Unit2 Healthyeating 主题:人与自我 子话题:健康生活,饮食,平衡饮食和营养 对应教材:必修3 Unit2 Healthyeating;必修5 Unit5 Firstaid;选修6 Unit3 Ahealthylife;选修7 Unit1 Livingwell重点单词·巧记Ⅰ.核心单词1.diet n.&vi.日常饮食;节食2.slimvi.&adj.变细;减肥;苗条的;纤细的3.lien.&vi.谎话;谎言;说谎4.customern.顾客;消费者5.consultvt.咨询;请教;商量;查阅6.sighvi.叹息;叹气n.叹息;叹息声7.debtn.债;债务8.hostessn.女主人;女主持人9.discountn.折扣10.fryvt.&vi.油煎;油炸11.rawadj.生的;未加工的Ⅱ.拓展单词1.balancen.天平;平衡vt.平衡;权衡→balancedadj.均衡的2.curiosityn.好奇心→curiousadj.好奇的→curiouslyadv.好奇地3.weaknessn.缺点;虚弱;弱点→weakadj.虚弱的4.strengthn.强项;长处;力量→strengthenvt.加强;巩固→strongadj.强壮的;坚强的5.limitvt.限制;限定n.界限;限度→limitedadj.有限的→limitationn.限制6.benefitn.利益;好处vt.&vi.有益于;有助于;受益→beneficialadj.有益的7.combinevt.&vi.(使)联合;(使)结合→combinationn.结合;联合核心短语·闪记1.loseweight 体重减轻;减肥
2.getawaywith受到从轻发落,(做坏事)不受惩罚 3.win...back赢回;重新获得4.earnone’sliving谋生 5.indebt欠债 6.cutdown削减;删节 7.beforelong不久以后 8.putonweight增加体重 9.glareat怒目而视 10.throwaway扔掉;丢弃 11.tellalie说谎 12.oughtto应当;应该 经典句式·速记1.【句型公式】:否定词与比较级连用表示最高级含义“Nothingcouldbebetter,”hethought. 他想:“再没有比这些更好吃的了。2.【句型公式】:neither...nor...既不……也不……Accordingtomyresearch,neitheryourrestaurantnormineoffersabalanceddiet. 根据我的研究,你我两家餐馆所提供的都不是均衡膳食。1.“in+n.”表示“处于……之中”①indebt 欠债②introuble在困境中③indanger处于危险中④inprogress正在进展中⑤insurprise吃惊地⑥infashion正在流行2.“in+n.+of”短语小结①inmemoryof纪念;追念②infavorof赞同;支持③inhonorof向……表示敬意;为纪念……
④intermsof就……而言⑤inneedof需要3.“v.+down”短语荟萃①cutdown 削减;删节②bringdown降低③slowdown慢下来④breakdown出故障;身体累垮⑤turndown拒绝;关小⑥settledown定居;平静下来⑦cooldown冷静下来Ⅰ.细品味经典文章Thenumberoftheconsumersofthefastfooddeliveryservicehasincreasedsteadilyfrom2011to2018.However,theremayexistsomepotentialproblemswiththenewindustry.Anumberoffactorscontributetotheincrease.Notonlycangoodqualityandreasonablepricesoffreshfoodbeguaranteedtosomeextentbuttheservicecanalsobenefitthosewhoaretoobusytopreparemealsthemselves.What’smore,thedevelopmentoftheInternethasmadeiteasytodecideontheirfavoritefoodandplaceorders,whichisbothtime-savingandeconomical.Asaconsumer,I’mconvincedthefastfooddeliveryservicewillwitnessaconstantriseinthenearfuture.Weconsumersshouldbecarefultochoosethoserestaurantswhosequalityoffoodisguaranteed.Andfastfoodenterprisesshouldactivelytakehiddenproblemsintoaccountandprovidequalityservice.Ⅱ.按要求完成任务1.根据提示写出下列饮食话题词块。①buildupone’sbody 增强体质 ②keepfit/healthy保持健康
③takeanactivepartinphysicalexercise 积极参加体育锻炼④takeregularexercise定期锻炼 ⑤live/leadahealthylife过健康的生活 ⑥stayawayfromjunkfood远离垃圾食品 ⑦haveenoughsleep拥有充足的睡眠 ⑧physicalandmentalhealth身心健康 ⑨raisetheawarenessoffoodsafety提高食品安全意识 ⑩healthylifestyle健康的生活方式 2.翻译最后一段。作为一个消费者,我相信在不久的将来,快餐外卖服务将见证一个持续的增长。我们消费者应该谨慎选择那些食物质量有保证的餐馆。快餐企业应积极考虑隐患,提供优质服务。Ⅰ.重点词汇1.balancen.天平;平衡 vt.平衡;权衡【教材原句】Whatwillhappentoyouifyoudon’teatabalanceddiet?(P9)如果你饮食不均衡,你会怎么样?【词块必记】(1)keepthebalanceofnature 保持生态平衡keepone’sbalance保持平衡loseone’sbalance失去平衡balanceAagainstB权衡/比较A和B(2)balancedadj.均衡的keepabalanceddiet保持均衡的饮食【熟词生义】ImustcheckmybankbalancebeforeIdecidetobuythecar.(账户余额)【语境速测】单句语法填空①Beforemakingthefinaldecision,you’dbetterbalancetheadvantagesagainst
thedisadvantages.②Mysuggestionisthatyoushouldtrytobalance(balance)yourdietbyeatingmorefruitandlessmeat. ③You’dbetterkeepabalanced(balance)dietforthebenefitofyourhealth.【写作金句】Youareworkingtoohard.You’dbetterkeepabalancebetweenworkandrelaxation.你太努力工作了,你最好在工作和放松之间保持平衡。2.liev.说谎;躺下;位于 n.谎言;谎话【典型例句】Aliewhichishalfatruthisevertheblackestoflies.真假参半的谎言最险恶。【词块必记】(1)tellalie/lies(tosb.) (向某人)撒谎;说谎话awhitelie一个善意的谎言(2)lietosb.向某人撒谎liein位于;在于liedown躺下【易混辨析】单词词义过去式过去分词现在分词lie说谎liedliedlyinglie躺下;位于laylainlyinglay放置;下蛋laidlaidlaying【语境速测】单句语法填空①Mymotherwon’thavemelying(lie)tohernomatterwhathappens.②Thesurvivorslay(lie)onthebeach,exhaustedandshocked.③Themomentthebellrang,helaid(lay)thebookandrushedoutoftheclassroom.④Wemustbeclearaboutwheretheresponsibilitylies(lie).【写作金句】
Thereisnodoubtthatthiscandidate’sadvantageliesinhisabilitytocommunicatewithforeignersinEnglish.毫无疑问,这个候选人的优势在于他用英语和外国人交流的能力。3.limitvt.限制;限定n.界限;限度【教材原句】Idon’twanttoupsetyou,butIfoundyourmenusolimitedthatIstoppedworryingandstartedadvertisingthebenefitsofmyfood.(P14)我不想让你心烦,不过我发现你菜谱上的菜太少了,所以我也就不着急了,我也开始宣传我的食物的好处。【词块必记】(1)limit...to... 把……限制在……内(2)beyondthelimit超过限度withinthelimitsof在……范围内setalimittosth.对……规定限度thereisa/nolimitto对……是有限的/无限的【语境速测】单句语法填空①Setalimittothenumberoftasksyoutakeoneachdayandsticktoit.②Hewasborninapoorfamily,andonlyreceivedlimited(limit)educationinhischildhood.③Lifeislimited(limit),butthereisnolimittoservingthepeople.【写作金句】Thelengthofthearticleshouldbelimitedto400wordsorso.文章的长度应限制在400词左右。4.benefitn.好处;利益;优势 vt.&vi.有益于;有助于;受益【典型例句】Thecreationofnewplaygroundswillbenefitthelocalchildren.新游戏场的建立将有益于当地的儿童。【词块必记】(1)benefitfrom/by... 从……中受益;得益于……
(2)forthebenefitof为了……的利益(3)beneficialadj.有益的;有利的bebeneficialto...对……有益;有益于(to为介词)【语境速测】一句多译了解中国的餐桌礼仪对你很有益。①HavingagoodknowledgeoftablemannersofChinawillbenefityougreatly.(benefitvt.) ②HavingagoodknowledgeoftablemannersofChinawillbeofgreatbenefittoyou.(benefitn.) ③HavingagoodknowledgeoftablemannersofChinawillbeverybeneficialtoyou.(beneficialadj.) 5.combinevt.&vi.(使)联合;(使)结合【典型例句】Thecombinedeffectsofthewarandthedroughtresultedinfamine.战争和干旱的双重因素,导致了饥荒。【词块必记】(1)combine...with/and... 把……与……结合起来combinetodosth.联合起来做某事(2)combinationn.结合;联合;组合;联合体;结合物incombination(with)(与……)联合/结合【语境速测】单句语法填空①Thestudyoftraditionsshouldbecombined(combine)withpractice.②Itwasseveralfactorsthatcombinedtoharm(harm)ourfriendship.③Thefirmisworkingonanewproductincombinationwithseveraloverseaspartners.【写作金句】Ifhecancombinehisabilitywith/andhardwork,heshouldbeverysuccessful.如果他能把自己的才能和勤奋结合起来,他应该会非常成功的。Ⅱ.核心短语
6.getawaywith受到从轻发落;(做坏事)不受惩罚【教材原句】HecouldnothaveYongHuigettingawaywithtellingpeoplelies!(P10)他可不能让雍慧骗人却不受到惩罚!【词块必记】getaway(from) (从……)脱离;摆脱(……)getalong/onwith与……相处;进展getdownto(doing)sth.开始认真地做某事getover克服(困难);从……中恢复过来getthrough完成;接通电话;通过getacross(tosb.)(向某人)解释清楚;使(某人)了解【语境速测】 用get的相关短语填空①EverynowandthenIliketospendafewdaysinthecountrytogetawayfromthenoiseandpollutionofLondon. ②Iranghimseveraltimesthismorningbutcouldnotgetthroughtohim. ③Ifwecangetoverpresentdifficulties,theneverythingshouldbeallright. ④Ittookalongtimetogetacrosstotheworkersthewaythemachineworked. 7.cutdown削减;删节;减少;砍倒;降低;杀死【典型例句】①Hecutdownoncoffeeandcigarettes,andateabalanceddiet.他喝咖啡和吸烟都比以前少了,饮食也均衡了。②Asisknowntous,smokingisharmfultoourhealth.You’dbetterquitsmokingoratleastcutdowntheamountofsmoking.众所周知,吸烟对我们的健康有害,你最好戒烟或者至少减少吸烟量。【词块必记】cutin 插话;(马达或发动机)发动cutup切碎;切开cutout删除;(马达或发动机)突然熄火
cutoff切断;中止;隔绝【语境速测】写出下列句中cutdown的含义①Everyoneofuscanmakeagreatefforttocutdowntheuseofenergyinourcountry.(减少;削减)②Immediateactionshouldbetaken,likestoppingcuttingdowntrees,tobettertheenvironment.(砍倒)③Hunger,coldandillnesshavecutdownmanyofthevillagers.(杀死)用cut的相关短语填空④I’dfeelverycutoffifIdidn’tknowwhatwashappeningintheworld. ⑤Cutupthecarrotsbeforeyouputthemintothepot. ⑥Shekeptcuttinginonourconversation,whichmadeusveryangry. Ⅲ.经典句式8.“Nothingcouldbebetter,”hethought.“没有什么比这些更好的了,”他想。 【典型例句】①Yourstoryisperfect;I’veneverheardabetteronebefore.你的故事太完美了,我之前从来没有听过比这更好的故事。②Youcanneverbetoocarefulwhilecrossingthestreet.过马路时,你越小心越好。【句型公式】否定词与比较级连用表示最高级含义【语境速测】完成句子①Andifyouarefree,nothingwillbebetter(没有什么更好的了)ifyoucancometoChinatoattendatraditionalwedding. ②AsfarasI’mconcerned,nothingismoreimportantthanstudy(没有什么比学习更重要的了). 【备选要点】1.strengthn.[C]长处;强项[U]力量;体力【典型例句】Besides,Chinesehasalwaysbeenmystrengthamongallthesubjects.此外,中文一直是我所有课程中的强项。【词块必记】
(1)buildupone’sstrength/body 强身健体strengthsandweaknesses优点和缺点Thestrengthof...isthat...……的优点是……(2)strengthenvt.&vi.加强;巩固【名师点津】表示“优点和缺点”时,strength,weakness常用复数形式。【语境速测】单句语法填空①Asagoodteacher,youshouldknowyourstudents’strengths(strength)andweaknesses.②Oneideaisthatsleephelpsusstrengthen(strong)newmemories.③Thestrengthofridingbikesisthatitcanbuildupourstrength.完成句子④Theabilitytokeepcalmisoneofhisstrengths. 保持冷静是他的优点之一。2.can’thavesb.doingsth.不允许某人做某事【典型例句】Ican’thaveyousayingtoyourparentsthisway.我不能容忍你如此对你父母讲话。【词块必记】(1)havesb.doingsth.意为“允许某人做某事”时,常用于否定句中;意为“让某人一直做某事”时,强调动作的持续性(2)havesb.dosth.让某人做某事(3)havesth.done让/叫别人做某事;遭遇某种(不幸的)事情;使某事完成(4)havesth.todo有事情要做(不定式作定语)【语境速测】单句语法填空①Youcan’thaveyourchildrenrunning(run)aroundinthehouse.②Thereisnoneedtoworryabout.IwillhaveTompick(pick)youupattheairport.③Iintendedtotakeupapart-timejob,throughwhichIcanhavemyhorizonsbroadened
(broaden).④Iwaswatchingtheclockallthroughthemeeting,asIhadatraintocatch(catch). Ⅰ.单句语法填空1.(2019·全国卷Ⅰ)Thelikables’plays-well-with-othersqualitiesstrengthen(strength)schoolyardfriendships.2.(2019·全国卷Ⅰ)Whilethesun’srayscanageandharmourskin,theyalsogiveusbeneficial(benefit)VitaminD.3.(2019·全国卷Ⅲ)Theresearchersthentestedhowthemonkeyscombined(combine)—oradded—thesymbolstogetthereward.4.(2019·全国卷Ⅱ)Youneedtoevaluateyourself,yourvalues,yourstrengths(strong),yourweaknesses(weak),yourachievements,yourdesires,etc.5.(2019·天津高考)Myprocessinreadingraisedmycuriosity(curious),andIwantedtoknoweverything.Ⅱ.完成句子1.It’smucheasiertogetintodebtthantogetoutofdebt. 借债容易还债难。2.Youhavetobalancetheadvantagesoflivinginabigcityagainstthedisadvantages.你必须权衡住在大城市的利与弊。 3.Ihavebenefitedalotfromextensivereading. 广泛的阅读使我受益匪浅。4.Heearns/makeshislivinginafactoryaftergraduation. 毕业后他在一家工厂谋生。5.Iwillwinourlostglorybackbyvictory. 我会用胜利赢回我们失去的荣誉。Ⅲ.语法填空(黑体词为本单元重点词汇)LastSunday,mycousin’sweddingceremony1.washeld(hold)inabigrestaurant
whereeveryonepresentenjoyedasuperfeast.Beforetheceremony,everytablewascoveredwith2.plates(plate)fullofnuts,candies,sunflowerseeds,friedbeans,andfruitssuchasapples,peaches,grapesandsoon.3.Immediately(immediate)aftertheceremony,themulti-coursefeast4.began(begin).Themaincourseswereroastmutton,fish,baconstir5.fried(fry)withpeppers,barbecueandsoon.Tomy6.curiosity(curious),therewerefewvegetablesexceptcucumbers.Iwastrying7.tolose(lose)weightandgoonadietrecently,soIonlytastedsomepeas,carrots8.andcucumberswithvinegar.Inmyopinion,theweddingfeastwaswonderful,butitoughttokeepabalancebetweenmeatandvegetables9.forthebenefitofeveryguest.Anyway,Iamgratefultomycousinandwishhim10.ahappylife. 核心素养 崇尚健康生活,促进自我完善,掌握一般的急救知识,减少生命悲剧的发生高考链接 2020·全国Ⅰ卷阅读理解C;2019·全国卷Ⅰ阅读填句;2019·北京高考阅读理解B;2018·全国卷Ⅰ阅读理解B;2018·全国卷Ⅰ语法填空;2018·全国卷Ⅱ阅读理解C;2018·全国卷Ⅱ阅读填句Ⅰ.话题与阅读填句(2019·全国卷Ⅰ阅读填句)IsFreshAirReallyGoodforYou?Weallgrewuphearingpeopletellusto“gooutandgetsomefreshair”. 1 Accordingtorecentstudies,theanswerisabigYES,iftheairqualityinyourcampingareaisgood. 2 Iftheairyou’rebreathingisclean—whichitwouldbeifyou’reawayfromthesmogofcities—thentheairisfilledwithlife-giving,energizingoxygen.Ifyouexerciseoutofdoors,yourbodywilllearntobreathemoredeeply,allowingevenmoreoxygentogettoyourmuscles(肌肉)andyourbrain. Recently,peoplehavebegunstudyingtheconnectionbetweenthenaturalworldandhealing(治愈). 3 Intheseplacespatientscangotobenearnatureduringtheirrecovery.Itturnsoutthatjustlookingatgreen,growingthingscanreduce
stress,lowerbloodpressure,andputpeopleintoabettermood(情绪).Greeneryisgoodforus.Hospitalpatientswhoseetreebranchesouttheirwindowarelikelytorecoveratafasterratethanpatientswhoseebuildingsorskyinstead. 4 Itgivesusagreatfeelingofpeace. 5 Whilethesun’srayscanageandharmourskin,theyalsogiveusbeneficialVitaminD.TomakesureyougetenoughVitaminD—butstillprotectyourskin—putonsunscreenrightasyouheadoutside.Ittakessunscreenaboutfifteenminutestostartworking,andthat’splentyoftimeforyourskintoabsorbaday’sworthofVitaminD. A.Freshaircleansourlungs.B.Sowhatareyouwaitingfor?C.Beinginnaturerefreshesus.D.Anothersidebenefitofgettingfreshairissunlight.E.Butisfreshairreallyasgoodforyouasyourmotheralwayssaid?F.Justasimportantly,wetendtoassociatefreshairwithhealthcare.G.Allacrossthecountry,recoverycentershavebegunbuildingHealingGardens.【文章大意】这是一篇说明文。文章介绍呼吸新鲜空气和接近大自然有益于身心健康。1.【解析】选E。根据下一句中的“theanswerisabigYES”可知,该空应该是一个一般疑问句,选项中只有E选项是一般疑问句。故选E。2.【解析】选A。根据下一句中提到的“Iftheairyou’rebreathingisclean...theairisfilledwithlife-giving,energizingoxygen”和下文中“...breathemoredeeply,allowingevenmoreoxygentogettoyourmusclesandyourbrain”可以推知,该空应该提到新鲜空气的基本作用,根据常识,我们知道吸入的空气首先进入的是肺部,然后才会使我们的肌肉和大脑受益,故选A。3.【解析】选G。根据下一句中提到的“theseplaces”可以推知,该空应该提到表示地点的复数名词。选项中只有G选项提到该类名词,故选G。4.【解析】选C。前文介绍的是“康复花园”中的绿色植物对于病人的康复有好的作用:正在成长的绿色植物可以减轻人的压力,降低血压,使人情绪良好。空后提到“它给我们一种平和感”。该空起承上启下的作用,仍然要提到在“康复花园”这种自然环境中的好处,空后的it也要指代这种情况。故选C。
5.【解析】选D。根据下文中提到的“thesun’srays...giveusbeneficialVitaminD”可知,该段介绍的阳光的好处。选项中只有D项涉及阳光。故选D。【微技能点拨】 根据文章体裁解答阅读填句 阅读填句题的体裁多为说明文,说明文的结构特点多是第一段是总起,后面几段是分述。考生在做阅读填句题时,可以重点关注第一段的总起部分的内容。【语用提能】话题词汇freshair,breathe,exercise,nature,recovery,bloodpressure,putsb.intoabettermood,healthcare短语句式growuphearing...现在分词作状语,allowing现在分词作状语,Itturnsoutthat...,Hospitalpatientswho...定语从句,belikelytodosth.,Tomakesure...,putonsunscreen【微语法填空】(2019·全国卷Ⅰ阅读填句改编)Wegrewup1._________(hear)peopletellusto“gooutandgetsomefreshair”.Butisfreshairreallyasgoodforyou2._________yourmothersaid?TheanswerisabigYES.Iftheairyou’rebreathingisclean,it3._________(fill)withlife-giving,energizingoxygen.Ifyouexerciseoutofdoors,yourbodywilllearn4._________(breathe)moredeeply,allowingmoreoxygentogettoyourmuscles(肌肉)andyourbrain.Peoplehavebegunstudyingthe5._________(connect)betweenthenaturalworldandhealing(治愈).6._________turnsoutthat7._________(look)atgreen,growingthingscanreducestress,lowerbloodpressure,andputpeople8._________abettermood(情绪).Hospitalpatientswhoseetreebranchesouttheirwindowarelikelytorecoverata9._________(fast)ratethanpatientswhoseebuildingsorskyinstead.Anothersidebenefitofgettingfreshairissunlight.Whilethesun’srayscanageandharmourskin,theyalsogiveus10._________(benefit)VitaminD.Fifteenminutesisplentyoftimeforyourskintoabsorbaday’sworthofVitaminD. 1.【解析】hearing。考查现在分词作状语。句意:我们听着人们告诉我们“出去呼吸新鲜空气”长大。grewup是句子的谓语,故hear应使用非谓语动词形式,且hear与其逻辑主语we是主动关系,应用现在分词,故填hearing。
2.【解析】as。考查方式状语从句。句意:但是新鲜空气真的像你妈妈说的那样对你有好处吗?此处是方式状语从句,应用as引导,故填as。3.【解析】isfilled。考查时态和语态。it指theair,与fill之间是被动关系,故用被动语态。4.【解析】tobreathe。考查非谓语动词。句意:如果你在户外锻炼,你的身体就会学会深呼吸,让更多的氧气进入你的肌肉和大脑。learntodosth.学会做某事,故填tobreathe。5.【解析】connection。考查名词。句意:人们已经开始研究自然界和治愈之间的联系。the是冠词,其后应修饰名词,故填connection。6.【解析】It。考查形式主语。句意:结果表明,看正在生长的绿色植物可以减轻压力,降低血压,并使人们拥有一个更好的心情。该句是固定句型Itturnsoutthat...,其中It是形式主语,真正主语是that引导的主语从句,故填It。7.【解析】looking。考查非谓语动词。动词look在句中作主语,且表示经常性动作,应用动名词,故填looking。8.【解析】into。考查固定短语。put...into...是固定短语,意为“将……投入……”,符合句意,故填into。9.【解析】faster。考查比较级。句意:医院里看到窗外树枝的病人恢复的速度可能比看到建筑物或天空的病人更快。后面有than,可知前面应用faster。10.【解析】beneficial。考查形容词。句意:虽然阳光会使皮肤衰老、伤害我们的皮肤,但也提供有益的维生素D。此处作定语修饰VitaminD,应用形容词,故填beneficial。Ⅱ.话题与写作(2018·浙江6月高考)阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。Itwassummer,andmydadwantedtotreatmetoavacationlikeneverbefore.HedecidedtotakemeonatriptotheWildWest.WetookaplanetoAlbuquerque,abigcityinthestateofNewMexico.WereachedAlbuquerqueinthelateafternoon.UnclePaul,mydad’sfriend,pickedusupfromtheairportanddroveusuptohisfarminPecos. HiswifeTinacookedusadeliciousdinnerandwegottoknowhissonsRyanandKyle.MydadandIspentthenightintheguestroomofthefarmhouselisteningto
thefrogsandwaterrollingdowntherivernearby.Veryearlyinthemorning,UnclePaulwokeusuptohavebreakfast.“Thedaystartsatdawnonmyfarm,”hesaid.Afterbreakfast,IwenttohelpAuntTinafeedthechickens.whilemydadwentwithUnclePaultotakethesheepouttograze(吃草).IwasimpressedtoseemydadandUnclePaulridinghorses.Theylookedreallycool. Intheafternoon,IaskedUnclePaulifIcouldtakeahorseride,andhesaidyes,aslongasmydadwentwithme.Iwasn’tgoingtotakeahorseridebymyselfanyway.So,mydadandIputonournewcowboyhats,gotonourhorses,andheadedslowlytowardsthemountains.“Don’tbelateforsupper,”UnclePaulcried,“andkeeptothetracksothatyoudon’tgetlost!”“OK!”mydadcriedback.AfterawhileUnclePaulandhisfarmhousewereoutofsight.Itwassopeacefulandquietandthecolorsofthebrownrocks,thedeepgreenpinetrees,andthelateafternoonsunmixedtocreateamagicscene.Itlookedlikeabeautifulwoven(编织的)blanketspreadoutuponthegroundjustforus. 注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph2:Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Step1 写作技巧1.通读全文,知前文要领
(1)体裁:记叙文(2)前文线索:父亲带儿子去西部荒野的一个朋友家体验农场生活,看到父亲和叔叔骑马,儿子也很想骑,于是亲身上马体验。2.析划线词,分类选关键词人与动物:dad,UnclePaul,sheep 地点:farmhouse,river,track 事物:sight动作:feed,getlost 状态:late3.读段首句,合理设计情节Paragraph1:根据段首句Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.可知,这一句是故事发展的转折点,可从rabbit出现后带来的反应扩展开,可以写马的反应,也可以写人的反应。Paragraph2:根据段首句Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark.可知,“我们”迷路了,本段应描写“我们”如何寻路返回农场。4.斟词酌句,动作描写①我大声喊着,使劲拉缰绳以防马伤到小动物。Iyelledoutloud,pullingbackthereinshardinordertostopthehorsefromhurtingthelittlecreature. ②爸爸紧跟在后面,大声呼叫告诉我怎么抚慰那匹受惊的马,我照做了。Dadfollowedcloselybehind,callingouttotellmehowtosoothetheterrifiedhorseandIdidastold. Step2 妙笔成篇Paragraph1:Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.Instinctively,Iyelledoutloud,pullingbackthereinshardinordertostopthehorsefromhurtingthelittlecreature.Badlystartledbythesuddenincident,thehorsespedoffthetrackintoanotherdirection.Dadfollowedcloselybehind,callingouttotellmehowtosoothetheterrifiedhorseandIdidastold.Finally,thehorsecalmeddown,butweseemedtogetlost,unabletogobacktothemountainroad.
Paragraph2:Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark.Wanderingaround,wewerestillstuckinthedilemma.Muchtoourdelight,thesoundofwaterinthedistancecaughtourattentionanddroveustotheriverbank.Dadproposedthatweshouldwalkalongtheriverwhichmayleadustothefarmhouseandnothingseemedbetterthanthat.TimeappearedtobemerrierandshorterwhenIstayedtogetherwithDadandbeforelong,thefarmhousecameintosight.Whatathrillingbutmemorableexperienceitwas! 阅读填句(2021·广州模拟)Marywentthroughapersonalexperience40yearsagothatchangedherlifepathandestablishedherconnectionwithChineseherbalmedicine.Stillchildlessafter13yearsofmarriage,Marylongedtobecomeamother.Foryearsshetravelledfromcountrytocountryandvisitedtopexpertsinthefield,butwithoutsuccess. 1 However,herChineseherbalistgrandmothergaveherhopethroughaherbaltreatment. Afterthreeandahalfyearsshebecamepregnant. 2 Theexpectantmother’sdelightwassharedbytherestofherfamilytoo.Thiswasthepointwhenshemadeuphermindtocarryonhergrandmother’sworkanddevoteherlifetoherbalmedicineresearch,developmentandpromotion.Tothisend,sheinvestedinalargeherbalgardeninthesuburbsofJakarta,wheremorethan30,000plantsaregrown. 3 Throughtheapplicationofgreateffortandresourcesovermany,manyyears,Mary’scareerhasdevelopedvigorously,ashashergarden. 4 Whenshewasaskedwhetheritwasworthwhiletohavedevotedsomuchofherlifetothisresearch,shefirmlyresponded,“WhatIhavedoneistofulfillapromiseIoncemade.Moreimportantly,IwanttobringChineseherbalmedicinetoallthoseinneed. 5 ” A.Morethan7,000ofthesecanbeusedasmedicine.B.Themomentthenewswasconfirmed,sheburstintotearsofhappiness.C.Ibelieveitcanhelprelievepainandenablethesicktoregaintheirhopeoflife.
D.MarydecidedtomakegreatcontributionstothedevelopmentofChineseherbalmedicine.E.Theheartbreakanddisappointmentwassogreatthatshecameclosetogivingup.F.I’msohappythatthelocalpeopleliketouseChineseherbalmedicinefortreatment.G.Althoughsheisnow80yearsold,sheisstillcommittedtothestudyofChineseherbalmedicine.【文章大意】本文主要讲述了玛丽和中草药结下了不解之缘的励志故事。1.【解析】选E。根据上文中的“Stillchildlessafter13years...butwithoutsuccess.”可推知,多年来求子无果的经历让玛丽很是伤心和失望,所以E项符合语境。E项承接上文且与空后一句形成转折。2.【解析】选B。根据下文中的“Theexpectantmother’sdelightwassharedbytherestofherfamilytoo.”可知,通过中草药疗法,多年不孕的玛丽终于怀孕了,梦想达成,自然是喜出望外,所以选B。3.【解析】选A。根据上文中的“devoteherlifetoherbalmedicineresearch”及“Tothisend,...wheremorethan30,000plantsaregrown.”可推知,玛丽决定致力于中草药研究工作,这些植物很多可以用作中草药,所以A项符合语境。4.【解析】选G。根据下文中的“Whenshewasaskedwhetheritwasworthwhiletohavedevotedsomuchofherlifetothisresearch,shefirmlyresponded...”可推知,玛丽后来多年一直致力于中草药的研究工作,所以选G。5.【解析】选C。根据上文中的“Moreimportantly,IwanttobringChineseherbalmedicinetoallthoseinneed.”并结合玛丽自身的经历可知,玛丽认为中草药能帮助有需要的人,所以C项承接上文,符合语境。
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