2017届高考英语二轮复习书面表达限时测验(13)含答案解析.doc

由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 www.ks5u.com ‎2017届高考英语二轮专题复习 书面表达限时测验13（含答案）‎ ‎1．‎ Ⅳ 写作（共两节，满分40分）‎ 第一节：基础写作（共1小题，满分15分）‎ 你将带领一个外国旅游团参观长城，请根据以下的信息要点，用5个规范的英语句子写一份长城的简单介绍。你的介绍应包括全部信息要点，介绍的开头已给了，不计入5个句子中。‎ ‎（信息要点）‎ 历史 有两千多年的历史。‎ 特点 世界上最长的城墙，长6000多千米。‎ 建筑材料主要为石头，砖头，修建工作都是人工进行。‎ 主要用于防御外来入侵者，沿墙每隔几百米就有烽火台（watchtower）‎ 现状 世界著名旅游景点之一，每年吸引许多外国游客到长城观光旅游。‎ ‎（写作要求）：只能使用5个句子介绍全部所给要点。‎ ‎2．‎ One of you close friends tells you : “ I am suffering from depression(沮丧、消沉). I have trouble sleeping. I’m often tired. When I think about the future I feel hopeless about it. I don’t enjoy anything. I am never happy. I don’t laugh or smile any more.” You would like to help him/ her to find one or more solutions.‎ Tell him or her what he/ she should do. ________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________‎ ‎3．短文写作 假设一家名叫“阿南”的餐馆即将开业，为吸引外国顾客，提高其知名度，请你用英语为其写一则广告。要点如下：‎ 地址：在泰山路和青岛路交汇处；‎ 该餐馆菜肴种类丰富，色香味俱佳，而且每天推出一样特价菜；‎ 服务质量上乘，欢迎惠顾。‎ 注意：词数120词左右。 阿南餐馆： A Nan Restaurant ‎4．假设你是新华中学的李华，将参加主题为“Let’s Ride Bicycles”的英语演讲比赛，请撰写一份演讲稿，主要内容包括：‎ ‎1.目前汽车带来的空气污染和交通堵塞等问题；‎ ‎2.骑自行车的益处，如节能环保、有利健康等。‎ 参考词汇：低碳生活（low-carbon life）;节能（energy saving）‎ 注意：1. 词数：100词左右； ‎ ‎2. 演讲稿开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。‎ Good morning, everyone.‎ ‎ I’m Li Hua from Xinhua‎ ‎Middle School. The topic of my speech is “Let’s Ride Bicycles”.‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ Thank you! ‎ ‎5．请仔细观察以下三幅连环图片的内容，并想象第四幅图片可能的发展，写出一个涵盖连环图片内容并有完整结局的故事。‎ 注意： 1．词数不少于80；‎ ‎ 2．开头已给出，不计入总词数；‎ ‎ 3．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎ 4．在答题卡上作答。‎ ‎ Tom’s mother，Mary，a kind and hardworking mother，runs a noodle restaurant．‎ ‎——————————————————————————————————————————————‎ ‎————————————————————————————————‎ 参考答案 ‎1．‎ Ladies and Gentlemen.‎ ‎ Welcome to the Great Wall. The Great Wall, which is more than 6,000 kilometers long, is the longest wall in the world. It has a history of more than 2,000 years. It is made of stone and bricks and almost all the construction was done by hand without any machine. As the wall was built to defend the country against foreign invaders, there were watchtowers every few hundred meters along the wall. Now, the Great wall is one of the most famous places of interest in China and it attracts many visitors every year.‎ ‎【解析】‎ ‎2．‎ Mary, don’t be upset. I have some pieces of advice for you. First of all, whenever you feel blue, try listening to some songs with beautiful melody (旋律). If you still feel depressed, look at yourself in 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 ‎ a mirror and smile for no less than 30 seconds, then you’ll believe that nothing is serious and have a good mood. Of course, you’d better try to find an adult you can trust to talk to. I do hope these help and next day will be better.‎ ‎【解析】‎ ‎3．‎ ‎ Welcome to A Nan Restaurant A Nan Restaurant will be opened for business.‎ ‎ A Nan Restaurant lies at the crossing of Taishan Road an Qingdao Road. We offer different kinds of dishes, which can satisfy different people’s tastes. So, no matter what dishes you like ,you can find what you like here, To express our thanks for your coming ,we’ll offer a special kind of dish every day, which is really very cheap. The most important thing is that our dishes look nice , smell wonderful and taste delicious! In addition , if you have a meal here, you will save your time ,because we can serve your dishes in a very short time . Come here once ,and you will want to come here more times.‎ ‎ Welcome to A Nan Restaurant! We are looking forward to your coming!‎ ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：考查应用文中的广告的写作。同时也属于提纲类作文，请你用英语为一家名叫“阿南”的餐馆写一则广告，要点都已经给出，审题时注意本文使用一般现在时，描述要点时以时间为顺序，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用省略句，倒装句和强调句型准确表述。Come here once ,and you will want to come here more times.这句话是个固定句型。‎ 考点：考查应用文写作。‎ 点评：应用文写作的关键在于要点要全面包括，不能有遗漏和省略。同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。‎ ‎4．‎ One Possible Version As is known to all, with the improvement of people’s living standards, cars have become a popular means of transport, bringing great convenience to our life. However, they have also caused some problems such as air pollution and traffic jams.‎ How can we solve the problems then? As far as I’m concerned, riding bicycles is a good solution. For one thing, bicycles don’t need any petrol and they are energy-saving. For another, bicycles are environmentally friendly because they won’t give off waste gas. What’s more, riding bicycles is a good way for us to exercise and it is beneficial to our health.‎ ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：演讲稿主题部分应该阐述清楚事情的缘由、结果和要求。第一部分的内容应该以详细完整地介绍事情为主，具体地讲，包括事情的发生、发展及结局。第二部分的内容应该提出个人看法等。演讲稿以简单句为主要的表达形式。同时，演讲稿的语言必须有感染力，所以演讲稿可以使用祈使句、感叹句、强调句等句式来达到这种目的。写作时要注意适当地使用关联词承前启后，用词要得体，符合语言环境。‎ ‎【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如As is known to all, with the improvement of people’s living standards, cars have become a popular means of transport,还运用了because引导的原因状语从句等等。并注意了句子的衔接如： As far as I’m concerned；For one thing…For another, What’s more等等。‎ 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 考点：提纲作文。‎ ‎5．‎ Tom’s mother Mary runs a noodle restaurant .One afternoon, Tom was doing his homework on the counter in the restaurant when a customer came for a bowl of noodles , Obviously he was in a hurry for he left his bag behind as he left the train station.‎ Tom noticed the bag. Opening the bag, they found ,to their surprise, that I was full of cash in bundles. They had only seen criminals do that making illegal deals on TV。‎ At the train station , our hasty customer was panic-stricken. His face covered with sweat, he tried very hard to recall where he had left his bag of money.‎ Finally he traced back to Mary’s noodle restaurant. The minute be stepped in, he saw cops awaiting him at the counter. Damn ,He turned around to run, but it was too late. The cops arrested him, Now he had to think of a very good reason to explain what the money was for.‎ ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：这是一篇看图写作，有三幅连环图片，并要求想象第四幅图片可能的发展，写出一个涵盖连环图片内容并有完整结局的故事。1. 认真读图，2. 初步构思，考虑用词、短语、句型和时态。3. 连词成句，然后再连句成文。尽可能地充分利用所学的短语或句型来表述具体的内容。4. 反复审核，修改错误。5. 注意所给的汉语提示。一般说来，看图写话中的汉语提示往往给定了有关的时间、地点、人物等相关的信息，还有参考词汇都是有用信息。在把握了文章的中心后，应在内心构思一个基本的框架，并考虑使用恰当的词语、短语和句型，以充分地表达文章的内容。这是体现自身能力的重要一环。然后再将各图的单个句子串连起来。串连时，要注意使用适当的连接词语或过渡性语句，不至于让读者觉得文章中出现跳跃现象，更使上下文更为紧凑、自然。‎ ‎【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，in a hurry匆忙的，turn around转身， Opening the bag, they found ,to their surprise, that I was full of cash in bundles. 这句话用了现在分词做状语， His face covered with sweat, he tried very hard to recall where he had left his bag of money.这句话用了独立主格结构和宾语从句， The minute be stepped in, he saw cops awaiting him at the counter. 这句话用了the minute做连词， Now he had to think of a very good reason to explain what the money was for.这句话用了宾语从句。‎ 考点：考查图画类书面表达 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费