短文改错2013新题赏析
题一:
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:把缺词处加一个漏符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The book I’m reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain. It is said to have started in the early 1800’s. Have tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner, that might not be served until 8 o’clock at night. This custom soon becomes another meal of day. Interesting, it had a connection by the British porcelain(瓷器) industry. Tea in China was traditionally drank from cups without handles. When tea got popular in Britain, there was a crying need for good cup with handles to suit British habits. This made for the grow in the porcelain industry.
“短文改错”题中的常见错误类型:
一、名词
名词方面的错误多指名词单复数形式的误用,可数名词与不可数名词的错误,名词所有格中“‘s”的误置等。
He had no ideas that the kitchen was not for guests.
二、动词的错误
动词错误在短文改错中所占比重最大,它所涉及的错误包括动词的时态、语态错误;易混动词的用法错误;动词的第三人称单数错误;动词的非谓语形式,以及动词的句型搭配错误等。在改错题中,动词方面的考查比例较大。
1. The air keeps the balloon up was escaping quickly and the balloon ...
三、形容词、副词的错误
这类错误多指误用形容词修饰形容词,误用副词修饰名词,误用形容词修饰动词,误用形容词或副词的原级、比较级和最高级以及误用带-ly的副词与不带-ly的副词等,特别注意根据上下文该用比较级而未用的“暗中比较”。
1. They came back lately and had some tea.
2. Last year, my English teacher proved to be the more popular in our school.
四、连词的错误
短文改错中出现连词就要判断连词用的是否正确,是否符合句子意思;连接的是词还是句子,是否符合逻辑关系。此外如果是平行结构就要注意前后时态、语态、词性一致问题平行结构常借助与并列连词and, or, but, not only.. but also..,…not…but…, either…or…, neither…nor…, as well as等,though不与but连用, because不与so连用等。
It started to rise higher again. So it was still too close to the water.
五、代词的错误
这类错误主要包括形容词性物主代词与名词性物主代词的误用,关系代词、连接代词的误用,代词主格与代词宾格的误用,代词单数与代词复数的误用,各个不定代词之间的误用,反身代词与代词宾格之间的误用,代词的指代错误,定语从句中多用代词等。
1. Everybody sleeps in tents, that is very exciting.
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2. If he spends most of his time playing about in the way that he used to as a child,they will go hungry.
六、介词的错误
这类错误多指漏掉介词、多用介词或介词与其他词语搭配的错误等。
He was looking for a glass the cupboard.
七、冠词的错误
这类错误多指a(n)与the的误用,a与an的误用。有时也表现为:单数可数名词前面该用冠词的地方缺少冠词,不该用冠词的地方多了冠词。
And if he breaks the law of society..., he may go to the prison.
八、时态、语态的错误
这类错误主要为现在时态与过去时态、主动语态与被动语态的误用。做题时,应注意把握文中动词时态的呼应规律,注意把握诸个并列动词的时态、语态的呼应规律。
.... sometimes all that is need is someone to rely on.
九、主谓一致的错误
这类错误主要指主语是第三人称单数时,谓语动词形式的错误。因此做题时,要注意谓语动词的形式要和句子主语在人称和数上保持一致。
Anyone can borrow books if he or she wish.
十、短语、句型固定搭配错误
主要考查介词与动词、名词、形容词的固定搭配;副词、动词的固定搭配;及物动词后多介词或副词以及不及物动词后少介词,英语中的一些固定句型与习惯搭配等。
My teacher advised me to keep my diary.
短文改错2013新题赏析
讲义参考答案
题一:
第一处:第1句:去掉of. 第二处:第3句:Have改成Having.
第三处:第3句:that改成which. 第四处:第4句:becomes改成became.
第五处:第4句:day前加the. 第六处:第5句:Interesting改成Interestingly.
第七处:第5句:by改成with或to. 第八处:第6句:drank改成drunk.
第九处:第7句:cup改成cups. 第十处:第8句:grow改成growth.
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