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2017届高考英语二轮专题复习 书面表达限时测验17（含答案）
1．书面表达（满分25分）
用英语写一篇简单的介绍，谈一谈你学英语的体会，内容要点如下：
简况：学习英语已经五年多了，起初觉得英语很难学，大多数音发不准，语法记不住。但后来在老师和同学的帮助下进步很快；现在情况良好；
2. 体会：要用比较短的时间获得最佳的学习效果，非下苦功不可，课内课外要多说，对读写要足够重视。
要求：1、词数：100～120；2、不要逐条翻译。
2．假如你是某英语报社的编辑李平，一位名叫 Joe的学生写信向你询问好的读书方法，请按照以下写作内容和要求以英语书信形式给予答复。
写作内容]
所读书籍难度适中；
如果发现一本书太难读，不妨先搁置一段时间，换一本容易的读
要读自己感兴趣的书，但更要读对自己有一的书
有的书匆匆浏览便可，有的则需细读；
读书要随时记笔记，勤查字典，多问问题。
写作要求]
1. 只能用5个句子表达全部的内容，信的开头和结尾已给出，但不计入句数。
2. 将5个句子组织成连贯的短文。
Dear Joe ,
I’m glad to receive your letter. It is true that to read successfully requires correct ways of reading. Here are some suggestions.
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I wish you will succeed in reading.
Yours truly,
Li Ping
3．随着经济的发展和人们生活水平的提高，很多人都开上了私家车。与此同时，为了缓解交通压力，倡导绿色出行，很多城市也相继推出了免费的自行车租赁业务。自行车，私家车，你更愿意采用哪种出行方式？ 说说你的理由。
注意： 1) 词数120左右；
2) 题目已经给出。适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Which means of transport do you prefer?
4．你在网络上读到一篇关于“九零后”的文章，引发了你对这个话题的思考，于是你打算以 “Post-90’s generation, a successful or an unsuccessful generation?”为题，写一篇短文，谈谈你的看法，内容包括：
“九零后”的缺点
“九零后”的优点
“九零后”该怎么样生活
1．依赖性强；
2．自私；
3．贪图过舒适的生活等。
1．渴望了解周围的世界；
2．思想独立；
3．有很多新观念等。
．．．．．．
注意：1．必须包括表格中的所有内容；
2．为了使文章通顺完整，可以适当增加内容；
3．词数：100左右。
5．请阅读下面短文,并按照要求用英语写一篇 150 词左右的文章。
When we read newspapers, we often come across such English words as “AIDS” and “PK.” When we watch TV, we frequently hear words like “NBA” or “PM2.5.” When we speak, we automatically use words like “OUT” or “Bye-bye.” English words and expressions like these are getting popular. They have already become part of our daily language. And 239 English words have been included in the latest Dictionary of Contemporary Chinese.
The inclusion has started a heated discussion. A group of scholars signed a letter of complaint over the inclusion of these English words, which, they think, goes against Chinese language policies. They not only worry that Chinese is borrowing an increasing number of English words but are also concerned that the inclusion may hurt the dignity of the Chinese language. However, others are in favor of the inclusion because it is hard to say whether it will threaten the Chinese language. They believe the selection is mostly a result of their function and use in daily life.
写作内容]
1. 用约 30 个单词写出上文概要;
2. 用约 120 个单词发表你的观点,内容包括:
(1)支持或反对汉语词典收录英语词汇;
(2)用 2- 3个理由或论据支撑你的观点。
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写作要求]
1. 可以支持文中任一观点,但必须提供理由或论据;
2. 阐述观点或提供论据时,不能直接引用原文语句;
3. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
4. 不必写标题。
评分标准]
内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。
参考答案
1．
It is over five years since I began to study English. At first, I found it quite difficult. I couldn’t pronounce the words correctly or remember the rules of grammar. With the help of my teachers and classmates, I have made rapid progress. Now I’m getting on well with my English studies.
Five years’ study has taught me that one can’t learn English well without hard work. We must do more listening and speaking both in and out of class. At the same time, we must pay enough attention to reading and writing. Only in this way can we get the best results in the shortest time.
【解析】
试题分析：题目要求写一篇短文，谈谈自己学习英语的感受。写作要点包括简况和体会两大部分。词数在100-120之间，不能逐条翻译，要进行适当的拓展。注意标点符号的规范，单词拼写要正确；多使用定语从句、非谓语动词、名词性从句等语法知识，尽量使用一些高级词汇。
亮点说明：
范文注意使用At first, Now, At the same time等连接上下文，使作文显得紧凑、有条理；
范文使用了固定句型It is over five years since I began to study English.；宾语从句that one can’t learn English well without hard work；倒装句式Only in this way can we get the best results等语法知识，使作文表意更明确、生动；
范文使用了较多的短语：With the help of，made rapid progress，getting on well with，both ...and，pay enough attention to等，使作文内容横街丰富。
考点：材料类作文
2．
评分标准]句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。
Dear Joe，
I’m glad to receive your letter. It is true that to read successfully requires correct ways of reading. Here are some suggestions.
Firstly, choose books which are neither too difficult nor too easy for you to read. If you find a book too difficult to go on with, just put it aside for a moment and change an easier one. Secondly, read books that not only interest you but also benefit you, for reading is always just for fun. Thirdly ,as to some books ,you need to read them carefully while as to others, you need to read them roughly. Lastly, don’t forget to take notes, make good use of dictionaries and ask questions whenever necessary.
I wish you will succeed in reading.
Yours truly
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【解析】试题分析：这是一篇应用文写作，写一封信。文章的要点基本上都给了出来，考生只需要翻译清楚即可，难度不大。在写作的时候也不能逐字逐句的翻译，要运用合适的连接词把要点串联起来，形成一个整体。选择词汇的时候要选择相对高级的词汇，也要运用多种句型，让文章更有变化。写作中注意应用一些比较经典的句式短语等来提高作文的文采，注意不要遗漏要点。为了使表达更有逻辑性，适当使用序数词，连接词等。
考点：应用文写作
点评：此类作为首先要做的就是认真阅读材料，不能跑题偏题。写作中注意一些基础的写作常识，不犯低级错误。只要平时积累足够，就一定能获得满意的分数。另外为了应付考试，可以有选择的背诵一些范文，这样应考时就会有法可依。
3．
Which means of transport do you prefer?
With the development of economy, people’s living conditions have been greatly improved. Private cars have become one of the main means of transport I n our daily life. Meanwhile, to release the traffic pressure, a free bicycle-rent service has come into being, promoting a greener way of life.
As far as I am concerned, if the destination is not far away, bicycle is a much better choice. For one thing, the number of cars has increased so faster that you may easily get stuck in the traffic jam wasting your precious time in the rush hour. For another, riding a bicycle takes the same amount time as using public transportation or a private car and it is obviously more convenient, time saving and environmentally friendly.
For a better and greener world, let’s choose bicycles as our main means of transport.
【解析】
试题分析：考查半开放性作文。这篇作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体。
【亮点说明】范文用了一些常见短语： As far as I am concerned,据我所知， means of transport.交通方式，还有范文中的句式也很出彩： to release the traffic pressure, a free bicycle-rent service has come into being, promoting a greener way of life.这句话用了不定式和现在分词做状语， the number of cars has increased so faster that you may easily get stuck in the traffic jam wasting your precious time in the rush hour. 这句话用了so…that…句型，riding a bicycle takes the same amount time as using public transportation or a private car and it is obviously more convenient, time saving and environmentally friendly.这句话用了动名词做主语，还有范文还使用了Meanwhile, For one thing, For another,这样的关联词使文章更加连贯。
考点：考查半开放式书面表达
4．
Post-90’s generation, a successful or an unsuccessful generation?
It’s true that the post-90’s generation have some weaknesses．Some of them, for example, rely on their parents too much and tend to live comfortable lives．Some are even selfish and care little for others．
At the same time, the post-90’s generation desire to learn more about the world around
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them, and they are independent in thinking．They always keep up with modern science and technology and have many new ideas．
I think the post-90’s generation should carry forward their strong points and overcome the weaknesses, and try to tell the world that they are a hopeful generation．
【解析】
试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文。你在网络上读到一篇关于“九零后”的文章，引发了你对这个话题的思考，于是你打算以 “Post-90’s generation, a successful or an unsuccessful generation?”为题，写一篇短文，谈谈你的看法。需要写的提纲已经给出，需要就此写一篇文章。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型为文章润色。注意词数100左右。
【亮点说明】It’struethatthepost-90’sgenerationhavesomeweaknesses．这里含有一个主语从句。
考点：提纲类书面表达
5．
支持:
Today, more and more English words find their way into the Chinese language. Even the Dictionary of Contemporary Chinese includes 239 English words. Some people support it while others do not.
Generally, I am in favour of the inclusion. As the number of English learners is on the rise, it’s not difficult for them to understand these words in Chinese contexts. Besides, it is, on some occasions, more convenient to use English words. Most people nowadays use “IT” instead of its translation “xinxi jishu.” In our global village, we can see that it’s not uncommon for one language to borrow words from other languages. In English, there are many words borrowed from Latin, French, or even Chinese. In fact, Chinese has never stopped taking words from other languages, say, “ganbu” or “minzhu” from Japanese.
So, it’s safe to conclude that it is reasonable to include English which facilitates daily communication.
反对:
With English words getting popular in both media and daily life, a Chinese dictionary has included 239 of them, leaving the public divided into two opposing groups: “For” and “Against.”
I tend to take the “Against” side for two reasons. Firstly, this inclusion has actually polluted our mother tongue. Sooner or later, many English accents will rise and fall with the four Chinese tones. And, rules don’t tell us how to pronounce such English-turned Chinese words as “wifi” and “Out” in a Chinese way! Secondly, such an inclusion may give rise to prejudices of the educated against those with little knowledge of English. Just for one illustration, while college students take “Bye-bye” for granted when parting from each other, it may unconsciously hurt the feelings of someone who is used to “zaijian.”
In short, not only has the inclusion poisoned Chinese, it may also bring about distance between the Chinese people.
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【解析】
试题分析：本书面表达是一篇议论文写作。今年江苏英语高考首次采用新题型，这也是2014年高考大纲中第一次出现。本书面表达的要求考生首先用30个单词概括所给的文字，然后再给出自己的评判。不管考生是赞成还是反对哪一观点，都要提供足够的理由或者论据。首先，概括部分考查了学生的概括能力，学生再概括的时候要注意语言的精炼性，要点要齐全。其次，阐述的理由或论据要简洁明了，层次分明。最后， 对自己的观点要作出总结。
【亮点说明】范文用了一些词组：如in favour of, on some occasions, it’s not uncommon for …, divide into, give rise to, take … for granted, be used to等等。注重句子的连接：如Besides, or, Firstly, Secondly, and, while, not only … but also …，句型上也是多变：With English words getting popular in both media and daily life, a Chinese dictionary has included 239 of them, leaving the public divided into two opposing groups: “For” and “Against.”这句话用了with的复合结构和非谓语动词作状语，In short, not only has the inclusion poisoned Chinese, it may also bring about distance between the Chinese people这句话运用了倒装结构等等。
考点：考查议论文
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