黑龙江省哈尔滨市南岗区三年中考一模英语试卷分类汇编：书面表达

黑龙江省哈尔滨市南岗区 2019-2021 年三年中考一模英语试卷分类汇编 书面表达 2021 年黑龙江省哈尔滨市南岗区中考一模英语试题 六、书面表达（本题共 20 分） 4 月 22 日是世界地球日（The World Earth Day）。假如你是英语校报的编辑李华, 请你根据 以下信息, 在校报上给你的同学们写一封信, 向大家介绍世界地球日, 并倡议大家共同努力, 改善我们生活的环境。 写作要点∶ 1. 希望全校同学都能积极地保护环境。 2. 介绍世界地球日∶ （1）时间∶每年的 4 月 22 日; （2）范围∶全球; （3）目的∶提高人们对环境问题的认识。 3. 请对中学生如何改善我们生活的环境提出具体建议。 写作要求∶ 1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。 2. 可适当加入细节, 使内容充实, 行文连贯。 3. 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。 4. 至少 80 词。 Dear classmates, The World Earth Day is coming. ____________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ Let's protect our environment together! Yours, Li Hua 答案： Dear classmates, The World Earth Day is coming. Now the earth is in bad condition. For example, in some places, the air and water pollution is so serious that it causes many deaths. At the same time, many animals and plants are in danger because of the destruction of their habitats. Luckily, we human beings have realized the problem. On April 22nd, millions of people across the world do something good for the earth. Some clean up beaches and water, some pick up rubbish, others give speeches to call on more people to take action. But can we save the earth only by one day’s work? The future of our planet depends on our efforts. What we should do is to make every day Earth Day. Only by taking good care of it every day can we hope to live in harmony with nature. Let's protect our environment together! Yours, Li Hua 2020 年黑龙江省哈尔滨市南岗区中考一模英语试题 书面表达 80.假如你是王一，你的加拿大网友 Peter 知道新冠疫情的爆发 (the outbreak of the COVID-19)，他非常关心你的近况。请你根据以下信息，给 Peter 写一封电子邮件告诉他你 在家进行网络学习和生活的情况，并告诉他作为一名中学生，如何成为成功的网课学习者 (learner)。 写作要点： 1. 加拿大也有新冠疫情出现，请 Peter 保护好自己。 2. 介绍一下你的近况。 (1) 周一到周五在家上网课； (2) 在周末时帮父母做家务，同时也和家人一起听音乐、聊天； (3) 每天进行大约 30 分钟的室内运动。 3. 对在家上网课期间，作为一名中学生，如何成为成功的网课学习者提出具体的建议。 写作要求： 1.不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。 2.可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。 3.字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。 4.至少 80 词。 Dear Peter, How are you doing? Best wishes! Yours, Wang Yi 【答案】Dear Peter, How are you doing? There is also an outbreak of the COVID-19 in Canada. Please protect yourself. I have online classes at home from Monday to Friday. On weekends, I help my parents with housework and listen to music and chat with my family. I think chatting can relieve people's mood. My parents and I do about 30 minutes' indoor sports every day. As a middle school student, I think the following suggestions may be helpful for a successful online learner. First, we can preview the relevant content by ourselves. Second, we should listen to the teacher carefully. Third, we should review and finish the work after class. Above all, we should pay attention to rest and not overuse our eyes. Best wishes! Yours, Wang Yi 【解析】 【详解】1.题干解读：本题属于材料作文，题目的开头已给出。给 Peter 写一下疫情期间 自己的学习和生活情况。写作时要紧扣材料内容并进行适当发挥。适当使用副词和连词等增 加亮点。写好时，再阅读一遍，减少语法错误，不要犯单词拼写上的错误。 2.例文点评：这是一篇优秀的例文，写出了自己家中学习和生活的情况，分条阐述了题目中 的要求，最后一段写出了自己的建议。例文结构清晰，行文连贯，恰当地运用了副词和连词 等用以过渡，增强了整篇文章的逻辑关系。 3.高分亮点：词组：protect yourself；online classes；On weekends；relieve people's mood；every day；by ourselves；listen to the teacher carefully；overuse our eyes； 句型：祈使句、并列句和宾语从句 Please protect yourself. /On weekends, I help my parents with housework and listen to music and chat with my family. /I think chatting can relieve people's mood. /Above all, we should pay attention to rest and not overuse our eyes. 【点睛】书面表达： 首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中 可能要用到的表达，例如 protect yourself；online classes；On weekends；relieve people's mood； every day；by ourselves；listen to the teacher carefully 等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作 过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比 较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅，如 however；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼 写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是 否正确，词数是否符合要求等。 黑龙江哈尔滨市南岗区 2019 届九年级中考一模英语试题 六、书面表达（本题共 20 分） 假如你是李琳，想告诉你的美国笔友 Laura 今年你是如何度过春节的。请根据以下信息 给 Laura 写一封电子邮件，告诉她今年过春节的具体情况，并告诉她春节期间禁放烟花有什 么好处。 写作要点： 1. 写信目的：告诉 Laura 今年你是如何度过春节的。 2. 今年过春节的具体情况： （1）春节之前：你在业余时间帮忙做家务； （2）春节期间：享受美食、家人聚会； （3）不同的春节：春节期间哈尔滨禁放烟花（ban fireworks）。 3. 说一说春节期间禁放烟花有什么好处。 写作要求： 1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。 2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。 3. 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。 4. 至少 80 词。 Dear Laura, How is everything going? ____________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes! Yours, Li Lin 答案： Dear Laura， How is everything going? I am writing to tell you how we spend the Spring Festival in China. Before Spring Festival, I like to do housework in my spare time. During the Spring Festival, families returned home from different places to reunite and enjoyed delicious food. Dumplings were one of the most traditional delicacies. Different places celebrate Spring Festival in different ways. Fireworks were banned in Harbin during the Spring Festival this year. But I think it’s not a good idea to ban fireworks. Because it will pollute the air and do harm to people’s health. In addition，banning fireworks can save money. Looking forward to your visit during the Spring Festival. Best wishes! Yours, Li Lin 黑龙江省哈尔滨市南岗区 2018 届九年级中考一模英语试题 六、书面表达(本题共 20 分) 假如你是安琪, 你的纽约笔友 Cathy 来信说, 因为父母来哈尔滨工作, 她下周要转入你校, 她向你询问一些学校的情况, 同时延成你的意见, 是否应该住校。此外, 你趣请 Czthy 参加 校组织的“五一山适动, 请根据以下提示写一封回信. 1. 欢迎 Cathy 来你校读书。为了保证青少年的睡眠时间, 学生早 8:10 到校, 晚 5:00 放学。 2. “五一”爬山活动的安排: (1)集合时间:五月一日早 8:00;2)集合地点:龙塔前的广场 3. 表达你支持或不支持住校的观点, 并写出至少两个理由。(例如:你支持 Cathy 住校，因为 住校方便与同学交流;能学会照顾自己……或者你不支持住校, 因为在家能休息得更好与家 人相处时间更长……) 写作要求: 1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。 2. 可适当加入细节, 使内容充实, 行文连贯。 3. 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。 4. 至少 80 词。 Dear Cathy， How are you doing? _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes! Yours, An Qi 答案： Dear Cathy， How are you doing? I know you are going to our school next week because your parents will come to work in Harbin. Welcome to our school. I don’t think you should live in school because you can rest better at home and spend much time with your family. In order to ensure teenagers' sleep time, students arrive at school at 8:10 a.m. and leave school at 5:00 p.m. We are going to organize May Day Mountain Climbing Event, we are going to meet at 8.00 a.m. on May 1st on the square in front of the Dragon Tower. I hope you can join us and have a good time.