读后续写真题2017年6月浙江卷:健忘妈妈趣事
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阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。AvacationwithmymotherIhadaninterestingchildhood.Itwasfilledwithsurpriseandamusements,allbecauseofmymother—loving,sweet,andyetabsent-mindedandforgetful.OnestrangefamilytripwetookwhenIwaseleventellsalotabouther.MytwosetsofgrandparentslivedinColoradoandNorthDakota,andmyparentsdecidedtospendafewweeksdrivingtothosestatesandseeingallthesightsalongtheway.Asthefirstdayofourtripapproached,David,myeight-year-oldbrother,andIunwillinglysaidgood-byetoallofourfriends.Whoknewifwe’deverseethemagain?Finally,themomentofourdeparturearrived,andweloadedsuitcases,books,games,campingequipment,andatentintothecarandbravelydroveoff.Webravelydroveoffagaintwohourslaterafterwe’dreturnedhometogetthepurseandtraveler’schecksMomhadforgotten.DavidandIwerealwaysalittlenervouswhenusinggasstationbathroomsifMomwasdrivingwhileDadslept:“Youstandoutsidethedoorandplaylookout(放哨)whileIgo,andI’llstandoutsidethedoorandplaylookoutwhileyougo.”Ihadterriblepicturesinmymind:“Honey,wherearethekids?”“What?!Oh,Gosh…Ithoughttheywerebeingawfullyquiet.”Wewereneveractuallyleftbehindinastrangecity,butweweren’tabouttotakeanychances.Onthefourthorfifthnight,wehadtroublefindingahotelwithavacancy.Afterdrivinginvainforsometime,Momsuddenlygotagreatidea:Whydidn’twefindahousewithalikely-lookingbackyardandaskifwecouldsetuptentthere?DavidandIbecamenervous.Toourgreatrelief,Dadturneddowntheidea.Momnevercouldunderstandourobjections(反对).Ifastrangefamilyshoweduponherfrontdoorsteps,Momwouldhavebeendelighted.Shethinkseveryoneintheworldisasniceassheis.Wefinallyfoundavacancyinthenexttown.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtentwehadbroughtwithus.____________________________________________Paragraph2:Wedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofgreatsightsalongtheway.___________________________________________
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根据短文内容完成下面的对话。A:What’sthemostunforgettabletripyou’vetaken?B:Ibelieveitwouldbethetripwithmy________________________whenIwaseleven.Itwasinterestingbut________duetomymom’s_____________.A:Really?Wereyouwellpreparedbeforedeparture？B:Wethoughtwewere.Webroughtalmosteverythingweneededontheroadincluding____________________.Buttwohoursafterdeparturewereturnedtogetthe________________________.A:Wasthereachancetousethetent?B:Notatthebeginning.Onthefourthorfifthnight,wecouldn’tfindahotelwithvacancy.Mymomsuggestedsettingthetentupat__________________________.A:Didyourfatheragreewiththatidea?B:Ofcoursenot.parentsandyoungerbrotherstrangeforgetfulnesscampinggearandtentsomeoneelse’sbackyardpurseandtraveler’schecks
阅读完材料，试着完成下面的故事山吧！Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtentwehadbroughtwithus.1.OpeningMychildhoodwasfilledwithsurpriseandamusementsbecauseofmysweetabsent-mindedmother.Weplannedatriptomytwosetsofgrandparents.Twohoursafterdeparturewereturnedhometogetthepurseandtraveler’schecksMomhadforgotten.Onthefourthorfifthnight,wewereunabletofindahotelwithvacancy.Momsuggestedsettingupthetentatsomeone’sbackyard.Wealldisagreed.Finallywefoundahotelinanothertown.Wedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofgreatsightsalongtheway.2.Build-up3.Climax4.Resolution5.Ending
AvacationwithmymotherIhadaninterestingchildhood:Itwasfilledwithsurpriseandamusements,allbecauseofmymother-loving,sweet,andyetabsent-mindedandforgetful.OnestrangefamilytripwetookwhenIwaseleventellsalotabouther.原文分析标题作用：交代人物和事件。形容词感情基调，说明事件是有趣的。妈妈的特征：可爱，心不在焉健忘。
MytwosetsofgrandparentslivedinColoradoandNorthDakota,andmyparentsdecidedtospendafewweeksdrivingtothosestatesandseeingallthesightsalongtheway.Asthefirstdayofourtripapproached,David,myeight-year-oldbrother,andIunwillinglysaidgood-byetoallofourfriends.Whoknewifwe’deverseethemagain?Finally,themomentofourdeparturearrived,andweloadedsuitcases,books,games,campingequipment,andatentintothecarandbravelydroveoff.Webravelydroveoffagaintwohourslaterafterwe’dreturnedhometogetthepurseandtraveler’schecksMomhadforgotten.原文分析故事的开端：我和父母出去旅游。妈妈健忘的具体事件。注意积累原文中的细节表达。
DavidandIwerealwaysalittlenervouswhenusinggasstationbathroomsifMomwasdrivingwhileDadslept:”YoustandoutsidethedoorandplaylookoutwhileIgo,andI’llstandoutsidethedoorandplaylookoutwhileyougo.”Ihadterriblepicturesinmymind:“Honey,wherearethekids?”“What?!Oh,Gosh…Ithoughttheywerebeingawfullyquiet.”Wewereneveractuallyleftbehindinastrangecity,butweweren’tabouttotakeanychances.原文分析讲述妈妈经常忘事的烦恼。
Onthefourthorfifthnight,wehadtroublefindingahotelwithavacancy.Afterdrivinginvainforsometime,Momsuddenlygotagreatidea:Whydidn’twefindahousewithalikely-lookingbackyardandaskifwecouldsetuptentthere?DavidandIbecamenervous.Toourgreatrelief,Dadturneddowntheidea.Momnevercouldunderstandourobjections.Ifastrangefamilyshoweduponherfrontdoorsteps,Momwouldhavebeendelighted.Shethinkseveryoneintheworldasniceassheis.Wefinallyfoundavacancyinthenexttown.原文分析我们终于拒绝了妈妈的建议，住找到了旅馆。
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Para1:Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtentwehadbroughtwithus.Para2：Wedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofgreatsightsalongtheway.原文画线单词对后面情节发展做了铺垫和提示：absent-minded,forgetful,nice点明了妈妈的性格特征；camping,tent,trip,trouble提示了重点情节信息；David,Mom,Dad说明了故事人物信息。研读两段给出句，想想它们给我们提供了哪些续写线索？Q1:Didweuseit?Wasthereanydisagreementaboutusingthetent?Q2:Wheredidweputupthetent?Howwasthecampingplace?Q3:Howdidwefeelaboutthecamping?Q4:Howcanthegreatsightsbedescribedindetail?Q5:Whatelsedidweexperiencealongthetripapartfromthegreatsights?Q6:Didwesuccessfullymakeittoourgrandparents’place?
Paragraph1：Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtentwehadbroughtwithus._______________________________________________________________________Paragraph2：Wedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofgreatsightsalongtheway._______________________________________________________________________原文分析第一段的故事情节应该比较偏向正面感情色彩，例如：我们在露营过程中一起搭建帐篷的开心时光或露营过程中的趣事此处可以用一些描述景色环境的表达来烘托下氛围，看到景色(同时回忆往事)，最终把故事的落脚点放在“家人的感情”“亲情”“生活的乐趣”“与妈妈一起的趣事”等
Paragraph1Paragraph1：Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtentwehadbroughtwithus.MothersuggestedgocampingwiththetentWeagreed.Wehadanicedaywiththecamping.Thingsofmymother’skindnessandshehelpedothers.
Paragraph2Paragraph2：Wedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofgreatsightsalongtheway.Wevisitedmygrandparents.Weallhadthetrip.Ilearnedfrommymotherthattheimportanceofgiving.
句子润色1.想到这顶帐篷，妈妈建议我们到下一个村子去野营，眼睛闪闪发光。Thinkingofthistent,Momsuggestedthatwegocampinginthenextvillageinexcitement,withhereyesglittering.Thinkingofthistentwithhereyesglittering
句子润色2.考虑到她的热情，我们都同意了。Consideringherenthusiasm,weallagreed.Consideringherenthusiasm
句子润色3.当我们的车门打开时，妈妈立刻冲了出去，催促我们搭起帐篷。Whenthedoorofourcaropened,Momstormedoutinstantlyandurgedustoputupthetent.stormedouturge
句子润色4.大卫和我被要求捡些树枝生火。DavidandIwereaskedtopickupsomebranchestobuildafire.absent-mindedpickupsomebranchestobuildafire
句子润色5.当我们回来时，爸爸妈妈已经舒舒服服地躺在帐篷前的草地上，和一个我们这个年纪的当地男孩愉快地交谈着，他好奇地看着帐篷。Andwhenwecameback,DadandMomhadalreadylaindownthegrasscomfortablyinfrontofthetent,talkingmerrilywithalocalboyatourage,whokeptglancingatthistentcuriously.LaydownalocalboyatourageTalkmerrilywith
句子润色6.很快我们就知道那个衣衫褴褛的男孩连家都没有。Soonwelearntthattheboyinragsevendidn’thaveahometolivein.theboyinrags
句子润色7.当然，妈妈又“忘了”带帐篷了。Ofcourse,Mom“forgot”totakethistentwithusagain.
句子润色8.在那次旅行中，我们和爷爷奶奶住在一起。Andwealsohadanicetimelivingwithmygrandparentsduringthattrip.
句子润色9.但给我印象最深的是那个帐篷，妈妈故意忘记了。Butwhatimpressedmemostwasthattent,whichwasforgottendeliberatelybyMom.deliberatelywhatimpressedmemostwasthat
句子润色10.虽然她很喜欢去野营，但出于同情，她把这顶帐篷送给了那个可怜的男孩。Thoughshedidlovegoingcamping,shepresentedthatpoorboywiththistentoutofsympathy.Gocampingoutofsympathy
句子润色11.是妈妈让我的童年多姿多彩。也是她向我展示了给予的真正意义。ItwasMomthatmademychildhoodcolorful.Anditwasalsoshethatshowedmethetruemeaningofgiving.mademychildhoodcolorfulthetruemeaningofgiving
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Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtentwehadbroughtwithus.______________________________（妈妈坚持要用帐篷，我和David朝爸爸看了看，他笑着同意了。非限制性定语从句）Thenwespentawholeafternoonseekinganicecampingplaceandfinallysetupourtentbeforenightfell.____________________________（这是我第一次觉得妈妈睿智，因为我非常喜欢这个帐篷。It作形式主语）“Oh,Iforgotthepillows!”Momscreamed.Despitetheacheinmyneck,wehadanunforgettablenight.Wedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofgreatsightsalongtheway.Thelimitlessgreengrass,thewanderingsheep,thesettingsunandthecountlessstarsabovethecurtainofnightkeptmespellbound.____________________________（我们不仅欣赏到了如画的风景，也非常开心有个健忘的妈妈陪伴我们，她让旅途充满了欢乐。非限制性定语从句）Ireallyloveher.Eventually,wearrivedatourgrandparents’place,allfourofusandnotasingleoneleftbehind.根据汉语提示补充范文中的动词或短语动词，使情节连贯，衔接合理。
Paragraph1:Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtentwehadbroughtwithus.Mominsistedthatweshouldmakefulluseofit.DavidandIlookedatDad,whosmiledandnoddedinagreement.Thenwespentawholeafternoonseekinganicecampingplaceandfinallysetupourtentbeforenightfell.ItwasthefirsttimethatIhadthoughtMomcouldbewiseasIadmiredourstunningtent.“Oh,Iforgotthepillows!”Momscreamed.Despitetheacheinmyneck,wehadanunforgettablenight.Paragraph2:Wedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofgreatsightsalongtheway.Thelimitlessgreengrass,thewanderingsheep,thesettingsunandthecountlessstarsabovethecurtainofnightkeptmespellbound.Notonlydidweenjoythepicturesquescenery,butwewerealsohappytohaveforgetfulandabsent-mindedMomaround,whobroughtlotsoflaughtertoourtrip.Ireallyloveher.Eventually,wearrivedatourgrandparents’place,allfourofusandnotasingleoneleftbehind.找出回答“首句精研”中问题的句子，注意题目中画线单词出现的语境。
范文赏析——生动的语言Paragraph1:Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtentwehadbroughtwithus.Mominsistedthatweshouldmakefulluseofit.DavidandIlookedatDad,whosmiledandnoddedinagreement.Thenwespentawholeafternoonseekinganicecampingplaceandfinallysetupourtentbeforenightfell.ItwasthefirsttimethatIhadthoughtMomcouldbewiseasIadmiredourstunningtent.“Oh,Iforgotthepillows!”Momscreamed.Despitetheacheinmyneck,wehadanunforgettablenight.Paragraph2:Wedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofgreatsightsalongtheway.Thelimitlessgreengrass,thewanderingsheep,thesettingsunandthecountlessstarsabovethecurtainofnightkeptmespellbound.Notonlydidweenjoythepicturesquescenery,butwewerealsohappytohaveforgetfulandabsent-mindedMomaround,whobroughtlotsoflaughtertoourtrip.Ireallyloveher.Eventually,wearrivedatourgrandparents’places,allfourofusandnotasingleoneleftbehind.时间线
范文赏析——生动的语言Paragraph1:Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtentwehadbroughtwithus.Mominsistedthatweshouldmakefulluseofit.DavidandIlookedatDad,whosmiledandnoddedinagreement.Thenwespentawholeafternoonseekinganicecampingplaceandfinallysetupourtentbeforenightfell.ItwasthefirsttimethatIhadthoughtMomcouldbewiseasIadmiredourstunningtent.“Oh,Iforgotthepillows!”Momscreamed.Despitetheacheinmyneck,wehadanunforgettablenight.Paragraph2:Wedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofgreatsightsalongtheway.Thelimitlessgreengrass,thewanderingsheep,thesettingsunandthecountlessstarsabovethecurtainofnightkeptmespellbound.Notonlydidweenjoythepicturesquescenery,butwewerealsohappytohaveforgetfulandabsent-mindedMomaround,whobroughtlotsoflaughtertoourtrip.Ireallyloveher.Eventually,wearrivedatourgrandparents’places,allfourofusandnotasingleoneleftbehind.精彩闪现Itwasthefirsttimenotonly…butalso定语从句动词短语固定搭配定语从句
nodinagreementsetupourtentanunforgettablenightbringlotsoflaughterto把车开走放哨充满了令我们欣慰的是拒绝当旅行第一天临近我们准备离开的时候befilledwithasthefirstdayofourtripapproachedthemomentofourdeparturearriveddriveoffplaylookouttoourgreatreliefturndown点头同意一个难忘的夜晚搭起我们的帐篷给……带来许多欢乐检测一下你对原材料和范文的亮点语块掌握了吗？
◎Obviously,thetentwasnowheretobefoundandMominsistedongoingbacktofetchit.◎Thinkingofthetent,Momexcitedlysuggestedthatwegocamping.◎ConsideringMom’senthusiasm,weallagreed.◎Itwasaclearinginthewoodsbyasmalllake,where Dadcouldcatchsomefishfordinner.◎Wehadno troublesettingupour tent,butweweredisappointedtofindthatMomforgottopackpillows.◎Needlesstosay,weallwokeupwithasoreneckthenextmorning.◎Thatstarrynight,admiringthemoonrisingabovethedistantmountainandaccompaniedbytheamusingstoriesofnaughtyDavid,wefeltwe’dhadthemostenjoyablecampingtrip.◎Wecrossedbigriversandvastplains,climbedhighmountains,andoverlookeddeepvalleys.◎Duringthetrip,Mom’sbeing absent-mindednotonlygotusintomuchtrouble,butalsogaveusmanyfunnymoments.◎However,itwashardtodenythatthoseincidentsactuallyaddedlaughtertoourjourney.◎Weallarrivedatourgrandparents’homesafeandsound.◎Thisstrangefamilytripwoulddefinitelybeacherishedmemoryfortherestofourlife.◎Thereisnopersonthatcanmatchher—myloving,sweet,yetabsent-mindedandforgetfulmom.◎ItwasMomthatmademychildhoodcolorful.Itwasalsoshethatshowedmethetruemeaningofgiving.阅读下面的补充语料，积累一些续写素材吧！
Listvariousexpressionsof“look”!seewatchnoticeobservelookupatlookdownatcatchsightof...gazeat/stareat/glareatpeepout(朝外看)givesbawink(眨眼)castaglanceat(扫视)catchaglimpseof(瞥见)exchangeaglancewithsb(与某人交换眼色)...lookgeneral(概括)specific(具体)
MrsDursleywasthinandblondeandhadnearlytwicetheusualamountofneck,whichcameinveryusefulasshespentsomuchofhertimecraningover(伸长脖子看)gardenfences,spyingon(窥探)theneighbors.─HarryPotterFernpeeredthroughthedoor(透过门缝窥视).─Charlotte’sWeb
①Dadlookedatme.WhynotcamptosatisfyMom?②Dadlookedatus,pulledupbesideabrightly-coloredtent,fromwheresomecamperslookedoutandgreeteduswarmly.Dad__________________withme.WhynotcamptosatisfyMom?Polishthewriting(specificexpressionsofverbs)peepout(朝外看)；givesbawink(朝某人眨眼)；exchangeaglance(交换眼色)exchangedaglanceDad_____________,pulledupbesideabrightly-coloredtent,fromwheresomecampers____________andgreeteduswarmly.gaveusawinkpeepedout
③Justthenanidealcampsitewhichnestledontheedgeofalakespreadbeforeus.②Dadgaveusawink,pulledupbesideabrightly-coloredtent,fromwheresomecamperspeepedoutandgreeteduswarmly.Polishthewriting(variousnon-finite非谓语verbs)_______________,Dadpulledupbesideabrightly-coloredtent,fromwheresomecamperspeepedoutandgreeteduswarmly.GivingusawinkJustthenanidealcampsite___________________________spreadbeforeus.nestlingontheedgeofalake
④Momletoutascreamofthrill,locatedaclearingandimmediatelyguidedustopitchthetent.⑤Atdusk,againstthedeepbluesky,wetogetherwithothercampersgatheredaround,andexchangedyummysnacksinthecompanyoffire._________________________,Momlocatedaclearingandimmediatelyguidedustopitchthetent.Atdusk,againstthedeepbluesky,wetogetherwithothercampersgatheredaround,_______________________inthecompanyoffire.LettingoutascreamofthrillexchangingyummysnacksPolishthewriting(variousnon-finite非谓语verbs)
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