时事热点冲刺2022年高考英语作文半开放作文美好品德类解析版(2020·新高考Ⅰ卷)话题:乐于助人 记叙文 词数:150 难度:★★★★TheMeredithfamilylivedinasmallcommunity.Astheeconomywasindecline,somepeopleinthetownhadlosttheirjobs.Manyoftheirfamilieswerestrugglingtomakeendsmeet.Peopleweretryingtohelpeachothermeetthechallenges.MrsMeredithwasamostkindandthoughtfulwoman.Shespentagreatdealoftimevisitingthepoor.Sheknewtheyhadproblems,andtheyneededallkindsofhelp.Whenshehadtime,shewouldbringfoodandmedicinetothem.Onemorningshetoldherchildrenaboutafamilyshehadvisitedthedaybefore.Therewasamansickinbed,hiswife,whotookcareofhimandcouldnotgoouttowork,andtheirlittleboy.Thelittleboy—hisnamewasBernard—hadinterestedherverymuch.“Iwishyoucouldseehim,”shesaidtoherownchildren,John,Harry,andClara.“Heissuchahelptohismother.Hewantsverymuchtoearnsomemoney,butIdon’tseewhathecando.”Aftertheirmotherlefttheroom,thechildrensatthinkingaboutBernard.“Iwishwecouldhelphimtoearnmoney.”saidClara.“Hisfamilyissufferingsomuch.”“SodoI,”saidHarry.“Wereallyshoulddosomethingtoassistthem.”Forsomemoments,Johnsaidnothing,but,suddenly,hesprangtohisfeetandcried,“Ihaveagreatidea!Ihaveasolutionthatwecanallhelpaccomplish(完成).”英语第10页(共10页)
Theotherchildrenalsojumpedupallattention.WhenJohnhadanidea,itwassuretobeagoodone.“Itellyouwhatwecando,”saidJohn.“YouknowthatbigboxofcornUncleJohnsentus?Well,wecanmakepopcorn(爆米花),andputitintopaperbags,andBernardcantakeitaroundtothehousesandsellit.”注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 WhenMrsMeredithheardofJohn’sidea,shethoughtitwasagoodone,too. Witheverythingready,Bernardstartedoutonhisnewbusiness. 【参考范文】WhenMrsMeredithheardofJohn’sidea,shethoughtitwasagoodone,too.英语第10页(共10页)
Thenshesaid,“YoumaysendhimeverySaturdaymorning,ifyouwillpopthecornforhimyourselves.John,willyouagreetotakechargeofthework?”“Indeed,Iwill,”repliedJohn,andhekepthisword.Verysoonthechildrenwerebusypoppingthecorn,whiletheirmotherwentouttobuythepaperbags.Whenshecameback,shebroughtBernardwithher.Thecornwasallpopped,thepaperbagsfilled,andarrangedinthebasketwhenBernardarrived.Witheverythingready,Bernardstartedoutonhisnewbusiness.Andmuchsoonerthancouldbeexpected,hereturnedwithanemptybasket.Neverhadheearnedsomuchmoneybeforeinhislife.Whenhefoundthatitwasalltobehis,hewassodelightedthathecouldhardlyspeak,buthisbrightsmilingfacespokeforhim.Peoplebegantowatchforthe“littlepop-cornboy”,andeveryweekhehadatleastfiftycentstotakehome,andoftenmore.AllthiswasbecauseofJohn’sbrightidea,andthewayhecarrieditout.【范文赏析】本文段落清晰,观点明确。充分运用了bebusydoing等高级短语以及so...that...从句、倒装句、比较级等重点句式,体现了扎实的英语功底。(2020•浙江高考•读后续写) Onefall,mywifeElliandIhadasinglegoal:tophotographpolarbears.Wewerestayingataresearchcampoutside“thepolarbearcapitaloftheworld”—thetownofChurchillinManitoba,Canada. Takingpicturesofpolarbearsisamazingbutalsodangerous.Polarbears—likeallwildanimals—shouldbephotographedfromasafedistance.WhenI’mfaceto英语第10页(共10页)
facewithapolarbear,Ilikeittobethroughacamerawithatelephotolens.Butsometimes,thatiseasiersaidthandone.Thiswasoneofthosetimes.AsElliandIcookeddinner,ayoungmalepolarbearwhowasplayinginanearbylakesniffed,andsmelledourgarlicbread.Thehungrybearfollowedhisnosetoourcamp,whichwassurroundedbyahighwirefence.Hepulledandbitthewire.Hestoodonhisbacklegsandpushedatthewoodenfenceposts.Terrified,ElliandItriedallthebeardefenseactionsweknew.Weyelledatthebear,hitpotshard,andfiredblankshotgunshellsintotheair.Sometimesloudnoiseslikethesewillscarebearsoff.Notthispolarbearthough—hejustkepttryingtoteardownthefencewithhismassivepaws(爪子). Iradioedthecampmanagerforhelp.Hetoldmeahelicopterwasonitsway,butitwouldbe30minutesbeforeitarrived.Makingthebestofthiscloseencounter(相遇),Itooksomepicturesofthebear.ElliandIfearedthefencewouldn’tlastthrough30moreminutesofthebear’spunishment.ThecampmanagersuggestedIusepepperspray.Thesprayburnsthebears’eyes,butdoesn’thurtthem.SoIapproachedouruninvitedguestslowlyand,throughthefence,sprayedhimintheface.Withanangryroar(吼叫),thebearrantothelaketowashhiseyes.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;英语第10页(共10页)
3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Para.1:Afewminuteslater,thebearheadedbacktoourcamp. Para.2:Atthatverymoment,thehelicopterarrived. 【参考范文】Para.1:Afewminuteslater,thebearheadedbacktoourcamp.Angry,hepulledthewirefencewithallhisstrength.Althoughfrightened,ElliandItooksomepicturesofthemadbear.Justthen,herushedinandapproachedus.Weranasquicklyaswecould.However,thebearcaughtupwithusinseconds.Hebegantoattackusfiercely.Wetookupsomestickstofightagainsthim.Wewerenothismatch.Ourcameradroppedandourliveswereindanger. Para.2:Atthatverymoment,thehelicopterarrived.SeeingElliandmenearlybeatenbythebear,therescuerstoldmetosprayhiminhiseyesusingpeppersprayinaloudvoice.Iwastooterrifiedtoforgettodosojustnow.Ididastoldwithoutdelay.英语第10页(共10页)
Lettingoutloudnoises,thebearranaway.Scaredthatthebearwouldreturn,ElliandIclimbedintothehelicopter.Thoughstilltremblingwithfear,wefeltrelievedandsafe. (2018·浙江卷·书面表达·二)Itwassummer,andmydadwantedtotreatmetoavacationlikeneverbefore.HedecidedtotakemeonatriptotheWildWest.WetookaplanetoAlbuquerque,abigcityinthestateofNewMexico.WereachedAlbuquerqueinthelateafternoon.UnclePaul,mydad'sfriend,pickedusupfromtheairportanddroveusuptohisfarminPecos. HiswifeTinacookedusadeliciousdinnerandwegottoknowhissonsRyanandKyle.MydadandIspentthenightintheguestroomofthefarmhouselisteningtothefrogsandwaterrollingdowntherivernearby.Veryearlyinthemorning,UnclePaulwokeusuptohavebreakfast.“Thedaystartsatdawnonmyfarm,”hesaid.Afterbreakfast,IwenttohelpAuntTinafeedthechickens,whilemydadwentwithUnclePaultotakethesheepouttograze(吃草).IwasimpressedtoseemydadandUnclePaulridinghorses.Theylookedreallycool. Intheafternoon,IaskedUnclePaulifIcouldtakeahorseride,andhesaidyes,aslongasmydadwentwithme.Iwasn'tgoingtotakeahorseridebymyselfanyway.So,mydadandIputonournewcowboyhats,gotonourhorses,andheadedslowlytowardsthemountains.“Don'tbelateforsupper,”UnclePaulcried,“andkeeptothe英语第10页(共10页)
tracksothatyoudon'tgetlost!”“OK!”mydadcriedback.AfterawhileUnclePaulandhisfarmhousewereoutofsight.Itwassopeacefulandquietandthecolorsofthebrownrocks,thedeepgreenpinetrees,andthelateafternoonsunmixedtocreateamagicscene.Itlookedlikeabeautifulwoven(编织的)blanketspreadoutuponthegroundjustforus. 注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语:3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse. Paragraph2Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark. 【参考范文】Paragraph1英语第10页(共10页)
Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.Instinctively,Iyelledoutloud,pullingbackthereinshardinordertostopthehorsefromhurtingthelittlecreature.Badlystartledbythesuddenincident,thehorsespedoffthetrackintoanotherdirection.Dadfollowedcloselybehind,callingouttotellmehowtosoothetheterrifiedhorseandIdidastold.Finally,thehorsecalmeddown,butweseemedtogetlost,unabletogobacktothemountainroad. Paragraph2Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark.Wanderingaround,wewerestillstuckinthedilemma.Muchtoourdelight,thesoundofwaterinthedistancecaughtourattentionanddroveustotheriverbank.Dadproposedthatweshouldwalkalongtheriverwhichmayleadustothefarmhouseandnothingseemedbetterthanthat.TimeappearedtobemerrierandshorterwhenIstayedtogetherwithDadandbeforelong,thefarmhousecameintosight.Whatathrillingbutmemorableexperienceitwas! (2018·11月浙江卷·书面表达·二)It’sareallygoodideatovisitcollegesbeforeyouapplybecausetheirwebsitescanallstarttolookandsoundthesame.Nothingwillgiveyouthesenseofwhatitwillactuallybeliketoliveonacollegecampus(校园)likevisitingandseeingforyourselfthedorms,classroomsandathleticequipmentand,ofcourse,thestudents.Itseemsalittlecrazyoncesenioryearhitstofindthetimetovisitcollegecampuses,anditcanalsobepriceyiftheschoolsyouareapplyingtohappentobemorethanacarrideaway.Butkeepinmindthatyouaremakingadecisionaboutthenextfouryears英语第10页(共10页)
ofyourlife,anddoalltheresearchyoucantomakesureyouaremakingtherightone.There’snoexcusenottovisittheschoolsinyourlocalarea.Infact,alotofcollegeapplicationsevenaskifyouhavevisitedcampus,andobviously,ifyouliveacrossthecountrythatwon’tbeasmuchofapossibility,butifyoulivenearby,gocheckitout!Ifcampusvisitsaren’tgoingtohappenbeforeyouapply,attheveryleastyoushouldfindsometimebetweenapplyingandgettingyouracceptanceletterstovisittheschoolsyou’dliketoattend.Itcansaveyoualotofheartacheifyouruleoutnowthethingsthatyoudon’tlikeaboutcertaincampuses,thingsthatyouwouldn’tknowunlessyouactuallyvisit.Now,iftimeandmoneyaremakingitimpossible,thencheckouttheonlinecollegefairsatCollegeWeekLive.It’sachancetochatonlinewithadmissionsofficers,students,andcollegecounselors(倾问),anditwon’tcostyouapenny!Youcanregisterforitsonlinecollegefairatcollegeweeklive.com.Whilevisitinganonlinecollegefaircan’ttaketheplaceofanactualcampusvisit,itcanbeaveryusefultoolthatalongwithallyourotherresearchwillhelpyoumakeaninformeddecisionaboutwhichcollegesoruniversitiesyou’dliketoattend.【参考范文】Beforemakingadecisionaboutthefuturecollege,itisvaluabletovisitthecampusespeciallythoseschoolsinyourlocalarea.Tosaytheleast,thestudentsshouldfindsometimebetweentheapplicationandfinalacceptancetovisittherelevantschools.Iftimeandmoneyarelimited,consultingonlineisapossiblechoicetohelpstudentsknowmoreabouttheschoolstoattend.(65)英语第10页(共10页)
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