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题号押题 12
全国卷第 72 题:书面表达(通知)
〖真题回顾〗
Passage 1(2018•全国卷ⅠI•书面表达)
你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知,请大家观看一部英语短片 Growing Together,内容
包括:
(1)短片内容:学校的发展;
(2)放映时间、地点;
(3)欢迎对短片提出意见。
注意:
(1)词数 100 左右;
(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【试题分析】
2018 年高考英语书面表达体裁为通知,替学校的“英语天地”邀请学生看英文短片 Growing together。
继 2015 年,2016 年,2017 年连续三年考查信件认识人写信之后,全国二卷考查了应用文中的另一典型
体裁,内容为邀请电影相关的时间,地点的通知。学生对该题材和内容熟悉,对词汇的要求也相对基础。
纵观全国 II 卷英语书面表达,从题材上来讲,除了 2014 年考查了记叙文,十年中九年均考查了应用文,
应用文占 90%。所以考生在高考的英语写作的准备中应当把重心放在应用文上,熟练掌握英语应用文写作
的几个相关专项,并且熟识高考英语基础词汇。
【写作点拨】2
英语书面通知的时态应该以一般将来时为主,多使用被动语态、简单句。在通知中不应当过度的使用
较复杂的词语和读起来拗口的句子。
第二个注意点:层次一定要清晰,一个层次要表达一件事情,使人看起来一目了然。
【满分范文】
Boys and girls,
May I have your attention, please? Recently, an outstanding movie will be shown in our campus. Welcome to
join us end enjoy it! Here are some relevant details about it.
To begin with, the name of the movie is Growing together, which is about the development of our beloved
school; as a result, it will be not only meaningful but also interesting. Besides, it will be in the library from 2:00 to
4:00 in the afternoon on June 9th . What’s more, everyone of you will be welcome to take part in it, enjoying the
movie, having a heated discussion afterwards and giving your own comments.
Hopefully, you would make it to our activity. I have the confidence that you will have a great time.
The Student Union
〖命题探究〗&〖解题秘籍〗
写作模板
Ladies and gentlemen, may I have your attention, please? I have an announcement to make.(称呼语及开场
白)________________.
(正文部分,说明具体通知事项)
All the teachers and students are required to attend it. Please take your notebooks and make notes./Please
listen carefully and we’ll have a discussion in groups. Make sure you’ll come on time and don’t be late.(说明通
知对象和注意事项)___________________
Please come and join in it./ Everybody is welcome to attend it./I hope you’ll have a nice time here.(重申希
望大家参加之情)_______________________________
That’s all. Thank you.(结束语)
口头通知
口头通知要注意以下几点:
(1) 要有称呼用语。如:在正式场合用的 Ladies and gentlemen,对学生用的 Boys and girls 等。
(2) 要有开头语。常用的开头语有:3
May I have your attention, please?
Be quite. There is something important I have to tell you.
You need to know.
I have something to tell you.
(3) 时态问题。口头通知是要告诉大家即将进行的活动,因此要以一般将来时为主。
(4) 人称问题。口头通知常用第二人称表示被通知的对象。
(5) 要有结束语。常用的结束语有:
That’s all. Thank you.
Any questions? Does everyone understand?
书面通知
书面通知具有以下特点:
(1) 书面通知的正文上面的正中有 NOTICE 或 ANNOUNCEMENT 标志。
(2) 在正文最后的右下角要写上发通知的单位或组织者的姓名。
(3) 在左下角写上发出通知的日期。
必备佳句
口头通知套语
(1) 在用口头下达通知时,发通知者通常要将听通知人的注意力吸引过来,这类表达常见的有:
May I have your attention, please?
Attention please, everyone. I have an announcement to make.
Be quite. There is something important I have to tell you.
I have something (important) to tell you.
I’m glad to tell you something important.
(2) 其他用于口头通知的固定套语(如叫听者不要迟到、欢迎某人参加某活动等):
Everyone is asked to be there on time.
Be sure not to be late.
please be present on time.
please take your notebooks with you and be sure on time.
Those who are interested in it are warmly welcome.
(3) 口头通知的结束套语主要有:
That’s all. Thank you very much.4
书面通知套语
常用的开头语有:
All teachers and students will be required to…(全体师生务必要……)
Notice is hereby given that…(兹通知……)
Our school / The Student Union will / is going to hold…
A lecture will be given at 7:00 this evening in…
常用的结束语有:
Everybody is expected to attend it.
Be sure to attend it on time.
Please / Do be present on time.
〖押题冲关〗
Writing 1
假设你是卓越中学学生会主席李华。你们学校将举办一次英语话剧比赛(drama competition),希望你能
够邀请附近某大学的外教 Ms. Smith 来做评委(judge)。请参照以下比赛通知给她发一份邮件。
英语话剧比赛:
主题:人与自然
时间:7 月 15 日下午 2:00-5:00
地点:101 教室
参赛选手:10 名学生
联系人:Li H ua (电话 44876655)
注意:1.词数:100 词左右;
2.可以适当增加细节使行文连贯。
Dear Ms. Smith,
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With best wishes,
Li Hua5
【范文】
Dear Ms. Smith, This is Li Hua, president of the Students Union of Zhuoyue Middle School, located just near
the university where you are teaching. I am writing to see if we could have the honor to ask you to be the judge in
our coming competition.
You see, to promote students' interest in learning English, we' ve planned to hold an English drama
competition, the theme of which is Man and Nature. It will begin at two on the afternoon of July 15th, lasting three
hours. There will be ten participants competing with each other in Classroom101, and all the students of our school
will be attending it.
We would feel much honored if you could join us and give us some instructions. You can reach me through
my phone number 3337875686 at your convenience.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
With best wishes,
Li Hua
Writing 2
假设你是李华,为迎接即将来访的美国某中学生代表团,你校决定举办英语讲故事比赛。请你为校 英
语报写一则通知,内容包括:
1. 比赛时间和目的;
2. 比赛内容冲国传统文化故事;
3. 报名截止日期。
注意:1.词数 100 左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Notice
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Student Union
One possible version: 6
Notice
Our school has scheduled to launch an English speech competition next Monday. It's meant as plan of our
plan to welcome the visiting American students, aimed to promote our awareness of the richness of Chinese
traditional culture as well as improve our spoken English. The speech should be focused on stories related to
traditional Chinese culture. You can tell stories related to the origins of traditional festivals and some legends
concerning Chinese culture. Anyone interested in it is supposed to sign up at cur office by this Friday afternoon,
which is the deadline we set for the event.
Student Union
Writing 3
为了共同防控新型冠状病毒肺炎疫情,学期初教育部发布了延期开学的通知,学生在家进行了一个多
月的网课学习。作为参与网课学习的一员,请你就近期的网课学习体验谈谈线上教学的利与弊并向 China
Daily 报纸所开辟的“online teaching”专栏投稿。
内容包括:1. 线上教学的利弊;
2. 个人观点与看法。
参考词汇:新型冠状病毒肺炎:COVID-19;线上教学:online teaching
注意事项:1. 词数 100 左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【范文】
Recently, COVID-19 has transmitted all over China even the world. In order to fight against the virus, the
students in China have to study at home on computers instead of going to school.
As for online teaching, it has two sides. On the one hand, it not only can save time so that we can do more
other things like taking up new hobbies, but also can be convenient for our daily life and study. On the other hand, 7
online teaching will increase the time length of facing the computer, which will be harmful to our health. Moreover,
it’s short of learning atmosphere to study online. Last but not the least, some students may cheat in class. While
having class, they are playing computer games at the same time!
As for me, I prefer to study in classroom because I really miss my teachers and classmates. And it really
makes me feel uncomfortable when I sit in the same way studying on computers without moving. Sometimes the
network signal is so weak that it drives me crazy! That’s why I’m not a fan of online teaching.