2022年新高考英语读后续写突破9 读后续写：脱离困境型（故事构造七绝招）

教学课件高考英语读后续写脱离困境型（故事构造“七大绝招”） 第一绝招：环境描写（恶劣） ——波涛汹涌：1.AsIfloatedon,ahugewave(一个巨浪)whistled(呼啸而来)andapproachedus.2.Thebigwindroaredthroughourears(在耳边咆哮),andwewerepushedawayfromtheshorefartherandfarther.3.Allmysensestoldmethatabigwavewasabouttocome.(即将来临)4.Apowerful-looking(看似猛烈的)wavewascomingtowardsus. (靠近我们) ——鲨鱼的可怕：Itwasashark,amassivesharkthatwasswimmingaround,notfarawayfromher.Theshark’sjawsopenedwide,showingrowsofsharpteeth. ——陆地上的水：Splashingraindropshitthewindshieldfranticallyandtheskieswereoverhungwithablanketofgrey,.雨滴疯狂地打在挡风玻璃上，天空笼罩在一片灰色之中。Thewaterkeptrising,asifitwould engulf mealive.水不停地涨，仿佛要把我活吞下去。Unfortunately,thewaterpouredinandcreptuponmywaist.在水里行走（不可能rush,dash） ——推荐句型：1.Thewindblows/whistles/howls/picksup/whipsthroughsth/sweepsacrosssth.风刮/飕飕的刮/呼啸而过/愈刮愈大/刮过……/掠过……2.Theyweregetting drenchedbyicywater.他们被冰冷的水浇透了。3.Theheavyrainwasviolently beating againstthewindow.大雨疯狂地击打窗户。4.Therain drummed ontheroofofthebuilding.雨不停地击打着房预。5.Thefuriousstormis grumbling outside.狂风暴雨在室外呼啸着。6.Theicywindstarted howling, stinging myface.寒风开始咆哮，刺痛了我的脸。 ——推荐句型：7. Aflashof lightning litup thewholesky.一道闪电点亮了整个天空。8.Thesharp claps ofthunder pierced thequietnight.声声清脆的雷声划破了宁静的夜晚。9.Theboltoflightning stabs theearth.一道闪电划过天空。10.天空和海洋融为一体|theskyandtheocean meltinto eachother 第二绝招：情绪描写（绝望、恐惧+挣扎） ——疲倦/寒冷1.Saltstinging(刺痛)myeyes,IcouldhardlytellhowlongIcouldholdon.2.Timepassingus,tiredness engulfed (包围了)uswithmyfeet stiff/numb (僵硬/麻木)and shivering.3.Exhaustedaswewere (尽管很累),wedidn’tstop.Grittingourteeth,wekeptswimming.4. Afterwhatseemedacentury,Ifelt extremelyfatigued (非常累)whileswimminghardto keep myself afloat(漂浮着的). ——疲倦/寒冷5.Hewas huddled intohiscoat,hisface bluewithcold.他缩进大衣里，冷得脸都发紫了。6. Fingers numbed bythe chilly water,throatchokedbyicywind,Ifeltonthevergeofcollapsing.7.Sheclaspedthebabytoherbosominthe biting/cutting/piercing/sharp wind.在刺骨的寒风里，她把孩子紧紧地抱在胸前。8.Theicywindstartedhowling, cuttingmyfacelikeasharpknife/needles.寒风开始咆哮，像锋利的小刀/针一样刺痛了我的脸。9.Herteethwere chattering withcold.她冷得牙齿直打颤。 ——害怕1.Itookadeepbreathand swallowedhard (害怕地咽了口吐沫).2.Achillfeelingcreptupherspine.3. Exhaustedandcold,thethoughtthatwemightdiehereflashedacrossmymind,whichmademe quiverwithanuncontrollableterror/horror/fright (难以控制地发抖).4.Lookingatthe vast sea,Ifeltasenseoffear surgingthroughmywholebody.(在身体涌动) ——害怕5.Astimetickedby,fear creptuponmyheart(爬上我心头)andIcouldhardlytellhowlongIcould ploughon (前行).6. Thethoughtofhopelessness sentshiversdownmyspine(让我后脊背发凉).7. Iwas floodedwithasenseofhorror(被恐惧感淹没).8.Seeingthis,Ifeltmyfear growing/increasing(剧增)inside.9.Ifelt awaveofanxiety(一阵焦虑) sweptovermybody (袭来).10.Tearsoffrustrationandhorrorgushingfrommyeyes,IfeltIhadsunkintohopelessness.11.Asenseofterrorsweepingthroughmybody,Ishoutedinpanic,“Help!Help!” ——描写挣扎努力1.Tomlookedthoughtful(若有所思)2.“Weneedtothinkoutaway!”I muttered (喃喃自语),scratchingmyhead(绞尽脑汁)3....,Weswamtoothandnail(全力以赴地).4.Wesparednoeffortto(不遗余力地)toswimtowardstheshore.5.Weexchangedadeterminedlook(互换了坚定的神情),thenploughedon(继续前行)atanincrediblespeed(难以置信的速度). 第三绝招：转机描写描写声音传来或看见了什么 1.A distant sound reachedourears.(传入耳朵)2.Justthen,mymindraced–whynotcall911andJoe?3.Thesoundoftheboat echoedinourears.(在我们耳内回响)4.Atthatmoment,a shrillwhistle(汽笛声)ripped theair(划破天空).5.Whenwewereatalossofwhattodo,therewere rasping (刺耳的) shouts(喊叫声)risingfromthedistance (从远处升起). 6.Jasonsawsomethingflickerinthedistance.“Lights!Iseelights!”Jasonshoutedout.7.Insheerdesperation(在绝望中),Ifinallycaughtsightofsomeboatswithlifeguardsonthemheadingtowardsus inthedistance.8.Afteralongtime,alightspotappearedinthedistance!Wewavedourhandsandyelledoutforhelp. 第四绝招：情绪描写（希望+努力） ——描写如释重负1. Asifclutchingatstraws, Idialedthenumberagainandagain.2.Hearingthe comforting news,I couldn'thelprestrainingmyexcitement.(情难自抑)3. Hiswordsreignitedtheflameofhopeinmyheart4.Onhearingthegoodnews,TomandI sighedingreatrelief(如释重负地叹了口气), grinningmerrilyat eachother. ——描写如释重负5.Smilinginrelief (如释重负地微笑),I feltarushofpride(感到一阵自豪).6. Overjoyed(狂喜)toseeaboatcomingtoourrescue,TomandI breathedasighofrelief(如释重负地松了口气)7.Stifffromkeepinginonepositionforhours,theyslowlyunfoldedtheirbodies. 第五绝招：脱险描写 1.Theboatfinallyreachedusandtookallofusbacktotheshore.船终于到达了我们身边，把我们所有人都带回了岸边。2.Yelling atthetopofhislung,Joetriedtosoothemeandconvincemethatitwasthebestwaytoescapethedanger.乔大声大叫，试图安慰我，让我相信这是逃离危险的最好方法。 第六绝招：情绪描写（感恩+高兴） 1.Whenwepicturedwhatthemerryscenewouldbe,relieflayinmyheartandhappinesswaswrittenonmyface.当我们想象欢乐的场景是什么时，我心中有解脱，幸福写在我的脸上。2.Sighinginrelief,Icouldn’tstopthinkingaboutthewholeevent.Iknewtheywouldhavediediftheyhadbeenintheseaforanylonger.我如释重负，不停地想整个事件。我知道如果他们再在海里，就会死了。 第七绝招：主旨描写 1.Itoccurredtomethathelpingotherswaspricelessandeveryoneshouldbealifeguard.我突然想到，帮助别人是无价的，每个人都应该是一个救生员。2.Forthefirsttimesince…,one’semotionsgotthebestofhimandtearstrickleddownhischeeks.这是...，的情绪第一次充分利用他，眼泪从他的脸颊上滴下来。3.OnlythendidIrealizethatitwasJoewhohadbeencaringformethroughthickandthin.直到那时，我才意识到是乔一直在照顾我。 4. Sobbinginrelief, I wasoverwhelmedbywavesofguiltandremorse.Imurmuredsorry,reflectingthatIshouldhavetakenhiswarningseriously.我如释重负，被内疚和悔恨所淹没。我喃喃地说，想着我应该认真对待他的警告。5.Allthistookonlyafewminutes,butBettywouldneverforgetthefrighteningexperience.这一切只花了几分钟，但贝蒂永远不会忘记那段可怕的经历。