专题08智慧解困类一、真题链接（2017年6月浙江卷）Onabright,warmJulyafternoon,MacHollan,aprimaryschoolteacher,wascyclingfromhishometoAlaskawithhisfriends.Oneofhisfriendshadstoppedtomakeabicyclerepair,buttheyhadencouragedMactocarryon,andtheywouldcatchupwithhimsoon.AsMacpedaled(骑行)alongalone,hethoughtfondlyofhiswifeandtwoyoungdaughtersathome.Hehopedtoshowthemthisbeautifulplacesomeday. ThenMacheardquickandloudbreathingbehindhim.“Man,that'sabigdog!”hethought.Butwhenhelookedtotheside,hesawinstantlythatitwasn'tadogatall,butawolf,quicklycatchingupwithhim. Mac'sheartjumped.Hefoundouthiscanofbearspray.Withonehandonthebars,hefiredthesprayatthewolf.Abrightredcloudenvelopedtheanimal,andtoMac'srelief,itfellback,shakingitshead.Butaminutelater,itwasbyhissideagain.ThenitattackedthebackofMac'sbike,tearingopenhistentbag.Hefiredatthewolfasecondtime,andagain,itfellbackonlytoquicklyrestartthechase（追赶）。 Macwaspedalinghardnow.Hewavedandyelledatpassingcarsbutwascarefulnottoslowdown.Hesawasteepuphillclimbbeforehim.Heknewthatoncehehitthehill,he'dbeeasycaughtupandthewolf'steethwouldbetearingintohisflesh. Atthismoment,PaulandBeekyweredrivingtheircarontheirwaytoAlaska.Theydidn'tthinkmuchofitwhentheysawtwocyclistsrepairingtheirbikeonthesideoftheroad.Abitlater,theyspottedwhatthey,too,assumedwasadogrunningalongsideamanonabike.Astheygotcloser,theyrealizedthatthedogwasawolf.Macheardalargevehiclebehindhim.Hepulledinfrontofitasthewolfwascatchingupfast,justadozenyardsawaynow.注意：1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2．应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragragh1: Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim.______________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragragh2: Afewminuteslater,theothertwo cyclists arrived.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________一、真题解析2.1整体把握：主题语境人与社会--人与环境、人与动植物语篇话题本篇读后续写为记叙文，文章大意为Mac和朋友们在骑行的过程中，遭遇了狼的追赶；Paul和Beeky开车路过，帮着Mac摆脱狼的追赶。情节梳理故事要素when：Onabright,warmJulyafternoonwhere：thewaytoAlaskawho：MacHollanandhisfriends;PaulandBeekywhat：MacHollanwascyclingfromhishometoAlaskaandtheymetawolf.PaulandBeekydroveandhelpedthemescapefromthewolf.情节走向通过第一段首句“ Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim.”可预测，续写思路为：Mac上车--狼追上来--麦克与狼智斗--Mac成功上车通过第二段首句“Afewminuteslater,theothertwo cyclists arrived.”可预测，续写思路为：两人震惊--两人与狼智斗--狼离开--大家脱离险境2.2逐句写作：第一段：1.麦克跳下自行车，冲向车门。Macjumpedoffhisbicycleandrushedtothedoorofthecar.
2.但麦克还没来得及开门，狼就追上了，扑了上去。ButbeforeMaccouldopenthedoor,thewolfhadcaughtupandjumpedtoattack.3.幸运的是，魔法喷雾第三次救了麦克。Luckily,themagicspraysavedMacathirdtime.4.看到狼退后，保罗迅速打开车门，受惊的人很快爬上车，重重地关上身后的车门。Seeingthewolfbackoff,Paulquicklyunlockedthedoor,andthefrightenedmanclimbedintothecarinnotime,shuttingthedoorbehindhimheavily.5.贝西从后窗往外看，看见狼站在麦克的自行车上，好像那是一场杀戮。BechylookedoutofthebackwindowandsawthewolfstandingoverMac’sbicycleasifitwereakill.6.不久，那只动物跑了。Soonafter,theanimalranoff.第二段：7.他们对所见的感到震惊，于是加入保罗的行列。TheywereshockedatwhattheysawandjoinedPaul.8.麦家的一个朋友挑出一些生肉扔给了狼。OneofMacsfriendspickedoutsomerawmeatandthrewittothewolf.9.狼对得到的东西很满意，就跑进了树林。Satisfiedwithwhathegot,thewolfranintothewoods.10.麦克感谢保罗和贝基，“你停下来救我，我真是太感谢你了，我还活着，这都归功于你。”MacthankedPaulandBecky,“HowgratefulIamthatyoustoppedtosavemeandIoweittoyouthatI’mstillalive.”11.由于麦克受伤，这三个人不得不放弃剩下的旅程回家。AsMacgotinjured,thethreemenhadtogiveuptherestoftheirjourneyandreturnedhome.2.3范文赏析Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim.Macjumpedoffhisbicycleandrushedtothedoorofthecar.ButbeforeMaccouldopenthedoor,thewolfhadcaughtupandjumpedtoattack.Luckily,themagicspraysavedMacathirdtime.Seeingthewolfbackoff,Paulquicklyunlockedthedoor,andthefrightenedmanclimbedintothecarinnotime,shuttingthedoorbehindhimheavily.BechylookedoutofthebackwindowandsawthewolfstandingoverMac’sbicycleasifitwereakill.Soonafter,theanimalranoff.
Afewminuteslater,theothertwo cyclists arrived.TheywereshockedatwhattheysawandjoinedPaul.OneofMacsfriendspickedoutsomerawmeatandthrewittothewolf.Satisfiedwithwhathegot,thewolfranintothewoods.MacthankedPaulandBecky,“HowgratefulIamthatyoustoppedtosavemeandIoweittoyouthatI’mstillalive.”AsMacgotinjured,thethreemenhadtogiveuptherestoftheirjourneyandreturnedhome.一、素材积累3.1情绪类素材积累绝望desperately/hopelessly令人害怕的frightening/terrifying毫不犹豫withouthesitation3.2动作类素材积累消失disappear/fadeaway/begone上车getin/hopin大声尖叫screamloudly/shriekloudly冲出rushoutof转头turnone’sheadaround冲进rushinto追赶chaseafter扔出throwout一跃而起jumptoone’sfeet3.3环境描写类素材积累太阳开始缓缓升起，给山披上了一层金纱。Thesunbegantoriseinthesky,bathingthemountainingoldenlight.夜幕降临。Thenightsettledin.天空非常黑暗，风在她的四周可怕地怒吼着。Itwasverydark,andthewindhowledhorriblyaroundher.天空乌云密布。Theskyiscoveredwithdarkclouds.天气晴朗，吹来阵阵清风。Thedaywasbrightwithafreshbreezeblowing.一场暴雪侵袭了整个城市。Asnowstormblanketedtheentirecity.四、模拟演练练习（一）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节，使之构成一个完整的故事。Eversincehewasakid,Colinhadtakengreatinterestinhiking(远足）.Tocelebratehis40thbirthday,heplannedtoclimbMountainSunshine.Thenightbeforehisjourney,Colinfilledhisbackpackwithhikingpoles,ahomemadehamburger,andsomeothernecessities.Hedroveoffat7amthenextday,hismountainbikeinthetrunk(后备箱）。Whenhewasalreadyontheway,hesuddenlyrealizedtherewasapossibilityofbearattack.Aboutanhourlater,hearrivedatacampandcheckedin.“Isthereanythingyouneed?”Vito,thecampmanager,askedhim.“Bearspray(驱熊喷雾），”saidColin.Afterfindingabottle,Vitoofferedhimaride.Theytruckedalongaroaduntiltheforestgottoothick.AsColinputhismountainbikeagainstabushsothathecouldrecoveritonthewayback,Vitosaid,“I'llcomeforyouifyou'renotbackwhenthenightfalls."“Nothingtoworryabout,”Colinrepliedinaconfidentvoice.Withthebearsprayinonepocket,Colinstartedhiking.Hemarkedhistrail(足迹，踪迹）andmadelotsofnoisetodriveawayanycuriousanimals.Beforeheknewit,itwasgettingdark.Notwantingtogetcaughtinthedark,andsatisfiedwithwhathe'dfinishedthatday,hestartedtoclimbdownthemountain,andsoonrecoveredhisbike.Ashepassedamarkershowing3kilometersawayfromthecamp,hesuddenlystoppedhisbike-abearstoodinthemiddleofthenarrowroad,somehundredmetersaway.Knowingitcouldeasilyattackhimifhespedup,Colindecidednottoangerthebear.注意：1.写作词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1:Theanimalcameinhisdirection,closerandcloser.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Atthatverymoment,atruckstoppedrightinfrontofhim.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________练习（二）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节，使之构成一个完整的故事。ItwasahotJulydayinPhiladelphia.ThefiveboysIwaswithhadbeensickofplayingmarblesandburningholesindryleaves.SowhenlittleNedsuggestedclimbingthecliff,therestofkidsallagreedexcitedly,exceptme.Ihesitated.Ilongedtobebraveandactive,likethem,butI’dbeenasicklychildmostofmyeightyearsandIactuallywasn’tasstrongastheotherboys.“Comeon!”CalledJerry,mybestfriend.“Justbeingsickisnoreasontobeacoward（胆小鬼）.”“I’mcoming!”Iyelled,andranalongafterthem.Throughtheparkandintothewoodswewent,finallywestoodbeneaththenearvertical（垂直的）wallofthecliff,about60feethigh.TomeitlookedliketheverysymboloftheForbiddenandImpossible.Onebyone,theotherboysclimbedupward,findinghandholdsandtoeholdsonrocks.Ihungbackuntiltheotherswerepartwayup;thentremblingandsweating,Ibegantoclimb.Ahandhere,afootthere,myheartpoundinginmyskinnychest,Imademywayupandup.Atsomepoint,Ilookedbackandwashorrified.Thegroundatthebaseofthecliffseemedveryfarbelow;oneslipandIwouldfall.Buttheboysweretalkingloudlyandhappilyaboveme.InafewminutestheystarteduptothetopwhileIstillstruggledandcrawled,farbehind.“Hey,wait,”Ibegged.Sadly,theyignoredmyrequestandcontinuedtheirwaytothetop,fromwheretheywouldwalkhomebyaneasierroute.Beforetheyleft,theyglanceddownatme.“Youcanstayifyouwantto”,teasedNed.Jerrylookedconcerned,buthewentwiththeothers.Ilookeddownandwasovercomebydizziness;anamelessforceseemedtobedraggingmetofalloff.Igraspedtherockastheworldspunaround.Icouldneverclimbbackdown.Itwasmuchtoofartogo,toodangerous.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1:Howeverthewayuptothetopwasevenworse—higher,steeper,morechallenging.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Ididn’tknowhowlongithadpasseduntilafamiliarvoicecamebelow.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________练习（三）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Atfirst,Michaeldidn’tseetheblacksmokeorflamesshootingfromthewindowsofhisneighbors’home.Heandhiswifehadjustparkedaroundthecornerfromtheirownhousewhentheygotacallfromoneofhisdaughters:“Thehousenextdoorisonfire!”Hewenttocheck.That’swhenhesawtwowomenandagirlhelplessandheartbrokenontheirdoorway.“Thebaby’sinthere!”oneofthewomencried.Thoughthefiredepartmenthadbeencalled,Michael,then64,immediatelyraninside.“Thebaby”was8-year-oldTiara,thewoman’sgranddaughterandaplaymateofMichael’sthreeyoungestkids.Enteringtheburninghousewaslike“runningintoabucketofblackpaint”.ThethicksmokecausedMichaeltostumbleblindlyaround,burnedhiseyes,andmadeitimpossibletobreathe.Theconditionswouldhavebeendangerousforanyone,butforMichael,whohasseverelungdisease,theywerelife-threatening.Afterafewminutesinthesmoke-filledhouse,heretreatedoutsidetocatchhisbreath.“WhereisTiara?”heaskeddesperately.“Thesecondfloor,”herauntshoutedback.Michaelknewhecouldn’tholdhisbreathforlong.However,takingadeepbreath,hewentinasecondtime.Thedarknesswasoverwhelming.Yetbecausethehousehadasimilardesigntohis,hemadeittothesecondfloor.Heturnedtotherightandwasmetbyintenseheat.Hewasalreadyoutofbreath.“Babygirl,whereareyou?”Histhroatandlungsburnedasifhe’dinhaledfireinsteadofthesmokeintheair.Everyblinkstunghiseyes.Allhecouldhearwasthecracklingandpoppingofburningwood.Thenasoftbutdistinctmoanemerged.Stillunabletosee,Michaelfelltohiskneesonthehotwoodfloor.Hecrawledtowardthesound,feelingaroundforany
signofthegirl.Anunluckythoughtcrossedhismind:I’mprobablygonnadieuphere.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1:Finally,Michaeltouchedsomething.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Tiarawassafenow;however,Michaelfainteddowntotheground,unconscious.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________范文赏析练习（一）Theanimalcameinhisdirection,closerandcloser.Handsshaking,Colingrabbedthehamburgeroutofhisbackpack,andthrewitbesidethebear,hopingitwouldattracttheanimal.However,thebearjusttookonesmell,andthenturnedback,walkingon.Withthedistancegettingsoclose,Colintookoutthesprayquicklyandfireditatthebear.Tohisrelief,itfellback,shakingitshead.Seeingthis,Colinrodetowardthecampasquicklyashecould.Sadly,amomentlater.heheardthebearroaringandrunningafterhim.Atthatverymoment,atruckstoppedrightinfrontofhim."Getin!"Someoneshouted.ItwasVito!Withoutanyhesitation,Colinjumpedoffhisbikeandgotintothetruck,shuttingthedoorjustbeforethebearcaughthim.Soangrywasthebearthatitkeptroaringandpushingthetruckviolently.Afterwhatseemedages,itgaveup,turnedaround,anddisappearedintothewoods,Withhisheartstillinhisthroat.Colinhuggedhislife-saverandthankedhimagainandagain.Perhaps,hewouldneverforgetthelife-riskingexperiencefortherestofhislife.练习（二）Howeverthewayuptothetopwasevenworse—higher,steeper,morechallenging.Iwouldnevermakeit.Iheardsomeonesobbingandmoaning;IwonderedwhoitwasandrealizedthatitwasI.Theotherboysmusthave
beenhome.Timedragged.Andwitheachpassingminute,mylegsandarmsgrewsore/numb.Somethingrolleddownmycheeks.Itwastearsorsweat,orboth.Theshadowsgraduallylengthened,thesundisappearedfromthetreetopsbeyondtheclearingbelow,andduskbegantogather.Thegroundbelowthecliffbecamedim.CanyouimaginehowdesperateIwasatthattime?Ididn’tknowhowlongithadpasseduntilafamiliarvoicecamebelow.Iglanceddown!Itwasmydadwithaflashlight.Butwhatcouldhedo?Itwasimpossibleforhimtoclimbuphereandcarrymedown.“Comeondown,mybraveboy.Dinnerisready.”Hiscomfortingtoneseemedtohaveamagicpower.Somehow,followinghislight,Istruggledtoinchoveronestep.Andthenanother.That’showitwent.FinallyItookthelaststepdownontothebottomandintomyfather’sstrongarms,sobbingalittle,andthen,surprisingly,feelingasenseofimmenseaccomplishmentandsomethinglikepride.练习（三）Finally,Michaeltouchedsomething.Ashoe,thenanankle—ItwasTiara!Hescoopedherintohisarmsandstood.Turning,hefoughtthroughthesmokeandmadehiswaytotheoutside.MichaelputTiaradownonthedoorway.AndHestartedCPR—thefirsttimehe’deverdoneso.Thewomenstoodbehindhim,prayingsilently.SoonaslightcoughcamefromTiara’sthroat.Hegavefivemorebreaths.Sheopenedhereyesandtookabreathonherown.Tiarawassafenow;however,Michaelfainteddowntotheground,unconscious.Whenhewokeup,Michaelfoundhimselfinthehospital,surroundedbyhisneighborswhoconstantlysaidthank-youtothehero.Michaelspentoveraweekinthehospital.Tiarawasreleasedfromthehospitalafterafewdays.ThefiresickenedMichael’slungdisease,andhefeelstheeffectseventwoyearslater.“It’sasmallpricetopay,”healwaysreplies.“I’ddoitagaininaheartbeat.Wouldn’tgiveitasecondthought.”
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