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写作提升练(三) 读后续写
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阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
(2017·浙江衢州二中5月模拟)
It was the late 1930s,and things were tough.Mum had a hard time raising us on her own in our small community of New Westminster,BC.My dad had drowned in Pitt Lake,five years ago.
Looking back,I realize what Mum went through sending us kids to school.Every morning she would tuck a new piece of cardboard in our shoes,because our soles(鞋底)were worn out.When we got home,Mum would have “French toast” ready for us.Constant moving was typical for my family in those times.Rent was 25 dollars a month,but Mum couldn’t pay it,and we knew we would be evicted right after Christmas on the first of January.
Christmas was approaching,and we were entitled to a twenty-five-dollar Christmas fund from social services.The inspector came to our house,and searched it from top to bottom to be sure we didn’t have any food hidden away.When he didn’t find any,he issued the cheque to Mum.Mum said that instead of buying food,she would use the 25 dollars to pay back rent,assuring us all of a roof over our heads for a little while longer.She told us then there would be nothing for Christmas.
Unknown to Mum,I had been selling Christmas tree,shoveling snow,and doing odd jobs to earn enough money to buy a new pair of boots.Boots that weren’t patched,boots with no cardboard in the soles.I knew exactly which boots I wanted.They were ten-inch Top Genuine Pierre Paris and they had a price of 23 dollars.
Well,the big day came on the afternoon of Christmas Eve.I was excited,as I hurried up the road to the shoe store,but on the way I noticed a house with Christmas lights and decorations.It was then I realized at our house,we had no lights,no decorations,nor any money for Christmas goodies.I knew that we would have no turkey or ham for Christmas,and I felt sad.
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150 左右;
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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As I continued walking I began to reconsider my plan.
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With great excitement and tears in my eyes,I knocked on the door.
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(2017·浙江金华江南中学第二学期期中考试)
A farmer grew some vegetables in his garden.One day his wife was ill and he had no money.He had to sell some cabbages and carrots in the market.The next morning he took two baskets of vegetables to the town.But it was raining hard that afternoon and there were few people in the street.
When his vegetables were sold out,it was dark.He bought some medicine and hurried to his village.
On his way home he saw a person lying on the snow.He placed his baskets on the ground and was going to help the person to get up.At that time he found it was a dead man and there was much blood on his body.He was so afraid that he ran away quickly,without taking the baskets with him.
The next afternoon the farmer was sent to the police station.Having shown the baskets,an officer asked:“Are these yours?” “Yes,sir.” the farmer answered timidly(胆怯地).“Have you killed the man?” “No,no,sir.” the farmer said in a hurry.“When did you see the dead man?” “About seven last evening.” “Did you see who killed the man?” “No,Sir.” The officer brought out a knife and asked,“Have you seen it yet?” “No,Sir.”The officer became angry and told the policemen to beat him up and send him into prison.The officer wanted to trap the farmer into the confession(供认),but the farmer didn’t admit he was the murderer.
注意:1.所续写的短文词数应为150左右;
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2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3.续写部分分为二段,每段的开头语已经为你写好;
4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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The officer was so angry that he asked the policeman to beat him up again.
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The farmer was lucky.A few days later,
参考答案
写作提升练(三) 读后续写
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As I continued walking I began to reconsider my plan.I was feeling a strange sense of guilt.Here I was going to buy a new pair of boots while my mother was home in tears.She would be trying to explain to us why there were no presents.Across the street from the bus stop was a big grocery store.I realized that 25 dollars I had worked so hard for went a long way towards lights,decorations and a turkey.After finishing shopping,I went home.
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With great excitement and tears in my eyes,I knocked on the door.I could hardly wait to see my mother’s face! When Mum opened the door,some of the groceries fell inside onto the floor,and she just stood there,dumbfounded.Holding back the tears,I said,“Merry Christmas!” That day I got enough hugs and kisses from Mum.
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The officer was so angry that he asked the policeman to beat him up again.The farmer was very afraid.He thought he would be sentenced to death by killing people,but he didn’t.He was innocent.He must tell people the truth,but no one could hear his voice.He hoped that someone could come and save him.
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The farmer was lucky.A few days later,a young man came to the police station with a lot of journalists,saying that he saw the murderer.It was the police officer who killed the man on the snow! He saw the police office used a knife killing the man late in the evening.He was so frightened and ran away.But the young man thought the farmer was innocent.So he took the great courage to expose the real criminal.After the investigation,the young man was right.The police officer was sent into prison and the policeman who beat up the farmer was fired,and the brave young man was regarded as the hero by the villagers.
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