2017届高考英语二轮复习书面表达限时测验(18)含答案解析.doc

由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 www.ks5u.com ‎2017届高考英语二轮专题复习 书面表达限时测验18（含答案）‎ ‎1．假定你是李华，正在英国接收英语培训，住在一户英国人家里。今天你的房东Mrs Wilson不在家，你准备外出，请给Mrs Wilson写一留言条，内容包括：‎ 外出购物 替房东还书 Tracy来电话留言：1）咖啡屋（Bolton coffee）见面取消 ‎ 2）此事已告知Susan ‎ 3）尽快回电 注意：1. 词数100左右；‎ ‎2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎2．书面表达（满分25分）‎ 假定你是李华，你的一位美国的朋友Jane在中国学习中文两年，即将回国。现在由你给她发E-mail，邀请她参加为她举办的欢送会，要点如下：‎ ‎1．祝贺她顺利通过考试，她的学习进步很大，为她娇傲；‎ ‎2．感谢她帮助你们学习英语；‎ ‎3．时间：星期六晚六点 ‎4．地点：阳光俱乐部（The Sun Club）302房间 ‎5．路线：在你所住宾馆门口乘坐332路公共汽车可直达。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1．须包括以上主要内容，可以适当增加细节，使内容连贯；‎ ‎2．词数：100左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。‎ ‎3．参考词汇：欢送会——farewell party Dear Jane,‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ Yours faithfully, ‎ Li Hua ‎3．假设今年暑假你将去参加学校组织的夏令营活动。学校组织你们去英国伦敦。‎ 活动内容：‎ ‎1.与那儿的中学老师和学生交流，了解他们的生活和学习情况；‎ ‎2.参观大英博物馆，了解当地的历史和文化；去英国家庭就餐，学做甜品（dessert），以便于回国后与家人、朋友分享；‎ ‎3.去英国的农村，感受大自然。‎ 写作要求] ‎ 只能用5个句子表达全部内容。‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎4．史蒂夫﹒乔布斯，美国苹果公司联合创办人、前行政总裁。自1976年成立了苹果电脑公司后，陪伴了苹果公司数十年的起落与复兴，先后推出了风靡全球亿万人的电子产品。请你根据表格里的内容，整理一下乔布斯的个人基本资料。‎ 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 姓名 Steve Jobs 代 表 作 品 主 要 成 就 iPod, iPhone, iPad 等 别名 苹果教父 ‎1.改变了现代通讯、娱乐乃至生活方式。‎ ‎2.引领全球资讯科技和电子产品的潮流，让曾经昂贵稀罕的电子产品变为现代人生活的一部分。（科学网）‎ 出生地 美国 加州 三藩市 出生日期 ‎1955.2.24‎ 逝世日期 ‎2011.10.5‎ 毕业学校 Homestead‎ ‎High School 职业 发明家，企业家，苹果前行政总裁 参考词汇：教父 godfather; 三藩市 San Francisco 企业家 entrepreneur 行政总裁 CEO ‎【写作要求】‎ 只能使用5个句子表达全部内容 ‎【评分标准】‎ 句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。‎ ‎5．读写任务Many people believe that in the future computers will be used in lots of everyday activities. It is thought that we won’t go shopping because many goods are available on the Internet.There will be no more books because all books will be available from electronic libraries.The Internet will be used to book holidays, rent films and order food. Most telephone calls will be made over the Internet as well. Some people are excited about these new developments.Others, however, do not think that computers will replace our present ways of shopping and communicating. ‎ Is Internet shopping as much fun as traditional shopping ? Many people say it is not. It is fun to go into shops and look at the goods in person. It is also unlikely that many people will want to read large texts on their computers because paper books will possibly be more user- friendly. Maybe, computers won’t change these habits. ‎ ‎【写作内容】‎ ‎1．以约30个词概括材料中心内容。‎ ‎2．以约120个词表达如下要点：‎ ‎（1）描述你周围的同学对网上购物的不同看法。‎ ‎（2）你喜欢传统的购物方式还是网上购物？‎ ‎（3）结合自己的生活体验说明你喜欢的理由。‎ ‎【写作要求】‎ ‎1．作文中可使用自己的亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子。‎ ‎2. 作文中不能出现自己的真实姓名和学校名称。 ‎ ‎【评分标准】‎ 概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。‎ 参考答案 ‎1．‎ Mrs Wilson ,‎ 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 I’m going out shopping , and won’t be back until about 5:00 pm . I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library . At about I o’clock this afternoon , Tracy called , saying that she couldn’t meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to . She felt very sorry about that, but said that you could set some other time for the meeting . She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home. She has already told Susan about this change.‎ Li Hua ‎【解析】略 ‎2． Dear Jane,‎ Congratulations on your passing all the exams. I am delighted you have really made great progress in your two years of studying in China. All you have gained is the result of your hard work. We are proud of you and we all appreciate your help with our English. We’ll always remember the wonderful time we spent together.‎ It’s a pity that you have to go back soon! So a farewell party for you will be held in Room 302 in the Sun Club this Saturday evening. Could you come by 6:00p.m.? We’ll have dinner together. By the way, you may take Bus No.332 in front of your hotel and it will take you directly to the club.‎ I wish you success and fulfillment in the years ahead!‎ Yours faithfully,‎ Li Hua ‎【解析】略 ‎3．This summer holiday, I will take part in the summer camp to London, Britain, organized by our school. We will be given a chance to communicate with the British secondary school teachers and students, so that we can know about their lives and studies. We will have a visit to the British‎ ‎Museum to learn about its local culture and history. We will also have a chance to go the British family to have dinner with them and learn how to make dessert, which I can make to entertain my family and friends after coming back to China. In addition, we will go to the countryside of Britain, enjoying the beautiful natural scenery. ‎ ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：考查提纲作文：考生首先要仔细审题，包括以下几个方面：（1）层次结构，（2）句子的时态（3）内容要点。尤其是内容要点要把握准确到位，这是提纲作文，要点需要考生拿捏准确以及正确，考生要注意尽可能使句子的表达形式多样化，适当的使用一些高级句式和高级词汇，以提高书面表达的档次和可读性。因为只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。又要包括所有的要点，考生要多使用复杂句，一句话中多包含些信息。‎ ‎【亮点说明】This summer holiday, I will take part in the summer camp to London, Britain, organized by our school. 这句话用的是过去分词做定语，We will be given a chance to communicate with the British secondary school teachers and students, so that we can know about their lives and studies. 这句话是目的状语从句， We will also have a chance to go the British family to have dinner with them and learn how to make dessert, which I can make to entertain my family and friends after coming back to China.这句话用的是非限制性定语从句，In addition, we will go to the countryside of Britain, enjoying the beautiful natural scenery. 这句话是用可现在分词做状语。‎ 考点：考查提纲式作文 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 ‎4．‎ A possible version:‎ Steve Jobs, the godfather of Apple, was born in San Francisco, California, the USA on February 24th, 1955 and passed away on October 5th, 2011. He graduated from Homestead‎ ‎High School. He was an inventor, entrepreneur and former CEO of Apple Company, with iPod, iPhone, iPad and so on as his masterpieces. Jobs made a great contribution to the transformation of modern means of communication, entertainment and lifestyle. It was he who led the trend of global information technology and electronic products , enabling the once rare and expensive electronic products to become part of people’s life in modern times.‎ ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：考查人物简介类短文写作 考点：本文是关于乔布斯的个人简介，应该以时间为顺序来组织全文。我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化，尤其是数字的不同表达法。‎ 点评：本文是人物传记类短文，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。‎ ‎5．‎ This passage mainly talks about different uses of Internet shopping such as buying goods, booking holidays, renting films and so on. It also states people’s different attitudes towards Internet shopping.. ‎ My classmates have different attitudes to it. Some think that it is very convenient to shop online. Others believe that it is unsafe to buy goods with credit cards and it is impossible to check the quality . ‎ As for me , I prefer traditional shopping. It is really fun to go into shops and look at the goods in person . We can choose what we really need and have a good bargain. We can talk freely with others instead of a cold machine. I often go shopping with my parents on weekends and we have a very good communication every time. Although everything is available online and we needn’t even leave our home, we may be cheated and waste money. So traditional shopping is better than Internet shopping.‎ ‎【解析】略 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费