2022年新高考英语读后续写真题解析05 2020年1月浙江卷（小狗的陪伴）

读后续写真题2021年1月浙江卷：小狗的陪伴 1试题再现2试题分析3写作思路4范文赏析目录CONTENTS 2020试题再现历年高考英语读后续写真题分析01 “I’mgoingtomissyousomuch,Poppy,”saidthetall,thinteenager.Hebentdowntohughisoldfriendgoodbye.Hestoodup,huggedhisparents,andsmiled,tryingnottolethisemotions(情绪)getthebetterofhim.Hisparentswerenotquiteabletokeeptheirsundercontrol.Theyhaddriventheirsonseveralhoursoutoftowntotheuniversitywherehewouldsoonbelivingandstudying.Itwastimetosaygoodbyefornowatleast.Thefamilyhuggedandsmiledthroughmistyeyesandthenlaughed.Theboyliftedthelastbagontohisshoulder,andflashedabrightsmile.“Iguessthisisit,”hesaid.“I’llseeyoubackhomeinamonth,okay?”Hisparentsnodded,andtheywatchedashewalkedoutofsightintothecrowdsofhundredsofstudentsandparents.Theboy’smotherturnedtothedog,“Okay,Poppy,timetogobackhome.”Thehouseseemedquietasatombwithouttheboylivingthere.Allthatweek,Poppydidn’tseeminterestedinherdinner,herfavoritetoy,oreveninherdailywalk.Herownersweresadtoo,buttheyknewtheirsonwouldbebacktovisit.Poppydidn’t.Theyofferedthedogsomeofherfavoritepeanutbuttertreats.Theyevenlethersitonthesofa,buttheoldgirljustwasn’therusualcheerfulself.Herownersstartedtogetworried.“WhatshouldwedotocheerPoppyup?”askedDad.“We’vetriedeverything.”“Ihaveanidea,butitmightbealittlecrazy,”smiledMom.“Withoutanybodyleftinthehousebutus,thisplacecoulduseabitoffun.Let’sgetalittledogforPoppy.”Itdidn’ttakelongbeforetheywalkedthroughthefrontdoorcarryingabigbox.Poppywelcomedthemhomeasusual,butwhenshesawthebox,shestopped.Sheputhernoseonit.Hertailbeganwagging(摆动)eversoslowly,thenfasterasshecaughtthesmell.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:Dadopenedtheboxandasweetlittledogappeared._____________________________Paragraph2:Afewweekslater,theboyarrivedhomefromuniversity.___________________________阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 2021试题分析历年高考英语读后续写真题分析02 根据短文内容，回答下列问题。Theboy,hisparents,theirdogPoppyandthenewlittledog.Hewasunwillingtopartwithhisfamilyandtriedtocontrolhistears.Becausetheboywasnotathome,andPoppymissedhimalot.Theygotalittledogforher.1.Whoarethecharactersinthestory?2.Howdidtheboyfeelwhenseparatingfromhisfamily?3.WhydidPoppyseemuninterestedinanythingbackhome?4.Whatdidtheboy’sparentsdotocheerPoppyup? 1、Thetallandthinteenagerbroughthisdogwithhimlivingandstudyingattheuniversity.2、Hisparentssawhimoffandwereunwillingtopartwithhimatthetrainstation.3、Theboycomfortedhisfamilythathewouldbebackinamonth.4、Theparentsandthedogweresosadthattheyweren’tinterestedintheirdailyroutines.5、Poppygotaboxwithalittledoginsidefromtheparents.TFTFF根据你对原材料的理解，判断以下表述是正确（T）还是错误（F）。 阅读完材料，试着完成下面的故事山吧！Theboy’sparentsdrovehimtotheuniversitywiththedogPoppyandtheyhadtosaygoodbye.Withouttheboyathome,Poppywasunhappy,althoughtheparentstriedmanywaystocheerherup.MomcameupwithanideathattheywouldgetalittledogforPoppy.Dadopenedtheboxandasweetlittledogappeared.WhatwasPoppy’sreactiontothelittledog?Afewweekslater,theboyarrivedhomefromuniversity.WhatdidtheboydoafterseeingPoppyandthenewlittledog?3.Climax2.Build-up1.Opening4.Resolution5.Ending 本篇的故事梗概：男孩即将离家奔赴大学学习，父母带着宠物狗Poppy去送他。男孩与父母依依惜别，彼此都竭力控制情绪，但后来还是含泪拥抱（此处表达了男孩与家庭成员之间的深厚感情）。男孩离开后，家里冷清的环境让失去了小主人的Poppy闷闷不乐，不吃不喝，对玩具和户外活动都提不起兴趣。女主人突然心生一计，想要给Poppy找个伴。某天，男孩父母回家时Poppy照常到门口迎接，此时她突然闻到了小狗的味道……。 “I’mgoingtomissyousomuch,Poppy,”saidthetall,thinteenager.Hebentdowntohughisoldfriendgoodbye.Hestoodup,huggedhisparents,andsmiled,tryingnottolethisemotions（情绪）getthebetterofhim.Hisparentswerenotquiteabletokeeptheirsundercontrol.Theyhaddriventheirsonseveralhoursoutoftowntotheuniversitywherehewouldsoonbelivingandstudying.Itwastimetosaygoodbyefornowatleast.Thefamilyhuggedandsmiledthroughmistyeyesandthenlaughed.原文分析男孩和狗狗和父母分别的情形，男孩的动作和情绪-依依不舍。父母的情绪-舍不得。 Theboyliftedthelastbagontohisshoulder,andflashedabrightsmile.“Iguessthisisit,”hesaid.“I’llseeyoubackhomeinamonth,okay?”Hisparentsnodded,andtheywatchedashewalkedoutofsightintothecrowdsofhundredsofstudentsandparents.Theboy’smotherturnedtothedog,“Okay,Poppy,timetogobackhome.”Thehouseseemedquietasatombwithouttheboylivingthere.Allthatweek,Poppydidn’tseeminterestedinherdinner,herfavoritetoy,oreveninherdailywalk.Herownersweresadtoo,buttheyknewtheirsonwouldbebacktovisit.Poppydidn’t.原文分析男孩最终离开，父母带着狗狗回家。环境描写，衬托了男孩不在家狗狗的寂寞之情。 Theyofferedthedogsomeofherfavoritepeanutbuttertreats.Theyevenlethersitonthesofa,buttheoldgirljustwasn’therusualcheerfulself.Herownersstartedtogetworried.“WhatshouldwedotocheerPoppyup?”askedDad.“We’vetriedeverything.”“Ihaveanidea,butitmightbealittlecrazy,”smiledMom.“Withoutanybodyleftinthehousebutus,thisplacecoulduseabitoffun.Let’sgetalittledogforPoppy.”原文分析狗狗不开心了/妈妈为了让Poppy开心想到了找一个小狗狗陪伴她的办法。 Itdidn’ttakelongbeforetheywalkedthroughthefrontdoorcarryingabigbox.Poppywelcomedthemhomeasusualbutwhenshesawthebox,shestopped.Sheputhernoseonit.Hertailbeganwagging（摆动）eversoslowly,thenfasterasshecaughtthesmell.原文分析Poppy感受到盒子时的动作表现：说明她兴趣来了。 2021写作思路历年高考英语读后续写真题分析03 Para.1:Dadopenedtheboxandasweetlittledogappeared.Q1:Howdidthelittledogbehaveaftertheboxwasopened?Q2:WhatwasPoppy’sreactiontothelittledog?Howdidshefeel?Q3:Didthetwodogsgetalongwitheachother?Ifyes,how?Ifnot,why?Q4:Howdidtheparentsfeelabouttheoutcome?Wasitwhattheyhadexpected?Whatchangedidthelittledogbringtothefamily?研读两段给出句，想想它们给我们提供了哪些续写线索？ Para.2:Afewweekslater,theboyarrivedhomefromuniversity.Q5:HowdidtheboyfeelaboutPoppywhenhewasawayfromhome?Whatcaughthiseyesfirst?Anythingunexpected?Q6:Whatdidtheboydoassoonashearrivedhome?Q7:Didtheboyhaveanydoubtsaboutthelittledog?Howdidhecarryonaconversationwithhisparents?研读两段给出句，想想它们给我们提供了哪些续写线索？ 分析续写段首，确定续写方向根据文章最后一句Hertailbeganwaggingeversoslowly,thenfasterasshecaughtthesmell的暗示伏笔和段首句1：Dadopenedtheboxandasweetlittledogappeared（爸爸打开盒子，一只可爱的小狗出现了）。设想以下问题获取写作要点：①Whichwordsorphrasescatchyoureyes?（asweetlittledogappeared）②Howdidparentsgetridoflonelinessathome?③HowdidPoppyrelieveherloneliness?④HowdidPoppygetalongwithanotherdog? 根据段首句2：Afewweekslatertheboyarrivedhomefromuniversity（几个星期后，男孩从大学回到家里）及时间线索词Afewweekslater。可通过以下问题获取写作要点：①Whichwordsorphrasescatchyoureyes?（theboyarrivedhome）②Howdidtheboygobackhome?③Howdidtheboygetoutofloneliness?④Howdidthecharacterfeel?⑤HowcouldParagraph2beendedreasonablyandcreatively? Paragraph1：Dadopenedtheboxandasweetlittledogappeared._______________________________________________________________________Paragraph2：Afewweekslater,theboyarrivedhomefromuniversity._______________________________________________________________________原文分析Poppy看到一只小狗之后会是什么反应呢？应该是开心的。所以这段续写两只狗狗玩的愉快。本段应该是男孩回家看到家里多了一只狗狗之后的反应，他和狗狗一起玩。 Paragraph1Paragraph1：Dadopenedtheboxandasweetlittledogappeared.Poppyapproached.ThepuppycameoutThetwodogsplayedtogether.Theparentswereglad. Paragraph2Paragraph2：Afewweekslater,theboyarrivedhomefromuniversity.HewasgreetedbypoppyandtheotherdogTheboyplayedwiththetwodogs.Theywereallhappy. 句子润色1.爸爸打开盒子，一只可爱的小狗出现了。波比小心翼翼地走近，试图不吓到小狗。Dadopenedtheboxandasweetlittledogappeared. Poppy approachedwithcaution,tryingnottoscarethepuppy.approachedwithcautionscarethepuppy 句子润色2.果然，过了一会儿，绒球才从盒子里抬起头来偷看它的新家和新朋友。Sureenough,momentslater,theballoffurlifteditsheadoutoftheboxtopeekatitsnewhomeanditsnewfriend.Sureenough,itwasonlymomentslaterthattheballoffurlifteditsheadoutofthe boxtopeekatitsnewhomeanditsnewfriend.Sureenoughifteditsheadoutoftheboxtopeekat强调句升级 句子润色3.爸爸妈妈高兴地看着他们结识。MomandDad watched delightedlyasthetwomadeacquaintances.madeacquaintances 句子润色4.他们很高兴看到波比恢复了原来的样子，他们每天带着小狗散步，甚至向它介绍了她最喜欢的玩具。TheyweregladtoseePoppycomingbacktoherusualself,andtheyguidedthelittledogondailywalksandevenintroducedtoitherfavoritetoys.TheyweregladtoseePoppycoming backtoherusualself,guidingthelittledogondailywalksandevenintroducingtoitherfavoritetoys.comebacktoherusualselfguidethelittledogondailywalks非谓语的使用 句子润色5.听到他把包从车上卸下，波比竖起耳朵，突然她四肢着地。Poppyhearedhisbagsunloadedonthedriveway,andsheprickedupherearsandsuddenlyshewasonallfours.Hearinghisbagsunloadedonthedriveway,Poppy’searsprickedupandsuddenlyshewasonallfours.Pickupone’searBeonallfours句式升级 句子润色6.男孩被一声欢快的犬吠声迎接。The boywasgreetedwitha cheerful high-pitchedbark.cheerfulhigh-pitchedbark. 句子润色7.然后前门砰地一声打开，波比扑到他的怀抱里，后面是那个温柔地舔着手指的小家伙。ThenthefrontdoorpoppedopenandPoppydartedtohisembrace,followedbythelittleonewholickedhisfingersfondly.poppedopendartedtohisembracelickedhisfingers 句子润色8.他笑得从来没有那么灿烂过，大声喊着他的父母，他们拉他进来，长时间地拥抱着。Hesmiledeversobright,andthencalledouttohisparents,whotuggedhiminforalonghug.Smilingeversobright,hecalledouttohis parents,whotuggedhiminforalong hug.Smileeversobrightcalledouttuggedhimin句式升级 句子润色9.尽管秋风凛冽，他们的家却充满了爱与团圆的温暖。Despitethechillautumnwind,theirhomewasfilledwiththewarmthofloveandreunion.Despitethechillautumnwindloveandreunion 2020范文赏析历年高考英语读后续写真题分析04 Dadopenedtheboxandasweetlittledogappeared._______________________(然后盒子里跳出来一小团金色波浪状的东西。倒装结构).Poppywasamazed.Shewatchedcarefully.Shewaggedfuriously.Shebarkedwithjoy._____________________(她微笑着，伸着舌头审视着这个惊喜。独立主格结构).Thelittlepupwasnotshyandimmediatelystartedbarkingandjumpingaroundtheolderdog.“Thatdidn’ttakelong,”remarkedtheboy’smom,asbothdogswentroaringaroundthehouseinahappygameofchase.Dadlaughed.Afewweekslater,theboyarrivedhomefromuniversity._____________________(在大学时他很想念Poppy，省略句)andwaslookingforwardtoseeingher.Whenhebentdowntogiveherabighug,hefelloverinsurpriseasasmallgoldencloudcameracinguptolickhisfacetoo.“Ohmy,whoisthis?”heexclaimed._________________________________(看着他满脸的惊讶，他的父母笑了起来。非谓语动词作状语).“That’sPee-wee,”saidDad.“Ican’tbelieveyougotyourselvesapuppy!”“Wedidn’t,”repliedMom.“ThispuppyisforPoppy!”根据括号中的提示，补出范文缺失的部分，并关注哪些语言回答了“首句精研”的问题。 阅读以下参考范文，学习范文的精彩表达和亮点表述。Dadopenedtheboxandasweetlittledogappeared.Thenoutoftheboxjumpedasmallmassofwavygoldenthing.Poppywasamazed.Shewatchedcarefully.Shewaggedfuriously.Shebarkedwithjoy.Shesmiled,hertonguehangingoutassheinvestigatedthesurprise.Thelittlepupwasnotshyandimmediatelystartedbarkingandjumpingaroundtheolderdog.“Thatdidn’ttakelong,”remarkedtheboy’smom,asbothdogswentroaringaroundthehouseinahappygameofchase.Dadlaughed.Afewweekslater,theboyarrivedhomefromuniversity.HehadmissedPoppywhileatuniversityandwaslookingforwardtoseeingher.Whenhebentdowntogiveherabighug,hefelloverinsurpriseasasmallgoldencloudcameracinguptolickhisfacetoo.“Ohmy,whoisthis?”heexclaimed.Hisparentslaughed,seeingthelookofshockonhisface.“That’sPee-wee,”saidDad.“Ican’tbelieveyougotyourselvesapuppy!”“Wedidn’t,”repliedMom.“ThispuppyisforPoppy!” 2020年1月浙江卷读后续写——逻辑连贯(coherent)Thenoutoftheboxjumpedasmallmassofwavygoldenthing.Poppywasamazed.Shewatchedcarefully.Shewaggedfuriously.Shebarkedwithjoy.Shesmiled,hertonguehangingoutassheinvestigatedthesurprise.Thelittlepupwasnotshyandimmediatelystartedbarkingandjumpingaroundtheolderdog.“Thatdidn’ttakelong,”remarkedtheboy’smom,asbothdogswentroaringaroundthehouseinahappygameofchase.Dadlaughed.重复、指代、同义替换等(cohesive)WhatwasPoppy’sreactiontothelittledog?Howdidthelittledogbehave?Dadopenedtheboxandasweetlittledogappeared. HehadmissedPoppywhileatuniversityandwaslookingforwardtoseeingher.Whenhebentdowntogiveherabighug,hefelloverinsurpriseasasmallgoldencloudcameracinguptolickhisfacetoo.“Ohmy,whoisthis?”heexclaimed.Hisparentslaughed,seeingthelookofshockonhisface.“That’sPee-wee,”saidDad.“Ican’tbelieveyougotyourselvesapuppy!”“Wedidn’t,”repliedMom.“ThispuppyisforPoppy!”WhatdidtheboydoafterseeingPoppyandthenewlittledog?Howdidhefeel?Afewweekslater,theboyarrivedhomefromuniversity.2020年1月浙江卷读后续写——逻辑连贯(coherent)重复、指代、同义替换等(cohesive) 2020年1月浙江卷读后续写——精彩语言Dadopenedtheboxandasweetlittledogappeared.Thenoutoftheboxjumpedasmallmassofwavygoldenthing.Poppywasamazed.Shewatchedcarefully.Shewaggedfuriously.Shebarkedwithjoy.Shesmiled,hertonguehangingoutassheinvestigatedthesurprise.Thelittlepupwasnotshyandimmediatelystartedbarkingandjumpingaroundtheolderdog.“Thatdidn’ttakelong,”remarkedtheboy’smom,asbothdogswentroaringaroundthehouseinahappygameofchase.Dadlaughed.倒装结构比喻修辞独立主格结构 2020年1月浙江卷读后续写——精彩语言Afewweekslater,theboyarrivedhomefromuniversity.HehadmissedPoppywhileatuniversityandwaslookingforwardtoseeingher.Whenhebentdowntogiveherabighug,hefelloverinsurpriseasasmallgoldencloudcameracinguptolickhisfacetoo.“Ohmy,whoisthis?”heexclaimed.Hisparentslaughed,seeingthelookofshockonhisface.“That’sPee-wee,”saidDad.“Ican’tbelieveyougotyourselvesapuppy!”“Wedidn’t,”repliedMom.“ThispuppyisforPoppy!”省略句时间状语从句固定搭配非谓语动词作状语比喻修辞 检测一下你对范文的亮点语块掌握了吗？一团金色波浪状的东西欢快地叫着给她一个大大的拥抱惊倒在地向前奔跑他脸上震惊的表情asmallmassofwavygoldenthingbarkwithjoygiveherabighugfalloverinsurpriseraceupthelookofshockonhisface 阅读下面的补充语料，积累一些续写素材吧！Itlowereditsheadwithcaution,itseyesshiningwithcuriosity.ItwassosweetthatPoppycouldn’thelpapproachingitandkissingit.Itwasnotlongbeforethetwogotfamiliarwitheachother.Theysniffedeachotherlikeoldfriends.Theparents,ingreatsurprise,couldn’timaginethetwodogsenjoyingeachother’scompanyintheblinkofaneye.Theboy’sparentssmiledhappily,packinguptheirworries.Eversincethen,thehousehadnolongerbeenruledbydeadsilence,butfullofloudlaughter.Beingwarmlygreetedbytwolovelydogs,hewasquiteastonished.Strangely,hewasn’tgreetedwithPoppy’susualbarking,butwithanunbelievablescene.Heexcitedlyopenedthedoor,lookingforwardtogatheringwithhisfamily,onlytofind… THANKYOU