中考英语写作专题指导学校生活优质

第二部分 高频话题写作指导 九年级（全）Units 13-14 学校生活 写作导图 从广西近五年“学校生活”相关话题的 书面表达来看，其主要涉及的命题角度为： 高中生活的畅想及打算和课余生活，如： 2014年河池以“My life in the high school”为 题，畅想自己的高中生活；2013年玉林以 “丰富多彩的课余生活”为话题进行描述； 2011年贵港以书信的方式汇报自己的学习情 况和高中生 活的打算。同时，从全国近五年的命题 方向可知，该话题还可从“学校的体育 运动”、“学校的安全教育”、“学校 的校纪校规”等角度设题。以（2014年 河池）为例： peaceful, beautiful, quiet, be colorful with the flower and grass, wide, bright campus Out-of- class activities My life in the high school knowledge, kind, be strict with, care for helpful, get along well, kind learn by oneself, group work, work hard take an active part in, colorful, wonderful, all kinds of, keep fit study students teachers 亮点句型速成 常用句型：The homework is very difficult, but we must finish it. 推荐句型: ①The homework is so difficult. But we must try to do it by ourselves and finish it on time. ②No matter how difficult the homework is, we must try to do it by ourselves and finish it on time. 推荐句型：①I feel terrible today for I failed again in the math exam. ②How terrible I feel today! I failed again in the math exam. 常用句型：I feel very sad today, because I didn’t pass the math exam again. 开头句： 1. My high school life will be colorful and wonderful. 2. Hello, I am... in No.1 Middle School! 中间句： 1. It’s difficult but interesting. 2. I take the subway to school and it takes 25 minutes. 3. The early bus takes him to school. 4. The bus ride usually takes about 25 minutes. 5. Last week’s talent show in our class was a great success. 6. Studying grammar is a great way to learn a language. 7. I have learned a lot by that way. 8. We have a lot of rules at my school/home. 9. You have given me so much help that I will never forget... 10. The school life is very busy and exciting. There are many activities in our school, such as... 结尾句： 1. Our school is clean and beautiful. There are many trees and flowers around. 2. Our teachers have taught us a lot. They not only teach us how to learn, but also teach us how to be a useful person in society. 详见“28天话题词汇分类速记 表”话题（五）学校、话题（十八） 语言学习 典例剖析（2014河池） 三年的初中生活即将结束，你马上就 要进入高中学习，请以My life in the high school 为题，根据下表所提供的信息和 提示词，用英语写一篇小短文，畅想自 己未来的高中生活。 内容要点 校园 1. 校园（campus）宁静而美丽， 教室宽敞明亮，是学习的好地方。 老师 2. 老师知识渊博，严格要求学生又 关爱学生。 内容要点 同学 3. 与同学友好相处。 学习 4. 自主学习和积极参与小组学习， 力争学习取得进步 。 课外活动 5. 积极参加各种课外活动，保持身 体健康。 提示词： peaceful（宁静的）， knowledgeable（知识渊博的），宽敞明 亮（wide and bright）, care for（关爱）， learn by oneself（自主学习），take an active part in（积极参加），group work （小组学习），out-of-class activities（课 外活动） 要求: 1. 短文必须陈述你的高中校园、老师、同学、 学习和课外活动五个方面的内容，每个方面用 2～3句话表述； 2. 所给的提示词都必须用上（可适当发挥）， 词数80左右（不含已给出句子的词数）； 3. 短文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名和地名； 4. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范。 My life in the high school My junior school will be over. And I’m going to my high school in September. I think my high school life will be colorful and meaningful. The campus of my high school will_____ ____________________________________ Wonderful high school life! I can’t wait! 【审题指导】细读所给的文字提示，提取信息： 1.短文必须陈述你的高中校园、老师、同学、 学习和课外活动五个方面的内容，每个方面用 2-3句话表述，写作时用第一人称。 2.应使用一般将来时。 3.词数80词左右，不得出现真实姓名、校名和 地名。 【范文点评】 My life in the high school My junior school will be over. And I’m going to m y h i g h s c h o o l i n September. ①I think my high school life will be colorful and meaningful. ①展望高中生 活会很有意义、 丰富多彩。 colorful和 meaningful充 分体现了作者 对高中生活的 憧憬。 ②The campus of my high school will be peaceful and beautiful. The classroom will be wide and bright. It must be a good place to study. The teachers will be know- ledgeable. They will be strict with the students but they care for them, too. I will get along well with ②分别从校园、 老师、同学、学 习、课外活动几 个方面介绍自己 的高中生活。介 绍 中 运 用 了 p e a c e f u l a n d beautiful, wide and bright, be knowledgeable, my classmates. I will learn by myself and take an active part in group work. And I will try my b e s t t o m a k e b i g progress. I will take part in all kinds of out-of- class activities and keep fit. g e t a l o n g w e l l with, learn by myself , take an， active part in, make big progress, keep fit等短语， 使 文 章 的 表 现 力 更加丰富。 ③Wonderful high school life! I can’t wait！ ③总结全文，说 明自己的高中生 活将会很精彩。