题号押题 10
全国卷第 72 题:书面表达(书信)
〖真题回顾〗
Passage 1(2019•全国卷Ⅰ•书面表达)
假定你是李华,暑假在伦敦学习,得知当地美术馆要剧版中国画展。请写一封信申请做志愿者,内容
包括:
1.写信目的;
2.个人优势;
3.能做的事情。
注意::
1.词数 100 左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.结束语已为你写好。
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Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua.
【试题趋势】
今年全国卷一的书面表达要求考生写一封申请信,仍然属于书信应用文。试题要求考生给伦敦的一家将举办中国画展览的美术馆写信,申请当一名志愿者。本篇书面表达体现了传播中国传统文化与中外文化
交流。与 2018 年及 2017 年高考书面表达所考查的内容比较类似。2018 年是新西兰人来中国人家做客,2017
年是给外国人上汉语课讲唐诗,都融入了对中国传统文化的宣传,树立文化自信和民族自豪感。同时,今
年的考题还融入了美育知识,引导学生关注和提高审美情趣。正如我们去年对 2019 年试题趋势的分析和预
测一样,掌握一些传统文化方面的英语知识势在必行。在备考时,要集中看一些与日常生活和传统文化相
关的话题,如文学艺术、风土人情、社交礼仪、饮食、体育运动、语言学习等,按照话题网络化复习,效
果会更佳。
试题分析:
书面表达旨在考查考生的英语写作能力,评价其能否运用相关常识和语言知识进行有效的文字表达,
完成特定的交际任务。今年的书面表达要求考生写一封申请信。题目的内容要点设计比较灵活,难度与往
年大致相当。
写作的基本要求是切题、完整、准确、连贯。作文要切题,考生要认真审题,精准把握主旨,确保内
容围绕主题展开;内容要完整,短文要覆盖各内容要点,无遗漏地完成交际任务;表达要准确,语言运用
应贴切、得体,能有力支撑交际目的的顺利实现;行文要连贯,各要点间应关系紧密,脉络清晰。
【写作指导】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。
1.审题立意
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写申请信,人称使用第一人称和第二人称,时态用一般现在式。
2.谋篇布局
书信格式,称呼和落款文中已经给出。首段,写信的目的,中间段写个人优势和能做的事,最后一段总结。
3.要求从写信目的、个人优势和能做的事情这三个方面展开写作。考生在写作时要做到层次分明,应着重掌
握个人优势的常用表达,如 I’m good at …;I have the ability to …;I’m experienced in …等等。从语言风格
来讲,短文应该是正式的形式,应运用得体的语气及礼貌用语或结构等。
内容分析
文体 书信体——申请信
申请职位 志愿者
写信目的 I am writing to apply for / express my interest in / recommend myself as ...
个人优势 I am good at …;I have the ability to …;I am experienced in …;I work hard and I can get
along well with others.能做的事 I can help with … / I’ll devote myself to … / I’ll try my best to …
个人发挥 适当增加相关细节
语言分析
话题词汇激活 艺术:artwork, drawing, gallery, painting, art collection, museum of art, on display / exhibition
工作职业:ap ply for, position, manager, post, artist, musician, painter, volunteer
任职资格/工作能力:ability, potential, professional, certificate, profession, qualified, skill, skillful,
competence, competent, qualification, qualify
工作职责:handle, responsibility, duty, task, undertake, take / in charge of
(在平时的学习中要注意话题词汇的积累)
运用高级词块
和句式
词块:可胜任 be qualified for;同样重要的是 equally important;做某事没有困难 have no difficulty
in doing sth
句式:which 引导的定语从句,if 引导的条件状语从句
【范文】
Dear sir or madam,
I am a Chinese student named Li Hua, who is studying in London during the summer vacation. Knowing that the
local art gallery will hold an exhibition of Chinese paintings, I am writing to apply for volunteering. As a student who
has learned Chinese painting since 5 years old, I am very pleased to have an opportunity to introduce Chinese
paintings to foreigners. Besides, my fluent spoken English and rich knowledge about Chinese paintings will help
visitors understand the meaning behind each painting deeply. I will appreciate it if I could be given the opportunity.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua.
【点睛】
本文首段开门见山,表达了写信的目的;第 2 段详细介绍了个人的优势和能做的事情,an outgoing
boy, who is studying in London.此处使用了同位语和非限制性定语从句。having heard that a Chinese Painting
Exhibition will be held in this local city.使用了分词做状语和宾语从句及被动语态。having lived in China for
sixteen years and having learnt English since I was a child, I have a good command of English and Chinese, which
is beneficial for introducing Chinese paintings.使用了分词和非限制性定语从句。另外 First of all, Besides, Last but not least 的使用使文章富有条理性。此外,还使用了高级句式结构,如 I would appreciate it if you could take
my application into consideration 条件状语从句。
Passage 2(2018•全国卷ⅠII•书面表达)
假定你是李华,你的英国朋友 Peter 来信询问你校学生体育运动情况。请给他回信,内容包括:
1. 学校的体育场馆;
2. 主要的运动项目;
3. 你喜欢的项目。
注意:1. 词数 100 左右:
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【思路点拨】
本题作文为提纲式作文,形式依然是书信,即给英国朋友 Peter 介绍学校体育运动情况,属于学校生活
话题。这一话题贴合学生生活的实际,学生并不陌生,有话可说。
首先可以介绍学校的体育场馆,场馆的位置,大小,开放时间等等。然后简要介绍学校主要开设的体
育项目有哪些,可挑选一到两个做详细介绍,如学生的活动时间,活动形式,以及此类活动的好处等。再
次简要分析自己喜欢的体育项目是什么,并简单分析喜欢的原因,自己从中得到的益处等。文章可主要采
用一般现在时态,第一人称的方式来写。
【满分范文】
Dear Peter,
I am exceedingly delighted to hear from you. You asked me in your last letter about the physical exercise in
our school and the following information may give you a rough sketch.
To begin with, a fabulous new stadium has been built up, which has become the new landmark in our school.
Moreover, with the stadium set up, a wide range of sports events are able to be held, of which ping-pong, football as well as running competitions enjoy great popularity. As for me, I’m intoxicated with basketball since it has been
giving me strength to confront the challenges in my life.
All in all, I sincerely invite you to come to our school and see for yourself.
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 3(2018•浙江卷•书面表达第一节)
假定你是李华,你校英语协会招聘志愿者,接待来访的国外中学生。请你写信应聘,内容包括:
1. 口语能力:
2. 相关经验;
3. 应聘目的。
注意:
1. 词数 80 左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【思路点拨】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求写应聘信。
第一步:根据提示可知,学校英语协会招聘志愿者,接待来访的国外中学生。要求写封应聘信,内容包括:
1. 口语能力:2. 相关经验;3. 应聘目的。
第二步:根据写作要求确定关键词(组)。
第三步:根据提示和关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美
观的卷面是非常重要的。
本文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭
英语的能力。
【范文】
Dear Sir or Madam,My name is Li Hua. And I am writing to apply for being a volunteer of our school English association.
I have a good command of English and have been to the USA twice. So I can communicate well with native
speakers of English. What’s more, I am kind and friendly to other people. So I can easily get along with foreign
students.
I’m particularly interested in this job because I want to further improve my oral English capabilities and
interpersonal communication skills.
Hopefully I can receive your acceptance.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
〖命题探究〗&〖解题秘籍〗
英文信写作步骤:
要求考生根据提纲写一封英文书信,对这类题型,通常分为 5 个步骤来写:
时态根据所写的具体内容来确定,写发生在过去的事情就用过去时,现在的就用现在时,将来的打算
等用一般将来时)
第一段、文章开头:称呼(通常已给出)
第二段、寒暄语句,引出写信的目的:
寒暄句+主题句(注:寒暄句和主题句可以是同一个句子)
第三段、根据提纲扩展主体段落:
主题句+扩展句 1+扩展句 2+扩展句 3
第四段、表明自己的观点,并结束书信主体段落
在最后要他谈自己的看法
第五段、寒暄句+落款
以上的各点需要学生用到每次的写作中才有效果,所以需要学生每次作文时都有意识地使用里面的步
骤和模板。久而久之,就形成了好的写作习惯,易得高分。
必备佳句
高考英语作文书信万能句子 1 书信作文精华模板开头
How nice to hear from you again.
很高兴再次收到你的回信
Let me tell you something about the activity.
让我告诉你一些关于这次活动的细节
I’m glad to have received your letter of Apr. 9th.[/color]
很高兴收到你在 4 月 9 号的来信
I’m pleased to hear that you’re coming to China for a visit.
很高兴得知你将来拜访中国
I’m writing to thank you for your help during my stay in America.
我正写这封信感谢我在美国你对我的帮助
高考英语作文书信万能句子 2
书信作文精华模板万能结尾:
With best wishes.
致以我诚挚的祝福
I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
期待您的回信
I’d appreciate it if you could reply earlier.
如果您能尽早回复我会万分感激
I sincerely hope this letter can draw your attention to the matter and I hope the problem mentioned above
can solved as soon as possible。
我衷心希望这封信可以引起您的注意,并且也希望以上问题能够及早得到解决
〖押题冲关〗
Writing 1
假如你是李华,你的笔友 Jane 最近总是感觉身体不适,因此写信向你询问如何保持身体健康,请你根据
以下要点提示用英文给他回信。
要点提示:
1 对 Jane 表示关切;2 提出合理建议;
3 期望 Jane 的不适状况早日好转。
字数:100 词左右(可适当增加细节)。
Dear Jane,
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Yours sincerely
Li Hua
【范文】
Dear Jane,
I'm delighted to hear from you, but sorry to have learned you aren't feeling well these days. In your letter you
asked me how to stay healthy. Here is my advice.
Firstly, you’d better keep a balanced diet. It can be beneficial to avoid eating food high in fat or with too much
sugar. Instead, have more fresh vegetables and fruits. Secondly, taking exercise every day helps a lot to build up a
strong body. As is known, regular exercise, such as jogging, is an essential approach to keeping fit. Finally, I
wonder if you always stay up late at night. If so, please get rid of this habit, for never will we be healthy without
enough sleep.
All these count a lot for keeping your body at a proper weight and staying healthy. I truly hope you will find
my advice helpful and get well soon.
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
Writing 2
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现在请你给该机构写信询问相关情况。要点如下:
1. 你感兴趣的课程;
2. 所选课程的师资配备,班级规模;
3. 开班时间、学费、食宿。
注意:1. 词数 100 左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 信的开头和结尾已写好,不计人总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua, a student in China.
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Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua【范文】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua, a student in China. I've planned to come to England this coming winter holiday, during which
time I hope to have my English improved. That’s why your ad appealed to me the moment I happened to read it
online.
I want to know something about whether your teachers are experienced and how many students there are in a
class. I hope that there won't be too many students in each class, so that we can have enough chances to practice
oral English. Besides, I'm not clear about when the courses begin and how much you charge for the courses.
Meanwhile, it couldn't be better if you could provide food and accommodation for us students.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
Writing 3
假设你是李华,你的英国笔友 Tom 即将作为交换生到你们学校学习一年。他向你询问你们学校开设有
哪些课程或活动有助于他了解中国文化。请你给他写封回信,内容包括:
1. 对他即将到来表示欢迎;
2. 介绍有助于他了解中国文化的课程或活动;
3. 表达期待和祝愿。
注意:
1. 词数 100 左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 不得出现真实姓名和校名。
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【范文】Dear Tom,
I’m more than delighted to know you’ll study with us. I can't wait to see you. Now let me introduce some of
our courses which will surely help deepen your understanding of Chinese culture.
First of all, I may suggest Chinese calligraphy, for each character tells a story with culture. While practicing
writing them, you can not only appreciate the beauty of calligraphy but also cultivate your mind. Another course I’d
recommend to you is Beijing Opera. It offers you an access to Chinese opera history and the main characters of this
traditional Chinese theatre.
Best wishes to you! Looking forward to your early arrival.
Yours,
Li Hua