2017届高考英语二轮复习书面表达限时测验(9)含答案解析.doc

由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 www.ks5u.com ‎2017届高考英语二轮专题复习 书面表达限时测验9（含答案）‎ ‎1．‎ 书面表达 (共1题，12分)‎ ‎ 假设你是本刊读者Jack，请你根据所给的背景材料给Peter写封回信。内容包括：‎ ‎1.分析Peter父母不同意的理由；‎ ‎ 2.你给Peter的具体建议。‎ 背景材料：‎ Teenagers 总228（10/2009）期 编者按：本期刊登了Peter的来信，欢迎读者就信中谈到的问题进行分析并提出建议。‎ ‎ Editor,‎ ‎ I’m a boy of 18. I like arts, especially dancing. I want to attend a hip-hop（街舞） training course on the weekend, but my parents don’t permit me to. I’m very upset and need your advice.‎ ‎ Peter 注意：字数100左右。文章的开头已经给出，不计入总字数。‎ ‎ Peter,‎ ‎ You are very upset that your parents don’t permit you to attend a hip-hop training course on the weekend. ‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________________ ‎ ‎ Yours,‎ ‎ Jack ‎2．‎ 第五部分 书面表达 (满分25分)‎ 下图反映了家长给孩子送饭的常见现象。对此，家长、老师、学生都有各自的看法。请根据下表所提示的信息，用英文写一篇短文。‎ 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 注意：1．对所给要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。‎ ‎2．词数150左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。‎ ‎3．作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。‎ Nowadays it’s common for parents to bring much delicious food to their children at school. ‎ ‎3．请按下列提示，以Hong Kong 为题，简要介绍其基本情况，字数120左右。 ‎ 地理位置 中国东南部 面    积 ‎1000余平方公里 人    口 ‎6百多万 气    候 平均：2月15℃；7月28℃ 5—9 月间雨水多 经    贸 有“东方之珠”（Pearl）之称；是世界上最大的贸易中心之一。‎ 前    景 香港的明天会更好。‎ ‎4．假设你的朋友Tom写信向你询问你最近的学习生活状况，请你以Li Hua的身份给Tom回信，内容应包括以下要点：‎ 注意：字数120词左右；可适当发挥，使上下文连贯；‎ ‎1. 目前的学习生活状况。‎ ‎2. 高中的苦与乐,对未来的打算。‎ ‎3. 英语学习方面有困难，希望得到一些帮助。‎ ‎4. 邀请对方来中国游玩，期盼早日收到回信。‎ Dear Tom,‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎______________________‎ ‎ Yours’‎ Li Hua ‎5．阅读下面的短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。‎ What my mother does drives me crazy. She calls me at 10:30 pm every night to make sure I’ve arrived home safely. If I accidentally miss her call, she will keep calling all my friends and roommates until she "tracks me down". ‎ As a 20-year-old lady in Beijing, sometimes I have to ask my friends to be quiet so that I can pick up my mother's phone call, telling her a white lie that I'm already at home. ‎ 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 ‎ Recently I ran into a matchmaking meeting, which is held in a park and specifically designed for single white – collar workers in Beijing. The interesting part is that all of the attendees are single people’s parents, eager to look for a life partner for their children. ‎ One mother told me that her 33-year-old son is busy with his career and has zero time to find a suitable girl for himself. So she goes to the matchmaking every week, trying to find her son a perfect bride. ‎ She guaranteed that her future daughter-in-law doesn't need to worry about anything for she has prepared an apartment and a car for them, and if they can’t find a kindergarten near the apartment she has bought, she will buy them another one. Looking at hundreds of middle – aged parents standing in the cold outdoors in a freezing winter trying to build their children a perfect future, I suddenly understand my mother more.‎ ‎【写作内容】‎ ‎ 1．以约30个词概括这段短文的内容；‎ ‎ 2．然后以约120个词就“父母的过分关爱”进行议论，内容包括；‎ ‎（1）请举一个你或你周围的周学得到父母的过分关爱的事例；‎ ‎（2）谈谈你对此事的看法。‎ ‎【写作要求】‎ ‎ 1．在作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。‎ ‎ 2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。‎ ‎【评分标准】‎ ‎ 概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。‎ 参考答案 ‎1．‎ One possible version：‎ Dear Peter,‎ ‎ You are very upset that your parents don’t permit you to attend a hip-hop training course on the weekend. I understand your situation. Maybe, your parents are worried that you will spend so much time on it that your study will be affected.‎ ‎ I suggest you have a good talk with your parents. You can also turn to your dance teacher for help. You should make your parents aware of the benefits of the training class. For example, the training will build up your body and make your mind relaxed. Good health and a sharp mind will certainly contribute to better study results in turn. What’s more, you can communicate with more people and learn a lot about society. Of course, you must promise that you will not spend too much time on it.‎ ‎ I’m sure your parents will agree with you in the end.‎ ‎ Yours,‎ ‎ Jack ‎【解析】‎ 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 ‎______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．‎ One possible version:‎ Nowadays it’s common for parents to bring much delicious food to their children at school. ‎ Parents, teachers and students have different opinions. Many parents don’t think school food caters to their children’s taste. They think it their responsibility to satisfy their children’s needs. As for teachers, they understand what parents do for their children, yet the situation will bring about some problems, such as food safety. ‎ We students should be grateful to our parents for their selfless love. Of course, with parents preparing delicious food and helping do all the washing, we can eat properly and have more time to study. However, if we are always under the protection of our parents, we can’t develop our own ability to live independently. ‎ So I think we students should not only learn the book knowledge, but also learn to live independently, which will make a difference to our work and life in the future.‎ ‎【解析】‎ ‎3．‎ Hong Kong Hong Kong is part of China. It lies in the southeast of China. It has an area of over 1000 square kilometers and a population of over 6 million. ‎ It is neither too hot in summer nor too cold in winter in Hong Kong. The average temperature is ‎15℃‎ in February and ‎28℃‎ in July. It often rains during the months from May to September. ‎ Hong Kong is known as “Pearl in the East”. It is one of the largest trade centers in the world. ‎ We are sure Hong Kong will have a brighter future. ‎ ‎【解析】略 ‎4．不唯一 Dear Tom, ‎ Thank you very much for your last letter which asked me something about my study and life. How’s everything going? I’m now writing this letter to tell you my recent situation.‎ As far as I’m concerned, my school life is busy but meaningful. On the one hand, I am busy preparing for the coming exams. I have to do much homework every day so that I have little time to enjoy sunshine. On the other hand, I have made many friends with my classmates. We get on well and help each other with our studies. In addition, my dream is to study computer science in university and become an excellent computer engineer in the future. I am sure I will realize my dream. What’s more, I just wonder if you could help me and give me some advice because I have trouble in studying English. /I find it hard to study English, could you give me some advice?‎ In a word, welcome to China and I’m glad to be your guide. I’m looking forward to receiving your letter as soon as possible.‎ Yours Li Hua ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：分析了考 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 生写作时常犯的错误，主要表现在以下几个方面。(1)时态错误：文章中忽视了动作发生的时间。(2)人称代词错误：单复数、形容词性物主代词与名词性物主代词错误。(3)名词单复数、动词单复数、主谓语不一致。(4)用词错误：对同义词的区别、使用场合、习惯用法不熟悉，或者忘记了单词。(5)内容不连贯：不会用关联词，语序混乱。没有统筹安排，写到哪里，就停在哪里。(6)不会使用某些英语应用文格式。(7)大小写、标点符号错误，缺少冠词。(8)书写混乱，卷面潦草。提醒考生注意本文是信的格式。主要要点要齐全。‎ 考点：提纲作文。‎ 点评：加强积累适量的词汇、词组和增加各种类型句子的运用。把握好各种句型和词汇的搭配，并从各类题材和体裁着手，思考内容的连贯性，语言和句子的准确性。会使用连接词或过渡句使句子的连接起来，读起来流畅。‎ ‎5．The author, a 20-year-old lady, took her own experience as an example to show that today too much care is paid to the Chinese children by their parents, even when they have already grown up.‎ What my mother does drives me crazy. She calls me at 10:30pm every night to make sure I’ve arrived home safely. If I accidentally miss her call, she will keep calling all my friends and roomates until she "tracks me down".‎ As a 20-year-old lady in Beijing, sometimes I have to ask my friends to be quiet so that I can I can pick up my mother's phone call, telling her a white lie that I'm already at home.‎ The author, a 20-year-old lady, took her own experience as an example to show that today too much care is paid to the Chinese children by their parents, even when they have already grown up.‎ ‎【解析】这篇作文分两部分，第一部分用30个字概括文章，要求学生有很强的概括能力，还要表达出文章的主题来。语言精当条理清楚。第二部分是议论“父母的过分关爱”的问题，要点包括；一个你或你周围的周学得到父母的过分关爱的事例；并谈谈你对此事的看法。说明文章可以分两部分，一是用过去时表述一件相关的事，再就此事发表自己的看法，应该是一般现在时，句意使用高级句型和短语，文章连贯问题。‎ 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费