备战2022年新高考英语读后续写真题逐步解析专练10 主旨升华类

专题10主旨升华类一、真题链接（2017年11月浙江卷）Avacationwithmymother    Ihadaninterestingchildhood:Itwasfilledwithsurpriseandamusements,allbecauseofmymother-loving,sweet,andyet absent-minded and forgetful.Onestrangefamily trip wetookwhenIwaseleventellsalotabouther.   MytwosetsofgrandparentslivedinColoradoandNorthDakota,andmyparentsdecidedtospendafewweeksdrivingtothosestatesandseeingallthesightsalongtheway.Asthefirstdayofourtripapproached, David,myeight-year-oldbrother,andIunwillinglysaidgood-byetoallofourfriends.Whoknewifwe’deverseethemagain?Finally,themomentofourdeparturearrived,andweloadedsuitcases,books,games, camping equipment,anda tent intothecarandbravelydroveoff.Webravelydroveoffagaintwohourslaterafterwe’dreturnedhometogetthepurseandtraveler’schecks Mom hadforgotten.   DavidandIwerealwaysalittlenervouswhenusinggasstationbathroomsifMomwasdrivingwhile Dad slept:”YoustandoutsidethedoorandplaylookoutwhileIgo,andI’llstandoutsidethedoorandplaylookoutwhileyougo.”Ihadterriblepicturesinmymind:“Honey,wherearethekids?”“What?!Oh,Gosh…Ithoughttheywerebeingawfullyquiet.”Wewereneveractuallyleftbehindinastrangecity,butweweren’tabouttotakeanychances.   Onthefourthorfifthnight,wehad trouble findingahotelwithavacancy.Afterdrivinginvainforsometime,Momsuddenlygotagreatidea:Whydidn’twefindahousewithalikely-lookingbackyardandaskifwecouldsetuptentthere?DavidandIbecamenervous.Toourgreatrelief,Dadturneddowntheidea.Momnevercouldunderstandourobjections.Ifastrangefamilyshoweduponherfrontdoorsteps,Momwouldhavebeendelighted.Shethinkseveryoneintheworldas nice assheis.Wefinallyfoundavacancyinthenexttown.Para1: Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtentwehadbroughtwithus._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Para2: Wedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofgreatsightsalongtheway.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________一、真题解析2.1整体把握：主题语境人与自我--学习与生活--家庭生活语篇话题本篇读后续写为记叙文，文章大意为我们一家人在旅游露营的时候遇到小男孩，他很穷对我们的帐篷很感兴趣，妈妈故意“忘记”带帐篷，实际上是将帐篷送给了小男孩。情节梳理故事要素when：oneholidaywhen“I”waselevenwhere：onthewayoftravellingwho：myfamilyandalittleboywhat：whenIwaseleven,ourfamilytookatrip.Duringthetrip,mymothersuggestedcampingwithourtent,andsomethingmeaningfulandhelpfulhappened.情节走向通过第一段首句“Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtentwehadbroughtwithus.”可预测，续写思路为：搭帐篷--露营--遇到小男孩--妈妈“忘记”带帐篷通过第二段首句“Wedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofgreatsightsalongtheway.”可预测，续写思路为：与爷爷奶奶共游--妈妈“忘记”的帐篷--实际是妈妈故意留给小男孩--感悟2.2逐句写作：第一段：1.想到这顶帐篷，妈妈建议我们到下一个村子去野营，眼睛闪闪发光。Thinkingofthistent,Momsuggestedthatwego camping inthenextvillageinexcitement,withhereyesglittering. 2.考虑到她的热情，我们都同意了。Consideringherenthusiasm,weallagreed.3.当我们的车门打开时，妈妈立刻冲了出去，催促我们搭起帐篷。Whenthedoorofourcaropened,Momstormedoutinstantlyandurgedustoputupthe tent.4.大卫和我被要求捡些树枝生火。DavidandIwereaskedtopickupsomebranchestobuildafire.5.当我们回来时，爸爸妈妈已经舒舒服服地躺在帐篷前的草地上，和一个我们这个年纪的当地男孩愉快地交谈着，他好奇地看着帐篷。Andwhenwecameback,DadandMomhadalreadylaindownthegrasscomfortablyinfrontofthetent,talkingmerrilywithalocalboyatourage,whokeptglancingatthistentcuriously.6.很快我们就知道那个衣衫褴褛的男孩连家都没有。Soonwelearntthattheboyinragsevendidn’thaveahometolivein.7.当然，妈妈又“忘了”带帐篷了。Ofcourse,Mom“forgot”totakethistentwithusagain.第二段：8.在那次旅行中，我们和爷爷奶奶住在一起。Andwealsohada nice timelivingwithmygrandparentsduringthat trip.9.但给我印象最深的是那个帐篷，妈妈故意忘记了。Butwhatimpressedmemostwasthattent,whichwasforgottendeliberatelybyMom.10.虽然她很喜欢去野营，但出于同情，她把这顶帐篷送给了那个可怜的男孩。Thoughshedidlovegoingcamping,shepresentedthatpoorboywiththistentoutofsympathy.11.是妈妈让我的童年多姿多彩。也是她向我展示了给予的真正意义。ItwasMomthatmademychildhoodcolorful.Anditwasalsoshethatshowedmethetruemeaningofgiving.2.3范文赏析Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtentwehadbroughtwithus. Thinkingofthistent,Momsuggestedthatwego camping inthenextvillageinexcitement,withhereyesglittering.Consideringherenthusiasm,weallagreed.Whenthedoorofourcaropened,Momstormedoutinstantlyandurgedustoputupthe tent.DavidandIwereaskedtopickupsomebranchestobuildafire.Andwhenwecameback,DadandMomhadalreadylaindownthegrasscomfortablyinfrontofthetent,talkingmerrilywithalocalboyatourage,who keptglancingatthistentcuriously.Soonwelearntthattheboyinragsevendidn’thaveahometolivein.Ofcourse,Mom“forgot”totakethistentwithusagain.Wedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofgreatsightsalongtheway.Andwealsohada nice timelivingwithmygrandparentsduringthat trip.Butwhatimpressedmemostwasthattent,whichwasforgottendeliberatelybyMom.Thoughshedidlovegoingcamping,shepresentedthatpoorboywiththistentoutofsympathy.ItwasMomthatmademychildhoodcolorful.Anditwasalsoshethatshowedmethetruemeaningofgiving.一、素材积累3.1高级句型素材积累（名词性从句/强调句）名词性从句1>他突然想到里面那家人有危险。Itoccurredtohimthatthefamilyinsidewasindanger.2>他们应该再次尝试的想法值得考虑。Thethoughtthattheyshouldtryitagainisworthconsidering.3>最令他印象深刻的是，他在竞赛中得了一等奖。Whatimpressedhimmostwasthathewonthefirstprizeinthecompetition.4>Harry完全不知道他们在说什么。Harrydoesn’thavetheslightestideawhattheyaretalkingabout.5>他没有被重点大学录取的原因是他的分数太低了。Thereasonwhyhewasn’tadmittedintoakeyuniversitywasthathisgradesweretoolow.强调句1>是妈妈让我的童年多姿多彩。也是她向我展示了给予的真正意义。ItwasMomthatmademychildhoodcolorful.Anditwasalsoshethatshowedmethetruemeaningofgiving.2>直到我遇到你，我才知道真正的幸福。ItwasnotuntilImetyouthatIknewrealhappiness.3>我们确实希望今后有更多有意义的活动。Wedidhopetherewouldbemoremeaningfulactivitiesinthecomingfuture.3.2主旨升华类素材积累1>有时候一些小小的善行可能足以带来巨大的改变。Sometimes,asmallactofkindnessmaybepowerfulenoughtomakeahugedifference. 2>有时候表达一些小小的关爱也可能融化人们内心的孤单。Sometimes,asmallgestureofcarewillpossiblymeltpeople’sloneliness.3>一个小小的善行，无论对施予者还是接受者，都是一份祝福。Onesimpleactofkindnessisablessingforboththegiverandthereceiveralike.4>当别人遭遇尴尬的情况时，我们应该设身处地地为他们着想。Whenawkwardsituationshappentoothers,weshouldputourselvesintotheirshoes.5>永远不要低估你的行为的力量。即便一个小小的表示，也可能不仅传播了爱，还对别人的生命产生了积极的影响。Neverunderestimatethepowerofyouraction.Withonesmallgesture,youmaynotonlyspreadlove,butalsopositivelyinfluencedothers’lives.四、模拟演练练习（一）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节，使之构成一个完整的故事。Alittlegirlwhoseparentshaddiedlivedwithhergrandmotherandsleptinanupstairsbedroom.Onenighttherewasafireinthehouseandthegrandmotherdiedwhiletryingtorescuethechild.Thefirespreadquickly,andthesituationwasterrible.Neighbourscalledthefiredepartment,thenstoodhelplesslyby,unabletoenterthehousebecauseflamesblockedalltheentrances.Thelittlegirlappearedatanupstairswindow,cryingforhelp,justaswordspreadamongthecrowdthatthefire-fighterswouldbedelayedafewminutesbecausetheywereallatanotherfire.Suddenly,amanappearedwithaladder,putitupagainstthesideofthehouseanddisappearedinside.Whenhereappeared,hehadthelittlegirlinhisarms.Hedeliveredthechildtothewaitingarmsbelow,thendisappearedintothenight.Aninvestigationrevealedthatthechildhadnolivingrelatives,andweekslaterameetingwasheldinthetownhalltodeterminewhowouldtakethechildintotheirhomeandbringherup.Ateachersaidshewouldliketoraisethechild.Shepointedoutthatshecouldensureheragoodeducation.Afarmerofferedheranupbringing(教养)onhisfarm.Hepointedoutthatlivingonafarmwashealthyandsatisfying.Othersspoke,givingtheirreasonswhyitwastothechild'sadvantagetolivewiththem.Finally,thetown'srichestresidentroseandsaid,“Icangivethischildalltheadvantagesthatyouhavementionedhere,plusmoneyandeverythingthatmoneycanbuy.” Throughoutallthis,thechildremainedsilent,hereyesonthefloor.“Doesanyoneelsewanttospeak?”askedthemeetingchairman.Amancameforwardfromthebackofthehall.Hewalkedslowlyandappearedtobeinpain.Paragraph1:Whenhegottothefrontofthehall,hestooddirectlyinfrontofthelittlegirlandheldouthisarms.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Whenaskedherchoice,thegirlgavepeoplethereasonsfirmly.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________练习（二）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节，使之构成一个完整的故事。TheWilsonswerehavingdinner.ThefoodwasleftfromtheirThanksgivingdinnertwodaysbefore:turkeysoupandturkeymeatmixedwithpotatoes.Eleven-year-oldAngelinaasked,“Arewehavingturkeyicecream,too?”Herfatherreplied,“Angelina,haveyouforgottenthatIhadnojobforawholeyear?NowIhaveworkagain.Youshouldbeverythankful.”“I’msorryIsaidthatabouttheturkey!ButunlessIgetanewdress,IwillnotlookgoodfortheChristmasFestival.”Angelinamurmured.TheFestivalwasthewinterholidaycelebrationofagroupshebelongedto:theAvalonGirls’ServiceClub.Theywrotecheerfulcardsforhospitalpatients.Theycookedmealsforthehomeless.ButtheChristmasFestivalwasdifferent.Thegirlsworepartyclothesandmanypeoplecametoseethemperform.Angelinahadonlyaplaingraydressthatshehadworntotheeventlastyear.Andnowitwasalittletooshort.Angelinaappealedtoherparentstobuyoneforher,abeautifulreddressinForbes’Store.Hermothersighed,“Well,wecannotbuyit.Wehavetobecareful.YouneverknowwhenImightlosemyjob.”Allhopewasnotgone.TherewasasignintheForbesstorewindowthatsaid“layaway(分期付款)”. Angelinapulledtenworndollarbillsfromhercoatpocket.Sherantothestoreandbeggedthesalesperson,Mrs.Harding,tohold‘her’dressforher.“Ok.Butyoumustcomebackintwoweekstopaytherest.”Angelinafeltlikejumpingintotheair.ShewassohappythatshetoldMrs.HardingabouttheAvalonServiceClub’sworkanditsChristmasparty.Then,Angelinashookandsufferedinthecoldwindlookingforwork.Finally,Angelinagotajobmakingnewclothingfordolls.Angelinawasexcellentatsewing.Sureenough,thedolls’dressesturnedoutbeautiful.Shegottwentydollars.Still,shewasfarfromhavingenoughmoneyforherdress.Shefelthelplessasthefinalpaymentdatearrived.ShereturnedsadlytoForbes’Store,“Idon’thaveenoughmoneyforthedress.”ThenshesawMrs.Harding'seyeswerered.Shelookedlikeshehadbeencrying.Shesaidthestorewasclosingandshewaslosingherjob.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1:Suddenly,Mrs.HardingsaidshewouldpaytherestofthemoneysoAngelinacouldhaveit.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Outside,AngelinasawamanwholookedlikeSantaClauswasaskingpeopleformoneytohelppoorpeople.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________练习（三）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Mydaysalwaysstartedwithatwo-tofour-milerunonanearbygreenway.Forabouttwoyears,Ihadaveryfaithfulrunningpartner.Thisgiant,orangetabbycatwasprobablythegentlestcatIhadeverencountered.Hewouldseemeclimbingthehillandjoinin,runningalongsidemeforaboutaquartermileuntilhemeowedenoughtogetmetostopandpethim.Afewminuteslater,whenIattemptedtorestartmyrun,hewouldwindaroundmy anklestokeepmelonger.Althoughhewasaratherfatfellow,Ialwaysbroughthimsomecatfood.Onfair-weatherafternoons,Iwouldpickupmyfour-year-oldgranddaughterfrompre-schoolandwewouldvisitthetabbycattogether.Shewouldinsistonbringinghimanafternoontreat.Beforelong,hestartedwindingaroundherlittleanklesaswell.Oneday,whilemygranddaughterwaspouringouttheplasticbaggiefullofcatchowmixedwithleftoverchicken,shebroughtupagoodpoint.Shecriedout,“We'vegottocallthemsomething!”Mygranddaughtersteppedbackand,deepinthought,studiedthecatcarefullyasheenjoyedtheremainsofherHappyMeal.Thensheannounced,“I'vegotit!TomTom!”Alltheregularrunners,walkers,bikersandvisitorstothegreenwaysooncametoknowthebig,friendlyorangetabbyas"TomTom".Mygranddaughterlovedthecat.ShelookedforwardtoourgreenwaywalksandvisitingTomTom,somethingsimplethatthetwoofusdidtogether.Withherbirthdayapproaching,Iwantedtodosomethingextraspecial.Icooperatedwithalocalcollegeartstudentandproducedaself-publishedchildren'sbookformygranddaughteraboutourgreenwayfriend.Myonlyrealintentwastoprintacopyortwoforherbirthday,soIwaspleasantlysurprisedwhenseveralcopiesweresold!Soon,TomTombecamethemostfamouscatintown!注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1:OnaFridayinJanuary,theforecastwascallingforasnowstorm.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:TomTomhasbeenpartofourfamilyforthepastthreeyears.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________范文赏析练习（一） Whenhegottothefrontofthehall,hestooddirectlyinfrontofthelittlegirlandheldouthisarms.Hishandsandarmswereterriblyscarred.Thelittlegirlcriedout,“Thisisthemanwhorescuedme!”Withaleap,shethrewherarmsaroundtheman'sneck.Sheburiedherfaceinhisshoulderandsobbedforafewmoments.Thenshelookedupandsmiled,statinghappilyshewouldlivewithhim.Whenaskedherchoice,thegirlgavepeoplethereasonsfirmly.Shesaidinalowbutdeterminedvoice,“Ireallydesiretogetagoodeducationthatwillgivemechancestolivemydreams.Besides,IknowthatmoneymeansalottomesinceIhavenorelativestorelyon.Butit'sthemanwhosavedmylifewhenIwasdesperatelyfacingafirelikethat.Withouthim,Iwouldn'tbehere,waitingforanewchoice.IhopethatIcandowhateverIcantopaybackhiskindness.”练习（二）Suddenly,Mrs.HardingsaidshewouldpaytherestofthemoneysoAngelinacouldhaveit.“Yourclubalwaysdoesgoodwork.IwouldlikeyoutohavethisdressforyourFestival.”Angelinathoughthowmuchshewantedthereddress.Butsherememberedhowsadherfatherhadfeltduringthatlongyearwhenhehadnowork.Shechoseherwordscarefully,“Thatisverygoodofyou,Mrs.Harding.Butyouwillneedallyourmoneyuntilyougetanotherjob.”AngelinaexpressedthanksandclosedherhandaroundtheworndollarbillsMrs.Hardingreturnedtoher.Withthat,shesaidgoodbyeandranoutofthestoreintothecoldstreet.Outside,AngelinasawamanwholookedlikeSantaClauswasaskingpeopleformoneytohelppoorpeople.Angelinastoodstillforamomentonthesnowysidewalk.Then,quitesuddenly,shegavethemandressedasSantaClausseveraldollars.“Mrs.Hardingisnottheonlyonewhowantstohelpotherpeople.”Justassuddenlyshedecidedthatmaybeshewouldbuysomematerialtoaddlengthtoheroldgraywooldress.Andshestartedtoplanhowshewouldsewbrightredribbonsalongtheneckline.Whoknew,maybeshecouldlookgoodattheFestivalafterall.But,inanyevent,shewouldhavefun.Afterall,itwasChristmastime.练习（三）OnaFridayinJanuary,theforecastwascallingforasnowstorm.IwenttothegreenwayandleftextracatfoodincasethatIwasunabletomakeitbackoutforafewdays.Laterthatnight,asIwatchedthealmostdisaster-likeconditions,myheartsankasIthoughtofmygreenwaypartner.Morethanafootandahalfofsnowblanketedthegroundafterthestormpassed,whichwasfarmorethanhadbeenpredicted.TomTomwasfoundthenextdaytrappedunderabridgebetweentwohighpilesofsnowandice.Iwassothankfulhewasalive!Atthispoint,IknewwhatIhadtodo. TomTomhasbeenpartofourfamilyforthepastthreeyears.OfallthecatsIhaveeverhad,Icanhonestlysaythathehastaughtmethemost.Muchlikeafaithfuldog,TomTomlistensformycartopullupinthedriveway.IcansometimesseehimjumpingdownfromhisupstairslookoutwindowandhearhimrunningdownthestepsasI'munlockingthedoor,makingsurehebeatsmetothekitchenbythetimeIenter.AsIsitatmydeskfinishingthispassageofmyfaithfulrunningpartner,Irealizethathechoseme,nottheotherwayaroundandI'msogladhedid.