专题01温暖亲情类一、真题链接（2021·新全国I卷）AMOTHER’SDAYSURPRISEThetwinswerefilledwithexcitementastheythoughtofthesurprisetheywereplanningforMother’sDay.HowpleasedandproudMotherwouldbewhentheybroughtherbreakfastinbed.TheyplannedtomakeFrenchtoastandchickenporridge.Theyhadwatchedtheirmotherinthekitchen.Therewasnothingtoit.JennaandJeffknewexactlywhattodo.Thebigdaycameatlast.Thealarmrangat6a.m.Thepairwentdownthestairsquietlytothekitchen.Theydecidedtoboiltheporridgefirst.TheyputsomericeintoapotofwaterandleftittoboilwhiletheymadetheFrenchtoast.Jeffbroketwoeggsintoaplateandaddedinsomemilk.Jennafoundthebreadandputtwoslicesintotheeggmixture.Next,Jeffturnedonthesecondstoveburnertoheatupthefryingpan.EverythingwasgoingsmoothlyuntilJeffstartedfryingthebread.Thepanwastoohotandthebreadturnedblackwithinseconds.Jennathrewtheburntpieceintothesinkandputintheothersliceofbread.Thistime,sheturneddownthefiresoitcookednicely.ThenJeffnoticedsteamshootingoutofthepotandthelidstartingtoshake.Thenextminute,theporridgeboiledoverandputoutthefire.Jennapanicked.Thankfully,Jeffstayedcalmandturnedoffthegasquickly.Butthestovewasamessnow.JennatoldJefftocleanitupsotheycouldcontinuetocooktherestoftheporridge.ButJeff’shandtouchedthehotburnerandhegaveacryofpain.Jennamadehimputhishandincoldwater.Thenshecaughtthesmellofburning.Ohdear!Thepieceofbreadinthepanhadturnedblackaswell.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右。2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________一、真题解析2.1整体把握：主题语境人与自我--生活与学习--家庭生活语篇话题本篇读后续写为记叙文，文章大意为母亲节当天，双胞胎想要做一顿丰盛的早餐作为母亲节礼物，给母亲惊喜。情节梳理故事要素when：onMother’sDaywhere：Athomewho：Thetwins--JennaandJeffwhat：Thetwinsplannedtomakeadeliciousbreakfastfortheirmother.OnMother’sDay,theygotupearlyandbegantomakebreakfast.However,everythingdidn’tgosmoothlyastheywished.情节走向通过第一段首句“Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.”可预测，续写思路为：爸爸指导--孩子重新尝试--进展顺利--成功--欣喜若狂。通过第二段首句“Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.”可预测，续写思路为：孩子们呈现惊喜给妈妈--妈妈喜极而泣--孩子们献上母亲节的祝福--母亲感动至极一家人幸福相拥。2.2逐句写作：第一段：1.父亲的出现对于两孩子来说就像救世主一样。Father’sappearingwaslikeasaviortothetwochildren.2.了解了事情的经过后，父亲并没有责骂他们，而是鼓励他们再试一次。Knowingwhathadhappened,insteadofscoldinghischildren,thefatherencouragedthemtocookbreakfastagain.3.在父亲的指导下，孩子们收拾了残局，重新开始做早餐。Undertheirfather'sguidance,thekidsstartedtotryagainandeverythingwasgoingsmoothly.
1.当他们煎面包的时候，父亲帮助他们调整了火候，这是成功的关键。Whiletheywerefryingthebread,fatherhelpedthemadjustthefire,whichwasthekeytosuccess.2.一切进展顺利，不一会儿，一顿美味的早餐就成形了。Innotime,adeliciousbreakfaststartedtotakeshape.3.他们欣喜若狂！迫不及待地想让妈妈品尝他们亲手做的早餐。Wildwithjoy,theycouldn’twaittoletmomtastetheirhomemadebreakfast.第二段：1.当看到美味和完美的早餐在她面前，妈妈又惊讶又兴奋。Whentheirmothersawthedeliciousandperfectbreakfastinfrontofher,shewasverysurprised.2.一阵暖流涌上心头。Awarmcurrentwelledupinherheart.3.不仅是这份早餐，而且孩子们对她的爱也使她感动落泪。Itwasnotonlythegift,buttheloveofthechildrenforherthatmovedherverymuch.4.孩子们大声说:“母亲节快乐!”Thechildrensaidloudly,“HappyMother’sDay!”5.妈妈无法掩饰内心的欣喜，紧紧地拥抱着他们，说:“非常感谢你们，杰夫和詹娜。我相信这将是我一生中最棒的早餐。我为你们感到骄傲！”Motherhuggedthemtightly,saying''Thankyousomuch,JeffandJenna.Ibelieveitwillbethebestbreakfastinmylife."6.听到这话，双胞胎骄傲地笑了。Hearingthis,thetwinssmiledproudly.2.3范文赏析Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Father’sappearingwaslikeasaviortothetwochildren.Knowingwhathadhappened,insteadofscoldinghischildren,thefatherencouragedthemtocookbreakfastagain.Undertheirfather'sguidance,thekidsstartedtotryagainandeverythingwasgoingsmoothly.Whiletheywerefryingthebread,fatherhelpedthemadjustthefire,whichwasthekeytosuccess.Innotime,adeliciousbreakfaststartedtotakeshape.Wildwithjoy,theycouldn’twaittoletmomtastetheirhomemadebreakfast.Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.Whentheirmothersawthedeliciousand
perfectbreakfastinfrontofher,shewasverysurprised.Awarmcurrentwelledupinherheart.Itwasnotonlythegift,buttheloveofthechildrenforherthatmovedherverymuch.Thechildrensaidloudly,“HappyMother’sDay!”Motherhuggedthemtightly,saying''Thankyousomuch,JeffandJenna.Ibelieveitwillbethebestbreakfastinmylife."Hearingthis,thetwinssmiledproudly.一、素材积累3.1情绪类素材积累喜悦/高兴高兴的delighted/cheerful/joyful因......而高兴bejoyfulover令某人高兴的是toone’sdelight欣喜若狂bewildwithjoy难以形容的开心beindescribablyjoyful极为感动beoverwhelminglymoved几乎无法掩饰他兴奋的心情canhardlyconcealhisexcitement既兴奋又开心amixtureofexcitementandhappiness惊讶惊讶的surprised/shocked/astonished/amazed令某人惊讶的是toone’ssurprise惊讶地inamazement张大嘴withone’smouthwideopen惊呆了benumbwithshock感动感到温暖feelwarm特别感动bemoved/touchedprofoundly心被融化heartmelt感动落泪bemovedtotears一股暖流涌上心头awarmcurrentwelledupinone’smind3.2动作类素材积累笑开怀大笑smilebroadly朝......微笑flashasmileat...表情变得明亮facelightsup/brightens面露喜色awidesmileappearson/spreadsacrossone’sface喜极而泣shedtearsofjoy脸上绽放笑容facebroadensintoasmile哭眼泪夺眶而出tearswellupXX的泪水流过脸颊tearsofXXXrolldown
拥抱紧紧拥抱hugtightly温柔地抱着某人hugsb.gently/tenderly投入某人的怀抱throwoneselfintoone’sembrace四、模拟演练练习（一）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节，使之构成一个完整的故事。Jimslumpedonthecouch. Mother’sDay wascomingup,andhedidn’thavea present.“HowcanIbuyapresentwithoutanymoney?”hethought.Jimpickedupthe newspaper thatwaslyingonthecouch.Henoticedalarge advertisement onthefrontpage.Thelocaldepartmentstorewassponsoringacontest.“Telluswhyyourmomisspecialandwina shoppingspree (购物狂欢)forher,”saidthead.“Thisisperfect!”thoughtJim.Herantohisroomwiththenewspaper.Takingapencilandablankpieceofpaperfromhisdesk,hestartedtowrite.“Mymomis thebestmother intheworld.Shealwaysmakesalunchformetotaketoschool,andsheneverforgetsmydessert.ShereadsasmanybookstomebeforebedasIwant.Shealwaysrememberstocheckunderthebedformonsters.Andshegivesthebest hugs,butneverinfrontofmyfriends,whowouldlaughatmeforhuggingmymom.”Jimlikedwhathehadwritten.Hecopieditneatlyandgotan envelope andastampfromhisdad.Herantothemailboxwithhis entry (参赛作品).“Momwilllovehavingashoppingspree,”hethought.Jimcheckedthemailboxeveryday forhisprize. Dayspassedby,andthenweeks.SoonitwasthedaybeforeMother’sDay.Jimstillhadn’theardanythingaboutthecontest.“WhatamIgoingtodonow?”hewondered.Hedidn’thaveapresent,andhedidn’thaveashoppingspree.Andhestilldidn’thaveanymoney.Hehadtothinkofsomething.Jimclosedhiseyesandcurledhistoesandthoughtsohardthathisearshurt.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右；2.应使用 5 个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:
Suddenly,hehasanidea.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:ThenextmorningJimhandedhispresenttohismom.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________练习（二）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节，使之构成一个完整的故事。In1945,a12-year-oldboysawabeautifulbrooch（胸针）inashopwindowthatsethisheartracing.Buttheprice—fivedollars—wastoohighforReubenEarle.Fivedollarswouldbuyalmostaweek'sfoodforhisfamily.Reubencouldn’taskhisfatherforthemoney.Everythinghisfathermadethroughfishingwenttohismother,Dora.Slimandbeautiful,shewasthecenterofthehomeandthegluethatheldittogether.Thehouseworkwasnever-ending,andshestruggledtofeedandclothetheirfivechildren,butshewashappyasherfamilyandtheirwell-beingwereallshecaredabout.Nevertheless,heopenedtheshop'sdoorandwentinside.Standingproudlyandstraightinhisflour-sack（面粉袋改做的）shirtandwashed-outtrousers,hetoldtheshopkeeperwhathewanted,adding,“ButIdon'thavethemoneyrightnow.Canyoupleaseholditformeforsometime?”"I'lltry,”theshopkeepersmiled."Peoplearoundheredon'tusuallyhavethatkindofmoneytospendonthings.Itshouldkeepforawhile."Reubenrespectfullytouchedhisworncapandwalkedout.Hewouldraisethemoneyandnottellanybody,forhethoughtMumwouldgetsurprisedwhenshesawthatbrooch.Onhearingthesoundofhammering（捶打）fromasidestreet,Reubensuddenlyhadanideathathecouldraisemoneybysellingtheusednailbags.PeoplebuilttheirownhomesinBayRoberts,usingnailsboughtinbagsfromalocalfactory.Sometimestheusedbagswerethrownawayattheconstructionsite,andReubenknewhecouldsellthembacktothefactoryforfivecentsapiece.That
dayhesoldtwonailbagsandhidthemoneyinarustysodatin.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1:Everydayafterschool,Reubenstartedhisplan.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Finally,thetimecame!________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________练习（三）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。WhenMicahwasachild,Iusedtodomanythingswithher.Later,Igotpromotedandwasalwaysonconstantbusinessholidays.3years'devotiontoworkresultedinmyabsencefromherlifeandnowshewasateenagegirl.Recently,Ieventuallymanagedtohaveabundanttimetoaccompanyher.Forthelastfewweeks,Micahhadwatchedmockingbirdsmakeanestinatreeandlayeggsthere.Sometimes,Icametoaccompanyherwithoutbeinginvited.ButwheneverImadeanattempttobreaktheice,“I'mgood”wasaboutallshesaidtome.Codefor“Leavemealone”.“Whydoesn'tshewanttodothingswithme?”IthoughtasIsetthetablefordinneroneevening,hopingforanemotionbridgetoreappearbetweenus.Didshefeelhurtwithmylongabsenceorfeelignored?Lostinthought,Iwasseekingtomendtherelationship.“Mom!”Micahyelledsuddenly.“Comequick!”Surprised,Irushedout,onlytofindalittlebabybirdontheground,weakandhelpless.Myeyeswenttothebranchesabove.
“Thewindmusthaveblownhimoutofthenest,”Isaid.“No,itwasMr.Whiskers-ourcat.Youlethimgooutside!”Micahsaid,abitannoyed.Lookingatthenestwithouttheparents,“I'msorry,”Isaidandputthebirdinmypalmcautiouslyandgently.Shedidn'trespond,butdidnotrefusedmyoffertohelp,either.Decidingtotakecareofthelittlebabytillitbecameindependent,Iplaceditinitsnest.“Whatshouldwedonext?”Iasked.Noresponseagain.Instead,MicahwentinsideandhoppedonheriPad.“Birdvideos?”Iasked.“Yes,I'mfindingoutwhattofeedit,”shesaidseriously.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1:Shewasmorefocusedthanever.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Beforelong,thebirdfoodwasdeliveredandwefedthebird"Chance"atonce.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________范文赏析练习（一）Paragraph1:Suddenly,hehadanidea.Jimfoundhisoriginalcontestentry.Hecopieditwithabrightredcrayononhisbiggestpieceofyellowconstructionpaper.Thenhedecoratedthepaperwithpurpleglitterandgluedapictureofhismomtothebottomwithcare.HewouldliketousethisasaMother'sDaygiftforhisdearmotherifhecouldn'twinashoppingspreeforher.Paragraph2:
ThenextmorningJimhandedhispresenttohismom."HappyMother'sDay!"heyelled.MomreadJim'sposter"Mymomisthebestmotherintheworld...".Bythetimeshefinished,shewassmilingandcryingatthesametime."Thankyou,"shesaid,wipinghereyes."ThisisthebestpresentIhaveeverhad."Jimsmiled."Ihavesomethingelseforyou,too,"hesaid.Hecheckedtomakesurenoonewaslooking,andthenhegavehismomabighug.练习（二）Everydayafterschool,Reubenstartedhisplan.Coldandhungry,Reubenwanderedaround,searchingfornailbagscarefullyfromonestreettoanother.Tosavemoremoney,thedeterminedboyevendecidedtodeliverpapersontheearlymorning.Everycoinhewonwenttoasodatin,histreasured“bank”,andthenallthetirednessdisappearedmagically.Eachtimehepassedbythebroochintheshopwindowwouldremindhimwhathedidwasworthwhile.Daybyday,hissodatinbecameheavierandheavier.Sixweekspassedbeforeheevenknewit.ThenapproachedtheChristmasEve.Finally,thetimecame!Reubenstoleintohisroomandcautiouslytookoutthesodatin,pouredallthecoinsoutandbegantocount.Fivedollarsandtwentycents!Hecounteditasecondtime,andnomistake.Hishardworkeventuallypaidoff!Holdingthesodatinfirmly,Reubenrushedfortheshopwithoutasecond’sdelay.Wearingthebeautifulbroochandknowingthestorybehindit,Dorawastoooverjoyedtoutteraword.Shejustthrewherarmstightlyaroundherbelovedson.“MerryChristmas,mom”,thesonannouncedproudly.“Youtoo.”theproudmotherechoed.Well,nodreamisoutofreachforawillingheart.练习（三）Shewasmorefocusedthanever.Soon,Micahsmiledbroadly,“I’vegotit.”“Whatdoweneed?”Iaskedagain.Shesaidthebabybirdneededsomespecialbirdfood.Hearingthis,Iimmediatelyphonedtoplaceanorder.Whilewaitingfordelivery,Micahaddedthatweneededtonamethebirdtobuildabond.“HowaboutChance?Ithinkithasagoodchanceofmakingitwithyourhelp,”Iproposed.Shedidn’tsayawordbutnoddedwithabrightsmile.Beforelong,thebirdfoodwasdeliveredandwefedthebird“Chance”atonce.Toourrelief,thespecialfoodwastoitstaste.Thefollowingweeks,wewenttofeedandcheckonChanceeveryday.Oneday,MicahsharedwithmehappilyherfindingthatChancebecameindependent.Lookingathershiningface,Iwasalmostmovedtotears.IneverimaginedthatthebirdChancebecametherealchancetorebuildtheemotionbridgebetweenus.Fromthen,Idecidedtoaccompanyhermore,justaswhatwehaddonetoChance.Companyisthebestlove.
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