第二部分
高频话题写作指导
八年级(上) Units 8-10
制定计划
写作导图
从广西近五年“制定计划”相关话题的
书面表达来看,其主要涉及的命题角度为:
制定学习、班级、学校、团队、假期、晚会、
社会实践等的活动计划,如:2014年南宁征
集毕业典礼活动计划;2014年柳州去幸福村
做志愿者的活动计划;2014年北海讨论班级
户外活动的事项; 2012年Li Tao去暑期度假的
活动安排;2012年记录参加的一次社会实
践活动;2010年南宁写邮件通知郊游的活
动安排;2010年北海草拟夏令营活动的通
知。由此可见,该话题是广西各地市考查
频次较高的话题,应引起考生的重视。以
(2014年南宁)为例:
be happy to show…
when ,where
Sending best wishes
(headmaster)
Showing thanks
(teachers)
…
Beginning
Ending
Plan for
the
gradu-
ation
cere-
mony
Three
activities
hope, choose
亮点句型速成
常用句型:He wants to relax and learn
something in the countryside.
推荐句型:
①He wants to not only relax but also
learn something in the countryside.
②He prefers to stay in the countryside
for that he can relax and learn something
there.
③He wishes to go to the countryside in
order that/so that he can relax and learn
something there.
开头句:
1. The summer vacation is coming, and I
prepare to visit my grandparents in the
countryside.
2. My classmates decided/made a decision to
help the people in the old home.
中间句:
1. He wants to not only relax but also learn
something in the countryside.
2. I am looking forward to seeing you this
summer vacation.
3. To work out a plan, one has to start with
some research.
4. I haven’t made up my mind whether to
go skating or not.
5. I have arranged a one-day trip to
Chongqing for you.
6. It’ll take about two hours to get there by
bus.
7. At about eleven o’clock, we’ll leave the
Summer Palace for Old Beijing.
结尾句:
1. Let’s make a plan for the coming vacation
together.
2. Make a good plan for your summer holiday
and do something meaningful.
详见“28天话题词汇分类速记表”话
题(九)计划与安排
典例剖析
初中毕业之际,校报“英语角”栏目向同学
们征集毕业典礼活动计划。假定你是李华,请根
据要点写一封信,提出你的建议。
写作要点:
毕业典礼
时间、地点 7月1日,学校报告厅
三项活动
1. 校长讲话送祝福
2. 学生发言谈感恩
3. ……
【审题指导】
细读所给的文字提示,可以提取以下信息:
1. 本文是向同学们征集毕业典礼活动的倡议信,
因此文章为应用文,需注意书信的基本格式;所
采用的时态应以一般将来时为主。最好是先开门
见山说出你此时的感受,再对计划内容进行说明,
说出实施计划方案,即你自己的见解。
2. 计划内容给出了两项,我们要补充一项:学生
给母校赠礼物、学生的节目表演、茶话会等,以
使文章内容更加丰满。
【范文点评】
① I ’ m v e r y
happy to have the
chance to show you
m y p l a n f o r t h e
graduation ceremony.
②We will have it
in our school hall on
July 1st.
①首句用to引导的动
词不定式表达自己写
这篇文章的目的;
②用介词in和on明确
指出活动安排的时间
和地点,简洁明了,
让读者一目了然;
③At the beginning of
t h e m e e t i n g , o u r
headmaster will give
us a speech, sending
b e s t w i s h e s t o
everyone there. It may
last for ten minutes.
Then three students
chosen from us will
have a
③文中At the
beginning of, Then,
Finally三个过渡词的
连续使用,使毕业典
礼的安排条理清晰,
也会让读者清楚地看
到文章的发展脉络,
对作文留下好的印象;
talk about showing their
thanks to their teachers.
It may last for fifteen
minutes. Finally, we will
have a big party. Both the
teachers and the students
can sing, dance or act in
the party. We will have
great fun.
同时,give sb. a
speech, send best
wishes to sb., last
for等短语的使用,
展示了作者较强
的语言驾驭能力
和英文写作功底。
This is what we
will do. I hope you will
choose my plan.
Yours,
Li Hua