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江西省2017年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试仿真卷
英 语 （八）
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第Ⅰ卷
第一部分 听力（共两节，满分30分）略
第二部分 阅读理解 （共两节，满分40分）
第一节 （共15小题;每小题2分，满分30分）
阅读下列短文，从每题所给的四个选项（A、B、C和D）中 ，选出最佳选项，并在答题卡上将该项涂黑。
A
（河北承德一中2017届高三第二次月考）Everything was put neatly into my suitcase. I’m a flight attendant. I’m so organized, my half of the closet could be a display at The Container Store. My husband’s half of the closet? Just thinking about it make my head ache. I carried my suitcase downstairs. Bill was in the kitchen cooking. Looking at the messy kitchen, I shouted,
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“Why do you have to be so messy?” Bill look hurt, “What?” I sighed and left for the airport.
On my last flight, an elderly couple had the seats in my section. They held hands during takeoff. Later I caught them looking into each other’s eyes. Something about that look was familiar. Then I realized: it was the look Bill and I had worn in our wedding photographs. I couldn’t resist asking them about the secret of their long-lasting marriage. “Have fun together,” the man said, “and never take each other for granted.”
Her words circled in my head long after we landed. Bill wasn’t perfect. But then, was I? I kept complaining about his messiness and forgot his kindness, his ability to see the bright side of every situation---qualities that ran so much deeper, the reasons I had married him in the first place.
I took out my cell phone and called Bill. “I miss you already.” I said. “I miss you too, Kim,” he said. As soon as my flights were over, I rushed home. Bill met me at the door. “I have a surprise for you.” he said and led me into the kitchen. I glanced around the room. He really had worked hard. In spite of the fingerprints on that microwave floor, I could see our reflection in it: my husband and I, our smiles glowing with love for each other, just like in our wedding photos.
21. Why did Kim get so angry with her husband?
A. She found his weaknesses one morning. B. She didn’t love him any more.
C. He left things in an untidy state. D. He turned a deaf ear to her complaints.
【解析】细节理解题。根据文章第一段的句子Bill was in the kitchen cooking. Looking at the messy kitchen, I shouted, ‘Why do you have to be so messy?’ Bill look hurt, ‘What?’ I sighed and left for the airport.可知，Kim的丈夫将厨房弄得一团糟，Kim对他很生气。故选C。
【答案】C
22. What’s special about the old couple?
A. They never quarreled with each other. B. They often made fun of each other.
C. They kept their lives so fresh. D. They took each other for granted.
【解析】细节理解题。根据文章第二段的句子I couldn’t resist asking them about the secret of their long-lasting marriage. “Have fun together,” the man said, “and never take each other for granted.可知，这对老夫妇保持生活的新鲜感。故选C。
【答案】C
23. Kim changed her attitude towards her husband after _____.
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A. she realized Bill wasn’t perfect B. she got inspired by the old couple
C. her husband had cleaned up the kitchen D. they had their wedding photos taken
【解析】细节理解题。根据文章第三段的句子Her words circled in my head long after we landed. Bill wasn’t perfect. But then, was I? 可知，在被老夫妇激励后，Kim改变了对丈夫的态度。故选B。
【答案】B
24. The best title of the passage might be ______.
A. Love You, Lover Your Mess B. Love is Blind, Love is messy
C. The Wedding Photos D. A Loving Old Couple
【解析】标题判断题。文章介绍作者是一名空姐，生活井井有条，但是她的丈夫却有些邋遢，这让作者感到很生气。在一次航班中，作者遇到一对感情很好的老夫妇，他们的话让作者原谅了丈夫，反省自己，所以Love You, Love Your Mess是合适的标题。故选A。
【答案】A
B
（安徽江淮十校2017届11月联考）Thousands of people began pouring into Pennsylvania from other states. They wanted to buy lottery tickets(彩票). The tickets cost only $ 0.9 each. But that small spending could bring them a reward of $ 90 million .That was the second largest lottery jackpot （积累奖金）in history.
More than 87 million tickets were bought for the Pennsylvania lottery drawing. Those who bought tickets had to choose seven numbers from 1 to 80．The chance of winning was one in 9.6 million, but that little chance certainly didn’t affect ticket sales. In the last few days before the drawing, tickets were sold at the unbelievable rate of 500 per second.
Experts say many people buy lottery tickets because they just want to have a piece of the action. Others say the lottery is a stock market for poor people. It allows them to dream about wealth they’ll probably never have.
But many people believe lotteries are no better than legalized gambling. Some critics note that most people who play are poor and may not be able to afford the tickets. There are also many addicts who take the game seriously. They may pour their life savings into lottery tickets. Some clubs have been formed to help them kick the habit.
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Politicians like lotteries because they provide money that would otherwise have to come from new taxes. The profits from lotteries are usually used to pay for education or programs for senior citizens. But critics say this arrangement just allows states to legalize vice, under the name of social progress. Whether you regard stock lotteries right or not, you cannot refuse to accept their extreme popularity with many Americans.
25．Which of the following is NOT TRUE according to the passage?
A. Buying lotteries may help people become wealthy overnight.
B. Politicians like lotteries because they don’t have to pay extra taxes.
C. The profits from lotteries are usually used for the public.
D. Some critics don’t like lotteries because many poor people waste money on them.
【解析】细节理解题。从文章的第五段“Politicians like lotteries because they provide money that would otherwise have to come from new taxes.”可知B项不正确。
【答案】B
26．In just one hour in the last few days, the Pennsylvania lottery sold tickets totaling_______.
A. $ 16.2 million B．$ 38.88 million C．$ 19.6 million D．$ 87 million
【解析】细节理解题。从文中的第一段的“The tickets cost only $0.9 each”和第二段“In the last few days before the drawing, tickets were selling at the unbelievable rate of 500 per second.”可知0.9*500*60*60*24=38, 880, 000。
【答案】B
27. The underlined word in the last paragraph refers to__________.
A. something profitable B. something challenging
C. something immoral D. something easy
【解析】词义猜测题。根据连词but和下文的“under the name of social progress”可知，批评家对此并不认可。
【答案】C
28. What is the main purpose of the passage?
A. To introduce the lotteries in Pennsylvania.
B. To persuade people not to buy lotteries.
C. To show the drawbacks of buying lotteries.
D. To tell us the different opinions on lotteries.
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【解析】推理判断题。文中介绍了宾夕法尼亚州的彩票，作者客观地介绍了人们对此所持的
不同观点，所以选择D。
【答案】D
C
（2017江西临川二中高三一次联考） You know that squeak(吱吱声) you hear from your pet mouse or the pest mouse? It turns out that it is not really a squeak, but a sweet song by male mice to attract females. This is the conclusion reached by biologist Dustin Penn and his team at the Veterinary University of Vienna.
The scientists who have been conducting a series of studies on house mice for a number of years, began by recording the high-pitched(声调高的) sounds male mice made the moment they sensed a female mouse around. What they discovered when they played them back to females was that the ladies could tell between those made by their brothers and the ones made by unrelated males. Just like human, they tended to ignore the ones made by their brothers.
The researchers then took the experiment one step further and analyzed the squeaks. To their surprise they discovered that while the squeaks sounded similar, they each had a different “tune”. The biggest surprise of all was that the mice could even learn tunes from each other.
However, not all scientists agree with this finding. Some like Kurt Hammer, a scientist at the German Primate Center believe that the test sample was too small to make such a conclusion.
The researcher’s next plan to test if the females care about the quality of the “song”. In some bird species, males that can sing the most complex tunes seem to get the most attention.
So why do we care whether mice can sing or not? Clearly, since they are being used as laboratory testers, it will help us make advances in human speech disorders like the ones found in people suffering from autism(自闭症).
29. According to Dustin Pen, the squeak made by a male mouse is _______.
A. a hungry signal B. a sad cry
C. a terrible noise D. a pleasant sound
【解析】细节理解题。根据第一段中的but a sweet song sung by male mice to attract females 可知，雄鼠发出的是愉悦的声音。
【答案】D
30. The underlined word “them” in Paragraph 2 refers to _______.
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A. the male mice B. the female mice
C. the squeaks made by the male mice D. the squeaks made by the female mice
【解析】词义猜测题。 根据第二段中的 recording the high-pitched sounds male mice made 可以推知，该词指代上文提到的雄鼠发出的声音。
【答案】C
31. What might be Kurt Hammer’s idea?
A. More studies should be made. B. Mice are intelligent animals.
C. the conclusion is reasonable. D. Mice shouldn’t be studied.
【解析】细节理解题。根据第四段中的 the test sample was too small to make such a conclusion 可知，Kurt hammer 认为得出这个结论的依据并不充分，人们需要进行更多的研究。
【答案】A
32. One benefit of the study on mice squeaks is that it can________.
A. find ways to kill mice B. inspire musicians with their work
C. help treat human speech disorders D. find ways to select intelligent mice
【解析】推理判断题。根据最后一段中的可以推知，这项研究可以用来帮助人们治疗人类的语言紊乱的问题。
【答案】C
D
（广东顺德一中2017高三二次联考）As the saying goes, “Change is not always for the better”. Take social interaction, for example! We now live in an era in which many teenagers spend hours locked away in their bedrooms shooting virtual soldiers and hitting zombies over the head with digital baseball bats, while others sit home alone, chatting with friends, not in person, but through social networks. Teachers, politicians and parents have genuine reasons to argue that young people like this are in danger of losing the ability to connect with one another, to develop genuine relationships and to separate the fictional world of the Xbox or the Play Station from the real world.
Others worry about the increasing breakdown of the family unit within the UK and link that to the increase of youth crime and antisocial behavior, or the problems that some young people have with drugs or alcohol. These issues are particularly common in areas of poverty and, in the light of the economic crisis, are unlikely to improve. Indeed, the gap between rich and poor in the UK could well increase, as unemployment figures rise and the cost of higher education increases.
But being a teenager in the 21st century is not all doom and gloom, Young people in the UK today can enjoy living in a far more multicultural, integrated society in which opportunities are more equal and which is increasingly environmentally aware. They benefit from better child
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protection policies, a wider range of educational activities and clearer guidance on leading healthy lifestyles.
And as they grow up, this generation will benefit from huge technological inventions which will have an impact on almost every aspect of their lives, from entertainment to transport. They will see medical advances which could put an end to diseases like malaria and rid the world of AIDS. They will live longer, work smarter and they will even have a greater understanding of nature and the universe.
33. What does the author think about life in the 21st century?
A. Life is going to get duller and simpler in the 21st century.
B. There is both good and bad in life in the 21st century.
C. Life will be easier because nobody will be out of employment.
D. People will be healthier because there will be no diseases in the 21st century.
【解析】细节理解题。根据倒数第二段中的“But being a teenager in the 21st century is not all doom and gloom, Young people in the UK today can enjoy living in a far more multicultural, integrated society in which opportunities are more equal and which is increasingly environmentally aware. ”可知，21世纪的生活并不完全是失望与不快，也有很多好处，故B项正确。
【答案】B
34. According to the passage which of the following statements is true?
A. The union of a family unit plays an important role in a harmonious society.
B. Family problems cause young children to lock themselves in their bedrooms.
C. Strict families have introduced better child protection policies.
D. All children in breakdown families tend to be aggressive.
【解析】推理判断题。根据第二段中的“Others worry about the increasing breakdown of the family unit within the UK and link that to the increase of youth crime and antisocial behavior, or the problems that some young people have with drugs or alcohol. ”可知，家庭破裂会带来很多社会问题，由此可知家庭和睦对社会和谐来说很重要，故A项正确。
【答案】A
35. In the passage, parents fear that ______________.
A. their children might be lost in their digital world
B. their children will be in danger in the 21st century
C. their possible divorce may lead their children to crime and antisocial behavior
D. their children may develop genuine relationships with other people
【解析】细节理解题。根据第一段中的“parents have genuine reasons to argue that young people like this are in danger of losing the ability to connect with one another, to develop genuine
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relationships and to separate the fictional world of the Xbox or the Play Station from the real world. ”可知，父母们担心孩子会迷失在虚拟的数码世界里，故A项正确。
【答案】A
第二节（共5小题；每小题2分，满分10 分）
根据短文内容，从短文后的选项中选出能填入空白处的最佳选项。选项中有两项为多余选项。
Most people feel lonely sometimes, but it usually only lasts between a few minutes and a few hours.
36. In fact, it is quite normal. For some people, though, loneliness can last for years. Psychologists are studying this complex phenomenon, and have identified three different types of loneliness.
The first kind of loneliness is temporary. This is the most common type. It usually disappears quickly and does not require any special attention. The second kind, situation-for example, family problem, the death of a loved one, or moving to a new place. 37.
The third kind of loneliness is the most severe. Unlike the others, chronic (the opposite of "temporary")usually lasts more than two years and has no specific cause. 38. Unfortunately, many chronically lonely people think there is little or nothing they can do to improve their condition.
Psychologists agree that one important factor in loneliness is a person's social contacts, for example, friends, family members, co-workers, etc. We depend on various people for different reasons. For instance, our families give us emotional support, our parents and teachers give us guidance, and our friends share similar interests and activities. However, psychologists have found that, though lonely people may have many social contacts, they sometimes feel they should have more.39.
Psychologists are trying to find ways to help habitually lonely people for two reasons. They are unhappy and unable to socialize and there is a connection between chronic loneliness and serious illness as heart disease.40.
A. It is very difficult to deal with.
B. What's more, temporary and situational loneliness can be a sad, and sometimes dangerous condition.
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C. Although it can cause physical problems» such as headaches and sleeplessness, it usually does not last for more than a year.
D. This kind of loneliness is not serious.
E. They don' t think they are in need of them.
F. People who experience it have problems socializing and becoming close to others.
G. They question their popularity.
【解析】
36.D 从后面一句的“In fact，it is quite normal。”可知这种情况不严重，很正常。
37.C 这是介于第一种和第三种的孤独症，时间应该介于temporary和more than two years之间，所以选择C。
38.F 从上下文可以判断此处应该是讲述第三种孤独症的症状。所以选择F。
39.G 从上文的“though lonely people may have many social contacts，they sometimes feel they should have more”可知他们没有安全感，不够自信。接下来就是质疑自己，选择G。
40.B 从最后一段的第一句可知本段讲述的是专家介入孤独症患者治疗的原因。从连词what's more也可以进一步确定答案是B。
【答案】36-40：DCFGB
第三部分: 英语知识运用（共两节， 满分45分）
第一节: 完形填空（共20 小题；每小题1.5分，满分30分）
阅读下面短文，从短文后所给各题的四个选项（A、B、C和D）中，选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项，并在答题卡上将该项涂黑。
（河北承德一中2017届高三第二次月考）“Shabby” is the very word that comes, also describes my state of mind when I think back to that time and place.
I was a new mother then, having given birth to my first 41 child. The birth was difficult, including forty hours of 42 .
On this 43 day, with my husband’s absence, I had no family and no friends in this new area. Sitting there 44 my baby, I felt hopelessly sad and tired. Looking around, then at my beautiful little daughter, I 45 how I could care for her, or even cook dinner later.
When a(n) 46 sounded at my door next moment, I just wanted to cry, but managed to 47 the tears to 48 the door. There stood a smiling young woman 49 to my own age, carrying a big pot. She stepped 50 , placed it on my kitchen table, 51 herself. She lived in
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52 shabby house nearby, and 53 had learned that a new mum lived here. She, too, had a new baby, and knew that I would 54 be too tired to cook. So, she brought me a big pot of homemade soup.
Her kindness 55 me up and the soup 56 for many days. So it was with our friendship for years, 57 we both moved away , sadly losing touch of each other.
I haven’t forgotten the wonderful 58 of her heart given to me at my lowest time, by my caring 59 . And I have continued the 60 and have given a pot of soup to many new mothers along the way.
41. A. precious B. disabled C. advantageous D. valuable
42. A. pain B. treatment C. protection D. labor
43. A. fancy B. particular C. responsible D. loose
44. A. watching over B. holding C. observing D. faced with
45. A. knew B. made it C. wondered D. determined
46. A. knock B. strike C. bell D. attack
47. A. hold back B. care about C. cry D. call for
48. A. turn off B. settle C. release D. answer
49. A. similarity B. different C. close D. contrary
50. A. forward B. outside C. inside D. nearby
51. A. introducing B. instructing C. blaming D. telling
52. A. one another B. another C. lonely D. the other
53. A. therefore B. moreover C. meanwhile D. somehow
54. A. gradually B. frequently C. undoubtedly D. hopefully
55. A. cheered B. arose C. looked D. turned
56. A. continued B. lasted C. remained D. stayed
57. A. in case B. for certain C. after D. until
58. A. soup B. gift C. kindness D. generosity
59. A. husband B. woman C. neighbor D. daughter
60. A. friendship B. attitude C. principle D. tradition
【解析】
41.A 根据下文“then at my beautiful little daughter,”可知，作者生下了
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第一个宝贝。precious珍贵的。
42.D 根据上文“The birth was difficult,”可知，生孩子很困难，包括40小时的努力。labor努力。
43.B 根据上文“I was a new mother then, having given birth to my first child.”可知，这是一个特殊的日子。particular特别的。
44．B 根据上文“I was a new mother then, having given birth to my first child.”可知，作者坐在那里抱着孩子。hold抱着。故选B。
45．C 句意：看看四周，看看我漂亮的小女儿，我想知道我怎么能照料她。wonder想知道。
46．A 根据下文“There stood a smiling young woman”可知，有人敲门。knock敲击。故选A。
47．A 根据上文“I just wanted to cry,”可知，作者努力忍住眼泪。hold back忍住。
48．D 根据上文“When a(n) sounded at my door next moment,”可知，这里是作者忍住眼泪去应门。answer回应。故选D。
49．C 句意：外面站着和我年龄相仿的微笑着的年轻女士，close接近。故选C。
50．C 根据下文“placed it on my kitchen table,”可知，她走进来。inside进来。故选C。
51．A 根据下文“She lived in shabby house nearby,”可知，这个女士开始自我介绍。introduce介绍。故选A。
52．B 句意：她住在另外一个破旧的房子里。another另一个。故选B。
53．D 句意：不知怎么地，她知道有个新母亲住在这里。somehow不知怎的。故选D。
54．C 根据上文“She, too, had a new baby,”可知，毫无疑问，她知道我太累了不能做饭。undoubtedly毫无疑问地。故选C。
55．A 句意：她的善良让我振作起来。cheer up振作起来。故选A。
56．B 根据下文“So it was with our friendship for years,”可知，她送汤给我持续了好几天。
57．D 根据上文“So it was with our friendship for years,”可知，我们的友谊也持续很多年，直到我们都搬走了。until直到。
58．B 我忘不了她用心的礼物。gift礼物。故选B。
59．C 根据上文“She lived in shabby house nearby,”可知，这个妇女是作者的邻居。neighbor邻居。故选C。
60．D 根据下文“have given a pot of soup to many new mothers along the way.”可知，作者继续这个传统。tradition传统。故选D。
【答案】41-45 ADBBC 46-50 AADCC 51-55 ABDCA 56-60 BDBCD
第 II 卷
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第三部分 英语知识运用（共两节 满分45分）
第二节 (共10题；每小题1.5分，满分15分)
阅读下面材料，在空白处填入适当的内容（ 1个单词）或括号内单词的正确形式。
（重庆一中2016届高三5月模拟）Hiking and fast-paced walking are great ways 61
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(lose) weight and to improve cardiovascular fitness. Get out in 62 sunshine and quicken the pace.
Start with 10 minutes and gradually increase your time. Make your 63 (day) goal 30 minutes of fast-paced walking. Walk 64 your normal walking pace for five minutes before picking up speed. This gets your breathing and heart rate up before starting an aerobic walking workout. After your workout, take five minutes to gradually return to your normal walking pace. This 65 (allow) your heart rate and blood pressure to stabilize.
It usually takes 66 (long) to go hiking than fast-paced walking. Each step you take in Hiking requires 67 (watch). Don’t race against others, but you can gradually pick up speed as you familiarize 68 with the trail. The challenge of hillside fields will cause your heart rate to increase. Take your time. 69 your uphill climb gets difficult and you’re breathing hard, stop and enjoy the views. Hiking alone is never a good idea. Take a friend, a 70 (rely) adult and your cellphone.
【解析】
61. to lose 考查不定式用法。本句中不定式to lose weight 在句中做目的状语，与后半句中不定式to improve cardiovascular fitness 构成并列关系。句意：远足和快步走是减肥和使心血管健康的好方法。
62.the 考查定冠词。 英语中定冠词the 通常表示特指，本句中定冠词the 修饰名词sunshine, 表示特指。
63.daily 考查形容词。本句横线后有名词goal, 说明横线应使用形容词daily 做定语修饰名词goal. 句意： 制定每天快步走30分钟的目标。
64. at 考查固定搭配。介词短语at the pace of 以…..的速度； 句意：在你加快速度之前按照正常的速度走5分钟的时间。
65. will allow/allows 考查时态。前句中提到加速之前按照正常速度走5分钟，锻炼以后慢慢地回到正常的速度，这种方法可以让你心跳和血压得到锻炼。表示经常性习惯性的行为，可以使用一般现在时，也可以使用将来时表示未来的情况。
66. longer 考查比较级。本句中后半句有介词than，说明应该使用比较级形式longer。句意：远足要比快步走花很多的时间。
67. watching/to be watched 考查固定搭配。句式sth require doing = sth require to be done某事需要被做。
68. yourself/yourselves 考查反身代词。本句中反身代词yourself/yourselves作为动词familiarize的宾语。句意：当你熟悉了这一方式以后，你可以逐渐地提高速度。
69. If/When 考查连词。本句中可以使用if引导条件状语从句，when引导时间状语从句。句意：如果登山太困难，你呼吸困难了，就停下来欣赏风景。当你登山太困难，你呼吸困难的时候，就停下来欣赏风景。
70. reliable 考查形容词。本句中横线后面有名词adult与cellphone，说明横线应该使用形容词reliable做定语修饰名词。
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【答案】
61. to lose 62. the 63. daily 64. at 65. will allow/allows 66. longer 67.watching/to be watched 68. yourself / yourselves 69. If / When 70. reliable
第四部分：写作（共两节；满分35分）
第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
The moment when the Chinese teacher found that I wrote a wrong character in my notes, he asked me to stand up, becoming angrily. I did what he demanded, realize that all my classmates’ eyes were focused on him. Feeling embarrassed, I lowered my head not to see anyone.
However, my teacher didn’t want to let it go. He tears my textbook into piece and smashed it onto my desk. I suddenly blushed with shame and embarrassment, too shocking to say a word. My angry teacher kept roaring at me but I couldn’t remember single word he said. I just stood there, with my head down, trying to find a hole on the ground that I could hide myself.
【解析】
第一处：此处的the moment是连词，不需要再接when，故去掉when。
第二处：become后接形容词作表语，故把angrily改为angry。
第三处：由句子结构可知此处使用非谓语，I与realize之间是逻辑上的主谓关系，表示主动，用现在分词作伴随状语，故把realize改为realizing。
第四处：此处表示“我”，作介词的宾语，故把him改为me。
第五处：讲述的是发生在过去的事情，用一般过去时，故把tears改为tore。
第六处：tear into pieces表示“撕成碎片”，故把piece改为pieces。
第七处：-ing形容词修饰物，表示“令人……的”，-ed形容词修饰人，表示“感到……的”，此处修饰人，故把shocking改为shocked。
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第八处：word是可数名词，此处表示泛指，故在single前加a。
第九处：in表示在内部，on表示在表面上，故把on改为in。
第十处：此处为定语从句，从句中不缺主宾表，缺少地点状语，故把that改为where。
【答案】
The moment when the Chinese teacher found that I wrote a wrong character in my notes, he asked me
to stand up, becoming angrily. I did what he demanded, realize that all my classmates’ eyes were focused on
angry realizing
him. Feeling embarrassed, I lowered my head not to see anyone.
me
However, my teacher didn’t want to let it go. He tears my textbook into piece and smashed it onto my
tore pieces
desk. I suddenly blushed with shame and embarrassment, too shocking to say a word. My angry teacher kept
shocked
roaring at me but I couldn’t remember ∧single word he said. I just stood there, with my head down, trying
a
to find a hole on the ground that I could hide myself.
in where
第二节 书面表达（满分25分）
（银川一中2016届高三三模）假如你是李华， 你的加拿大朋友Mike在与你同一城市的国际学校读书。你收到他的email了解到他最近因为一次考试没有考好而烦恼， 请按照以下内容给Mike写一封回信。
1.宽慰
2.给予改进学习的建议（查找失败原因；向老师求助； 劳逸结合）
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3.邀请周末去打篮球。
注意：1. 字数100字左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已给出， 不计入字数。
Dear Mike ,
I’m sorry to hear that you failed in the last exam._____________________________
________________________________________________________________________
Hoping everything will be fine with you .
Yours
Li Hua
（一） 参考范文
Dear Mike,
I’m sorry to hear that you failed in the last exam. But I have to remind you that nobody can win all the time .So you had better forget the unchangeable fact and focus more energy on future studies.
To guarantee success in the next exam, you are advised to do what I will tell you to .First, find out the real reasons why you failed the exam. Only when you know where your mistakes are, will you know how to correct them. Besides, it is wise to turn to your teachers for help. After all, they are experienced. Meanwhile, remember to strike the balance with studies and rest. Adequate sleep and proper exercise will certainly make it possible for you to keep energetic.
How about playing football together this weekend? Surely we will have fun.
Hoping everything will be fine with you.
Yours
Li Hua
（二）、评分原则
1、本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。
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2、评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。
3、词数少于80和多于120的，从总分中减去2分。
4、评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性及上下文的连贯性。
5、拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。
6、如书写较差，以致影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。
（三）、评分细则
第五档(21-25分)：完全完成了试题规定的任务，完全达到了预期的写作目的。
——覆盖所有内容要点；
——应用了较多的语法结构和词汇；
——语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备较强的语言运用能力；
——有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。
第四档(16-20分)：完全完成了试题规定的任务，达到了预期的写作目的。
——虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容；
——应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求；
——语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致；
——应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。
第三档(11-15分)：基本完成了试题规定的任务，整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。
——虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容；
——应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求；
——有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解；
——应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯。
第二档(6-10分)：未恰当完成试题规定的任务，信息未能清楚地传达给读者。
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——漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容；
——语法结构单调、词汇项目有限；
——有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解；
——较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。
第一档(1-5分)：未完成试题规定的任务，信息未能传达给读者
——明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求；
——语法结构单调、词汇项目有限；
——较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解；
——缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。
不得分(0分)：未能传达给读者任何信息：内容太少，无法评判；写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。
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