2017届高考英语二轮复习书面表达限时测验(3)含答案解析.doc

由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 www.ks5u.com ‎2017届高考英语二轮专题复习 书面表达限时测验3（含答案）‎ ‎1．‎ 书面表达（满分30分）‎ ‎ 请以The Teacher I Respect Most 为题目，写一篇120词左右的英语短文，内容应包括这个人的外貌特征、性格、对你的影响以及你尊敬他/她的理由。‎ The Teacher I Respect Most ________________________________________________________‎ ‎______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎2．‎ 情景作文（20分）‎ ‎ 某中学生英语报开展展征文活动，主题为“2009年北京的交通状况”。下面的图表是2009年北京交通出行结构示意图。请结合图表内容，用英语写一篇简要的报告，并就某个数据说说你的观点，参加征文活动。词数不少于60。‎ ‎ ‎ ‎3．请结合材料，按要求用英文写作，词数不少于60。‎ It is reported that some teenagers don’t respect their parents, quarreling with them or even using violence.‎ 要求：‎ ‎（1）就此材料发表你的感想;‎ ‎（2）应紧扣材料，有明确的观点;‎ ‎ (3) 请在答题卡上作答。‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎4．我们能活在这美好、精彩的世界上，是因为有父母，老师，朋友。因此在每个人的生命之中应怀有一颗感恩之心，学会感恩他人。 请从以下几点展开写一篇题目为Learn to Be Grateful 的文章。1.感恩父母；‎ ‎2.感恩老师；‎ ‎3.感恩朋友；‎ ‎4.你认为，我们应该做些什么.‎ 提示：1、可加入一些细节， 使文章更加通顺合理。‎ 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 ‎2、词数：100字左右（开头部分不计）‎ Learn to Be Grateful Whenever and wherever we are, we should learn to be grateful to the people around us in this beautiful and wonderful world.________________________‎ ‎______________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎5．假如你是李华，育才中学高二在读。五月份美国一中学，组织部分学生到你校参观交流。Karl将在你家居住15天，作为东道主，你给Karl发一封Email，内容如下：‎ ‎1. 你的基本情况；‎ ‎2. 你的计划打算；‎ ‎3. 征求对方意见。‎ 注意：1. 词数80-100；‎ ‎2. 可适当增加细节。‎ 参考答案 ‎1．‎ One possible version：‎ The Teacher I Respect Most If you ask me who I respect most ，the answer will be my English teacher。Aged 43， she is neither tall nor short 。in my eyes she is beautiful and great 。she is a kind-hearted person who is always ready to help others 。in the school she offers me all her love and makes sure I will grow up happily。She herself works very hard ，which sets a good example to me 。she has a curious way to make her classes lively and interesting 。she teaches all she knows 。with her encouragement ，I always do well in my studies and have become the top student in my class 。I just can not imagine what would happen without my teacher。So she is the teacher I respect most 。‎ ‎【解析】‎ ‎2．‎ One possible version:‎ ‎ The chart shows the percentage of the different means of transportation people used in Beijing in 2009．38．9% of the people preferred to use public transportation, such as buses, or subways．At the same time, the people who drove made up 34% of the total, which shows the increasing tendency of private cars．The result also shows only 18．1% of the people traveled by bike, while 7．1% of the people took taxis, and 1．9% tried other means of transportation．‎ ‎ From the data showed above, more than one third of the citizens are in favor of public transportation．In my opinion, people should be encouraged to use buses or subways, as it can reduce pollution and relieve traffic jams．Besides, it is very economical and convenient．‎ ‎【解析】‎ ‎3．Respecting parents is a traditional virtue in China. No matter how old we are, we should respect our parents.‎ Wherever we go or whatever we do, we should always remember that it is our parents who gave us lives and brought us up. Therefore, we should love and respect them. We can do a lot of small things to show our respect, such as doing some housework for them, expressing our thanks to them.‎ ‎【解析】‎ 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 试题分析：考查半开放性作文。本文要求结合材料，按要求用英文写作，内容是以英语短文出现，要求考生读懂材料，看懂材料的主旨是一些年轻人对父母的不尊重，要求（1）就此材料发表你的感想;（2）应紧扣材料，有明确的观点;在保证内容要点全部概括的基础上可以充分发挥自己的想象，进而用自己的语言来表达某种观点或看法，增添了写作的灵活性，同时能较好地考查考生的想象能力和英语语言表达能力。‎ 考点：考查半开放性作文写作 点评：半开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的英语提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。‎ ‎4．‎ Learn to Be Grateful Whenever and wherever we are, we should learn to be grateful to the people around us in this beautiful and wonderful world.‎ First of all, I would like to express thanks to my parents who give their endless love to me. As we know, parents do all they can to make their children’s life better and better. Secondly, I am grateful to my teachers for their selfless work. Why I admire them is that they teach us not only knowledge but also all kinds of important skills. Finally, I want to thank my fellow friends who share happiness and sorrow with me. Because of you, my life is filled with laughters and sunshine.‎ They are so important in my life that we should learn to be grateful to them. Try to remember to give our sincere wishes to them now and then. Above all, we should try to work hard and live happily, which is a good pay for them.‎ ‎【解析】‎ 试题解析：‎ 作文主要写对父母、老师、朋友进行感恩，对此你认为我们应该怎么做，要从三方面进行阐述，每个方面要写出我们面对敢跟该怎么办，知道要点内容，把要点加以整理，用适当的句型进行概括；概括时可以主要用简单句，也可以适当用复杂句，但要确保复杂句使用正确；切记要点要全，不要遗漏；注意语法正确，单词拼写正确，字体干净。‎ 考点：考查学生的综合语言能力 点评：要认真审题，用正确的语言表示。切记要点要全，不要遗漏；注意语法正确，单词拼写正确，字体干净。‎ ‎5．‎ Dear Karl,‎ I’m Li Hua, studying in Senior 2 of Yucai High School, which you will visit. I’m very happy for your homestay.‎ I like science subjects very much, especially maths, but my spoken English is so poor that I can’t communicate with foreigners fluently. Thanks God you will come to help me with this problem. By the way, NBA is my favourite game, so whenever I’m free, I do watch it on TV. If only I could watch a live game in the USA!‎ Here I’d like to make some arrangements for your stay. Besides your team activities, I’ll show you around our city, and on the weekend, we’ll go to Confucius’home for 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 ‎ a visit with my parents to experience some Chinese culture.‎ Of course that’s what I want to do during your stay. What’s your opinion?‎ Looking forward to your reply soon. Li Hua ‎ ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：这是一篇书信类作文。假如你是李华，育才中学高二在读。五月份美国一中学，组织部分学生到你校参观交流。Karl将在你家居住15天，作为东道主，你给Karl发一封Email，内容如下：1. 你的基本情况；2. 你的计划打算；3. 征求对方意见。需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可，尤其注意一定要写出自己的看法。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。注意要求的词数80-100词左右，不要太多也不要太少。‎ 考点：书信类作文 ‎【亮点说明】I’m Li Hua, studying in Senior 2 of Yucai High School, which you will visit.这里含有一个非限制性定语从句；Of course that’s what I want to do during your stay.这里含有一个表语从句。‎ 考点：书信类书面表达 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费