《2022年高考英语一轮复习讲练测》专题11 短文改错（原卷版） (2)

专题11短文改错1．（2020届安徽省蚌埠市高三第三次质检）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用（/）划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Mymotherwasonthedutyasanemergency－roomdoctorwhenafatherbroughtinhisson，whichhadstuckatirefromoneofhistoytrucksinhisnose.Themanwasembarrassing，butmymotherconvincedhimthisissomethingkidsoftendid.Sheremovedthetireveryquickandtheywereontheirway.Afewminuteslater，thefatherwasbackintheERasktotalktomymotherinprivate.Confused，sheledmetotheexaminingroom.“Whilewewereonourwayhome，”hebegan，“Ikeptlookingthelittletire，wonderingwhatonearthmysonhadgotthisthingstuckinhisnoseand…”IttookjustafewsecondtogetthetireoutofDad’snose.2．（2020届福建省福州市高三毕业班质量检测）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。IamDavid.Asaeighteen-year-oldstudentinSenior3,therehavealwaysanewchallengejustaroundthecorner!Attimestheycanbequitestressful,whichinturnmakesmefeelveryworry.Inordertohelpdealthis,Igojoggingasoftenaspossibly.WhetherI’matthegymandontheroad,mynervousenergypushmethroughmileone.Bymiletwo,thetensionhasmovedfrommymindtomyleg.Bytheendoftherun,allmystresshasbeendisappearedandIamreadytomeetmorechallengeswithconfidencethenextday!10.考查语态。主语allmystress和动词disappear是主动关系，不是被动关系，去掉been。故去掉 been。3．（2020届福建省厦门市高三一次质检）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。I’vebeenvolunteeringinAprilthisyear.Everydaysomeofuscollectshoppinglistsfromtheoldwholivesaloneinourcommunity.Othervolunteerplaceorderswiththesupermarket.Wehavetofetchthesewell-packfoodandnecessitiesanddeliverthemtothecommunity.Withtheirhelp,theelderlycanavoidgoingoutandgetinfected,andthesupermarketcankeepoperatingduringthelockdownperiod.Yesterday,thesupermarketgiveusthreeboxesofmasksasareward.Withoutahesitation,wedecideddonatethemtoahospitalnearby.Althoughitmaybetiring,Ifeelveryhappily.4．（2020届广东省高考模拟）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\）,并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Oneday,Mrs.True,myteacher,organizedapoetrycontestafterwehavejuststudiedvarioustypesofpoems.Myclassmatesallwrotetotheirfamilymembers,butIputthewordintomypoemcarefully:“IlovePenny.”Pennywasmy3-year-olddog,thatwasmybestfriend.Myclassmatesfeltstrangeandwonderedhow.However,IfeltreallymovingwhenMrs.Truestillshowedoffmypoemtomyclassmates.Asresult,thiscontestbecameaturningpointinmylife.Fromnowon,Ifellinlovewithwritingandhaveevenbecomeaneditorofanewspaper.IreallyrespectMrs.Trueandteacherslikehimforencouragingustofollowourhearts. 5．（2020届广东省广州市普通高中毕业班综合测试）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Severalyearsago,twoSichuanschoolboysmadeanimportantdiscoverywithchance.Onemorningastheyaregatheringfirewood,itsuddenlystartedtorainheavy.Theyhadtoruntothenearcavetorshelter.Onceoutside,theysawsomehumanbonesontheground.Theboyswerealittlefrighteningatfirst.Thentheyrememberedtheirhistorylessons,butsoonrealizedtheyhadfoundsomethingveryimportant.Assoonasitstoppedtoraining,theyleftthecaveandrushedtolocalpolicestationtoreporttheirdiscovery.Scientistssooncameandfoundmoreancienthumanbonesandmanyothervaluablehistoricalobject.6.（2020届广东省深圳市高三第一次调研）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Lastyear,ourcitycalledonthecitizenstosortandrecyclerubbish,butIbecameavolunteerinmyneighbourhood.Afterdinner,Igottotheplacethatdifferentrubbishshouldbethrownintodifferentbin.Thencameanoldlady,carryingabagofkitchenwastewithplasticbottlesinthem.Ihelpedherpickoutoftherecyclablebottleswithpatient.Afterthat,morepeoplecameandIshowthemhowtoclassifytherubbishmixingintheirbags.Whenthekitchenwastewastakenaway,Ifinishedmyjob.Althoughtired,Ifelthappilyandwenthomewithstrongsenseofachievement.7．（2020 届河南省安阳市高三第二次模拟）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（˄），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Iwasexcitingtostartanewadventureabroad.Therefore,theexcitementstartedtofadeafteracoupleweeks.Homesicknessbegantobesetin.ButallthatchangedafterImetsomenewfriendsorspentsomegoodtimewiththem.Wepracticelanguages,atetogetherandvisitednewplaces.Isupposeweshouldneverforgethowimportantthatistohavenicefriendsinourlife.Theycanmakesuchthedifference.Totravelandvisitotherplacesisoneofthebetterthingsyoucandoinyourlife.Myadvicefrommyexperiencearetotravelandtrynewthingswheneveryougettheopportunity.8．（2020届河南省郑州市高三第二次质量预测）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。RecentlyIbecameaddictedtolearnmorelanguagesapartfromEnglish.OnceIsawapostofferingawonderfulcourseinGerman,andthatwasjustwhatIdecidedtotakefromanewlanguage.Whiletheroomforclasseswasquitesmall,buttherewasawholeworldoflanguagetoexplore.Ourteacher,Mrs.Haus,wasatall,thinandquietlady.I'llneverforgetthedaywhichsheintroducedherself.Sheneveronceraisedvoice,buttheminuteshebegantospeak,theroomfellsilently.Why?ShelovedGermananditsculture-andeverybodyinherclassescouldn'thelpbutfellinlovewiththelanguage,too.WealladmirethewayshetalkedaboutdifferentGermanfoodsandtradition.ThenIrealizedwhatmakesthegoodteacher.It'ssomeonewhoisinlovewithwhatheorsheisteaching! 9．（2020届湖南省岳阳市高三教学质量检测）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。LastSaturday,therewasanartfestivalinourschool,whichhadbeenholdingforfiveyears.Iwassoexcited,becausethiswasourfirsttimetoparticipateinit.Inthemorning,therearesomanypeoplecomingtothecampus,makethecampuslively.Thestudentsweredressedupforfestival.Iappreciatedallthepaintings,eachofthatwasdrawnbythestudents.Iwassoimpressedbythesework.Someofthemweremadewithhand,reflectingthestudents’wisdom.Thoughwewerebusilywithourstudy,butsomestudentsstillkeptontheirhobbies.Ishoulddevelopsomehobbiesaswell.10．（2020届江西省抚州市高三教学质量监测）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。I'dliketooffersomesuggestionsonhowtotakeataxisafe.Firstly,beforeyougetintoataxi,youshouldcheckwhetherit'sthelicensedtaxiornot.It'smorebettertotakealicensedone.Then,youshouldlookattheirregistrationnumbercarefully.Thirdly,sitontheseatbehindthedriver,thatisthesafestplaceinthecar.Finally,don'tkeepyoureyesfixingonyourmobilephoneallthewaybutwatchoutofthedirection.Ifyoufoundsomethingwrong,askthedriverstopthecarimmediately.Hopemyadviceswillbeofhelp.11．（2020届江西省新余市高考二模）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。It'sbeenalongtimebeforeIleftmyhometown.Irememberitwasthebeautifulplacewithanexcellentenvironment,andpeopleherewereverykind-hearted.Lastweekend,Imadeacalltoafriendlivethere,andhesenttomesomepicturesofthecitythroughemail.Fromthephoto,Icanseethathastakenplacethere.Forexample,thestreetshavebecomewide,andthehouseshigher.Besides,thepeopletherearedressedmodernclothes.Manymodernbuildingsarebeingbuilt.MyhometownhaschangedsogreatthatIcanhardlybelievemyeyes.Ihopemyhometowncanbecomebetterandbetterinthefuture.12.（2020届江西省重点中学协作体高三第一次联考）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限—词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Everysummer,thereisthefestivalofartandmusicinthevillagewhereIlive.ItarrivesinthebeginningofJuly,andlocalvillagercometotheexhibitionsandconcertswhichtheyexpecttoomuchfromit.Theconcertsareholdingintheschoolhall,theartexhibitionsareusuallydisplayedintheoldmarkethouse.Intheeveningwhenthefestivalbegins,thevillageispackingwithpeople,attendingtheconcertsandsittinginthecafes.Theusuallysleepyatmospheredisappearsandallthepeoplefeelasiftheyareatabigparty.Whenthefestivalwasover,thevillagersarealltired,buttheysoonstartplannedforthenextyear.13.（2020届辽宁省辽南协作体高三第一次模拟）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Researchshowsthekidswhowereallowedtokeeptheircellphonesintheirroomswillansweratextlateatnight.Soit’snaturetoworrywhenyourchildisreadyforhisfirstcellphone.Itmakessomeself-disciplinetomanagetheresponsibilityofamobilephonebutmostkidsarenotreadyfor.Typical,parentsalsofindthemselveswithunclearsenseoffear.Yes,thisdeviceisusefulinprovidingyourchildwithaconvenientmeansofconnectionswhenyouareapart.Andit’salsoasymbolofseparation,areminderwhatyourchildisspendingmoretimeatadistancefromyou.Evenbad,havingcellphonesmeantheremightbesomedangersintheoutsideworld,whichthreatenyourchildatanytimewithoutyoutheretostopthem.14．（2020届山西省太原市高三模拟）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Aftergraduatingfromhighschool,I'mgoingtobecomputerprogrammer,whichIthinkisongreatdemandinthemodernworld.Moreover,myparentswouldlikemetostudymedicine.Theybelieveherearetworeasonsforbeingadoctor.Oneisthatdoctorsusuallydealwithpatientsinperson,whichmeantheyareabletohelppeopleinneeddirect.Theotheristhatdoctorsaresoimportantthatitisalmostimpossibleforittolosejobs.UptonowIhavechattedwithmyparentsforthreetime.Tomydisappointment,Iwasfailedtopersuadethem.NowIamconfusingabouthowtosolvetheproblem.15.（2020届陕西省铜川市高三第二次模拟）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（╲）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Abouthowtokeephealthy,I’dliketooffermyadvices.Asweknow,weteenagersaregoingthrougharapidgrowthwhichneedstobesupportbyahealthyandbalanceddiet.Thus,weneedavarietyoffoodbutcutoutthefoodrichinsugarorfat.However,weshouldtakephysicalexerciseregular.Forexample,wecanplaybasketballortakewalkafterschool.Haveenoughsleepisofgreatimportance.Therefore,youshouldhaveatleasteighthoursofsleepeverydayandnotstayeduptoolate.Onlyinthiswaythatcanwekeepfit.16.（2020届陕西宜川中学高三第三次模拟）假定英语课上老师要求同桌中间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：把缺词处叫个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分°Lastyear,myfriendandIwenttovisittheYellowMountain.Wecarriedtwobackpacks,thatturnedouttobeprettyheavierforthehike.Iwasnotanexperiencinghikerandthoseendlessstepsmakemewanttoreturntothesafeandcomfortableground.Butmyfriendencouragedmegreat."Look,thetopiscomingcloserandcloser.Wearealmostthere."Ipulledmetogetherandkeptgoing.Afterthree-hourexhaustinghike,andwithwonderfulsceneriesontheway,wegottothetopfinally.Forourpleasure,wealsofoundahotelthatlookedverymuchinviting.17．（2020届湖南省衡阳市高三毕业班联考）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者（从第11处起）不计分。Howiseverythinggoing?IcanstillrememberthedayswhenwespenttogetherinChina.WhenyouwentbacktoAmericalastmonth,youwantmetogetaChinesenamestampmakingforyou,whichisasymboloftraditionalChineseculture.NowI’msuchgladtotellyouI’vealreadyfindastampcraftsman.HeisveryexperiencedskilledinmakingChinesetraditionalnamestamp.Tomakeastampthatsuityoubest,I’veattachedsomepicturesofvarioustypesofcharacters,designsandmaterialsfortheemail.Lookingforwardtoyoureply.