I am writing to show/ express my heartfelt apology to you.
告知信:
Now, I am writing to tell you about the details.
二、中间段:具体问题(主题句)+具体分析(拓展句)
六种最常见书信的“中间段”最佳写法
自荐信:写自己的优势
写法一:
There are four main reasons why I am fit for the position/job. To begin with, ...
Moreover,... What's more,... Finally,...
写法二:
I have three main advantages. First and foremost,...Additonally,...Last but not
least,...
写法三:
I have the confidence that I can handle the job. Firstly,... Secondly, ...Thirdly,...
感谢信:写对方为你所做的事
Every time I (看照片、看录像、看那段时间的日记、回忆那段经历), I just can't help
thinking of you/ what you have done for me. It was so kind of you to (对方做的第
一件事). Besides, you (对方做的第二件事), which really surprised me. Actually, I shall
always remember (对 方做的第 三件事 ), considering that,(第 三件事情 的意义 ).
Nothing will be able to erase our wonderful memories, and I will cherish them
forever.
邀请信:描述具体的活动内容,如活动主题、意义、地点、时间、参加者和其它事项;
Here are some details for the activities. To begin with, (活动主题或活动目的,
如:the theme of the contest is "human and the nature", which is undoubtedly not
only entertaining but also instructive. )Moreover, (活动的地点和时间,如 it will be
in room 501 from 2:00 to 5:00 on the afternoon of June 15th.) What's more,(活动
人员,如:ten outstanding competitors will take part in the contest.)Finally, (其他
信息,如:if you need any further information, please call me at 44876655. )
建议信:写给对方的具体建议
写法一:
There are several simple suggestions for you. To begin with, ... Moreover,...
What's more,... Finally,...
写法二:
Immediate and effective measures must be put into practice. First and
foremost,... Additonally,...Last but not least,...
写法三:
The following suggestions carried out, things would probably become much
better. Firstly,... Secondly,... Thirdly,...
求助信:写具体需要帮助的事项
Hopefully you would be so kind as to give me some suggestions/help on the
following problems. To begin with,(困难一),which has annoyed me for quite a long
time. Moreover,(困难二), for personally I lack the very basic experience on this
matter. Finally,...
常用句型:(做某事有困难)
1、I have trouble in doing sth.
2、I find it extremely hard for me to do sth.
3、Doing sth is another terrible headache for me.
常见困难:
生活方面
与人相处 get along well with my classmates/ the new teacher / my parents.(和
我的同学/新老师/父母相处)
把握时间 arrange and make good use of my everyday time for valuable things.
(安排和利用每天的时间去做有意义的事情)
明确目标 know the purpose of my life and the destination of my future in order
to passionately live a purpose-driven life everyday. (知道我生命的目的和未来的目标,
以便每天充满激情地过着“目标驱动”的生活)
学习方面
不懂语法 have trouble in mastering the advanced grammar rules and put them
into use in my speaking and writing.
进步太慢 find myself making progress not as fast as before, which has been
annoying me for a long time.
精力有限 can't be passionate and energetic all day long so as to make every
moment meaningful and splendid.
道歉信:描述不能或没能做到某事(如:赴约、还书、提供某种帮助)的原因
一般要以记叙文的形式写出以下三个内容:
1: 不能做某事的缘由;
2:对方能够谅解你的理由
I’m sure if you were me, you would make the same choice.
3:衷心希望对方能够谅解;
例 1、因不能按期还书而道歉——因为被我表妹强行借走了
Dear Kate,
How is everything going? I am writing to beg your pardon for my long delaying
in returning to you your “Gone with the Wind” which I read through with great
interest .
I had already finished reading the book and was about to return it when my
cousin came to see me. Never having seen the book, She was so interested in it that
I had no choice but to allow her finish the book. I hope that in view of the additional
delight thus afforded by your book, you will overlook my negligence(疏忽)in not
returning it sooner. (然而,看在你的那本书能够带来的双倍喜悦的面子上,希望你能够
原谅我没有及早还书的错误)
I sincerely hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.
Thanking you again for the loan.
Sincerely yours,
Tom
例 2、不能如期赴约而道歉——因为要参加英语比赛
Dear Tom,
How is everything going? I am writing to beg your pardon for my not being able
to join you for the trip to Beijing next weekend which we planned before.
I have been looking forward to the trip for a long time and have done a lot of
preparation. However, I am informed that the CCTV national English competition is
going to be held on that day. You know that I've been waiting for the chance for
months and thus by no means can I miss it. As a result, I cannot make it for the trip.
I’m sure if you were me, you would make the same choice. I do hope you can accept
my apologies and understand my situation.
Please allow me to say sorry again.
Sincerely yours,
LiHua
说明:除了道歉信中间段落需要写成记叙形式,其余五种书信都应该写成议论形式。不
管是记叙还是议论,中间段落第一句都应该写一个概括性质的“主题句”——这是我们的原则!
三、结尾段:想写好第三段,就要背过各种客套话!
六种书信“结尾段”最佳写法
自荐信:
Hopefully the chance would be offered to me. If chosen/elected, I would
dedicate all my energy and wisdom to the company/activity/club/class. Thank you
for reading my letter/ listening to my speech in such a hot summer. Looking forward
do your reply at your earliest convenience./ I won't let you down.(我不会让你们失望)
说明:在这个段落模板中,我们融合了自荐信结尾段和竞选演讲结尾段两个段落,两种
结尾段都需要四个句子。
感谢信:
I, on behalf of my whole family/class/school, would like to thank you again (for
what you have done) (for me/us). May you be blessed (in everything you do).
我代表我的全家再次向你所做的一切向你表达感谢。祝你万事如意!
邀请信:
We are sincerely looking forward to your coming. My schoolmates/family and I
would feel much honored if you could make it. I would like to meet you at the
school gate and please drop me a line or give me a call to let me know your decision
soon. Thank you.
我们衷心期望您能大驾光临。如果您能来,同学们和我将非常的荣幸。我会在校门口迎
接您,请回信或打电话告诉我您的决定。谢谢。
建议信:
Hopefully these suggestions will be of great help to you. If there is anything
else I can do for you, please let me know as soon as possible. I'm sure you can solve
your problem before long.
helpful --- of great help
beautiful--- of great beauty
difficult -- of great difficulty
different –- of great difference
useful --- of great use
harmful --- of great harm
求助信:
Hopefully your kind and timely help would be offered to me. Looking forward
to your reply at your earliest convenience.
道歉信:
Hopefully you would accept my sincere apologize.
说明:六种书信最后的结尾都是:Best wishes, / Yours truly, /XXX
范文一
Dear Tom,
How are you doing? How time flies! It has been half a year since I came back to
China. I miss you so much!
Every time I catch sight of our photos taken in America, I just can't help thinking
of what you have done for me. It was so kind of you to help me practice my spoken
English patiently. Besides, you taught me a lot of advanced grammar, which really
surprised me. Actually, I shall always remember you shared with me many
outstanding English novels, considering that I am extremely interested. Nothing will
be able to erase our wonderful memories, and I will cherish them forever.
By the way, could you please tell me Mr. Smith’s telephone number and his
email address? I would like to turn to him for some help.
What’s more, I remember you are crazy about traditional Chinese culture. The
spring festival is around the corner. Why not come to enjoy it? I promise you won’t
regret.
Looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes!
Yours truly,
Li Hua
范文二
Dear Tom,
How are you doing? How time flies! I have been back to China for half a year. I
miss you so much!
Every time I catch sight of our photos taken in America, I can’t help thinking of
what you have done for me. It was so kind of you to help me with my spoken English.
Besides, you made me master a lot of advanced English grammar, which really
surprised me. What’s more, I shall always remember you encouraged me to correct
my pronunciation by enjoying American TV programs.
By the way, Could you please tell me how can I get in touch with Mr. Smith? I
have some learning problems to ask him.
Besides, I know you are interested in the historical Chinese civilization. Why not
come to China to enjoy the Spring festival? I promise you won’t regret!
Looking forward to your reply!
Yours truly,
Lihua
范文三
Dear Sir or Madam,
How are you doing? I am Lihua, a 17-year-old high school student who is crazy
about your newspaper which I have been enjoying for 5 years.
There are two main reasons why I like your newspaper best. For one thing, news
not only about China but also about other countries has been reported in your
newspaper. For another, so many stories of famous figures are introduced, which
makes your newspaper more meaningful and splendid.
By the way, here is a sincere suggestion for you. Why not publish some articles
on English study? I’m sure they would be rather popular.
Thank you for reading my letter in such a hot summer.
Best wishes!
Yours truly,
Li Hua
范文四
Dear LiMing,
How are you doing? Our head teacher told me you couldn’t get along well with
our classmates. As the vice monitor, I am writing to give you a hand.
In my opinion, there are two reasons accounting for your problem. For one
thing, you seldom chat with us, consequently, we don't know you well. For another,
you are so shy that you have trouble in expressing yourself.
Here are several suggestions for you. First and foremost, you are supposed to
talk with others more, so that you can make some close friends. Additionally, you
can take part in some afterschool activities. Last but not least, if I were you, I would
often answer questions in class.
As your friend, I will do my utmost to help you. For example, I will introduce you
to my own friends who are as friendly as I am. Hopefully would adapt to the new
environment before long! If there is anything else I can do for you, please let me
know.
Best wishes!
Yours truly,
Zhang Hua
常见的建议句型:
You should do sth.
You are supposed to do sth.
You ought to do sth.
You’d better do sth.
Why not do sth?
Why don’t you do sth?
If I were you, I would do sth.
It is beneficial to do sth.
Doing sth is another wise choice for you.
I would encourage you to do sth.
It is high time that you/we did sth.