2017届高考英语二轮复习书面表达限时测验(15)含答案解析.doc

由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 www.ks5u.com ‎2017届高考英语二轮专题复习 书面表达限时测验15（含答案）‎ ‎1．‎ ‎ 写作（满分30分）‎ ‎2010年上海世博会即将开幕，作为一名中学生志愿者，你感觉身边还存在许多不文明行为。请你写一篇120~150词左右的短文，简要描述图片内容并谈谈自己的感想。‎ 短文必须包括以下要点：‎ 召开世博会的意义；‎ 列举身边不文明行为一至两例；‎ 你的建议。‎ 参考词汇：2010年上海世博会——Expo 2010 Shanghai China ‎________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎2．假定你是李明，你的澳大利亚朋友Steven如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点给他写封建议信。‎ 要点：1. 参加中文学习班；2. 看中文书刊、电视； 3。 学唱中文歌；4。 交中国朋友。‎ 注意：词数100左右；可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；开头和结束语已为你写好，不计入总词数。‎ Dear Steven, ‎ I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.‎ 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 Best wishes.‎ Yours Sincerely,‎ Li Ming ‎3．假如你叫李平，是一位成绩优秀的学生，你班班主任在安排座位时，让成绩好的学生和成绩差的学生作同桌，这在你们班成绩优秀的学生中引起了反响，活动课上大家就此进行了讨论。现在请你根据下表把讨论结果向班主任写一封信反映一下，并说出自己的观点。‎ 赞同 反对 你的观点 ‎1．人人有长处和不足，成绩差的学生也有可取之处；‎ ‎2．相互学习，建立友谊；‎ ‎3．通过帮助学习差的学生的学习从而使他们建立自信。‎ ‎1．部分学习差的学生常常违反校规校纪，担心自己会受影响，养成坏习惯。‎ ‎2．老是问问题，使自己不能专心学习。‎ ‎？‎ 注意：1．词数：100~120，短文的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。‎ ‎ 2．短文需包括表中所有要点，内容可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎ 3．参考词汇：成绩差的学生：a slower student Dear Mr. Zhang,‎ ‎　　　We have held a discussion about whether it is good or not for a top student to share a desk with a slower student. ‎ 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ Yours,‎ ‎ Li Ping ‎4．假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter打算今年暑假来中国西藏旅游，请你根据下表用英语向他介绍有关西藏的情况。‎ 归属 中华人民共和国 地理位置 中国西南方，被誉为世界屋脊(Roof of the World)‎ 人口 约2，800，000‎ 面积 ‎120多万平方公里 省会 拉萨 (Lhasa)，被誉为世界上最高的城市 特征 ‎700多年的悠久历史；风景秀丽，有很多享誉海内外的名胜古迹，如布达拉宫（the Potala Palace）。‎ 发展 ‎1951年5月23日解放以来，西藏在政治、经济(economy)、文化等方面都取得了很大的进步。‎ ‎_________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎______________________________________________________________________‎ ‎5．最近, 关于南京13位爱心妈妈对一个重症弃婴的关爱事迹的报道让我们关注到了一个特殊的群体——爱心妈妈群。请根据以下有关爱心妈妈群的信息用英文写一篇短文。‎ 成立时间 ‎2010年底 群体人数 ‎300多 帮助方式 每人每月定期捐款10元以上 为重病的孩子上网发帖求助 寻找企业帮助 申请救助基金 活动影响 已经救助了15位重病的孩子 你的感想 ‎……‎ 注意：‎ ‎ 1. 对所给要点逐一陈述, 不要简单翻译。‎ ‎ 2. 词数120左右。开头已经写好, 不计入总词数。‎ ‎ 3. 作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。‎ ‎ 4. 参考词汇：救助基金 rescue fund ‎ Recently the news about 13 mothers in Nanjing who took care of an abandoned baby has drawn our attention to the special group of caring mothers.‎ 参考答案 ‎1．‎ One possible version Expo 2010Shanghai China is drawing near. As a student volunteer，I feel very proud since the 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 ‎ upcoming World Expo will promote the exchange of different cultures and showcase the latest a-chievements of civilizations around the globe.‎ But I have to say lots of bad behaviours still exist around us.For example，some people don`t obey the traffic rules when crossing the road，and some even spit in public，which makes me feel disappointed. These bad behaviours will spoil the image of our country so it is high time that we solved these problems.‎ In my opinion，we should behave politely and spare no efforts to build a harmonious society. Besides，some strict measures must be taken to stop people from behaving badly. Only in this way can we make Expo 2010 Shanghai China a great success.‎ ‎【解析】‎ ‎2．‎ ‎【解析】略 ‎3．不唯一 Dear Mr. Zhang,‎ We have held a discussion about whether it is good or not for a top student to share a desk with a slower student.‎ Some are for the idea. As they know, everyone has strengths as well as weaknesses. Although they are not good at lessons, they might do well in other fields like sports or arts. Therefore, they can learn from each other, and they may develop a friendship. In addition, top students can help slower ones gain self-confidence by helping them with their lessons, which benefits them all.‎ However, others don’t hold the same view. They think some slower students are always making trouble, such as keeping talking in class, breaking school rules, which may lead to them forming the bad habits. Besides, slower students often ask top students questions, which has a bad effect on their studies.‎ In my opinion, I’d like to choose to share a desk with a slower student so that we can learn from each other and make progress together. ‎ ‎ Yours,‎ ‎ Li Ping ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：英语写作是一个人英语综合水平的体现。‎ 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 本篇写作题材是班级安排座位的两种不同观点。这种文章一般层次比较清晰，四段：第一段为总述；第二段正方观点及依据；第三段反方观点及依据；第四段自己观点。要注意的是1.在列举双方依据时要尽量使语言多样化；2.自我观点表达时要有正确的判断，要有辩证的思维。一篇文章需要有正确的句子才能明了清晰的表达作者的意思。考生应明白高考书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求的是将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确地表达意思的能力。‎ 考点：提纲作文。‎ 点评：用好连接词，注意段落间、句子间的连贯性。要做到所写文章层次分明，思路清晰，文字连贯，就需要在句与句之间，段与段之间架起一座座桥梁，而连接词起的正是桥梁作用。用词是否贴切，文法是否正确，句式是否多变，文采是否有生气，关系到写作者的语言功底和水平，但也有些窍门是需要长时间累积的。‎ ‎4．Tibet, known as the “Roof of the World”, belongs to the People’s Republic of China and it is located in the southwest of China. It has a population of about 2.8 million, covering more than 1.2 million square kilometers. The capital city is Lhasa, which is honoured as “The highest city” in the world. With a long history of more than 700 years, Tibet has a number of world-famous places of interest, such as the Potala‎ ‎Palace. Since The liberation of Tibet on May 23, 1951, it has witnessed significant progress in politics, economy and culture.‎ ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：考查表格类作文的写作。请你根据下表用英语向他介绍有关西藏的情况。具体信息是以表格的形式给出，考点只需要适当串联即可，在写作的时候一定要使用合适的连接词来连接全文，让文章成为一个整体，同时要注意使用英语句型，也要使用倒装句，定语从句等特殊的句式来提高文章的多样性。It has a population of about 2.8 million, covering more than 1.2 million square kilometers.这句话用了非谓语动词，The capital city is Lhasa, which is honoured as “The highest city” in the world.这句话用了非限制性定语从句。还要用适当的关联词把句与句连起来。‎ 考点：考查表格类作文的写作 点评：本文属于表格类作文，此类作文虽然好写，但是要写出特色是很不容易的。关键是要点要全面覆盖，不能有遗漏和省略。写作的时候运用多种表达方式，让句子有变化。‎ ‎5．‎ Recently the news about 13 mothers in Nanjing who took care of an abandoned baby has drawn our attention to the special group of caring mothers. ‎ ‎ It is reposed that the group was set up at the end of 2010 which is made up of more than 300 caring mothers now. Every month, they each will donate at least 10 yuan to the group as loving fund. When it comes to a child who is seriously ill, they will try their best to seek help for them either on the Internet or from those kind enterprises. At the same time, they will apply for the rescue fund for those children. Up to now, they have saved fifteen terribly sick children’s lives. ‎ ‎ I am deeply moved by these great mothers. If every one can care for others as they do, the world will be sure to become a paradise. （122 words）‎ ‎【解析】‎ ‎ 本文是篇表格作文。表格作文是利用表格形式，提供作文素材，其提供的文字素材一般较为简洁，但写作文时要用上，表格作文的体裁不定，可以是书信、日记、描述文、便条等。‎ ‎    这类写作题, 考生应注意以下几点： ‎ 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 ‎ 1. 切忌写成“填表题”。‎ ‎ 虽以表格作为提示, 但一定要用短文的形式来表达。‎ ‎ 2. 切忌“一对一直译”。‎ ‎ 表格中的汉语提示有些概括性强、比较简洁,有些较为抽象、复杂, 所以表达时切忌逐字逐句机械地直译、硬译。要灵活调整信息、适当补充成分、采用意译法等写出符合英语表达习惯的文章。‎ ‎  3. 巧妙组合信息。‎ ‎ 要善于根据表格上下、左右的关系整合要点。表格左右若是因果关系, 就可以考虑用for, because, therefore等来组合信息。‎ ‎ 4. 避免句式单一。‎ ‎ 表格里某一栏或列的内容一般用来表达同类信息, 如建议、方法等。为了避免句式重复、单调、呆板, 我们要学会用不同的表达方式表达同类的信息。‎ 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费