2022年新高考英语读后续写真题解析09 2017年6月浙江卷（骑行遇狼脱险）

读后续写真题2017年6月浙江卷:骑行遇狼脱险 1试题再现2试题分析3写作思路4范文赏析目录CONTENTS 2017试题再现历年高考英语读后续写真题分析01 Onabright,warmJulyafternoon,MacHollan,aprimaryschoolteacher,wascyclingfromhishometoAlaskawithhisfriends.Oneofhisfriendshadstoppedtomakeabicyclerepair,buttheyhadencouragedMactocarryon,andtheywouldcatchupwithhimsoon.AsMacpedaled(骑行)alongalone,hethoughtfondlyofhiswifeandtwoyoungdaughtersathome.Hehopedtoshowthemthisbeautifulplacesomeday.ThenMacheardquickandloudbreathingbehindhim.“Man,that’sabigdog!”hethought.Butwhenhelookedtotheside,hesawinstantlythatitwasn’tadogatall,butawolf,quicklycatchingupwithhim.Mac’sheartjumped.Hefoundouthiscanofbearspray.Withonehandonthebars,hefiredthesprayatthewolf.Abrightredcloudenvelopedtheanimal,andtoMac’srelief,itfellback,shakingitshead.Butaminutelater,itwasbyhissideagain.ThenitattackedthebackofMac’sbike,tearingopenhistentbag.Hefiredatthewolfasecondtime,andagain,itfellbackonlytoquicklyrestartthechase(追赶).Macwaspedalinghardnow.Hewavedandyelledatpassingcarsbutwascarefulnottoslowdown.Hesawasteepuphillclimbbeforehim.Heknewthatoncehehitthehill,he’dbeeasycaughtupandthewolf’steethwouldbetearingintohisflesh.Atthismoment,PaulandBeckyweredrivingtheircarontheirwaytoAlaska.Theydidn’tthinkmuchofitwhentheysawtwocyclistsrepairingtheirbikeonthesideoftheroad.Abitlater,theyspottedwhatthey,too,assumedwasadogrunningalongsideamanonabike.Astheygotcloser,theyrealizedthatthedogwasawolf.Macheardalargevehiclebehindhim.Hepulledinfrontofitasthewolfwascatchingupfast,justadozenyardsawaynow.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim.__________________________________________________________________________Afewminuteslater,theothertwocyclistsarrived.___________________________________________________________________阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 2017试题分析历年高考英语读后续写真题分析02 Onabright,warmJulyafternoon,MacHollan,aprimaryschoolteacher,wascyclingfromhishometoAlaskawithhisfriends.Oneofhisfriendshadstoppedtomakeabicyclerepair,buttheyhadencouragedMactocarryon,andtheywouldcatchupwithhimsoon.AsMacpedaled(骑行)alongalone,hethoughtfondlyofhiswifeandtwoyoungdaughtersathome.Hehopedtoshowthemthisbeautifulplacesomeday.原文分析时间：7月的下午事件：Mac的同伴要修自行车，Mac一个人独自骑车回家。 ThenMacheardquickandloudbreathingbehindhim.“Man,that'sabigdog!”hethought.Butwhenhelookedtotheside,hesawinstantlythatitwasn'tadogatall,butawolf,quicklycatchingupwithhim.Mac'sheartjumped.Hefoundouthiscanofbearspray.Withonehandonthebars,hefiredthesprayatthewolf.Abrightredcloudenvelopedtheanimal,andtoMac'srelief,itfellback,shakingitshead.Butaminutelater,itwasbyhissideagain.ThenitattackedthebackofMac'sbike,tearingopenhistentbag.Hefiredatthewolfasecondtime,andagain,itfellbackonlytoquicklyrestartthechase（追赶）。原文分析故事的发生：骑行途中遇到了狼。情绪描写，环境描写以及后面的董总描写都突出了Mac害怕以及和狼勇敢地作斗争的情形。环境描写 Macwaspedalinghardnow.Hewavedandyelledatpassingcarsbutwascarefulnottoshowdown.Hesawasteepuphillclimbbeforehim.Heknewthatoncehehitthehill,he'dbeeasycaughtupandthewolf'steethwouldbetearingintohisflesh.Atthismoment,PaulandBeekyweredrivingtheircarontheirwaytoAlaska.Theydidn'tthinkmuchofitwhentheysawtwocyclistsrepairingtheirbikeonthesideoftheroad.Abitlater,theyspottedwhatthey,too,assumedwasadogrunningalongsideamanonabike.Astheygotcloser,theyrealizedthatthedogwasawolf.Macheardalargevehiclebehindhim.Hepulledinfrontofitasthewolfwascatchingupfast,justadozenyardsawaynow.原文分析Mac继续和狼作斗争。故事的转折：Mac能否成功逃脱？ Q1:WhowasMaccyclingwith?Q4:WhodidMacrecallwhenhewascyclingalone?Q3:Whathappenedatthecriticalmoment?Q5:WhatdidMacdotostopthewolffromchasing?Q2:WhydidMacseparatefromhisfriends?Twoofhisfriends.Oneofhisfriends’bicyclewasbroken.Theystoppedtorepairit.Hiswifeandtwoyoungdaughters.Hefiredthebearspray.PaulandBeckydrovebyandnoticedMac.根据短文内容，回答下列问题。 阅读完材料，试着完成下面的故事山吧！Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim…1.OpeningMaccycledtoAlaskawithhisfriendsonawarmJulyafternoon.Maccarriedonwithhisroadtripwhilehistwofriendsstoppedtomakeabicyclerepair.Macfiredsprayatthechasingwolfbutdidn’tstopit.Atthecriticalmomentheheardalargevehiclebehindhim.Afewminuteslater,theothertwocyclistsarrived…2.Build-up3.Climax4.Resolution5.Ending ? MacwascyclingfromhometoAlaskawithhisfriends.Macfoughtagainstthewolftwicebutoflittlehelp.Macheardalargevehiclebehindhimandhepulledinfrontofit.Macsensedhewaschasedbyawolf.PaulandBeckydrovebyandwitnessedMac’sdesperatesituation.?Mactriedtoescape,onlytomeetasteepuphillclimb.Macpedaledalongalone,enjoyingthebreath-takingscenery. 2017写作思路历年高考英语读后续写真题分析03 Para1:Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim.Para2：Afewminuteslater,theothertwocyclistsarrived.Q1:Whatmighthappenassoonasthecarstopped?DidMacrushtogetintothecar?Didhemakeiteasily?Ordidsomeonegetoutofthecar?Q3:WhatdidMacdoonseeinghisfriends(theothertwocyclists)?Whatcameinsightofhisfriendsaftertheyarrived?原文画线单词可用于回答上述哪个问题？其中动词适用于哪一段情节？人物会产生怎样的互动？Q2:Howdidthewolfreacttowhatjusthappened?Diditgiveupandrunaway?Q4:WhatwereMac’sfeelingsaftertheincident?Didheandhisfriendscontinuetheircyclingtrip?Whatcanbeaproperending?研读两段给出句，想想它们给我们提供了哪些续写线索？ Paragraph1：Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim._______________________________________________________________________Paragraph2：Afewminuteslater,theothertwocyclistsarrived._______________________________________________________________________原文分析本段应该是Mac跳上车逃脱狼的追捕的过程。表明上一段落狼可能没有离开，这一段应该续写两个男孩加入一起对抗狼。 Paragraph1Paragraph1：Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim.Macjumpedoffhisbicycle.Hewenttothecar.Thewolfcaughtup.Macusedsprayandrantothecarandclimbedin. Paragraph2Paragraph2：Afewminuteslater,theothertwocyclistsarrived.Theywereshocked.Theythrowmeattothewolf.Thewolfranintothewoods.Theyeventuallygetridofthewolf. 句子润色1.麦克跳下自行车，冲向车门。Macjumpedoffhisbicycleandrushedtothedoorofthecar.rushedtothedoorofthecar 句子润色2.但麦克还没来得及开门，狼就追上了，扑了上去。ButbeforeMaccouldopenthedoor,thewolfhadcaughtupandjumpedtoattack.Catchupjumpedtoattack 句子润色3.幸运的是，魔法喷雾第三次救了麦克。Luckily,themagicspraysavedMacathirdtime. 句子润色4.看到狼退后，保罗迅速打开车门，受惊的人很快爬上车，重重地关上身后的车门。Seeingthewolfbackoff,Paulquicklyunlockedthedoor,andthefrightenedmanclimbedintothecarinnotime,shuttingthedoorbehindhimheavily.unlockedthedoorclimbedintothecarinnotime 句子润色5.贝西从后窗往外看，看见狼站在麦克的自行车上，好像那是一场杀戮。BechylookedoutofthebackwindowandsawthewolfstandingoverMac’sbicycleasifitwereakill.lookedoutofthebackwindowasifitwereakill 句子润色6.不久，那只动物跑了。Soonafter,theanimalranoff.Soonafter 句子润色7.他们对所见的感到震惊，于是加入保罗的行列。TheywereshockedatwhattheysawandjoinedPaul.Beshockedat 句子润色8.麦家的一个朋友挑出一些生肉扔给了狼。OneofMacsfriendspickedoutsomerawmeatandthrewittothewolf.Pickout 句子润色9.狼对得到的东西很满意，就跑进了树林。Thewolfwassatisfiedwithwhathegot,andheranintothewoods.Satisfiedwithwhathegot,thewolfranintothewoods.句式升级 句子润色10.麦克感谢保罗和贝基，“你停下来救我，我真是太感谢你了，我还活着，这都归功于你。”MacthankedPaulandBecky,“HowgratefulIamthatyoustoppedtosavemeandIoweittoyouthatI’mstillalive.”Ownto 句子润色11.由于麦克受伤，这三个人不得不放弃剩下的旅程回家。BecauseMacwasinjured,thethreemenhadtogiveuptherestoftheirjourneyandreturnedhome.AsMacgotinjured,thethreemenhadtogiveuptherestoftheirjourneyandreturnedhome.therestoftheirjourney词汇升级 2017范文赏析历年高考英语读后续写真题分析04 Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim.Mac（跳下）hisbikeand（冲向）thebackdoorofthecar.Itwaslocked.He（绕到）tothepassengerdoor,butitwaslocked,too,sohebeganto（爬进）theopenwindow.Paulquickly（锁上）thedoor,andthefrightenedman（跳进去）,（狠狠关上）thedoorbehindhim.BeckylookedoutthebackwindowandsawthewolfstandingoverMac’sbikeasifitwereakill.Shortlyafter,theanimal（跑掉）.Afewminuteslater,theothertwocyclistsarrived.Mac（下车）thecarand（拥抱）hisfriends.“Awolfchasedme.IthoughtIwasgoingtodie,”Mactoldthem.“IthoughtIwouldneverseemywifeandmylovelydaughtersagain.”After（告别）toPaulandBecky,Mac（捡起）hisbicycle,andthethreemen（继续）theirroadtrip,agreeingtokeepinoneanother’ssightline.Afewmiles’（踩踏板）downtheroad,Mac（靠边停车）andcried.“Therestofthetripwasamazing,butIhadtoletthatemotionout.”根据汉语提示补充范文中的动词或短语动词，使情节连贯，衔接合理。 Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim.Macjumpedoffhisbikeanddashedforthebackdoorofthecar.Itwaslocked.Heranaroundtothepassengerdoor,butitwaslocked,too,sohebegantoclimbthroughtheopenwindow.Paulquicklyunlockedthedoor,andthefrightenedmandivedin,slammingthedoorbehindhim.BeckylookedoutthebackwindowandsawthewolfstandingoverMac’sbikeasifitwereakill.Shortlyafter,theanimalranoff.Afewminuteslater,theothertwocyclistsarrived.Macemergedfromthecarandhuggedhisfriends.“Awolfchasedme.IthoughtIwasgoingtodie,”Mactoldthem.“IthoughtIwouldneverseemywifeandmylovelydaughtersagain.”AftersayinggoodbyetoPaulandBecky,Macretrievedhisbicycle,andthethreemenresumedtheirroadtrip,agreeingtokeepinoneanother’ssightline.Afewmiles’pedalingdowntheroad,Macpulledoverandcried.“Therestofthetripwasamazing,butIhadtoletthatemotionout.”找出回答“首句精研”中问题的句子，注意题目中画线单词出现的语境。 范文赏析——生动的语言Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim.Macjumpedoffhisbikeanddashedforthebackdoorofthecar.Itwaslocked.Heranaroundtothepassengerdoor,butitwaslocked,too,sohebegantoclimbthroughtheopenwindow.Paulquicklyunlockedthedoor,andthefrightenedmandivedin,slammingthedoorbehindhim.BeckylookedoutthebackwindowandsawthewolfstandingoverMac’sbikeasifitwereakill.Shortlyafter,theanimalranoff.Afewminuteslater,theothertwocyclistsarrived.Macemergedfromthecarandhuggedhisfriends.“Awolfchasedme.IthoughtIwasgoingtodie,”Mactoldthem.“IthoughtIwouldneverseemywifeandmylovelydaughtersagain.”AftersayinggoodbyetoPaulandBecky,Macretrievedhisbicycle,andthethreemenresumedtheirroadtrip,agreeingtokeepinoneanother’ssightline.Afewmiles’pedalingdowntheroad,Macpulledoverandcried.“Therestofthetripwasamazing,butIhadtoletthatemotionout.”与前文内容呼应 范文赏析——生动的语言Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim.Macjumpedoffhisbikeanddashedforthebackdoorofthecar.Itwaslocked.Heranaroundtothepassengerdoor,butitwaslocked,too,sohebegantoclimbthroughtheopenwindow.Paulquicklyunlockedthedoor,andthefrightenedmandivedin,slammingthedoorbehindhim.BeckylookedoutthebackwindowandsawthewolfstandingoverMac’sbikeasifitwereakill.Shortlyafter,theanimalranoff.Afewminuteslater,theothertwocyclistsarrived.Macemergedfromthecarandhuggedhisfriends.“Awolfchasedme.IthoughtIwasgoingtodie,”Mactoldthem.“IthoughtIwouldneverseemywifeandmylovelydaughtersagain.”AftersayinggoodbyetoPaulandBecky,Macretrievedhisbicycle,andthethreemenresumedtheirroadtrip,agreeingtokeepinoneanother’ssightline.Afewmiles’pedalingdowntheroad,Macpulledoverandcried.“Therestofthetripwasamazing,butIhadtoletthatemotionout.”精彩闪现连续使用很急的动词生动表现Mac的求生欲望伴随状语时间状语 jumpoffhisbikedashforclimbthroughtheopenwindowdiveinshortlyafterrunoffkeepinoneanother’ssightlinepullovercarryoncatchupwithtosb.’srelieftearintohisflesh追上继续撕烂他的皮肉让人感到欣慰的是冲向跳进去不久之后从他的自行车上跳下来在同伴的视线范围内从开着的窗户爬进去让人靠边停车跑开检测一下你对原材料和范文的亮点语块掌握了吗？ OutofthecarcamePaulandBecky.Macgotoffthebicycleandjumpedintothecar.Onemantookoutametalbarfromthecaratonceandstartedtofightwiththewolf.Thewolfjumpedup,andrushedtowardsoneofthem,butwasbeatenback.Seeingthatitcouldn’twin,thewolfrandownthehill.Wanderingforawhile,thewolfleft.Atthesightofthescene,theybecameawareofwhathadhappened.Theywereshockedatwhattheysaw,abrokenbicycleandworn-outMac.Macexplainedwhathappenedtohimandintroducedhisnewfriendstothem.Meanwhile,theyexpressedtheirgreatregretforMacandthankedPaulandBecky.TheyaskedwhetherMachadbeeninjuredandcomfortedtheircompanion.“Iwouldbecaughtbythewolfwithoutyourhelp,”Macsaidinagratefulvoice.阅读下面的补充语料，积累一些续写素材吧！ THANKYOU