Unit5WorkingtheLand
【话题词汇】1.beneficialadj.有好处的2.refreshv.(使)精神振作，(使)精力恢复3.harmfuladj.有伤害的4.tastyadj.味道好的5.reducevt.减少，缩减6.servevt.招待(顾客等)，服务7.strengthenv.增强8.acuteadj.严重的；(疾病)急性的主题语境：人与自我(健康的生活方式)9.allergicadj.过敏的10.appetiten.食欲，胃口11.bitteradj.苦的，有苦味的12.depressedadj.抑郁的，沮丧的13.digestvt.消化；领会14.diseasen.疾病15.nutritiousadj.营养的16.poisonousadj.有毒的
【话题短语】1.bebeneficialto对……有益2.leadtowaterandsoilloss导致水土流失3.berich/abundantin富含……4.behigh/lowin含……高/低5.alleviatefoodshortage解决食物短缺6.keepecologicalenvironment保护生态平衡7.buildupone'sbody增强某人的体质8.protectthenaturalbalanceoftheenvironment保护环境的生态平衡9.keephealthybothphysicallyandmentally保持身心健康10.developahealthyeatinghabit养成健康的饮食习惯
【话题佳句】1.Everysinglegrainonyourplateistheresultofhardwork.谁知盘中餐，粒粒皆辛苦。2.Itiswidelybelievedthatplentyoffreshaircontributestogoodhealth.人们通常认为足够的新鲜空气有助于健康。3.You'dbetterexerciseregularlyandhaveahealthydiet,whichisthemostimportantwaytohelpyoustayawayfromaninfection.你最好经常锻炼并健康饮食，这是帮你远离感染的最重要的方法。
【话题练习】1.Aslongasyoustopeatingthatmucheveryday,youcanlosesomeweight.只要你每天不吃那么多，你就可以减一些体重了。2.IfIwereyou,Iwouldworkoutregularlyandgetintogoodeatinghabitsinordertokeephealthy.如果我是你，我会经常锻炼并养成良好的饮食习惯以保持健康。
基础回顾课堂讲解随堂练习话题与高考写作
基础回顾
Ⅰ.重点单词1．________________n.根；根茎；根部；2．________________n.现实，事实，实际情况3．________________adv.全部地，完整地，完全地4．________________adj.含盐的5．________________n.深度，向下或向里的距离6．________________n.扩大，延伸7．________________n.贫穷8．________________adj.完全必要的；极其重要的rootrealityentirelysaltydepthextensionpovertyessential
9．________________n.消费；消耗；10．________________vt.产生；引起11．________________adj.国内的；家庭的；驯养的；12．________________adj.热切的；十分强烈的；激烈的13．____________vt.&vi.克服；胜过(pt./pp.)________________14．__________n.危机；危险期；决定性时刻(pl.)___________15．________________n.特点，特征，品质adj.典型的，独特的16．________________n.想象；视力；视野；影像consumptiongeneratedomesticintenseovercomeovercame/overcomecrisiscrisescharacteristicvision
Ⅱ.拓展单词1．________vt.献身；专心于→________adj.忠实的；深爱的→________n．关爱；献身；奉献2．________n.缺乏，缺少；不足→________adj.短的；不足的→________vt./vi.缩短；减少；3．__________vt.使信服→__________adj.令人信服的→__________adj.坚信不疑的4．________vt.获得；到达→________adj.可得到的；可达到的→________adj.做不到的；难到达的→__________n.达到；成就；学识5.________adj.传统的；常见的；惯例的→________n.大会；惯例；约定；协定；习俗→____________adv.按照惯例→________adj.不依惯例的devotedevoteddevotionshortageshortshortenconvinceconvincingconvincedattainattainableunattainableattainmentconventionalconventionconventionallyunconventional
6．__________n．假定；设想→__________vt.假定；设想→________conj.假设7．________n．&v.估计，估价；判断，看法，估量→pt./pp.________________→________adj.估计的；预计的；估算的8．________n.名人；名声→________adj.著名的；有名望的9．________adj.营养(物)的→________n.营养；滋养→________adj.有营养的10．________vt.&vi.消化；vt.领会；领悟→________n．消化，领悟→________adj.助消化的assumptionassumeassumingestimateestimated/estimatedestimatedcelebritycelebratednutritionalnutritionnutritiousdigestdigestiondigestive
联想拓展不可数名词集锦①progress进步②information信息③fun乐趣；快乐④luggage/baggage行李⑤advice建议⑥furniture家具
后缀hood名词集锦①neighborhood邻里②childhood童年③brotherhood手足之情④adulthood成年⑤manhood男子气概⑥parenthood父母身份，亲子关系
Ⅲ.核心短语1．________________由……组成2．________________相应地，转而，一次，轮流3．________________完全没有，远不及4．________________致力于；献身于5．________________例如，比如6．________________事实远非如此7．________________在内心深处8．________________利用9．________________抱怨10．________________想起；想象出(不寻常的事物)；凭空设想becomprisedofinturnnowhereneardevoteone'slifetoforinstancebefarfromthecasedeepdownmakeuseofcomplainaboutdreamup
联想拓展in＋名词短语荟萃①inadvance提前②inturn依次；反过来③inperson亲自④inreturn作为回报⑤inaddition此外，而且⑥infact事实上
表示“聪明”的形容词荟萃①smart聪明的；机敏的②gifted/talented有才能的③wise明智的④brilliant杰出的⑤intelligent聪明的⑥creative富有创造力的
Ⅳ.重点句型1．what引导主语从句However,________________________(最让他担心的事)wasthatfarmersoftenhadpoorharvestsandsometimesevenhadaseriousshortageoffoodtoeat.2．介词＋关系代词引导的非限制性定语从句Indeed,hisslimbutstrongbodyisjustlikethatofmillionsofChinesefarmers________________________.(他奉献了一生)whatconcernedhimmosttowhomhehasdevotedhislife
3．Itis/was＋过去分词＋that...Today,_______________(据估算)about60percentofdomesticriceconsumptioninChinaiscomprisedofcropsgeneratedfromYuan'shybridstrains.4．giventhat...引导的状语从句________(鉴于)Yuan'shybridshavemadehimquitewealthy,onemightthinkhewouldretiretoalifeofleisure.itisestimatedthatGiventhat
课堂讲解
高频考点探究Ⅰ.核心词汇1．devotevt.把……献(给)；把……专用于；专心于【教材原句】Indeed,hisslimbutstrongbodyisjustlikethatofmillionsofChinesefarmers,towhomhehasdevotedhislife.事实上，他瘦削但结实的身躯看起来和农民一样，而他为千千万万中国农民奉献了一生。(1)devote...to(doing)sth.把……献给(做)某事devoteoneselfto＝bedevotedto献身于；专心致志于(2)devotedadj.忠实的；深爱的devotionn.奉献；关爱
【练透考点】单句语法填空①Theoldteacher________allhislifetoeducatinghis________studentsandhewasadmiredforhis________totheeducationcause.(devote)②________tolearningEnglishforyears,IthinkIamqualifiedforthejobbecauseIamcapableofcommunicationwithforeignersinEnglishfluently.(devote)③Hedevotedallhissparetimeto________(help)hisstudentswithalltheirEnglish.④Hemadeuphismindtodevoteallhehad________(help)thosepoorchildren.devoteddevoteddevotionDevotedhelpingtohelp
【佳句背诵】Volunteerscamewiththecarloadsofdonatedclothingandtoys.Neighborsdonatedtheirsparetimetohelpingothersrebuilt.志愿者们带来了一车车捐赠的衣服和玩具，邻居们用他们的空闲时间来帮助别人重建家园。
2．convincevt.使相信；使确信；说服【教材原句】Yuanwasconvincedthattheanswercouldbefoundinthecreationofhybridrice.袁隆平确信，答案可以在杂交水稻的培育中找到。(1)convincesb.ofsth.使某人相信某事convincesb.that...使某人相信……convincesb.todosth.说服某人做某事(2)convincingadj.有说服力的convincedadj.确信的；坚信的beconvincedof相信……beconvinced(that)．..(某人)相信……(3)convincinglyadv.有说服力地，令人信服地
【练透考点】单句语法填空①Hetriedtoconvincemeofthetruthofthenews,buthecouldnotprovide________proof.Therefore,itseemedthathedidnotspeak________.(convince)②________(convince)thattheBeltandRoadInitiativewillbenefittheChina'seconomy,weareoptimisticaboutthefutureofourcountry.③Scientistsareconvinced________thepositiveeffectofthelaughteronphysicalandmentalhealth.convincingconvincinglyConvincedof
【佳句背诵】Onlybypresentingfactsandreasoningthingsoutcanweconvincepeople.摆事实、讲道理，才能让人服气。
3．assumptionn．假定；设定；(责任的)承担；(权利的)获得【教材原句】Thecommonassumptionthenwasthatitcouldnotbedone.当时人们普遍认为这是不可能的。(1)makeanassumptionthat...认为；假定ontheassumptionthat...假定……(2)assumev.假定；设想assumesb./sth.tobe假定/假设某人/某事为Itisassumedthat...一般认为……assuming(that)．..假设/假定……
【练透考点】单句语法填空①Don't________thatyouareaprincessandstoplivingin________anymore.(assume)②________isgenerallyassumedthatstressiscausedbytoomuchwork.③Withtherapiddevelopmentoftheeconomy,Chinaisassuming________greaterroleintheprotectionoftheenvironment.④Weareworkingontheplan________theassumptionthateveryoneinvitedwillturnup.assumeassumptionsItaon
【佳句背诵】Itisuniversallyassumedthatglobalwarmingandclimatechangecouldcauseevenmoredisastersinthefuture.普遍认为全球变暖和气候的变化在将来会导致更多的灾难。
4．expandvt.&vi.扩大；增加vt.扩展；发展(业务)【教材原句】Thishybridenabledfarmerstoexpandtheiroutputgreatly.(课本P50)这种杂交使农民的产量大大增加。expand...into...把……扩展/发展成……expandinto...发展成/扩大成……expandon...细说(阐述)……expansionn.扩展；扩张；膨胀；扩大
【误区释疑】expandvt.&vi.使变大；伸展expend花费【构词法】ex前缀：①表示向外；②表示前任；③表示加强的作用eg：exit出口export出口exceed超过，超出extract提取，抽出
【练透考点】单句语法填空①[2017·天津卷书面表达]Inorder________myknowledgeofTianjin,suchasitshistory,traditionandfood,IspendeverysparemomentIhaveinthelibrary.(expand)②It'safactthatiron________whenitisheated.(expand)③________(expand)yourknowledgebyreadingmorebooksisawisechoice.④Couldyouexpand________thatpoint,please?toexpandexpandsExpandingon
【佳句背诵】Ourvocabularyexpandsthroughawiderangeofreading.我们的词汇量通过广泛的阅读而扩大。
5．alternativen．可供选择的事物；adj.可供替代的；非传统的【教材原句】Asanalternative,somefarmershaveswitchedtoorganicfarming,andmanycustomershaveturnedtoorganicfoodwhentheyshopatthelocalgrocery.作为一种选择，一些农民转向有机农业，许多顾客在当地杂货店购物时转向有机食品。
(1)havenoalternative/choicebuttodosth.别无选择只好做某事(2)havethealternativeofdoingsth.有做……的选择，可以做……(3)there'snoalternative...buttodosth.……别无选择只好做某事(4)analternativeto...……的替代品(5)alternativelyadv.要不，或者
【知识拓展】“别无选择只好做……”的其他表达形式：(1)havenochoicebuttodosth.(2)can'tdosth.butdosth.(3)candonothingbutdosth.
【练透考点】单句语法填空①Themanagersaidthattheyhad________alternativeplaniftheplantheyhadputforwardwasnotaccepted.②TheInternetalsoprovidesuswithacheapalternativeto________(communicate)withothers.③ItwassoseriousamatterthatIhadnoalternativebut________(call)thepolice.④Theagencywillmaketravelarrangementsforyou.________(alternative),youcanorganizeyourowntransport.ancommunicatingtocallAlternatively
【佳句背诵】Anyhow，thereisnoalternativebuttotakemeasurestoprotectthoseancientbuildingsfromanyharm.无论如何，除了采取措施保护这些古建筑免受任何伤害，别无选择。
Ⅱ.核心短语6．becomprisedof包括；包含；由……组成(或构成)【教材原句】Today,itisestimatedthatabout60percentofdomesticriceconsumptioninChinaiscomprisedofcropsgeneratedfromYuan'shybridstrains.今天，据估计，中国大约60%的国内大米消费是由袁氏杂交水稻生产的。【拓展延伸】comprisev．组成；构成；包括；包含“由……构成的”词组：consistof(无被动语态),becomposedof，makeup,bemadeupof,beformedof
【练透考点】完成句子①Womencomprisemorethanhalftheword'spopulation,70%oftheworld'spoor,andtwothirdsofthosewho________(be)nottaughttoreadandwrite.②Theconcertcomprised________dancesandsongperformanceswereallputupbyourveryowntalentedstudents!areof
【佳句背诵】Lifeiscomprisedofnotonlysunshinebutalsostorms.生活不仅有阳光，而且还有风雨。
7．inturn相应地；转而；依次；轮流Thisaffectsthecropsgrownonthelandand,inturn,theanimalsandhumanswhodigestthem.这影响了生长在土地上的作物，进而影响消化它们的动物和人类。
【拓展延伸】inone'sturn轮到某人；接着byturns轮流；依次taketurnsdoing/todo...轮流做……Itisone'sturntodosth.轮到某人干某事【误区释疑】inturn相应地；转而；依次；轮流inreturn作为回报
【练透考点】单句语法填空①Itisourresponsibilitytotakecareofoursickmother________turns.②Whenitwashisturn________(deliver)hisspeech，hewalkedtowardstheplatform，nervousandembarrassed.③Hespendstoomuchtimeonmaths，andthis________turnaffectstheprogressoftheothersubjects.④Atthemeetingtheytookturns________(put)forwardanumberofsuggestionsaimingtopromotethereformofeducationsystem.⑤Whenitwas________myturn，Iwastooexcitedtospeak.bytodeliverintoputin
【佳句背诵】Asweallknow，alltheoriescomefrompracticeandinturnservepractice.我们都知道，所有的理论都来自实践，反过来又服务于实践。
8．nowherenear完全没有，远不及【教材原句】Organicfarmingisnowherenearabletomeetthatneed.有机农业完全不能满足那样的需要。nowherenear完全没有，远不及，离……很远go/getnowhere没有结果，没有进展getsb.nowhere让某人毫无进展inthemiddleofnowhere在遥远偏僻处outof/fromnowhere突然出现，突然发生
【练透考点】完成句子①已经得到他们的帮助，但这种帮助还远远没达到我们的期望。Helphasalreadycomefromthem,buttheaidis________________whatweexpected.②黑夜里一只大狗不知从哪儿冒出来，吓了我一跳。Adarknight,abigdog________________，whichgavemeafright.③消极的态度会让你一无所成。Anegativeattitudewill________________.④我们是在一个荒无人烟的地方，这儿没有公路，没有汽车，什么都没有，只有一条长长的土路和树丛。Wewere________________________.Therewerenoroads,nocars,nonothing,justalongdirtroadandabunchoftrees.nowherenearcameoutofnowheregetyounowhereinthemiddleofnowhere
【佳句背诵】Iamnowherenearperfect,though,andIhavealongwaytogobeforebecomingfluentinEnglish.不过我距离完美的境界还远得很，要说一口流利的英语那还有很长一段路。
Ⅲ.典型句式精析9．GiventhatYuan'shybridshavemadehimquitewealthy,onemightthinkhewouldretiretoalifeofleisure.考虑到杂交水稻使袁隆平变得相当富有，人们可能认为他会退休享受闲适的生活。【句式分析】giventhat...引导的状语从句givenprep.鉴于，考虑到adj.赠予的；沉溺的；规定的providingthat如果，只是
【练透考点】完成句子①他们要在规定的时间和地点会晤。Theyweretomeet________________________.②根据我的背景和经验，你认为我刚开始从事这份工作会遇到的最大的挑战是什么？________________________________，whatdoyouthinkwillbethegreatestchallengeformeinthecareerinthebeginning?③倘若她真的对孩子感兴趣，教师这一职业对她来说很合适。__________________________________，teachingwasapropercareerforher.atagiventimeandplaceGivenmybackgroundandexperienceGiventhatshewasreallyinterestedinchildren
10．However，whatconcernedhimmostwasthatfarmersoftenhadpoorharvestsandsometimesevenhadaseriousshortageoffoodtoeat.然而，最让他担心的是，农民经常粮食歉收，有时甚至严重缺乏食物。【典型例句】Whatstruckmemostinthemoviewasthefather'sdeeploveforhisson.影片中最打动我的是父亲对儿子深厚的爱。
【句式分析】what是连接代词，引导的从句可以作主语、宾语或表语；what本身在从句中可作主语、宾语或表语。【误区释疑】that引导名词性从句只起连接作用，在从句中不作任何成分，无意义，在宾语从句中通常省略，但在主语从句、表语从句和同位语从句中均不能省略；what除引导从句外，还在从句中作成分，意为“所……的(东西)”，在含义上等于“名词＋that”。
【语境速测】单句语法填空①________upsetmewas________ourflightwasdelayedbecauseoftheterriblestorm.②Itwaswhenwewerereturninghome________Irealized________agoodfeelingitwastohavehelpedsomeoneintrouble.③Whenwearrivedat________usedtobecalledtheCityofFog，wefoundLondonhadcompletelychanged.④[2018·北京卷]Withouthissupport，wewouldn'tbe________wearenow.Whatthatthatwhatwhatwhat
【佳句背诵】[2018·北京卷]Thisiswhatmyfatherhastaughtme—toalwaysfacedifficultiesandhopeforthebest.这就是父亲教给我的——永远面对困难并寄予最大的希望。
随堂练习
Ⅰ.高考能力同步化——单句语法填空1．[2020·全国卷Ⅱ]ThefashionshowsinNewOrleansandBrooklynis________(expand)thefashionmarket.2．[2020·江苏高考]Hesaidthatoneoftheboxes________(generate)around$13,500inrevenue(收入)amonthandcostonlyabout$400torent.3．[2020·江苏高考]Thespeedof6Gwillexceed125GB/s,allowingforanewgenerationofvirtual________(real)．4．[2020·全国卷Ⅱ]Hesaysit'snoteasy________(convince)peoplethatnutriafurisgreen,buthehasnodoubtaboutit.5．[2020·新高考全国Ⅰ卷]AccordingtoarecentstudyintheJournalofConsumerResearch,boththesizeand________(consume)habitsofoureatingcompanionscaninfluenceourfoodintake.toexpandgeneratedrealitytoconvinceconsumption
6.Themanagersaidthattheyhad________alternativeplaniftheplantheyhadputforwardwasnotaccepted.7．They________(overcome)difficultiesoneafteranotherandfinallyrealizedtheirgoals.8.Theconcert________(comprise)ofdancesandsongperformanceswereallputupbyourveryowntalentedstudents.9.Junkfoodsareanythingbut________(nutrition),sostudentsshouldavoidthem.10．________isestimatedthattheannualvalueofindustrialandagriculturaloutputwillbedoubled.anovercamecomprisednutritiousIt
Ⅱ.必备知识试题化——完成句子1．Thiskindoffood________________(富有营养)，andinparticularitcontainsalotofminerals.(nutrition)2．Hiseffortspaidoff,andhe________________atlast(达到目标)．(attain)3．______________(据估计)thenumberoftouristswhotravelabroadhasdoubledinthepastdecade.(estimate)4.Youwillnevergainsuccessunlessyou______________________(全身心投入工作)．(devote)5．_______________________(鉴于任务困难),youhavedonereallywell.(given)isrichinnutritionattainedhisgoalItisestimatedthatarefullydevotedtoyourworkGiventhatitwasadifficulttask
Ⅲ.教材语篇高考化——语法填空阅读下面短文，在空白处填入1个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。YuanLongpingisoneofChina'sfamousscientists,whois1.________(know)asthe“fatherofhybridrice”．Hewasbornin1930inBeijing.Becausehewantedtotackle2.________problemoflowyield,he3.________(choose)tostudyagricultureatcollege.Aftergraduation,heworkedasaresearcherand4.__________(convince)thatit'spossibletocreatehybridrice.knownthechosewasconvinced
Afterhardworkhesucceededin5.________(develop)thefirsthybridricein1974.Becauseofhisinvaluablecontributions,Yuanhasreceivednumerous6.________(award)bothinChinaandabroad.Althoughhishybridshavemadehimquite7.________(wealth),hecareslittle8.________celebrityandmoney.Instead,hemakeslargedonations9.________(support)agriculturalresearch.NowYuanstilltriestofulfilhisnewdreamsandeveryoneiswaitingtosee10.________hewilldreamupnext.developingawardswealthyfortosupportwhat
话题与高考写作
[2020·全国卷Ⅱ]上周末，你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文，介绍这次活动，内容包括：1.农场情况；2.采摘过程；3.个人感受。注意：1.词数100左右；2.题目已为你写好。题目：MyWeekend
Step1斟酌打磨 丰富句式1．精挑细选——核心词汇想周全①________________各种各样的②________________诱人的③________________小心翼翼地④________________唯恐⑤________________无公害varietiesofinvitingwithcautionforfearthatpoisonfree
2．遣词造句——句式升级是亮点句式翻译：①当我们的篮子装满了果实的时候，我们就回去了，我们虽然很累了，但是很满意。Whenourbasketswasfull,wewentout.Althoughweweretired,wefeltsatisfied.(非谓语结构)→______________________________________________________Withourbasketsfull,wewentout,tiredbutsatisfied.
②我感受到了农民们的痛苦和劳动带给我的快乐。Ifeelthepainsthefarmerstakeandthehappinessthatlaborbringsme.(notonly...butalso)→______________________________________________________NotonlydoIfeelthepainsthefarmerstakebutalsothehappinessthatlaborbringsme.
Step2逻辑衔接 连句成文MyWeekendLastweekend,myclassmatesandIwenttoXinhuaFarmbybiketopickstrawberries.Uponenteringthefarm,wewereattractedbyitscleannessandrichvarietiesoffruit.Aguideledustothestrawberryfield,wherewesawfreshinvitingredstrawberries.Weweretoldwecouldenjoysomenewly－pickedonesbecausetheywerepoison－free.Asrequested,webegantopickstrawberrieswithcautionforfearthatsomeplantsweredestroyed.Abouttwohourslater,withourbasketsfull,wewentout,tiredbutsatisfied.Thisexperiencebenefitsmealot.NotonlydoIfeelthepainsthefarmerstakebutalsothehappinessthatlaborbringsme.
读后续写专题之四 丰富环境 细腻内容
[2018·浙江卷]Itwassummer,andmydadwantedtotreatmetoavacationlikeneverbefore.HedecidedtotakemeonatriptotheWildWest.WetookaplanetoAlbuquerque,abigcityinthestateofNewMexico.WereachedAlbuquerqueinthelateafternoon.UnclePaul,mydad'sfriend,pickedusupfromtheairportanddroveusuptohisfarminPecos.HiswifeTinacookedusadeliciousdinnerandwegottoknowhissonsRyanandKyle.MydadandIspentthenightintheguestroomofthefarmhouselisteningtothefrogsandwaterrollingdowntherivernearby.Veryearlyinthemorning,UnclePaulwokeusuptohavebreakfast.“Thedaystartsatdawnonmyfarm，”hesaid.Afterbreakfast,IwenttohelpAuntTinafeedthechickens,whilemydadwentwithUnclePaultotakethesheepouttograze(吃草).IwasimpressedtoseemydadandUnclePaulridinghorses.Theylookedreallycool.
Intheafternoon,IaskedUnclePaulifIcouldtakeahorseride,andhesaidyes,aslongasmydadwentwithme.Iwasn'tgoingtotakeahorseridebymyselfanyway.So,mydadandIput_onournewcowboyhats,gotonourhorses,andheadedslowlytowardsthemountains.“Don'tbelateforsupper，”UnclePaulcried,“andkeeptothetracksothatyoudon'tgetlost！”“OK！”mydadcriedback.AfterawhileUnclePaulandhisfarmhousewereoutofsight.Itwassopeacefulandquietandthecolorsofthebrownrocks,thedeepgreenpinetrees,andthelateafternoonsunmixedtocreateamagicscene.Itlookedlikeabeautifulwoven(编织的)blanketspreadoutuponthegroundjustforus.
注意：1．续写词数应为150左右；2．请按如下格式作答。Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.________________________________________________________________________Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.________________________________________________________________________
文本解读：本文是2018年6月份浙江省高考读后续写真题。文章主要记叙了父亲为了让大家过一个不同以往的暑假，带一家人去了UnclePaul的农场。在那里，“我”在父亲的陪伴下，体验了骑马。原文是故事的开始，主要介绍了整个事件发生的时间，地点以及农场生活的体验。在阅读文本时，我们要带着when,where,who,what,why,how去理清文本的内容和故事情节的发展脉络。在梳理故事情节发展的脉络时，我们要把握住三条线索：时间线，故事情节线和情感发展线。
时间线：①Itwassummer②inthelateafternoon③spentthenight④veryearlyinthemorning⑤afterbreakfast⑥intheafternoon⑦afterawhile故事情节线：根据以上情节线，我们可以梳理出各个时间节点的故事情节。
背景：父亲带一家人去UnclePaul的农场过暑假。第一天：下午UnclePaul到机场接我们，晚上在农场听青蛙叫和潺潺水声。第二天：清晨吃过早饭后，体验了农场生活，和AuntTina一起喂鸡，看父亲和UnclePaul一起放羊，同时看到父亲骑马觉得很酷，也想试一试。在“我”的请求下，父亲答应陪“我”一起去骑马，出发前，UnclePaul叮嘱“我们”要沿着足迹走并在晚上前赶回来，否则将会迷路。于是，“我”和父亲出发了。情感发展线：因为是旅游，整篇文章基调应该是积极的，虽然没有直接的情感表达，但是从deliciousdinner,peaceful,quiet,magic,beautiful这些词可以看出“我”对于这次农场之旅非常满意，同时从“IwasimpressedtoseemydadandUnclePaulridinghorses”可以感受到“我”对于骑马的浓厚兴趣。
写作思路：第一段段首句“Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.”中的suddenly表明情况发生了急剧变化。根据上下文的景色描写可知，“我”和父亲正在欣赏沿途的美景，这时突然跳出一只兔子，肯定会打破原本平静的基调。马，“我”以及父亲的反应和心理变化应该在这一段体现出来。第二段段首句“Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.”揭示我们迷路了，说明在上文里我们因为兔子的出现而偏离了原来的track。可能是追着兔子不知不觉跑远了，也可能是马受到惊吓带着我乱跑导致迷路，但可以肯定的是我们最终还是回到了农场，那么，在第二段，主要解决的问题是如何回农场。除此以外，语言层面的焦点要放在天黑迷路时的心理活动，环境描写以及父亲行为等的刻画上。
语言积累1．词的积累①描述天气的形容词stormy,warm,hot,rainy,cloudy,snowy,windy,foggy,misty,freezingcold,clear,changeable,awful②描写天气的名词fog,drizzle,storm,snowstorm,thunder,typhoon,hurricane,tornado,downpour
2．句式积累①Atonepoint,thefaintsoundofwaterwastumblingthroughthevalley.②Thewaterwasdeepblueandsunlightglitteredonitslookingglassclearsurface.③By5o'clock,therainhadstoppedandtheskywascurdledgrayburdenedwithlumpsofclouds.④Thesunwasbeginningtoset,glitteringredthroughthecracksbetweentheramshacklebuilding.⑤Themoonwatchedformtheskybehindthecloudsasthestarsblinktheireyesinfatigue.
⑥Likeadimlamp,themoonshonefromaboveandthestarstwinkledtheireyeswithcuriosity.⑦Acoldbreezeblewthroughthequietpark.⑧Acoldbreezewaftedthroughmyhair.⑨Therewasabrooknotfarfromhere,rushingandsparklingbetweengreenbanks.⑩Blueskystoodtallandfar,andthesunwaslikeabrandingironsearingthebackofmyneck.
范文赏析：Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.Myhorsewassofrightenedthatitbeganrunningferociously.Icouldfeeltheairhittingmyfaceheavilyandhearmydad'shystericalcryfromthedistance.Myheartwaspumpingwildlyandmybloodwaspulsingthroughmyveins.Ipulledbackthereins,distractedthehorseandtriedeverymeanstostopthehorsebutinvain.Afterwhatseemedaneternity,mydadcaughtupwithmebreathlesslyandmanagedtostopmyhorse.Butwefoundthatwewereindistress,withnotrackbesideus.
Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.Theriverbesideuswasstillandsereneunderthelastrayofsunshinebutwedidn'thavethemoodtoenjoyit.Suddenly,itoccurredtousthattherewasalsoarivernearbythefarmhouse.Realizingtherivermaybeaguideback,ourspiritssoaredandwebegantotrotbrisklyalongtheriver.Justafewminuteslater,catchingsightofthesilhouetteodthehouse,Ifeltafeelingofreliefandrelaxationsurgedthroughme.IcouldpictureUnclePaul'ssmilingfaceandourdelicioussupperandIthoughttomyselfthatourbeinglostaddedaspecialtastetomyadventurousvacationwhichIwouldrememberallmylife.
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