专题02劳动感悟类一、真题链接（2021年浙江卷6月）Mydad,George,onlyhadaneighthgradeeducation.Aquietman,hedidn'tunderstandmyworldofschoolactivities.Fromage14,heworked.Andhisdad,Albert,tookthemoneymydadearnedandusedittopayfamilyexpenses.Ididn'treallyunderstandhisworldeither:Hewasalivestocktrucker,andIthoughtthatIwouldsurpass（超过）anythinghehadaccomplishedbythetimeIwalkedacrossthestageathighschoolgraduation.Summersinthemid-70swerespentathomeshootingbaskets,hittingabaseball,orthrowingafootball.,preparingformyfutureasaquarterbackonafootballteam.Inpoorweather,Ireadaboutsportsorpracticedmytrombone（长号）.ThesummerbeforemyeighthgradeIwasoneofagroupofboysthataneighboringfarmerhiredtoworkinhisfield.Heexplainedourbasictask,thetractorfiredupandwewereoff,ridingdownthefieldlookingforweedstospraywithchemicals.Afterashortway,thefarmerstoppedandpointedataweedwhichwemissed.Thenwebeganagain.Thishappenedoverandover,butwesoonlearnedtoidentifydifferentgrasseslikecockleburs,lamb's-quarters,foxtails,andthekingofweeds,theprettypurplethistle.Itwastiringwork,butIlookedforwardtothepay,eventhoughIwasn'tsurehowmuchitwouldamountto.Athome,mydadsaid,"Ajob'sabigsteptogrowingup.I'mgladyouwillbecontributingtothehousehold."Mydad'swordsmademerealizethatmyearningsmightnotbeminetodowithasIwished.Mylaborslastedabouttwoweeks,andthefarmersaidtheremightbemorework,butIwasn'tinterested.IdecideditwasnotfairthatIhadtocontributemymoney.Paragraph1：WhenIbroughtmypaycheckhome--itwas$119--mydadwantedtotalktome.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2：IwassurprisedthatmydadallowedmetousethemoneyasIwished.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________一、真题解析2.1整体把握主题语境人与自我--生活与学习--个人、家庭、社区及学校生活语篇话题本篇读后续写为记叙文，文章大意为“我”的父亲从小就工作赚钱贴补家用，所以当“我”参加工作赚了钱后，“我”爸爸要跟我谈一谈。情节梳理故事要素when：thesummerbeforemyeighthgradewhere：athomewho：mydadandIwhat：Iwashiredtoworkandbroughtmypaycheckhome,mydadwantedmetopayfamilyexpenses.情节走向通过第一段首句“WhenIbroughtmypaycheckhome--itwas$119--mydadwantedtotalktome.”可预测，续写思路为：我不情愿--上交工资--爸爸拒绝--让我自己处理工资。通过第二段首句“IwassurprisedthatmydadallowedmetousethemoneyasIwished.”可预测，续写思路为：拥抱爸爸--发现爸爸的不容易--主动贡献2.2逐句写作第一段：1.知道他会谈论我的收入，我拉长了脸，打算从他身边走过，溜回我的卧室。Knowingthathewouldtalkaboutmyearnings,Ipulledalongfaceandintendedtosimplywalkpasthimandslipbacktomybedroom.2.“过来，孩子。”爸爸带着一种平易近人的表情喊道。“Comehere,son.” Dad exclaimed,wearinganaccessibleexpression.3.我的心沉了下去。我一直期待的是——一套梦幻般的新足球装备最终会变成家庭开支。Myheartsank.WhatIhadbeenlookingforwardto—adreamynewfootballoutfitwouldfinallygivewayto family expenses.4.我很不情愿地向前挪了挪，提交了工资。
Reluctantly,Iinchedforwardandsubmittedthepaycheck.1.然而，爸爸把薪水塞回到我手里，温柔地说：“你长大了。你完全有权决定如何处理这笔钱。”However, Dadslidthepaycheckbackintomyhand,sayinginatendervoice,“You'vegrownup.Youhaveeveryrighttodecidewhattodowiththemoney.”第二段：2.我先前的绝望立即被巨额薪水抹去。Mypreviousdesperationwasimmediatelyerasedbygreatbills.3.我走近他，紧紧地拥抱了他。就在那一刻，我注意到他灰白的头发和僵硬的脖子。Isteppedcloserandhuggedhimtightly.JustatthatmomentInoticedhisgreyhairandstiffneck.4.他平时脖子疼的叫喊声音的回忆涌上心头。Memoriesofhisusualcryofpainontheneckcamecrowdingin.5.我意识到他作为一名卡车司机的辛苦工作为这个家庭做出了多么大的贡献。I realized howmuchhehadcontributedtothefamilythroughhis tiring work ofbeingatrucker.6.泪水模糊了我的视线，“爸爸，谢谢你这些年来的辛勤工作。我不应该这么自私，不愿意贡献我的薪水。”Tearsbegantoblurmyvision,“Dad,thanksforyourhardworktheseyears.Ishouldn’thavebeensoselfishandnotwillingtocontributemymoney.”7.那天，我开始了解爸爸的世界，他似乎也在进入我的世界的路上。Onthatday,IbegantounderstandDad’sworldanditseemedthathewasalsoonthewayintomyworld.2.3范文赏析WhenIbroughtmypaycheckhome--itwas$119--mydadwantedtotalktome. Knowingthathewouldtalkaboutmyearnings,Ipulledalongfaceandintendedtosimplywalkpasthimandslipbacktomybedroom.“Comehere,son.” Dad exclaimed,wearinganaccessibleexpression.Myheartsank.WhatIhadbeenlookingforwardto—adreamynewfootballoutfitwouldfinallygivewayto family expenses.Reluctantly,Iinchedforwardandsubmittedthepaycheck.However, Dadslidthepaycheckbackintomyhand,sayinginatendervoice,“You'vegrownup.Youhaveeveryrighttodecidewhattodowiththemoney.”IwassurprisedthatmydadallowedmetousethemoneyasIwished. Mypreviousdesperationwasimmediatelyerasedbygreatbills.Isteppedcloserandhuggedhimtightly.JustatthatmomentInoticedhisgreyhairandstiffneck.Memoriesofhisusualcryofpainontheneckcamecrowdingin.I realized howmuchhehad
contributedtothefamilythroughhis tiring work ofbeingatrucker.Tearsbegantoblurmyvision,“Dad,thanksforyourhardworktheseyears.Ishouldn’thavebeensoselfishandnotwillingtocontributemymoney.”Onthatday,IbegantounderstandDad’sworldanditseemedthathewasalsoonthewayintomyworld.一、素材积累3.1情绪类素材积累消极情绪不高兴unhappy/displeased/upset心沉下去heartsink绝望desperate/fallintodespair不情愿的unwilling/reluctant3.2动作类素材积累向前挪动inchforward引起某人的不快arouseone’sdispleasure皱眉afrownstandonone’sface眉头紧锁eyebrowsknottogether擦眼泪wipeawaythetears忍不住哭can’tholdbacktears脸气地通红flushwithanger气地说不出话bespeechlesswithanger四、模拟演练练习（一）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节，使之构成一个完整的故事。Amancamehomefromworklate,tiredandirritated(不耐烦的),tofindhis5-year-oldsonwaitingforhimatthedoor."Daddy,mayIaskyouaquestion?""Yeahsure,whatisit?"repliedtheman."Daddy,howmuchdoyoumakeanhour?""That'snoneofyourbusiness.Whydoyouasksuchathing?"themansaidangrily."Ijustwanttoknow.Pleasetellme.Howmuchdoyoumakeanhour?"pleadedthelittleboy."Ifyoumustknow,Imake$20anhour.""Oh,"thelittleboyreplied,withhisheaddown.Lookingup,hesaid,"Daddy,mayIpleaseborrow$10?"Thefatherwasangry,"Iftheonlyreasonyouaskedisthatyoucanborrowsomemoneytobuyasillytoyorsomeothernonsense,thenyoumarchyourselfstraighttoyourroomandgotobed.Thinkaboutwhyyouarebeingsoselfish(自私的).Iworkhardeverydayforsuchchildishbehavior."Thelittleboyquietlywenttohisroomandshutthedoor.Themansatdownandstartedtogetevenangrieraboutthelittleboy'squestions."Howdareheask
suchquestionsonlytogetsomemoney?"hethoughttohimself.Afteraboutanhourorso,themancalmeddown,andstartedtothink:Maybetherewassomethinghereallyneededtobuywiththat$10andhereallydidn'taskformoneyveryoften.Themanwenttothedoorofthelittleboy'sroomandopenedthedoor."Areyouasleep,son?"heasked."No,daddy,I'mawake,"repliedtheboy."I'vebeenthinking,maybeIwastoohardonyouearlier,"saidtheman."IthasbeenalongdayandItookoutmyangeronyou.Here'sthe$10youaskedfor."Thelittleboysatstraightup,smiling."Oh.Thankyou,daddy!"heyelled.Then,reachingunderhispillowhepulledoutsomecrumpled(皱巴巴的)bills.Paragraph1:Theman,seeingthattheboyalreadyhadmoneystartedtogetangryagain.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Notknowingwhathissonmeant,thefatherjuststoodthere,waitingforhisboy'sexplanation.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________练习（二）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节，使之构成一个完整的故事。Igrewuppoor-livingintheprojectswithsixbrothers,threesisters,myfather,andawonderfulmother.Wehadlittlemoneyandfewgoods,butplentyofloveandattention.Iwashappyandenergetic.Iunderstoodthatnomatterhowpoorapersonwas,theycouldstillaffordadream.Mydreamwasathletics.BythetimeIwassixteen,Icouldthrowaninety-mile-per-hourfastballandhitanythingthatmovedonthebaseballfield.Iwasalsolucky:Myhigh-schoolcoachwasJohn,whonotonlybelievedinme,buttaughtmehowtobelieveinmyself.Hetaughtmethedifferencebetweenhavingadreamandhowto
realizeadream.OneparticularincidentwithCoachJohnchangedmylifeforever.Itwasthesummerbetweenmyjuniorandsenioryears,andafriendrecommendedmeforasummerjob.Thismeantachanceformoneyinmypocket-moneyforanewbikeandnewclothes,andthestartofsavingsforahouseformymother.Theprospectofasummerjobwasattractive,andIwantedtojumpattheopportunity.ThenIrealizedIwouldhavetogiveupsummerbaseballtohandletheworkschedule,andthatmeantIwouldhavetotellCoachJohnIwouldn’tbeplaying.Iwasafraidofthis,thinkingoftheadvicemymothertoldus:“Ifyoumakeyourbed,youhavetolieinit.”WhenItoldCoachJohn,hewasasmadasIexpectedhimtobe.“Youhaveyourwholelifetowork,”hesaid.Yourplayingdaysarelimited.Youcan’taffordtowastethem.”Istoodbeforehimwithmyheadhanging,tryingtothinkofthewordsthatwouldexplaintohimwhymydreamofbuyingmymomahouseandhavingmoneyinmypocketwasworthfacinghisdisappointmentinme.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1:“Howmuchareyougoingtomakeatthisjob?”hedemanded.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:ThenIdevotedmyselftosportsthatsummer.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________练习（三）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Inourkitchen,therewasawoodentableandthreechairs—oneforDad,oneforMom,andoneforme.Inthecellar(地窖),theverylastjarofapplejamlayquietlyontheshelf,waitingtobeturnedintoanapplepiewhenDadcameback.Momsatatoneendofthetable.IsatinthemiddlebetweenherandDad.ItriednottolookatDad’semptyplace.Dadhadgonetothecitytolookforworkforalongtime.
Everynight,Ilayawakeinbedandwaitedforthetraintostop.Waitedtohearthecreaky(嘎吱作响的)gateDad’sgoingtofixwhenhecamehome.Waitedtohearthesoundofhisworkbootsdroppingonthestepbythekitchendoor,andhisvoicecalling,“I’mhome!”Everynight,asIlaythere,IstaredatthewindowandthecurtainsMommadefromemptyfloursacks(麻布袋).Everynight,Momcametokissmegood-night—afterthetrain’sgoneby.Shehadbeenlistening,too.“Gotosleep.Yourdadwillbehomesoon.MaybeforThanksgiving.”Timedraggingby,itfinallycamethedaybeforeThanksgiving.Iwenttosleepwiththesoundoftrainwheelsinmyhead,whispering,“Maybetomorrow,maybetomorrow.”Earlythenextmorning,thesmellofcoffeewokeme.Iranintothekitchen.Therehewas!Dadliftedmeontohisshouldersandpretendedtostaggerfrommyweight.“How’smyboy?You’vegottensobigthatIcanbarelyliftyouupanymore.”Heputmedown,andIstaredatthetwosacksonthetable.OnesaidFLOUR—Iknewthatword.Itriedreadingtheother:S-U-G-A-R.Dadwhistledadmiringlyandwinkedatme.MomandIhadbeenpracticingmylettersmostdays.IcouldseethatMomwaspleasedwithme.“I’mgoingtobakeapieforyourdad’shomecomingdinner.Jimmy,bringmethatjarofapplejamfromtheshelfinthecellar.”Momsmiledatme.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1:Hearingthis,Itookthestepstwoatatimetothecellar.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:“Nevermind,boy,accidentshappen,”Dadsaidandwipedmytears.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
范文赏析练习（一）Theman,seeingthattheboyalreadyhadmoneystartedtogetangryagain."Howcanyoubesoselfish? Whydoyouwantmoremoneysinceyoualreadyhavethesebills?"thefathercouldhardlyholdhisangerbackandinquiredwithtwoeyebrowsknittedintoone.Withheld-backtearsinhiseyes,thelittleboyslowlyandcarefullycountedouthismoney,andthenlookedupathisfather,replying,"BecauseIdidn'thaveenoughbefore,butnowIdo."withbigblueeyesshiningwithtears.Notknowingwhathissonmeant,thefatherjuststoodthere,waitingforhisboy'sexplanation.Wipingawayhistearsandaninnocentsmileappearingonhisface,theboyrequestedinarelievedvoice,"Daddy,Ihave$20now.CanIbuyanhourfromyou? Pleasecomehomeearlytomorrow.Iwanttohavedinnerwithyou."Hearingtheboy'ssmallbutsincererequest,thefathercouldn'tholdbackhistears.Realizinghewastoobusywithhisbusinesstosparesometimewithhisbelovedones,hegatheredhissonintohisarmsandapologizedagainandagain,"Sorry,andIpromiseI'llbebackearlytomorrow."练习（二）“Howmuchareyougoingtomakeatthisjob,son?”Hedemanded.“3.5dollarsanhour.”Ireplied.“Well,”heasked,“Is$3.5anhourthepriceofadream?”Thatquestion,theplainnessofit,laidbareformethedifferencebetweenwantingsomethingrightnowandhavingagoal. ThenIdevotedmyselftosportsthatsummer.WithintheyearIwasdraftedbythePittsburghPiratestoplayrookie-leagueball,andoffereda$20,000contract.IalreadyhadafootballscholarshiptotheUniversityofArizona,whichledmetoaneducation,twoconsensusselectionsasAll-AmericanlinebackerandbeingchosenseventhoverallinthefirstroundoftheNFLdraft.IsignedwiththeDenverBroncosin1984for$1.7million,andboughtmymotherthehouseofmydreams.练习（三）Hearingthis,Itookthestepstwoatatimetothecellar.ThenextsecondIwasinfrontoftheshelf.Istoodontiptoeandtookdownthejarcarefully.IcouldhearDadandMomlaughingupstairsandMom’shandsslappingthedough.Wantingtojointhem,Ihurriedupthesteps,andmyfootcaughtonthemiddleone.Iputoutmyhandtosteadymyself,butItumbleddown.Thejarslippedthroughmyfingersandsmashedonthefloor.Thejamwe’dbeensavingandsavingfleweverywhere.Wrong-footed,IburstintotearsandheardDad’sfootstepscloserandcloser.
“Nevermind,boy,accidentshappen,”Dadsaidandwipedmytears.ThesewordsseemedtohavemagicandgraduallyIsettleddown.Throughtheshirt,IcouldsmellthedustofthetrainandthecityaswellasthatofDad’s.HowIwishedIhadn’thurried.“NexttimeIwillbemorecareful,”Ithoughttomyself.Havingswiftlydealtwiththemess,DadliftedmeontohisshoulderandwentbacktoMom.“Nowoutofthekitchen,youtwo,”Momsaid,“I'mgoingtobakemymama’ssugarpie,withoutapplejam!”IfollowedDadoutandhelpedhimfixthatoldcreakinggateuntilMacalledusinforThanksgivingdinner.
微信/支付宝扫码支付