2022年高考英语专题复习:英语满分作文模板一、邀请信满分优范本假定你是李华,想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸(paper-cutting)艺术展。请给他写封信,内容包括:1.展览时间、地点2.展览内容;注意:1.词数100左右2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯DearHenry,(说明写信目的)I’mLiHua,oneofyourstudentsI’mwritingtoinviteyoutovisitthepaper-cuttingexhibition.Paper-cuttingisoneofChinesetraditionsandI’msureyouwilllikeit.(介绍活动内容和好处)TheexhibitionwillbeheldinthelocalmuseumnextSaturday.SomefamousChineseartistswillperformonthatday.Meanwhile,somebeautifulpaper-cuttingworks,collectedfromalloverthecountry,willbeexhibitedthere.Ifyoulike,youcanalsojoinin分词作定语说明剪纸来源paper-cutting.I’mcertainlynotonlywillitbearealfeastbutcanhelpyouhaveabettercertain,feast,haveabetterunderstandingof等高级词汇+notonly…butalsounderstandingofChinesetraditionalculture.倒装句表达活动的好处(表达愿望)Iwouldbequitepleasedifyoucouldacceptmyinvitationandcome.Yours,LiHua题型素材积累——邀请与希望背满分句型夺人眼球开头句1.It’smypleasure/agreathonorformetoinviteyoutojoinusin........我非常荣幸地邀请你和我们一起........2.I’mmorethandelightedtoinviteyouto....我非常高兴地邀请你....3.IwonderifI/wehavethehonortoinviteyoutotheparty.我想知道我/我们是否能有幸邀请你参加派对。4.Iwonderifyouwouldliketocometotheactivity.我想知道你是否愿意来参加活动。5.Wearehaving/planning........on......(date)andwefeelitwouldbeagreatideaifyoucouldjoin第26页共26页
us.我们定于.....(日期).........(活动),如果你能来参加就太好了。亮点出彩篇中句1.Thefollowingaresomedetailsabout......../Herearesomedetailsabout........../Somedetailsabout......areasfollows..........的细节如下2.Tobeginwith,wewill...Besides,therewillbeanumberof/variousactivitiessuchas.....whichwill.....首先,我们将.....;此外,将会有许多活动,例如.......这将........3.This/Thesewillbefollowedby....../Thenfollows.......这/这些之后将会有....../然后是.........4.Ifyouhavenootherplansfor.....(时间),willyoudousafavorof(客气真诚地邀请)comingto..........?如果你........(时间)没有其它安排,能否赏脸来........?韵味无穷结尾句1.Idohopeyouwillacceptour/myinvitationifitisconvenienttoyou.我真心的希望你方便的话能接受我们/我的邀请。2.We/Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldconfirmyourparticipationatyourearliestconvenience.如果你能尽早在你方便时确认参加,我们/我将不胜感激。3.We/Iwouldfeelmuchhonoredifyoucouldcome.如果你能来,我们/我将倍感荣幸。4.Wearelookingforwardto/longingforyourcoming.我们期待着您的到来。5.We’dbemorethandelightedifyoucouldcomeandsharetheunforgettablemomentwithus.如果你能来和我们共度这难忘的时刻,我们将十分高兴。6.Wouldyoupleaseletmeknowassoonaspossibleifyoucanacceptmyinvitation?如果你能接受我的邀请,能否尽早让我知道?7.Pleasekeepmeinformedassoonaspossibleofwhetheryouareabletocomeornot.请尽快通知我您是否能来。满分模版巧用题型解读邀请朋友一起参加某种活动,是高考写作中一种常见的考形式。邀请信一定要将活动的时间、地点、内容写清楚。写作步骤第一步:简要说明活动,并邀请对方。第二步:介绍活动具体内容、并说明受邀人参加理由。第26页共26页
第三步:期待对方接受邀请,并表示感谢。满分巧模板Dear___________,I’mgladtotellyouthattherewillbe______________(内容)at/in_______________(地点)on____________(时间),Wewouldbehonoredifyoucouldcomeandjoinus.Asscheduled,theactivitywillstartat____________(具体时间).Therewillbe__________.Thiswillbefollowedby(进一步安排),which_______________.Ataround_________(时间),wewillhave___________(另一个安排).Ireallyhopeyoucanmakeit.Wouldyoupleaseletmeknowifyoucanacceptmyinvitationatyourearliestconvenience?Yours,LiHua模板示范文DearJeff,I’mgladtotellyouthatourschoolwillthrowapartyfortheinternationalstudentsthisSaturday.Wewouldfeelhonoredifyoucouldcomeandjoinus.Asscheduled,thepartywillbeheldintheconcerthallfrom7:30pmto9:00pm.TherewillbeChinesecomedies,magicacts,andsomeChinesefolksongsanddances.I’msureyoucangettoknowmoreaboutChinesecustomsandculturesthere.Besides,thesewillbefollowedbyafreeconversation,whichwouldbeagoodchanceforyoutomeetpeoplefromaroundtheworldinanenjoyableenvironment.Ireallyhopeyoucanmakeit.Wouldyoupleaseletmeknowwhetheryoucouldacceptmyinvitationatyourearliestconvenience?Yours,LiHua二、求助信满分优范本假定你是李华,暑假想去一家外资公司兼职,已写好申请和个人简历(resume),给外教Ms.Jenkins写信,请她帮你修改所附的文字和格式(format).注意:1.词数100左右2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。DearMs.Jenkins,(说明写信目的)I’mwritingtoaskwhetheryoucoulddomeafavor.(说明求助内容)Inordertogainsomesocialexperienceandimprovemyworkability,I’mgoingtotakeapart-timejobduringthesummervocation.Sointerestedinapositionina倒装句是满分佳句foreign-capturedcompanyamIthatI’vealreadywrittenanapplicationletterandmy第26页共26页
resumeallinEnglish.However,I’mafraidthattheremightbesomegrammarmistakesor利用that引导宾语从句引入问题inappropriateformatinthematerialsthatIprepared.(提出请求)Wouldyoubesokindastocorrectthemistakeandimprovetheformatofthe非常礼貌地提出求助applicationandtheresumeforme?Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakethetroubletohelpme.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yourssincerely,LiHua题型素材积累——苦恼和求助背满分句型夺人眼球开头句1.IamamiddleschoolstudentandIamwritingtotellyoumyproblemwhichhastroubledme.我是一名中学生。我写信告诉您一个困扰我的问题。2.I’mwritingtoyoutoaskwhetheryoucoulddomeafavor.我写信是想问您能否帮助我。3.I’mwonderingifyoucouldtakethetroubletohelpmewith.......我想知道你是否能费心帮我.......4.I’msorrytobotheryou,butIhavesomedifficultieshereandIneedyourhelp.很抱歉打扰您,但我有些困难需要得到您的帮助。5.Ihavesomedifficultyindoing.....whichbothersmealot.SoIhavenochoicebuttoturntoyouforhelp.我在做....方面有困难,这很困扰我。所以我别无选择只能想您求助。亮点出彩篇中句1.Iseemnottobeabletofitinwellwithothershere.在这儿似乎我不能与他人融洽相处。2.Idon’tfeelquiteaccustomedtothelifehere.我觉得我没有完全习惯这儿的生活。3.IlongtolearnEnglishwell,butIdon’tknowhow,whichmakesmeupset.我渴望学好英语,但我不知道怎么学,这使我很烦恼。4.Ican’tconcentrateonmylessonsthesedays,andIfailedinthelastexams,whichworriesmealot.这些日子我不能专心学习,上次考试我没有及格,这使我很着急。5.Ioftenfeelleftoutinthisschool,andIdon’tknowhowithascomeabout.在这所学校我经常感到受到冷落,我不知道这是怎么回事。第26页共26页
6.Facedwith/Facingsomanydifficulties,Ihavetoturntoyouforhelp.面对如此多的困难,我不得不向您求助。韵味无穷结尾句1.I’meagertogetyourtimelyhelp./I’meagerforyourtimelyhelp.我渴望得到您及时的帮助。2.Iwillbeverygratefulifyoucouldhelpme.../Iwouldappreciateitifyoucoulddomeafavorand....如果您能帮助我.......我会非常感激。3.I’dappreciateitifyoucouldtakemyrequestintoconsideration/account.如果您能考虑我的请求,我将不胜感激。4.Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldreallygive/lendmeahand.如果您能帮我,我将十分感激。满分模版巧用题型解读在求助信中应开门见山,直截了当地把你遇到的问题或困惑告诉对方,并向对方求助。说明写信目的。写作步骤第一步:询问对方情况。第二步:说明困难,请对方帮忙。第三步:表达期盼之情。注意:(1)向别人征求意见,态度要诚恳,语气委婉。(2)把握时态:一般现在时表明目前自己存在问题,一般将来时描述自己得到帮助后的进步。满分巧模板Dear_________,Mynameis_________;I’mwritingtoaskwhetheryoucoulddomeafavor.(说明自己身份,提出写信目的)Ihavehadmuchdifficulty/troublein_______(交代自己面临的困难).Besides,I’mveryupsetthat______________(提出令自己困恼的问题).What’smore,Idon’tknow_______________(进一步说明自己的困境).I’mwonderingifyoucouldbesokindasto_____________sothat__________________(请求对方帮助).Inthemeantime/Atthesametime,Ibegyouto__________sothat__________________(再次请求对方的帮助).I’dappreciateitifyoucouldlendmeahand(表达对得到对方帮助的感激).I’mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yourssincerely,第26页共26页
LiHua模板示范文DearPeter,Howiseverythinggoing?IhavebeeninAmericafortwomonths,butfacedwithalotofdifficultiesinlifeandstudy,I’mwritingtoaskwhetheryoucoulddomeafavor.Tobeginwith,Ican’sadapttothewesterndiet.SoIfeelhomesickandlonely.Tomakemattersworse,IstillfinditdifficulttofollowthenativespeakersthoughIhavebeenexposedtoEnglishfortenyears.Besides,I’mafraidtoanswerquestionsinclassforlackofconfidence.Iwonderhowtodealwiththeproblems.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldbesokindastogivemesomeusefultips.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yourssincerely,LiHua三、建议信满分优范本假如你是李华,你的美国朋友Jack发邮件告诉你他对中国传统文化非常感兴趣,但是在学习时遇到了很多困难,希望得到你的帮助。请你用英文给Jack回信,鼓励他,并建议他利用网络解决一些困难,同时,请教周围的中国朋友也是一种很好的办法。注意:1.词数100左右2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。DearJack,(理解与安慰)IamdelightedtoknowthatyouareinterestedinthetraditionalChineseculture.It’sagoodwaytolearnaboutsomefamousChineseeducatorsandthinkers.However,it’snaturaltomeetwithdifficultiesbecauseevennativeChinesespeakersmayfindithardtounderstandsomeessays.Therefore,it’sunnecessarytobeupset.I’dliketoofferyousomeusefulsuggestions.(提出建议)Tobeginwith,IsuggestyouturntotheInternetforhelpwhenyouhaveaproblem,whereyoucanfindusefulexplanationsandintroductionswhichcanhelpyoutounderstandbetter.Inaddition,learningfromChinesepeoplearoundusaswellasmeisalsoagoodchoice.Lastbutnottheleast,keeponlearningandreading,andyouaresuretolearnalot.(表达愿望)Ihopeyouwillfindmysuggestionsbeneficial.Yourssincerely,LiHua题型素材积累——建议与提议背满分句型夺人眼球开头句1.Ihavelearnedthatyouhavesometroublein......andIwouldliketogive/offeryouthe第26页共26页
followingsuggestions.我知道你在......方面有困难,因此我想给你提如下一些建议。2.You’veaskedmeforadvicewithregardto/regarding......andIwilltrytomakesomeuseful/practicalsuggestionshere.关于.......你向我征求建议。在此,我尽量提出一些有用/实用的建议.3.Whenitcomesto.........,thefollowingaremysuggestions/mysuggestionsareasfollows.当涉及..........,我的建议如下。4.I’mwritingtogiveyousomesuggestions/giveyouahand.我写这封信的目的是给你一些建议/帮助。5.I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhow.......我非常高兴收到你的来信,在信中,关于如何.......你向我征求建议。亮点出彩篇中句1.Inmyopinion,/AsfarasIamconcerned/Personally,itwouldbewisetotakethefollowingaction.在我看来,采取以下行动是明智的。2.Iwouldliketosuggest/recommendyou(should)........我建议你(应该).........3.Ithinkitwouldbeofgreatbenefit/verybeneficialifyou.........我认为如果你.........,你将会受益。4.Doing........isagood/betterchoice.做.......是一个好的/更好的选择。5.Itisalsoagreatidea/alsohelpstodo........,whichcan.......做.....也不错,这能......6.Aneffectivesuggestionsisthatyoushould........一个有效的建议是你应该..........7.Youmayaswell/hadbetterdo.......你不妨/最好做韵味无穷结尾句1.Iwillbedelighted/gladifyouwilltakemyadviceintoconsideration.如果你能考虑我的建议,我将非常高兴2.Ihopethatmysuggestions/recommendationswillbebeneficial/ofbenefittoyou.我希望我的建议对你有益。3.Ihopeyouwillfindmysuggestions/recommendations/advicehelpful/practical.我希望你认为我的建议有帮助/实用。满分模版巧用题型微攻略第26页共26页
考情分析近年来全国卷虽未考查写信原因、陈述建议信,但其形式符合高考简单自我介绍,命题注重交际的大方向,备考时需注意。题型解读建议信是写的某人或某组织就某事(或其服务改进方面)提出建议和忠告。建议信应目的明确、合情合理、简明扼要且具有说服力。写作步骤首段:表明写信原因/陈述事由,简单自我介绍。中间段:列出具体建议或先肯定对方优点,再写改进之处。尾段:表达愿望。满分巧模板Dear________(对象),I’mdelightedtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowto____________(引出对方需要建议的主题).I’dliketomakesomesuggestions/I’mwritingto........../Hereareafewsuggestions(引出作者的建议).Tobeginwith,itisagoodideato___________.Then,italsohelpsto____________.Besides,doing________isalsoagoodchoice,as_________/(可以根据要求用不同句式提出建议,如下)Asto________,Isuggest_________(具体到建议的某一方面).Inaddition,_________(其他的建议)。I’msure__________________(预测可能的结果,给对方以行动的信心和决心).Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionspractical.Yourssincerely,LiHua模板示范文DearPeter,I’mdelightedtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.I’dliketomakethefollowingsuggestions.Tobeginwith,itisagoodideatomakemoreChinesefriendsinyourdailylife,withwhomyoucanpracticeyourspokenChinese.What’smore,italsohelpstolistentoChinesesongsandwatchChinesemovies,whichcanenableyoutogainabetterunderstandingofChinese.Inaddition,keepingadiaryisalsoagoodchoice,asitcanbenefityourwritinglevel.IhopeyouwillfindmysuggestionsbeneficialandmakegreatprogressinChinese.Yourssincerely,LiHua四、道歉信第26页共26页
满分优范本假设你是李华,与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店,因故不能赴约,请给他写封邮件,内容包括:1.表示歉意;2.说明原因;3.另约时间;注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。DearBob,(表达歉意)I’mwritingtoapologizetoyoufornotbeingabletoaccompanyyoutothebookstoretomorrowasplanned.(解释失约原因)ThereasonwhyIwillfailtogothereforourappointmentisthatIhavetoattendafamilyget-togethertomorrowwhenmycousinThereasonwhy…isthat表语从句说明失约原因PeterwillreturnhomefromBeijing.Myparentsjusttoldmethatweweregoingtowelcomehimandhavedinnertogether.Theykeptthisasecretinordertogivemeasurprise.PeterandIgrewuptogetherwhenwewerekidsandlaterhewenttoBeijingforhighschool.Itisexcitingformetoseehimagainafterhalfayear.(请求理解+另约时间)Ihopeyoucanunderstandmysituationandforgiveme.WouldyoumindifIsuggestedwegotothebookstorenextweekend?非常委婉地再次约定时间(再次表示道歉)Onceagain,Iapologizeforanyinconveniencecaused.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely,LiHua题型素材积累——道歉与遗憾背满分句型夺人眼球开头句1.Ioweyouanapologyfornotbeingabletoinformyou.我没能及时通知你,向你道歉。2.IapologizedmostsincerelyforwhatIsaidthatday.Ididn’tmeantohurtyou.我诚挚地为那天我说的话向你道歉,我不是有意伤害你的。3.IamterriblysorrytosaythatI’munabletoattendyourbirthdaypartybecausemyfatherisill.很抱歉我不能去参加你的生日派对,因为我的父亲病了。4.I’mwritingtoapologizefor…/Iamwritingtosaysorryfor…我写这封信是因…道歉。第26页共26页
1.Iamwritingtoexpress/conveymyheartfeltapologytoyou.我写信向你表达真切的歉意。亮点出彩篇中句1.Ifeelawfullysorryaboutitandwantyoutoknowwhathappened.为此我感到非常内疚,所以想告诉你实情。2.MuchtomyregretIwasunabletokeepmyengagementtomeetyouattheparkgate.很抱歉没有遵守约定在公园门口等你。3.Iamsorryformynotbeingabletoattendyourpartyduetothefactthat…我非常抱歉不能参加你的派对,是因为……4.ThereasonwhyIfailedtoshowupwasthatIhadsomethingurgenttoattendto/dealwith.我未能出现的原因是我有急事要处理。5.Pleaseforgive/excusemefornotbeingabletoinformyou.请原谅我没能及时通知你。6.Iexpressedmydeepregretoverthemisunderstandingbetweenus.我为我们之间的误会表示遗憾。韵味无穷结尾句7.Anyway(用于支持,补充先前的陈述),Ifeelterriblysorryforwhathappened.无论如何,我对发生的事情感到非常抱歉。8.Ihopethatyouwillunderstandmysituationandforgiveme.我希望您可以理解我的处境并原谅我。9.I’lltrytomakeupformyfault.我将尽力弥补我的过错。10.Iapologizetoyouforalltheinconveniencecaused.我为造成的所有不便向你表示歉意。11.Isincerelyhopeyoucanacceptmyapologiesandunderstandmysituation.我真心希望你能接受我的道歉,并理解我的处境。满分模版巧用题型解读道歉信是因为自己的过失或疏忽,给别人带来了麻烦或损失,发觉后为了给对方赔礼道歉而写的信件。道歉信应该反映出自己具体的过失或疏忽,解释的理由要真实而详细,态度要诚恳,语言要诚挚,从而取得收信人的谅解。写作步骤第一步:陈述道歉的原因,表达歉意;第二步:解释原因,取得对方原谅或重新约定;第三步:再次致歉,提出补救措施。第26页共26页
满分巧模版Dear_______,I’mwritingtoconveymysincereapologytoyou.I’mterriblysorrythat_______(道歉的原因).表明写信目的Thereasonwhy________wasthat__________(事件的原因).Thereforeit’smyfaultnotto_______(事件的结果).Iwilltrytomakeupformyfault.解释自己的过失或疏忽的原因并请求原谅Onceagain,Idoapologizeforanyinconveniencecaused.Wouldyoupleaseacceptmyapologyandunderstandmysituation?Ihope_______(提出期望)再次表示歉意,希望对方谅解Yourssincerely,LiHua模版示范文:DearAnne,I’mterriblysorrythatIdidn’tattendyourbirthdaypartythedaybeforeyesterday.Ifeelawfulaboutitandapologizetoyou.Itwasniceofyoutoinvitemetoyourbirthdayparty.Ishouldhavecomeandcelebratedtheimportantoccasionwithyou,butwiththefinalexamaroundthecorner,IwassobusypreparingfortheexamthatIforgottheappointment.Ihopeyoucanunderstandmysituationandforgiveme.Isitpossibleforyouandmetohaveaprivatemeetingaftertheexam?Idolongforapleasantchatwithyou.ItismuchtomyregretthatImissedthechanceofsuchahappyget-together.Onceagain,pleaseacceptmysincereapology.Yourssincerely,LiHua五、活动介绍信满分优范本下周六,一些美国朋友要来你校进行一天的参观交流活动。假如你是学生会主席李华,学校安排你来接待他们,现在请你用英语给他们的负责人Mr.Chris写封信告知具体安排。要点如下:1.上午参加学校艺术节开幕式;2.下午…(自由发挥,至少两项活动);注意:1.词数100左右;2.可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。参考词汇:艺术节ArtFestivalDearMr.Chris,第26页共26页
I’mLiHua,presidentoftheStudentUnion.It’smypleasuretoreceiveyouwhenyouvisitourschoolnextSaturday.NowI’mwritingtosharesomedetailedarrangements.Asscheduled,theopeningceremonyofourschoolArtFestivalwillbeheldnextSaturdaymorning,利用被动语态说明活动时间和地点duringwhichourheadmasteristodeliveraspeechandwishyouahappytimehere.利用非限制性定语从句说明开幕式内容Thenfollowsomeexcellentperformancesgivenbystudents,全部倒装句引入下面的内容whichsurelywon’tmakeyoudisappointed.定语从句给人以期待Intheafternoon,youwillwatchanexcitingbasketballmatchbetweenstudentsandteachers.Afterwards,I’llshowyouaroundourArtBuilding,whereyou’llappreciatesomegreatartworksofthestudents.I’mcertainyou’llexperienceaquitedifferentcultureandhopeyoucanenjoyit.Bestwishes!Yourstruly!LiHua题型素材积累——活动事宜背满分句型夺人眼球开头句1.Ifeeldelightedthatyouaresointerestedin…(活动),soI’mwritingtogiveyouabriefintroductionofit.我很高兴你对…很感兴趣,我写信向你简单介绍一下它的情况。2.I’mwritingtotellyousomethingabout/concerning/regarding…我写信告诉你一些关于…3.Ifeelgreatlyhonoredtobeaskedtocontactyou,informingyouofourarrangements.我感到很荣幸委托与您联系,告知您我们的安排。4.Iwouldliketointroduce…toyouindetail/briefly.我想向你详细/简单介绍一下…5.IwasgladtoreceiveyourletterandamdelightedtotellyouwhatIknowabout…很高兴收到你的来信并乐于告诉你我知道的关于…的情况。6.Inreplytoyourletterabout…,Iwouldliketoinformyouofsomedetailsaboutit.回复你关于…的来信,我想告知你关于…的一些细节。亮点出彩篇中句7.Aimedatpromoting/improving/providing…,theactivityistobeheld/washeld…(时间)致力于促进/改善/提供…,活动将于/已于…(时间)举行。8.Inordertoraisepeople’sawarenessof…,…(活动名称)istobeheld/washeld/…(地点)第26页共26页
为了提高人们的…意识,…(活动)将于/已于……地方举行。1.Thisactivity/fair/competitionaimedat/aimedto…,isgoingtotakeplace…(时间)旨在…的活动/会议/比赛将于…(时间)举行。2.Inresponseto…,(活动)launchedbyourschool,wehaveorganized…为了响应学校发起的…活动,我们组织了…3.Theactivitytookplace/washeldin…(地点),whoseaimwastoraisetheawarenessof…在……(地方)举行了……活动,其目的是提高……的意识。4.The…(活动)willbescheduledtostarton…(具体日期).活动安排在……(具体日期)开始。韵味无穷结尾句5.Notonlydoestheactivitybroadenmyhorizonsbutalsoinspiresmetoworkharder.活动不仅让我打开眼界而且激励我更加努力学习。6.Ihavelearned/benefitedalotfrom…我从…中学到了很多/受益颇多。7.Theactivitycontributesto/addstoourbetterunderstandingof…活动促进/增进了我们对…的更好的理解。8.Throughtheactivity,we’verealizedtheimportanceof…通过活动,我们意识到…的重要性。9.Theactivityofferedusachance/anopportunityto…,andhelpeduslearn…活动给我们提供了一个…的机会,并帮助我们学会…满分模版巧用题型微攻略考情分析活动介绍类书信与考生的生活密切相关,也是高考常涉及的书信形式,应了解其写作方法和常用句型。题型解读活动介绍类书信是通过书信的形式简要向收信人介绍某个活动的目的,内容及意义或体会等的应用文。写信时应注意层次清晰,简明扼要。写作步骤第一步:问候+写信目的;第二步:写明活动目的,内容及参加对象等;第三步:说明活动的意义或自己的体会。满分巧模版Dear____,第26页共26页
I’mpleasedthatyouaresointerestedin_______(活动名称),andI’mwritingtogiveyouabriefintroductionofit.Aimedat/Inorderto______(活动目的),theactivity/programwillbe/washeldin______(地点)_______(时间).Firstofall,______(第一个活动内容).Besides,________(第二个活动内容).Additionally,_____(第三个活动内容).Throughtheactivity/program,studentsfrom______(地方)canbetterexperienceandappreciate________(事件)________(参与者)havelearnedalotandbenefitedfromit.Lookingforwardingtohearingfromyou.Yours,LiHua模版示范文DearMike,I’mpleasedthatyouareinterestedinthe“campusbookfair”andI’mwritingtogiveyouabriefintroductionofit.Aimedatprovidingaplatformwherestudentscanhaveachancetoexchangeandmakeuseoftheirbooks,theannualcampusbookfairwillbeheldinourschools.Thefairwillattractahugecrowdfromtheentireschool,whoaretosell,purchaseandexchangetheirsecond-handbookswiththeirpeers.Atthefair,youcanfindbooksondiversetopicsandmostbookssoldatalowerprice.Throughthefair,westudentscanbemotivatedtofurtherdevelopourreadinghabitsandbroadenourhorizons.Anyway,I’vebenefitedalotfromit.Yours,LiHua六、投诉信满分优范本假定你是李华,半月前你从某国外网站上订购了一台笔记本电脑和一套英文小说,昨天才到货,且电脑不是你订购的型号,小说也有缺页现象。请就此向网店客服写信投诉。要点如下:1.介绍购物情况;2.反映存在问题;3.提出解决方案。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。Towhomitmayconcern,第26页共26页
(说明写信目的)I’moneofyourcustomers.I’mwritingtomakeacomplaintaboutyourgoods.(反映问题提出解决方案)Tobeginwith,IorderedanotebookcomputerandasetofEnglishnovelsonyourwebsitetwoweeksago,butIdidn’treceivethemuntilyesterday.Besides,tomydisappointment,thecomputerIreceivedisn’ttheoneIordered.Ifyourefertomyoriginalorder,youwillfindthatIrequestedaModel506computer.However,Model480reachedmeinstead,causingmemuchinconvenience.转折词吸引读者注意现在分词作结果状语Tomakemattersworse,thebooksarefarfromsatisfying,asIfoundsomepagesmissing.Therefore,Ihopeyoucansolvethematterforme.引入解决方案IwonderifyoucantakebackthoseyousentoutandreplacethemwithaModel506computerandanewsetofbooks?(提出愿望)Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldgivedueattentiontothismatter.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yoursfaithfully,LiHua题型素材积累——争端与投诉背满分句型夺人眼球开头句1.I’mwritingtomakeacomplaintaboutyourstandardservice.我写信是为了投诉你们的服务质量。2.I’mmostunwillingtocomplain,buttheserviceattitudeofyourassistantsisreallyannoying.我非常不愿意投诉,但你们的店员的服务确实恼人。3.Pleasedwithyourserviceforyears,nowIfeelverydisappointed.虽然多年来我一直很满意你们的服务,但我现在非常失望。4.I’m…,acustomerwhobrought…fromyourwebsiteseveraldaysago.Iamwritingtoyoutocomplainabout…我是……你们的一位顾客,几天前我从你们的网站上购买了……我写信向你投诉……5.Iamwritingtoexpressmydissatisfactionwith/atyourunfriendlyattitudetocustomers.我写信表达我对你们对顾客不友好的态度的不满。亮点出彩篇中句5.Oneannoying/understandingaspectofyourserviceisyourunfriendlyattitudetocustomers.你们的服务项目中一个令人不满的地方是对待顾客的态度不友好。第26页共26页
1.I’mcompletelydisappointedtofind…当我发现……我彻底失望了。2.Canyouarrangeanewoneformeassoonaspossible?你们能不能尽快给我换新的?3.Toimprovethesituation,itisadvisableforyoutotakethefollowingmeasures.为了改进这种情况,建议你采取以下措施。4.Idohopethatsomeonewilltakeeffectivemeasurestodealwiththismatter.我真的希望有人能采取有效措施解决这个问题。5.Iwouldliketodrawyourattentiontothequalityofyourproducts.我想让你注意你们的产品质量。6.Isincerelyhopeyoucanbetteryourserviceandthatmistakewon’tariseagaininthefuture.我真诚希望你能改进你们的服务并且这种情况将来不会再出现。韵味无穷结尾句7.Idohopeyouwillgivedueattentiontothematter.我希望对此事你能给予足够的重视。8.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldgivemeasatisfactoryreplyassoonaspossible.如果你能尽快给我一个满意的答复,我将非常感谢。9.Itwouldbehighlyappreciatedifyoucoulddosomethingaboutit.如果你能为此采取措施我将万分感谢。10.Iamreallyannoyedaboutit.Itrust/havegreatfaiththatyouwilltakemycomplaintsseriously.我对这件事真的很恼火,我相信你会认真对待我的投诉。满分模版巧用题型微攻略考情分析:高考在前几年考查过投诉信,其内容是投诉产品质量。投诉的问题在学习和生活中时有发生,应熟悉他的写作形式和常用句型。题型解读:投诉信是写信人对产品或服务表示不满的信件。常用于消费者的利益受损,正常生活和工作受到干扰等令人烦恼的事情。写投诉信时,注意写明投诉原因,用词恰当。写作步骤:第一步:表明投诉原因;第二步:说明投诉问题,并说明问题带来的后果;第三步:提出合理的建议或期待回复。第26页共26页
满分巧模版:DearSir/Madam,Mynameis/I’m_______(自我介绍).IfeelbadtotroubleyoubutIamafraidthatIhavetomakeacomplaintabout________(投诉的内容)._______(简述导致矛盾的事件),I_______(表达本人曾做过的努力).But_____(投诉原因一).Besides,______(投诉原因二).Tobefrank,_______(客观的评论,以示诚恳).Tomakeupforit,Isuggest______(表达本人期待的解决方案).Isincerelyhopeyoucanbetteryourserviceandthatmistakewon’tariseagaininthefuture.Iamreallyannoyedaboutit.Iwouldbemorethandelightedifyoucouldtakemycomplaintsseriously.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yourssincerely,LiHua模版示范文DearManager,I’mLiHua,oneofyourhotel’scustomers.I’mwritingtocomplainaboutyourunsatisfyingservice.Duringmystayatyourhotel,theserviceinyourhotelleftmuchtobedesired.Tobeginwith,Ifoundmysuitcasebrokenaftertheywerecarriedtomyroombyoneofyourporters.Besides,waterwasleakingoutofthetoiletinthebathroom.Worsestill,thenoisefromthebardownstairswentonsolateintothenighteachnightthatIcouldn’tgetgoodrest.I’mdisappointedwithyourservice,andIhopeyoucanbetteryourserviceincasethesamematterarisesinthefuture.I’mreallyannoyedaboutit.Iwouldbemorethandelightedifyoucouldtakemycomplaintsseriously.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yourssincerely,LiHua七、申请/自荐信满分优范本假定你是李华,你校英语协会招聘志愿者,接待来访的国外中学生。请你写信应聘,内容包括:1.口语能力;2.相关经验;3.应聘目的。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。第26页共26页
(说明消息和写信目的)IamLiHua.Learningthatyouarerecruitingsomevolunteerstoreceivethevisitingforeignstudents.Iamgladlywritingtoapplyforthevoluntaryjob.(说明口语能力、相关经验和应聘目的)Tobeginwith,IhaveagoodcommandofspokenEnglish,thusmakingiteasyformetocommunicatewithforeignstudents.What’smore,Ialsohavetakenpartinseveral固定句式和现在分词作结果状语的结合使用,提升得分档次suchactivities,whichequipsmewithrichexperienceinreceivingforeignstudents.Moreimportantly,through高级词汇equip+非限制定语从句,说明经验thevoluntarywork,notonlywillitenablemetolearnEnglishbetterbutalsoitcanbroadenmyhorizons.巧用倒装句式,说明自己应聘的目的,一举两得(表达决心、期待回复)Ifofferedtheopportunitytobeavolunteer,Iwilldoitwellandliveuptoyour省略句式简洁明了,再次为文章添彩expectations.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakemyapplicationintoconsideration.Yours,LiHua题型素材积累——申请与自荐背满分句型夺人眼球开头句1.Learningfrom…thatyouarelookingfora(n)…,Iwouldliketoapplyfortheposition/job.从…那儿得知您需要一名…,我想申请这个职位/工作。2.I’mwritingtoyouinthehopethatImayobtainanopportunityto…我写信给你是希望我可以获得一个…的机会。3.IhavereadyouradvertisementontheInternet/inthenewspaper.I’msureIamfitforthejobneededinyourcompany.我在网上/报纸上读了你们登的广告。我确信自己适合你们公司需要的这份工作。4.IsawyouradvertisementontheInternet/inanewspaperandIshowgreatinterestin…我看见你们在网上/报纸上登的广告,而且我对…极感兴趣。5.I’mextremelypleasedtoseeyouradvertisementfor…I’mwritingtoapplyfor…看到您要…的广告,我非常高兴。我写信申请…6.Ifeelquitequalifiedforthepositionyouadvertised.我觉得我适合你们在广告中所招聘的职务。7.I’mwritingtorequestavaluablechancetobe…Thefollowingaremyadvantages.我写信申请…的宝贵机会。我的优势如下。第26页共26页
亮点出彩篇中句1.IwouldliketoapplyforitduringthissummervacationbecauseIthinkitisveryusefultome.我想在暑假期间兼职,因为我认为这项工作对我有用。2.Ihaveteamworkspiritandcangetonwellwithotherpeople.我有团队精神,善于和别人相处。3.NotonlyamIgoodat…butalsoIamexperiencedin…我不仅擅长…而且在…方面有经验。4.Ihavebeenworkingin…since…,andhavethereforegainedrichknowledgeandexperienceinthisfield.自从…后,我一直从事…,因此获得了与这个领域相关的知识和经验。韵味无穷结尾句1.IamsureIwilldoitwellifI’mgiventhechancetobeamemberofyourcompany.如果您给我一个机会成为公司的一员的话,我相信自己会做得很好。2.IfyouthinkIamtheperfectpersonforthejob,pleasecontactmeatyourearliestconvenience.如果你认为我是这个工作的最佳人选,请尽早联系我。3.IamconfidentthatI’msuitablefor…/Iamqualifiedtodo…/I’mequaltodoing…我确信,我适合…/有做…的资格/能胜任做…4.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldoffermethechanceof(doing)/todo…如果你能提供给我做…的机会,我将不胜感激。5.Iwouldgreatlyappreciateitifyoucouldtakemyapplicationintoconsideration.如果您能考虑我的申请,我将不胜感激。满分模版巧用题型解读申请信是应用文的一种,用于向某单位或组织提出申请等。申请信的语气要诚挚、友好,对于申请的内容和原因要表达清楚,在表达自己的愿望时应礼貌而自信。写作步骤第一步:简要说明信息来源,说明自己能胜任。第二步:介绍自己能胜任的原因。第三步:请求尽快答复并给予机会。满分巧模版DearSir/Madam,I’m(自我介绍,可以省略).Learningthat(具体招聘信息),Iamwritingtoapplyforthepost/job.第26页共26页
IamconfidentthatIamqualifiedtomeettherequirements(表达自信).Ononehand,I(本人优势一).Ontheotherhand,I(本人优势二).Myabilityto(本人优势三)isoutofquestion.Ifofferedthechanceto,Iwilldoitwellandliveuptoyourexpectations.Anyearlyreplywillbehighlyappreciated.Yourssincerely,LiHua模版示范文:DearSir/Madam,Learningthatyouareinneedofsomepart-timers,I’minterested.Therefore,I’mwritingtoapplyforthejob.(说明信息,提出申请)Thefollowingaremyadvantages.Firstofall,I’mstrong,healthyandhard-working.Besides,IhavesuchagoodknowledgeofEnglishandChineseculturethatIhavenodifficultycommunicatingwithforeigners.Apartfromthat,Iamoutgoingandoptimistic,thusmakingiteasyformetogetalongwellwithothers.(具体说明自身优势)Ifofferedthechance,I’lldoitwellandliveuptoyourexpectations.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.(表达承诺和期待)Yourssincerely,LiHua八、感谢信满分优范本假如你是李华,在伦敦游玩期间你的英国朋友Anne招待了你。请你给她写信,表示感谢。要点如下:1.简述你的伦敦之行。2.感谢她的招待;3.邀请她来北京旅游。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。DearAnne,(说明写信目的)IamwritingtoconveymysincereappreciationforyourkindhelpandcareduringmystayinLondon,withoutwhichIwouldn’thaveenjoyeditsomuch.利用withoutwhich及虚拟语气的高级句式表达感激(感谢的事由和感受)Duringtheweek,thecomfortableroom,deliciousmealsandespeciallyyourfriendlyfamilymembersallmademefeelathome,leavingmelastingmemories.Moreover,guidedbyyou,第26页共26页
现在分词作状语分词作状语IwashonoredtohaveachancetovisitthosetouristattractionsinLondonandbeexposedtosuchauniquecultureaswellasbeautifulscenery.Itwasyourgeneroushelpthatenabledmetohaveabetterunderstandingofyourcountryandculture.利用强调句式说明所受益处(再次致谢,提出邀请)ThanksagainforyourkindhelpandIwillbemorethanpleasedtohavetheopportunitytorepayyourkindnessbyshowingyouaroundBeijing.诚挚地表示邀请Yours,LiHua题型素材积累——感恩与道谢背满分句型夺人眼球开头句1.I’mextremelygrateful/thankfultoyouforyourunselfishassistanceduring…感谢你在…期间给予我的无私的帮助。2.Iwishtothankyoufromthebottomofmyheartfor…我从心底感谢你,因为…3.I’mwritingtoconvey/expressmygratitudeforyourkind/generoushelpduring…我写信感谢您在…期间对我友好/慷慨的帮助。4.I’dliketotakethisopportunitytoexpressmygreatappreciationforyourtimelyhelpandsupport.我想借此机会感谢您给予我们的及时的帮助和支持。5.I’dliketoconveyinthislettermyheartfeltthankstoyouforyourselflesshelp.在信中我为你无私的帮助向您表达我诚挚的谢意。1.Onbehalfof…,I’dliketoextendmysinceregratitudeforyourhelp.我谨代表…对你的帮助表示真诚的感谢。亮点出彩篇中句1.Youreallyaddedgreatlytomyconvenienceandpleasureofthewholetrip.您真的给我整个行程带来了极大的方便与快乐。2.IappreciateitmorethanIcansay./Icanneverthankyouenough.我的感激之情,无以言表。3.Manythanksforallthethingsyouhavedoneinhelpingusto…非常感谢您为帮助我们…所做的一切。4.Thankstoyourgenerous/selfless/kindhelp,withoutwhichIwouldn’thavemadesuchgreatprogress.多亏你慷慨的/无私的/友好的帮助,没有你的帮助,我就不会取得这么大的进步。第26页共26页
韵味无穷结尾句1.Itwaskindandgenerousofyoutodothisforme,andIappreciateitmorethanIcansay.你对我如此慷慨,我真是感激不尽。2.Iwishtherewereabetterwordthan“thanks”toexpressmyappreciationforyourgeneroushelp.任何语言都不能表达我对你慷慨相助的真挚谢意。3.Thanksagainforyourkindhelp./Again,Iwouldliketoexpressoursincerethankstoyou.对你的好意相助再次表示感谢。/再次向你表示我们衷心的感谢。4.IwillbemorethanpleasedifIhavetheopportunitytorepayyourkindnessby…如果我有机会通过…报答你的好意,我会非常高兴。5.Mytruegratitude/appreciationisbeyondanywords/description.任何语言都不能表达我诚挚的谢意。满分模版巧用题型微攻略考情分析感谢信贴近学生生活和学习,虽近几年高考未涉及,但应在学习中注意其写作方法。题型解读感谢信是对收信人的某一行为表示感谢的信件,通常用于收到别人的邀请、受到别人的帮助或鼓励时。写作步骤第一步:表明写作意图,诚挚地表达谢意。第二步:写明感谢原因,可以写具体事例。第三步:再次向对方表示感谢并表达回报对方帮助的愿望。满分巧模版Dear,I’mwritingtoconvey/expressmysincereappreciation/gratitudefor(感谢的原因).Ifithadnotbeenfor/Butfor/Withoutyourkindnessandhelpin(对方给予的具体的帮助),Iwouldn’thave(如果没有对方帮助的后果).Duringthetrip/weekI(感受).Ishallneverforget(事件)inmylife.Itwasyouwho(给出细节).Manythanksforallthethingsyouhavedoneinhelpingus(细节事件).Myappreciationisbeyondanywords.IwillbemorethanpleasedifIcan(所做的事情)torepay/inreturnforyourkindness.Yourssincerely,LiHua第26页共26页
模版示范文DearMr.Smith,I’mwritingtoexpressmysinceregratitudetoyouforyourgeneroushelp.Ifithadnotbeenforyourencouragementandvaluableadvice,Iwouldn’thavemadesuchgreatprogressinmyEnglishlearning.(感谢的原因)DuringyourteachinginChina,youwerealwayswillingtohelpmepatientlywithmyEnglish.ItwasyouwhoencouragedmetobeconfidenttoexpressmyselfinEnglish.Alsomanythanksforyourlecturesaboutwesterncultures,fromwhichIbenefitedalot.(具体帮助的细节)Myappreciationisbeyondanywords.IwillbemorethanpleasedifIcanshowyouaroundChinainreturnforyourkindness.(再次致谢)Yourssincerely,LiHua九、推荐信满分优范本假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文化感兴趣,计划明年来北京上大学。他向你咨询相关信息。请给他回信,内容包括:1.表示欢迎;2.推荐他上哪所大学;3.建议他做哪些准备工作。注意:词数不少于100。DearJim,(说明来信内容,表示欢迎)DelightedtolearnyourfutureeducationplaninBeijingfromyourlastletter,I’dliketoexpressmywarmestwelcometoyou.(所推荐的大学及准备工作)LearningyourkeeninterestinChineseculture,Isuggest现在分词作状语+suggest引导的虚拟语气,使推荐更加合情合理youapplyforPekingUniversity,oneofthebestuniversitiesinChina.Personally,itsChinese名词短语作同位语Literaturemajorisperfectforyou,whereyoucanbecompletelysoakedinChineseprofound高级词汇+定语从句说明推荐理由,生动而简洁historyandrichculture.Asforpreparation,somereadinginadvanceisneeded,likeTheStory利用介词短语asfor引入准备工作,清晰明了oftheStone.Besides,someonlinecoursesofspokenChinesecanbeofhelptoyoutoadapttotheChineselanguageenvironment.Isincerelyhopeyoucantakemyrecommendationintoconsideration.Ifyouhavefurtherquestions,doletmeknow.Yours,第26页共26页
LiHua题型素材积累——推荐背满分句型夺人眼球开头句1.LearningthatyouarecomingtovisitChina,I’dliketorecommendseveralplacesofinteresttoyou.得知你将来中国游玩,我向你推荐几处名胜。2.HearingthatyouaregoingtolearnEnglish,I’mwritingtooffermyrecommendation.听说你要学英语,我写信是向你推荐。3.Havinglearntthatourlibraryisplanningtobuynewbooks,I’mwillingtorecommendsomebookstoyou.得知我们图书馆准备买新书,我愿意向您推荐一些书。4.I’mmorethanglad/pleased/delightedtolearnthatyouaregoingtoBeijing,andI’dliketooffermyrecommendation.得知你要去北京我很高兴,我想向你提议。5.Glad/Pleased/DelightedtoknowthatyouaretravellinginShanghai,IthinkitagoodchoicetovisitHuangpuRiver.很高兴得知你在上海旅游,我认为游玩黄浦江是个不错的选择。亮点出彩篇中句1.ThereasonwhyIrecommendthisbookisthatitstressestheimportanceofgoodhabits.不能用because我推荐这本书的原因是它强调好习惯的重要性。1.Itoffersyouanopportunitytodosomethinginterestingandcreative.Meanwhile,itprovides衔接灵活youasourceofpleasure.它提供给你一个做有趣且富有创意的事情的计划,同时也是你快乐的源泉。3.Travelingisagoodwaytobroadenyourhorizons,throughwhichyoucanlearndifferentculturesoftheworld.旅游能开阔视野,通过旅游,你可以了解世界上不同的文化。4.Irecommenditmainlyforthefollowingtworeasons.我推荐它主要有以下两个原因。5.Irecommendthatyousleepinatentatnightsothatyoucangetclosetonature.我建议你晚上在帐篷中睡觉以便你可以亲近大自然。6.Thereareallkindsofcoursesforyoutochoosefrom,soyoucanvisitthewebsitefordetailedinformation.有许多课程可供选择,你可以登陆网站了解更多信息。第26页共26页
韵味无穷结尾句1.Idohopeyoucantakemyrecommendationsintoaccount/considerationandmakeafinaldecision.我真希望你能考虑我的建议并作出最后的决定。2.Ifyouneedfurtherinformation,don’thesitatetocontactme.如果你需要更多信息,请联系我。3.I’llbeextremelygladifyoucanconsidermyrecommendations.如果你能考虑我的建议,我会非常高兴。4.I’llbemorethanhappyifyoucantakemyrecommendations/ideasintoconsideration.如果你能考虑我的建议/想法,我会非常高兴。5.Ihopeyoucanfindmyrecommendationshelpful.我希望你认为我的建议有用。满分模版巧用题型解读推荐信是向收信人推荐人或事物(包括地方,旅游路线等)的书信,推荐物品等时应写清物品的好处或优点,用词应简练明了。写作步骤第一步:说明写信的目的。第二步:介绍推荐物/人的几个方面,说明推荐理由。第三步:表达愿望,希望对方接受其推荐。满分巧模版:Dear,Havinglearntthat(事情),Istronglyrecommendtoyou(被推荐的人或物).Ihopeyouwillbeinterestedin(him/her/it).ThereareseveralreasonswhyIthinkisabetterchoice.Firstofall,(理由一).Besides,(理由二).Lastbutnotleast,(理由三).Inaword,(总结).Iwouldbemostgratefulifyouwouldliketoconsidermyrecommendation./Ihopeyouwillfindmyrecommendationhelpful.Yourstruly,LiHua模版示范文DearAnne,HavinglearntthatyouarecomingtovisitBeijing,I’dliketorecommendaplaceofinterest—theGreatWalltoyou.Ihopeyou’llbeinterestedinit.(开门见山,提出自己的推荐)第26页共26页
ThereareseveralreasonswhyIthinktheGreatwallisabetterchoice.Asweallknow,Beijing,thecapitalcityofChina,hasalargenumberoftouristattractions,amongwhichtheGreatWallstandsout.Asoneofthegreatestprojectsintheworld,theGreatWallisahistoricculturalheritageandalsoasymbolofChina.Byvisitingit,notonlycanyoulearnthehistoryandcultureofChina,butalsoyoucanfeelthepowerofhumanbeings.Moreover,justasthesayinggoes,“Hewhohasn’tbeentotheGreatWallisn’tatrueman.”ClimbingtheGreatWallisagreatwaytotestanddevelopyourwillaswellasyourstrength.(说明推荐长城的理由)Ihopeyoucantakemyrecommendationintoconsideration.(表达愿望)Yourssincerely,LiHua第26页共26页