2015年高考英语二轮名校专题精讲 书面表达（2014新题）赏析.doc

书面表达2014新题赏析 评分方法 第五档(很好) (21-25分)‎ ‎1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务。‎ ‎2. 覆盖所有内容要点。‎ ‎3. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。‎ ‎4. 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备较强的语言运用能力。‎ ‎5. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。‎ ‎6. 完全达到了预期的写作目的。‎ 失分原因 审题 审题不认真—跑题 审题不仔细---要点不全 ‎ ‎ ‎ 内容 要点简单翻译 ‎ 内容不充实 没有扩展 ‎ 衔接 平铺直叙 生硬衔接 缺乏逻辑 失分原因 层次 一段到底 随意分段 通篇流水账 没有详与略 句式结构 句式单调 通篇简单句 刻意写从句 随意点逗号 不会用连词 错误 单词拼写错误 - 4 -‎ 词性选择错误 人称时态错误 标点符号错误 书写 字迹潦草 随意勾抹 没有间隔 作文答题技巧、答题方法 ‎1、仔细审题，理解大意， 弄清体裁 ‎2、找出要点，编拟提纲， 合理分层 ‎3、紧扣要点，添加细节， 扩写成文 ‎4、反复检查，人称时态， 修正错误 命题体裁 应用文 写信/e-mail 发帖 写通知 写报道 写欢迎词 写演讲稿 叙议结合 名言引入+具体事例 叙述（以往经历；畅想未来）+感想/原因 描写人或物 议论文 个人观点看法 利弊文 新题赏析（新课标II）卷 题一：‎ ‎ 一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是“十年后的我”。 请根据下列要点和你的畅想完成短文。‎ ‎1. 家庭 2. 工作 3. 业余生活 注意：‎ ‎1. 词数100左右；‎ ‎2. 可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；‎ ‎3. 开头已为你写好。‎ 安徽卷 题二：‎ - 4 -‎ ‎ 为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie，收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。‎ 内容要点如下：‎ ‎1. 表示理解并给予安慰； 2. 提出建议并说明理由。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1. 词数120左右；‎ ‎2. 信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；‎ ‎3. 信的开头与结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数。‎ 参考词汇：temper n. 脾气、情绪 书面表达2014新题赏析 讲义参考答案 ‎ 新题赏析（新课标II）卷 题一：‎ One possible version ‎ I often imagine what my life will be like in the future. I think my life will be very different in ten years. ‎ ‎ I will be twenty-eight years old by then. I will have my own family, probably with a lovely child. Maybe I will live in a big house in the suburb as the city center will be too crowded. ‎ ‎ As for my future job, I hope I’ll work in a computer company as a program designer. I’ll enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues. I’ll do a good job in whatever I do. If possible, I hope I will set up my own company after I get enough working experience and money. ‎ ‎ In my free time, I’ll continue to take regular exercise, such as swimming, running, and various ball games. On my holidays, I’ll travel around the world with my family or my friends, during which I can learn more about cultures in different places and try various foods.‎ ‎ In a word, my life will be much richer and more colorful, so I must work hard now to prepare myself for the coming beautiful future. ‎ - 4 -‎ 安徽卷 题二：‎ One possible version Hi Worried,‎ ‎ I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a bad time at the moment. The truth is everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you don’t have to worry so ‎ much. The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you’ll regret. Here are three useful tips: ‎ ‎ First of all, talk to someone you trust about how you feel. This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself. Besides, it is a wise choice for you to go outdoors and play games with your friends. Not only can physical exercise be an effective way to get rid of ‎ anger but also to help you keep a good relationship with your classmates or friends. Finally, you are supposed to remain optimistic about your future. Holding a positive attitude towards life, you will always keep high spirits. ‎ ‎ Here are all my suggestions. I really hope they can help you out. Keep trying, I believe you’ll soon feel calmer and enjoy your life.‎ ‎ Yours,‎ ‎ Jamie - 4 -‎