2017届高考英语二轮复习书面表达限时测验(2)含答案解析.doc

由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 www.ks5u.com ‎2017届高考英语二轮专题复习 书面表达限时测验2（含答案）‎ ‎1．‎ 下面是一所学校的课程表。请以“My thought on a timetable in a middle school” 为题，按照下列要求写一篇英语短文。‎ 一个中学生的课表 ‎ 星期时间 星期一 星期二 星期三 星期四 星期五 星期六 上 午 ‎1‎ 数学 英语 数学 英语 语文 数学 ‎2‎ 语文 数学 英语 数学 英语 语文 ‎3‎ 英语 生物 物理 化学 历史 英语 ‎4‎ 政治 地理 历史 语文 数学 物理 下 午 ‎5‎ 体育 化学 地理 生物 体育 化学 ‎6‎ 物理 作文 政治 化学 物理 地理 ‎7‎ 自习 作文 心理 自习 政治 历史 晚 上 作业 作业 作业 作业 作业 ‎2．‎ 书面表达（满分30分）‎ Global Shortage of Fresh Water ‎ ‎1） 有人认为淡水是取之不尽的。（雨水、河水、井水、地下水） ‎ ‎2） 实际上淡水是非常紧缺的。（人口增加、工业用水增加、污染、干旱） ‎ ‎3） 提出解决问题的办法。‎ 注意： 1. 词数：120字左右。‎ ‎ 2. 卷面整洁分：2分 ‎3. 注意语篇连贯，可根据需要增减括号中的内容。‎ ‎ ‎ ‎3．‎ 第二节 书面表达（满分25分）‎ 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 假设你是李明，是上海市的一名中学生，请你围绕“建设健康世博，今天不吸烟”的主题，根据下面所给出的要点提示，用英语给全市的中学生写一封倡议书。‎ 要点提示：1.加入“今天不吸烟”志愿者社团，掌握劝烟常识；‎ ‎ 2 走进公共场所，设立“今天不吸烟”警示牌；‎ ‎ 3 劝导在公共场所吸烟的市民自觉控烟，并广泛征集活动签名；‎ ‎ 4 你的态度（内容由考生自己拟定）‎ 注意：1 词数：100字左右。倡议书的开头，结尾以及提示句已为你写好，不计入词数。‎ ‎ 2 内容可适当发挥，注意行文连贯。‎ A Letter to High School Students in Shanghai ‎ Dear fellow students,‎ Our city is aiming to build a “Healthy Expo--- No smoking today!”. I think it’s every student’s duty to work hard to achieve the goal.‎ As a high school student, what should we do?__________________________ _______________‎ ‎_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.‎ Dear fellow students, let’ s start to fight now and spare no effort to do a little bit every day, every hour and every minute!‎ ‎ Ling Ming ‎4．下面是对中学生对志愿者工作的看法的调查表，请根据下面所给的信息写一篇英语小短文讨论中学生是否应该参加志愿者活动（voluntary work）。题目自拟，字数100左右。‎ ‎70%的学生赞成参加志愿者活动 为社会作贡献，帮助别人是一件很有意义的工作，带来很多个人利益，为日后的工作获得宝贵的技能和经验，为自己创造机遇，增强信心、自觉意识、良好的交际能力和领导才能 ‎25%的学生不愿意从事志愿者活动 无报酬，浪费时间，耽误学习 ‎5%的学生无明确态度 漠不关心 ‎5．假设你叫王平。为响应国家厉行节约的号召，请你以“厉行节约——为自愿、为环保”为题，向某英语报社编辑写信，表达你对厉行节约的看法。该英文信应包括以下内容：‎ 节约与资源的关系；‎ 节约与环保的关系；‎ 举例说明中学生该如何厉行节约；‎ 倡导社会保持节约的优良传统。‎ 注意: 1.词数:120字 左 右 ；‎ ‎2.全文不得体现出人的真实姓名 参考答案 ‎1．‎ From this table, we can see that a middle school student in China has as many as 12 different subjects in a week. A child under this schedule will have to go to school every day including a half of Saturdays. The total studying time in a week adds up to as many as 45 hours.‎ 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 Knowledge is important. But this does not mean what you get out of the text books. “Pure” text-book knowledge can be useless without combining it with practice. It becomes worse if it is acquired at the cost of the students’ health and sense of happiness. ‎ So what we should do is to reduce the academic burden of the students. Add in more “free time” for them. The students may find studying more interesting and will be more willingly to do it under better health conditions.‎ ‎【解析】‎ ‎2．‎ Seventy percent of the earth＇s surface is covered with water , which might leads us to think that fresh water is everywhere and it will never be used up in the world.‎ ‎ Actually, fresh water is in a short supply. We know that only a little part of water is fresh water. Yet the demand for fresh water (in our daily life and in industry) seems great. Moreover, with the expansion of the population and development of industry, the amount of the fresh water needed will increase even rapidly. It is estimated that if such a trend continues, the fresh water will be exhausted/used up very soon. What’s worse, more and more water resources are being polluted, and unfit to use , and more rivers and wells have dried up because of droughts.‎ ‎ The good news is that we are aware of the importance of fresh water and its shortage we are facing. We are trying to control the wastes from factories and develop new ways to recycle the used water.‎ ‎ In conclusion, the global shortage of fresh water, I believe, can be solved if we take some measures in time. ‎ ‎【解析】‎ ‎3．‎ ‎ A Letter to High School Students in ‎Shanghai ‎ Dear fellow students,‎ ‎ Our city is aiming to build a “Healthy Expo--- No smoking today!”. I think it’s every student’s duty to work hard to achieve the goal.‎ ‎ As a high school student, what should we do?‎ ‎ There are some things we can do to make our city more beautiful and healthier. Firstly, we can join the “No smoking today!” society to become a volunteer. There we can learn some common sense about persuading people to give up smoking. Secondly, we can go to different public places to set up some alarm signs reading “No smoking today!”. In this way, we can make more people know the aim of our activity. Thirdly, when we see someone smoking in public places, we should persuade him or her to give it up to keep the air clean. And we should ask more people to sign their names to promise they won’t smoke again.‎ ‎ As for myself, I will do all the above to make our city the cleanest one in the world.‎ ‎ Dear fellow students, let’s start to fight now and spare no effort to do a little bit every day, every hour and every minute!‎ ‎【解析】‎ ‎4．不唯一 Possible version: ‎ Different students have different attitudes toward voluntary work.‎ 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 ‎ 70% of the students approve of doing voluntary work. They consider that it can make a contribution to society and that it is a worthwhile job to help others. It can also bring personal benefits and will contribute to their future because they can gain valuable experience and skills for their future career. Voluntary work often opens up opportunities for them, build up confidence, self-awareness, good communication skills and leadership ability.‎ ‎ 25% of the students disapprove of doing voluntary work. They think the work is done without payment and it is a waste of time. The rest of the students don’t have clear attitudes towards it, nor do they care about it.‎ ‎ I think each of us should make a contribution to society. No matter how small it is, it will help make a difference.‎ ‎ Peter ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：拿到作文题目，首先要认真审题，这是一篇提纲作文，下面是对中学生对志愿者工作的看法的调查表，请根据下面所给的信息写一篇英语小短文讨论中学生是否应该参加志愿者活动（voluntary work）。所以要用一般现在时来写。需要写的内容已经以表格形式给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意题目要求字数100词左右。‎ 考点：提纲作文 点评：本文属于提纲作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。‎ ‎5．‎ Dear editor,‎ I’m Wang Ping. I’m writing to offer your newspaper an article Trying to Save Both for Natural Resources and the Environment.‎ Saving is very important because natural resources in our world may run out one day, so we should save some for our offspring. Meanwhile , saving can help us avoid producing waste, which will make our homeland more beautiful. As students, we should make our contributions. For example, we can recycle our textbooks or use both sides of our exercise books. In this way more trees would be saved. What’s more, we Chinese have a good tradition of saving and regard wasting as a shame, so we call for everybody’s action to save what we can to make our beautiful life last forever.‎ ‎ Best wishes ‎ Yours sincerely ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：这是一篇话题类作文。假设你叫王平。为响应国家厉行节约的号召，请你以“厉行节约——为资源、为环保”为题，向某英语报社编辑写信，表达你对厉行节约的看法。该英文信应包括以下内容：1.节约与资源的关系；2. 节约与环保的关系；‎ 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 ‎3. 举例说明中学生该如何厉行节约；4. 倡导社会保持节约的优良传统。需要写的内容已经粗略给出，需要我们翻译成完整通顺的句子，适当添加些内容，使文章更充实。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。一定要给出自己的看法。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型为文章润色。注意要求的词数120词左右，不要太多也不要太少。‎ ‎【亮点说明】Meanwhile , saving can help us avoid producing waste, which will make our homeland more beautiful.这里含有一个非限制性定语从句；What’s more, we Chinese have a good tradition of saving and regard wasting as a shame, so we call for everybody’s action to save what we can to make our beautiful life last forever.这里含有一个宾语从句。‎ 考点：话题类书面表达 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费