专题强化训练5 短文改错(一)
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(2017·河南河北七所名校联考)Smart phones had become part of our daily life.No matter who we are,we can see people busy play with their smart phones.Smart phones benefit them.They help us escape the pressures of life and get informations.However,if we spend too much time on them, we won’t have time to contact face to face our friends and family.And our life, study and work will hurt. In my view, we should limit to our using smart phones except for a purpose of learning.Meanwhile it’s absolute necessary for us to take part in more outdoors activities.
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Smart phones become part of our daily life.No matter we are,we can see people busy with their smart phones.Smart phones benefit .They help us escape the pressures of life and get .However,if we spend too much time on them, we won’t have time to contact face to face our friends and family.And our life, study and work will hurt. In my view, we should limit our using smart phones except for purpose of learning.Meanwhile it’s necessary for us to take part in more activities.
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(2017·大连双基测试)With Teachers’ Day draw near, I would like to express my thanks to Ms. Li,who taught me English last year.
At that time, I was having a trouble studying English and my scores fell. Ms. Li encouraged me and tell me her story that she never gave up before her studies didn’t go well.She also said that it was necessary to make efforts so that I would not regret waste time. Her words were the best medicine because she stood in her shoes to deal with problems and gave me sincere advices.She didn’t simple comfort me. Her teaching methods also counted.It had never occurred me that studying could be so interested until I met Ms. Li.
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With Teachers’ Day near, I would like to express my thanks to Ms. Li,who
taught me English last year.
At that time, I was having trouble studying English and my scores fell. Ms. Li encouraged me and me her story that she never gave up her studies didn’t go well.She also said that it was necessary to make efforts so that I would not regret time. Her words were the best medicine because she stood in shoes to deal with problems and gave me sincere .She didn’t comfort me. Her teaching methods also counted.It had never occurred me that studying could be so until I met Ms. Li.
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(2017·长春七市第一次联考)
Boys and girls,
May I have your fully attention,please? I have announcement to make.To welcome our friends in the United States,the Student Union was going to hold a party on Saturday evening, February 20. As never,the party will be held in the lecture hall of the Main Building.They will begin at 7 p.m.There will be music,dancing,singing or exchange of gifts.Will everyone please to bring along a small gift for this purpose?Remember to pack it up, sign your name and writing a few words of good wishes.Don’t miss the party, where I believe we will have a lot of funs.Everyone is welcome.
That’s all. Thank you.
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Boys and girls,
May I have your attention,please? I have announcement to make.To welcome our friends the United States,the Student Union going to hold a party on Saturday evening, February 20. As ,the party will be held in the lecture hall of the Main Building. will begin at 7 p.m.There will be music,dancing,singing exchange of gifts.Will everyone please bring along a small gift for this purpose?Remember to pack it up, sign your name and a few words of good
wishes.Don’t miss the party, where I believe we will have a lot of .Everyone is welcome.
That’s all. Thank you.
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(2017·西宁检测一)My favorite sport is playing basketball.In the middle school, I joined in the basketball team.All the teammate practised hard after school. Once our team had match against another school’s. At the very beginning,we were so nervous which we couldn’t cooperate very good.Because this was the first time for us to compete with the school honor.In the half match they fell behind.Our team leader calls us together and said that we must get uniting in order to beat them.Then we tried our best and won the game at last.Play basketball makes me realize the importance of union and teamwork.
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My favorite sport is playing basketball.In the middle school, I joined the basketball team.All the practised hard after school. Once our team had match against another school’s .At the very beginning,we were so nervous we couldn’t cooperate very .Because this was the first time for us to compete the school honor.In the half match fell behind.Our team leader us together and said that we must get in order to beat them.Then we tried our best and won the game at last. basketball makes me realize the importance of union and teamwork.
专题强化训练6 短文改错(二)[学生用书P90(单独成册)]
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(2017·呼和浩特第一次调研)
Dear manager,
I am writing to express my interest in your recently advertised positions as a secretary of English.Here I would like to introduce me briefly.
I am a 25-year-old young man graduated from the Foreign Languages Department of Jilin University.I have been a English guide for two years after graduation.As
a result, my oral English is pretty well.I have great interest the job. I had much confidence in myself.If I am given to the job,I can assure you I will do my best to do it well.I’ d like to meet you at your convenient to discuss the possibility of working in your company.An early reply to my application will be high appreciated.
Yours respectfully,
Wang Yong
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Dear manager,
I am writing to express my interest in your recently advertised as a secretary of English.Here I would like to introduce briefly.
I am a 25-year-old young man 或 from the Foreign Languages Department of Jilin University.I have been English guide for two years after graduation.As a result, my oral English is pretty .I have great interest the job. I much confidence in myself.If I am given the job,I can assure you I will do my best to do it well.I’d like to meet you at your to discuss the possibility of working in your company.An early reply to my application will be appreciated.
Yours respectfully,
Wang Yong
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(2017·东北三校二模)I will never forget a military training in California Summer Camp that August. The big sun was overhead, burned hot. The drillmaster was very strict and we were all afraid of him. If one of us made a mistake, all of us will get such punishment delaying a meal, standing for 10 minutes or whatever. Therefore, after training, it was no doubt that our drillmaster was energetic and agreeable. His strong local accent kept us laugh madly. More interesting, he sang out of tune, from beginning to end. Every time when he sang, we could help laughing to tears.
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I will never forget military training in California Summer Camp that August.
The big sun was overhead, hot. The drillmaster was very strict and we were all afraid of him. If one of us made a mistake, all of us get such punishment delaying a meal, standing for 10 minutes or whatever. , after training, was no doubt that our drillmaster was energetic and agreeable. His strong local accent kept us madly. More , he sang out of tune, from beginning to end. Every time he sang, we 或 help laughing to tears.
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(2017·广州检测二)
Dear Chris,
Are you interested in coming with me to see a famous opera?It will performed at the Guangzhou Opera House at 2 p.m. in May Day. I know you took great interest in Chinese culture, especially local opera. I think the perform will not only leave you with an unforgettably impression, but satisfy your interest in Chinese Opera as well. If you can come, I suggest us should visit the Guangdong Museum near the Opera House before and after the opera. You decide. The museum is hosting a exhibition on Cantonese opera. If we go, I believe you can learn many about Chinese opera in there.
Yours,
Li Hua
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Dear Chris,
Are you interested in coming with me to see a famous opera?It will performed at the Guangzhou Opera House at 2 p.m. May Day. I know you great interest in Chinese culture, especially local opera. I think the will not only leave you with an impression, but satisfy your interest in Chinese Opera as well. If you can come, I suggest should visit the Guangdong Museum near the Opera House before after the opera. You decide. The museum is hosting exhibition on
Cantonese opera. If we go, I believe you can learn about Chinese opera there.
Yours,
Li Hua
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(2017·重庆调研抽测二)Thanks for your concern in your letter about the smog which frequent strikes some areas of China. I’m also very worrying about such a terrible weather. It has brought much inconvenience or rather harm to people’s health such as road accident, bad coughs and even lung cancers and so on.
It is known to all, good environment comes from careful protection. But we should do what we can protect it. I believe a small step can make a different. Try to drive less and choose air-friendly products. Only when everyone had the environmental awareness can we have a blue sky. Hope to hear from you and share my good ideas.
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Thanks for your concern in your letter about the smog which strikes some areas of China. I’m also very about such terrible weather. It has brought much inconvenience or rather harm to people’s health such as road , bad coughs and even lung cancers and so on.
is known to all, good environment comes from careful protection. we should do what we can protect it. I believe a small step can make a . Try to drive less and choose air-friendly products. Only when everyone the environmental awareness can we have a blue sky. Hope to hear from you and share good ideas.
专题强化训练7 短文改错(三)[学生用书P91(单独成册)]
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(2017·云南第二次检测)My dad is enthusiastic runner. Influencing by him,I was very sporty before the age of 15. However,after I went to high school,I stopped take physical exercise because of my busy schoolwork. One morning,I ran for less than one minute to catch a bus,but I am quite out of breath. This made me to realize
that I was overweight. Then I made a decision which I would take up a sport to help myself get in shape again. A friend of me recommended a swimming pool not far from my house.Now I go swimming several time a week and have started to feel the benefits of regularly exercise.Swimming makes me relaxing and energetic!
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My dad is enthusiastic runner. by him,I was very sporty before the age of 15. However,after I went to high school,I stopped physical exercise because of my busy schoolwork. One morning,I ran for less than one minute to catch a bus,but I quite out of breath. This made me realize that I was overweight. Then I made a decision I would take up a sport to help myself get in shape again. A friend of recommended a swimming pool not far from my house.Now I go swimming several a week and have started to feel the benefits of exercise.Swimming makes me and energetic!
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(2017·海口调研)Sport is the source of all life. When talked about sport,I always feel very excited,because I like them so much. I love playing tennis,but it is my favorite sport. One day,when I came home after school,I turn on TV and watched a tennis match. At first,I was attracted by the two beautiful tennis player. When I watched the match for ten minutes I found it was wonderful. From now on, I started to watch tennis matches. I have learned to play tennis,and I often invite my friends play with me. My love to tennis are more than I could express. I am so luck to have some friends who share the same of interest with me.
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Sport is the source of all life. When about sport,I always feel very excited,because I like so much. I love playing tennis, it is my favorite sport. One day,when I came home after school,I on TV and watched a tennis match. At first,I was attracted by the two beautiful tennis . When I watched the
match for ten minutes I found it was wonderful. From on, I started to watch tennis matches. I have learned to play tennis,and I often invite my friends play with me. My love to tennis more than I could express. I am so to have some friends who share the same interest with me.
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(2017·唐山一模)Being a teacher is always believed to be one of greatest occupations,because teachers make great contributions for the world. Last week,I got a chance to experience teaching students. Our school asked us to teach some kids live in the countryside. The kids was so happy that they gave me a warm welcome. I teach them English and after class,we played games happily. We had a lot of funs together. When I returned back to school,I missed the students so much. They like me but some of them have kept in touch with me ever since. I felt so proudly of being a teacher.
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Being a teacher is always believed to be one of greatest occupations,because teachers make great contributions the world. Last week,I got a chance to experience teaching students. Our school asked to teach some kids in the countryside. The kids so happy that they gave me a warm welcome. I them English and after class,we played games happily. We had a lot of together. When I returned to school,I missed the students so much. They like me some of them have kept in touch with me ever since. I felt so of being a teacher.
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(2017·安徽江南十校联考)During the National Day holiday,I paid a visit my grandma in the countryside.It has been almost two years since I last saw her.In my memory,my grandma was a hardworking but strong woman full of energy. Whenever she saw me,she always hugged me deep. But when I gave her a hug this time,I found that she was much short and thinner than before.Her back was become bent and her hairs turned white.But luckily,she was still health.She could laugh like a child. To my happy, she could
cook some delicious food for me. I love my grandma. I know he will always be there, helping me and loving me.
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During the National Day holiday,I paid a visit my grandma in the countryside.It been almost two years since I last saw her.In my memory,my grandma was a hardworking strong woman full of energy. Whenever she saw me,she always hugged me . But when I gave her a hug this time,I found that she was much and thinner than before.Her back was bent and her turned white.But luckily,she was still .She could laugh like a child. To my , she could cook some delicious food for me. I love my grandma. I know will always be there, helping me and loving me.
专题强化训练8 短文改错(四)[学生用书P92(单独成册)]
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I prefer my English classes to be taught only in English. As we are all know, a good learning environment is vital unless we want to study English well. Classes teaching in English provide students with good environment. However, there are also some problem with this teaching method. As we hadn’t mastered enough English words, sometimes we may find that difficult to follow the teacher. Slow learners may even lose interest on English. Practice makes perfect. To learn English well require a lot of practice. Therefore, I like my English classes to be taught complete in English.
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I prefer my English classes to be taught only in English. As we all know, a good learning environment is vital we want to study English well. Classes in English provide students with good environment. However, there are also some with this teaching method. As we mastered enough English words, sometimes we may find difficult to follow the teacher. Slow learners may even
lose interest English. Practice makes perfect. To learn English well a lot of practice. Therefore, I like my English classes to be taught in English.
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(2017·山西考前适应性测试)The person who touched me most is an unknown lady. I study in a city school but lives in a village 15 kilometers away. One afternoon, I receive a call from my family saying my mom was serious ill. I hurried to the bus station, only find the last bus had left. Feel anxious, I decided to walk home. On the way a car stopped and the driver asked me that I needed help. Worried about being cheated, I said anything. But she was such sincere that I finally accepted her offer. When we reached my village, it was dark. Seeing her car out of the sight, I was in tear. Whenever I think of her, I always feel grateful.
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The person who touched me most is an unknown lady. I study in a city school but in a village 15 kilometers away. One afternoon, I a call from my family saying my mom was ill. I hurried to the bus station, only find the last bus had left. anxious, I decided to walk home. On the way a car stopped and the driver asked me I needed help. Worried about being cheated, I said . But she was sincere that I finally accepted her offer. When we reached my village, it was dark. Seeing her car out of sight, I was in . Whenever I think of her, I always feel grateful.
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(2017·山东省实验中学第二次诊断)Last weekend, I helped my grandparents preparing their trip to Beijing. On Saturday morning, together with my grandparents, I searched for the Internet for the train schedule, the weather in Beijing, and some hotel informations. In the afternoon, I go to the train station and managed to buy two tickets for my grandparents although there was long queue. After dinner, I put into the suitcase the thing my grandparents would need, such as clothes, glasses,an umbrella, or a map. The next morning, I went to the station to see him off. Waving
goodbye with them on the platform, I felt happily for them and wished them a safe journey.
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Last weekend, I helped my grandparents their trip to Beijing. On Saturday morning, together with my grandparents, I searched the Internet for the train schedule, the weather in Beijing, and some hotel . In the afternoon, I to the train station and managed to buy two tickets for my grandparents although there was long queue. After dinner, I put into the suitcase the my grandparents would need, such as clothes, glasses,an umbrella, a map. The next morning, I went to the station to see off. Waving goodbye them on the platform, I felt for them and wished them a safe journey.
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(2017·长春监测二)Born in America, Thomas Edison was a great scientist and an inventor. He was once thought to be a boy whom was not worth educating. In fact, he was a man full of imaginations.
I admire Edison a lot because his great contributions to the world. He is said to having more than 1,000 inventions. In his lifetime, he were always eager to know how things worked. He was also very diligent and work day and night. And this explained why he had so much great inventions.
Success can never be easy achieved. Probably I can’t be another Edison himself, but I will work hard to be a worthy person.
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Born in America, Thomas Edison was a great scientist and inventor. He was once thought to be a boy was not worth educating. In fact, he was a man full of .
I admire Edison a lot because his great contributions to the world. He is said to more than 1,000 inventions. In his lifetime, he always eager to
know how things worked. He was also very diligent and day and night. And this explained why he had so great inventions.
Success can never be achieved. Probably I can’t be another Edison , but I will work hard to be a worthy person.