2021新高考英语I卷读后续写深度解读

2021 新高考英语 I 卷读后续写深度解读 读后续写是一种将阅读与写作紧密结合的考查形式，旨在考查考生的综合语言运用能力。考生要抓 住故事的叙事线索，依据原文的写作思路续写文章，并适当发散。 对于这类题型，我们需要注意的问题是： 1、写什么 2、怎么写 今天我们将以 2021 年的新高考 I 卷题目为例，对英语读后续写方法探究！ The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do. The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely. Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为 150 左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. 【原文分析】 本文以第三人称，描述了一对双胞胎在母亲节为妈妈做早餐，送上一份惊喜的故事。这也是新高考 的第一次续写真题。整体难度不大，所描述事件贴近生活，是每个孩子都可能经历过的事情，故事情节 的发展也一目了然。如何在平淡的情节上增加故事色彩，则是本篇文章写作的更高境界。 明线：A surprise 暗线：love between families 根据续写部分第一段的首句，可以知道正在双胞胎失望之时，父亲的出现给他们带来了希望。可以 从以下的几个方面入手去考虑问题： 呈上： How did father feel on seeing the mess? 细节： What did father do to help? 启下： Who cooked the breakfast at last? 在第一段的描写当中，同学们可以充分的利用原文中的信息，描写做饭的场景。以达到对原文呼应 的目的。父亲帮忙后，怎样还让母亲感觉到惊喜呢？这是父亲和孩子们之间的一个小秘密。 第二段则是向妈妈献上惊喜的时刻了。 呈上：What did they say? 细节：How did mother react and feel? 点题: What a surprise! 第二段可以运用到平时练习用过的表示惊喜、感动的情感描写。 温馨提示：据说，答题卡是长成这样子的， 行高 8 毫米，行宽≈19 厘米（实际宽度 18.7-18.8 厘米） 读后续写:共 18 行（段落开头占 2 行，可写作的空间 8.5 行*2 段） 所以，大家在写作的时候，特别是文采洋溢的同学们，一定要控制好字数。不要超出答题范围呀！ 【下水作文】 续写下水文 1： As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. Seeing the mess, their father froze with shock, as if rooted on the ground. But soon he realized their intention. In consequence, he joined the twins in preparing the Mother ’ s Day surprise. Though he had never been seen cooking, actually, he was expert in doing so. The twins assisted their father with the breakfast with great curiosity, and it was a pleasure to team up with their father. Eventually, they could smell how good the dishes were. The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. They said “Happy Mother’s Day”, with their eyes twinkling with excitement. Their father laughed heartily and told her the twins had prepared breakfast for her. Then the twins whispered to her that they loved her so much and they were eager to see her smile every day. Hearing the words, so glad was she that her face beamed and his bright smile lit up the room. At that moment, they all sensed how beautiful something living could be. What a sweet surprise! （白虹老师）（160 词） 续写下水文 2： As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. Seeing the the black bread and the spilled porridge, Dad suddenly figured out their secret. A smile of understanding flashed across his face. Without a second thought, Dad offered to help. A ripple of excitement ran through them. They helped clean the kitchen while their father cooked a sandwich and some porridge skillfully. Soon, the delicious smell of breakfast filled the kitchen. Dad hinted to show that it was a secret and went back to the bedroom, asking the twins to go on to carry out their great plan. The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. They yelled “ Happy Mother ’ s Day, darling Mummy! A big surprise for you!” When she saw the breakfast, her eyes widened up and twinkled with excitement. Dad was pretending to be surprised to see such delicious food. Mother hugged the twins and showed her thanks. She tasted and praised that it was the best breakfast she had ever had. The twins smiled to their father secretly. A feeling of love filled the whole room. What a beautiful surprise! （刘洁老师）（170 词）（转载自引路星英语） 续写下水文 3： As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. “ Don’ t panic!” he handed each one a wet towel, helping them clean the mess quickly. After that, Jeff stammered out their plan, his face flushing. However, Father laughed, “Sounds great! I can teach you to cook.” At this, Jenna and Jef almost jumped to their feet, joy in eyes. Under his careful guidance, it didn’ t take long before the French toast and chicken porridge were ready. Everything settled, Father left the kitchen, promising to keep their secret. The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. Meeting their smiling eyes, Mother felt confused until they presented the breakfast and said “Happy Mother’s Day”. Mother gave them a tight hug, “Unbelievable! You can cook! It’ s the biggest surprise I have received. ” Her face lit up with happiness. “ They have known how to take care of others. ” Father said in response to her excitement, winking at Jenna and Jef. They couldn’t help giggling. It was a secret only shared between them. 附：续写原文 As the twins looked around them in dismay, their father appeared in the doorway. One look and he knew what they were up to. Seeing their crestfallen faces, he told them to clean up the kitchen while he helped them make breakfast for Mother. The twins cheered up and did as told. Within an hour, the kitchen was cleaned, and Father had made some egg sandwiches and cooked some oat porridge. Then he sneaked back to bed. The twins prepared the breakfast tray, adding a card they had made, and then carried the tray upstairs to their parents’ bedroom. The twins woke their mother up by hugging her and yelling ‘Happy Mother’s Day, darling Mummy! ’ Mother hugged the twins. Her eyes widened at the sight of the breakfast tray. She shook Father who was pretending to snore. He feigned astonishment when he saw the breakfast. Mother bit into a sandwich and said it was the best she had ever tasted. Jeff immediately wanted to have a bite. Jenna caught her father’ s eye and they winked at each other secretly.