第二部分
高频话题写作指导
七年级(下) Units 1-4
规章制度
写作导图
从广西近五年“规章制度”相关话题的书面
表达来看,其主要涉及的命题角度为:学校规章
制度,如:2014年梧州以“Our School Rules”为
题谈谈自己学校的校规。同时,从全国近五年的
命题方向可知,该话题还可以从“交通规则制
度”、“生活中的普遍行为规范”等角度设题。
以(2014梧州)为例:
be late for class, eat
/listen to music in
class, quarrel and
fight, run in the
hallway, smoke
wear uniforms, clean
the classroom, keep
quiet in the library, be
friendly to others…
School
rules
Beginning
Can’t/mustn’t/a
ren’t allowed to
do
Can/must/h
ave to/are
allowed to
do
Conclusion
亮点句型速成
常用句型:We should help protect the
environment.
推荐句型: It’s important and necessary
for us to help protect the environment.
常用句型:Don’t crowd with each other.
推荐句型: Don’t crowd with each other
especially when we go upstairs or
downstairs.
开头句:
1. There are many rules in our daily life.
2. In order to grow safely, our school has
made many safety rules for us to follow.
中间句:
1. If we are in danger, we must call the
police for help in time.
2. We should be friendly and get on well
with others, don’t quarrel or even fight.
3. We must obey traffic rules and mustn’t
cross the streets when the traffic lights are
red.
结尾句:
1.I think safety comes first.
2. All in all, we should obey the rules
above.
典例剖析(2014梧州)
人们常说:“没有规矩,不成方圆”,合理
的校规对于学生的健康成长至关重要。请你根据
以下所给内容要点,以“Our School Rules”为题写
一篇英文短文,谈谈你们的校规。
内容要点:
1. 你们学校有哪些校规?
2. 谈谈你对这些校规的看法。
3. 请说说你的好建议。
要求:
1. 文中必须包括所给提示中1-3项内容,可展开思
路,适当发挥;
2. 文中不能出现真实的校名、人名和其他真实信
息;
3. 不少于80词。
【审题指导】细读所给的文字提示,可以提取以
下信息:
1. 这是一篇命题作文,内容主要包括:学校的校
规;对这些校规的看法;提出好的建议。
2. 可展开思路,适当发挥,使文章连贯通顺,写
作时不要只简单翻译提示要点。
3. 本文要求写出校规,提出看法和建议,写作时
主要用第一人称,通常用一般现在时。
4. 词数应不少于80词,且不得出现真实姓名、校
名及其他真实信息。
【范文点评】
Our School Rules
①There are many
rules at our school. From
Monday to Friday, we
have to get to school
b e f o r e 7 : 0 0 i n t h e
morning.
①用there be句
型引出主要话
题:校规,点
明文章的核心
思想是谈论校
规。
②We must wear
school uniforms,
and I think it is
good for us because
uniforms can make
us look smart.
② 此 处 使 用 了 省 略
that的宾语从句,及
because引导的原因状
语此句,显示了作者
深厚的语言功底,增
加了文章的可读性。
③We must listen to
our teachers carefully
in class and finish our
homework after school.
③and连接的并列
句把课堂内外的活
动 结 合 起 来 , i n
class 和after school
短语使文章更加生
动。
④We are not allowed to
use mobile phones in
class. I think the rules
are very strict but useful,
and we should follow
them.
④ 被 动 语 态
的 使 用 丰 富
了句式结构。
⑤We have so
much homework that
we have little free
time to do what we
love to do.
⑤so...that结构的使
用强调了这样的校
规产生的结果。状
语从句使用自如,
显示作者较高的语
言运用能力。
⑥In my opinion,
w e s h o u l d h a v e
more free time to
take part in all
kinds of activities
and improve our
abilities.
⑥In my opinion,
take part in, all
kinds of等短语的使
用彰显了作者词汇
之丰富,也是增分
的亮点。