2017届高考英语二轮复习书面表达限时测验(11)含答案解析.doc

由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 www.ks5u.com ‎2017届高考英语二轮专题复习 书面表达限时测验11（含答案）‎ ‎1．假如你是一名中国学生，名叫李华，参加了学校组织的赴英交流活动。在活动期间你住在英国朋友Peter家里。现在你已经回到中国，请根据以下内容，给Peter写信。‎ ‎1．感谢在英国期间Peter一家对你的关照；‎ ‎2．你的英语水平得到了提高，同时也了解了英国很多的风土人情；‎ ‎3．你非常喜欢和Peter一家到乡下郊游，和当地的农民聊天，还喜欢去钓鱼，去观看树叶的颜色变化等；‎ ‎4．这些美好的记忆将使你终生难忘；‎ ‎5．邀请Peter一家抽空到中国来玩。‎ 注意：1．词数100左右。‎ ‎ 2．信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计人总词数。‎ Dear Peter，‎ It is a pleasure for me to write this letter to tell you how much I enjoyed my stay with your family during the exchange activity organized by our school．‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ‎ Yours ‎ Li Hua ‎2．‎ 第二节 书面表达（满分25分）‎ 假如你是李华，得知你的美国朋友Tom身患重病。请你给他写一封信，鼓励他勇敢面对现实，战胜病魔，并祝愿他早日康复。‎ 注意：1. 信的开头和结尾已为你写好，但不计入总词数；‎ ‎2. 词数：100左右。‎ Dear Tom,‎ I know from a friend of yours that you have got a serious illness recently. ‎ ‎______________________________________________________________________________‎ 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 ‎______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ Yours, ‎ Li Hua ‎3．假如你叫李华，你的好友李林发QQ向你询问如何写好英语作文。请根据以下提示回复。‎ 收集好词好句并记忆；‎ 背诵范文；‎ 经常练笔。‎ 注意：‎ 可适当发挥，注意行文连贯；‎ 词数120左右。开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。‎ ‎4．假设你是晨光中学学生会主席李华。你校将于‎6月26日接待来自于美国某中学的学生访问团。你受学校委托，负责安排在津的一日活动。请根据以下提示，用英语给该团的领队Smith 先生写一封电子邮件，介绍活动计划并简要说明理由，最后征求对方意见。‎ 上午与我校学生座谈（话题如校园生活、文化差异等）；‎ 中午与我校学生共同进餐（午餐包括饺子、面条等）；‎ 下午与我校学生游览海河。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1. 次数不少于100；‎ ‎2. 可是当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯；‎ ‎3. 信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总次数。‎ 参考词汇：‎ 海河 the Haihe River ‎ Dear Mr Smith I am Li Hua, chairman of the Student Union, from Chenguang‎ ‎High School. __‎ ‎ 此处不能答题 ________‎ ‎ Yours sincerely ‎ Li Hua ‎5．假如你是李华， 你的加拿大笔友Bob 来信谈到了他所居住的城市，并希望了解你家乡瑞安的情况。请你用英语写一封回信。回信须包括下表中的内容：‎ 自然情况 ‎1. 位于飞云江畔，风景优美，适合居住 成就 ‎2. 经济发展迅速 ‎ ‎3. 新建了许多工厂，住房，道路等。‎ 存在问题 ‎4. 水，空气污染 ‎5. 交通拥挤 对瑞安发展的看法 ‎6. （内容由考生自己拟定）‎ ‎ 注意：词数： 100左右。信的开头与结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。‎ ‎ 参考词汇： 经济economy Dear Bob, ‎ ‎ It’s very kind of you to write to me and let me know about your beautiful city. Now I’d like to tell you something about my hometown, Rui’an City. ‎ 参考答案 ‎1．Dear Peter, It is a pleasure for me to write this letter to tell you how much I enjoyed my stay ‎ 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 with your family during the exchange activity organized by our school.  First of all, Id like to give my thanks to you for your care and concern to me during my stay. I have greatly improved my English and learned much about the traditions and customs of Britain. I enjoyed driving together with your family through the countryside, talking with the local peasants and seeing the changing colours of the leaves on the trees. I particularly appreciated the fishing trips, which were full of fun. I will treasure those happy memories in my life. Please give my best regards to your family. I sincerely invite you to come to China for a tour when you are free. Yours, Li Hua ‎【解析】略 ‎2．‎ one possible version：‎ I knew from a friend of yours that you have got a serious illness recently. I am anxious to know how you feel now. Are you feeling any better? ‎ ‎     Everyone in the world might get sick, so don’t be worried about your illness. You should be optimistic. Take examples by the heroes around you. Face the situation bravely, and you will get better and better. With the doctors’ treatment and the care from your parents and friends, I am sure you can defeat your disease and become strong again soon. ‎ ‎     I am looking forward to getting your good news.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【解析】‎ ‎3．‎ Dear Li Lin,‎ ‎ Glad to recive your message. At present I am writing to tell you how to attain a highly readable composition.‎ First and foremost, an effective way, to the best of my knowledge, is to collect classic words and sentences, processing them over and over until you bear them in mind. The more vocabulary you accumulate, the more freely you can apply them when writing. What’s more, reciting fantastic possible versions and sentence structures worth imitating can get you to make enough preparations in advance. Last but not the least, it is a good reward to practise writing. Only by exercising can you put to use what you have gathered.‎ Don’t hesitate to ask for more if you have any questions. Look forward to hearing from you.‎ Yours sincerely,‎ Li Hua ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：本题是一篇材料作文。题目要求回复好友李林如何写好英语作文。作文要点已经给出，写作前， 先构思好文章的结构，再依据所给要点进行适当的展开论述。写作时，注意书信的书写格式。‎ 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 亮点说明：范文以第一人称进行叙述，比较客观，有说服力。整篇作文的时态，以一般现在时为主。范文分为三段，第一段总写，第二段展开叙述，第三段收尾。第二段使用了First and foremost, What’s more, Last but not the least来表示顺序，条理清楚，思路清晰；范文使用了很多的短语，如an effective way, to the best of my knowledge, in advance, Look forward to等，使作文内容比较充实；范文还使用了一些重要句型，如the more..., the more...越......就越......；worth imitating作后置定语；get sb to do sth让某人做某事；Only by exercising can you...是倒装句式，属于重点语法知识；put sth to/into use学以致用；hesitate to do sth犹豫做某事。语法知识的积累很重要，平时加强语法知识的实战演练。‎ 考点：材料作文 ‎4．‎ ‎【解析】 略 ‎5．Dear Bob, ‎ ‎ It’s very kind of you to write to me and let me know about your beautiful city. Now I’d like to tell you something about my hometown, Ruian‎ ‎City. ‎ ‎ Ruian is located on the Fei‎ Yun ‎River. With its beautiful scenery, it is a suitable place for people to live in. The economy has been developing in the past twenty years. New factories, houses and roads have been built. More schools and hospitals are available for its people. ‎ ‎ However, there are still some problems, such as water and air pollution and heavy traffic in rush hours. ‎ ‎ In my opinion, the city should develop its economy scientifically. I would also think that the growth of the private cars should be brought under control so that we’ll have a better hometown in the future. ‎ ‎ Yours, ‎ ‎ Li Hua ‎【解析】‎ 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 这是一篇应用文写作，写一封信。给出的材料比较全面，我们所要做的首先是应用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。写作前先结合要表达的事情确定句子的人称时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。注意写作中的时态、人称和数的问题，时态一般是一般现在时态，人称是第一人称较多。写作中语言要准确、简明，说明有条理，符合逻辑。‎ 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费