2016届浙江省六校联考
英语试题卷
考生须知：
本试题卷分选择题和非选择题两部分，共12页。满分120分，考试时间120分钟。 请考生按规定用笔将所有试题的答案涂、写在答题纸上。
第I卷（选择题 共80分）
第一部分：英语知识运用(共两节，满分30分)
第一节：单项填空（共20小题；每小题0. 5分，满分10分）
从A、B、C和D四个选项中，选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项，并在答题纸上将该选项标号涂黑。
1. --- I‘m afraid we should book tickets for the film in advance.
--- ___________. You know, it has won five Oscar awards.
A. That‘s how I see it B. It‘s all right
C. I hope it goes well for you D. You can do it.
2. Most athletes did not win a medal in __________ race held in our town last week, but they all agree it was __________ great event.
A. the; a B. a; the C. a; a D. the; the
3. Hard as the teacher tried to make the kids __________, the heavy snow outside won the battle against their attention.
A. accomplish B. concentrate C. switch D. recover
4. --- The iphone6s has been on the market for some time. Have you got one?
--- Yes, I __________ one during my visit to Hong Kong.
A. bought B. have bought C. had bought D. would buy
5. The other day Jack was in _________ people call a moral dilemma as to whether to help the old man who fell off his bike.
A. that B. how C. which D. what
6. I will have acquired a lot of knowledge and become fully equipped for future life by the time I ________ from college.
A. graduated B. graduate C. will graduate D. had graduated
7. __________ to a university, whether it is a famous one or not, doesn‘t necessarily mean you will succeed in your future life.
A. Admitted B. To admit C. Being admitted D. Admitting
8. Human beings are born with the ability to recognize a change in number. ____________, experiments show that many animals are, too.
A. Fortunately B. Surprisingly C. Disappointedly D. Importantly
9. One can __________ another person without any words. What it takes is a shoulder to cry on and an ear that listens.
A. take advantage of B. spare a thought for C. catch sight of D. reach out to 英语试题卷·第 2 页（共 10 页）
10. Most assume that he __________ for Germany last week, but for a serious injury which put him out of football.
A. need have played B. must have played C. should have played D. would have played
11. The rising admission prices of scenic attractions may cast a __________ over your plans for the coming holiday.
A. shame B. shelter C. shadow D. shade
12. She knew that their relationship was coming to an end, for he sounded very cold and ___________ every time she phoned him.
A. natural B. distant C. hopeful D. blank
13. John had planned to make a compromise, but ___________ he changed his mind at the last minute.
A. anyhow B. otherwise C. therefore D. somehow
14. To succeed in life, one first needs to set a goal and then gradually make ____________ more practical.
A. it B. one C. this D. those
15. Body language is particularly important when we attempt to communicate ___________ culture.
A. across B. over C. beneath D. through
16. I have to throw away my white shirt __________ my daughter has drawn several imaginative pictures with her favorite pen.
A. where B. which C. that D. what
17. Deeply impressed by her motherly care, the boy learned to accept his step-mother ___________.
A. in time B. by chance C. in relief D. by turns
18. _________ fighting world hunger continues to be the matter of vital importance, more people now die from being overweight than from being underweight.
A. While B. If C. Unless D. Once
19. The young writer, ________ several attempts to get his works recognized, was granted a big international prize eventually.
A. to make B. making C. made D. having made
20. --- I thought it would be fun if we all went to see that new movie downtown.
--- ___________. I‘ve heard that it‘s very boring.
A. By all means B. Take it easy C. Good idea D. Count me out
第二节：完形填空（共20小题；每题1分，满分20分）
阅读下面短文，掌握其大意，然后从21-40各题所给的四个选项（A、B、C和D）中，选出最佳选项，并在答题纸上将该选项标号涂黑。
Playing organized sports is such a common experience in the United States that many children and teenagers took them for granted. This is especially true among children from wealthy families and communities. They have the resources needed to organize and 21 sports programs to make sure that there is easy 22 to participation opportunities. Children from 23 families and communities, however, are less likely to take organized youth sports for granted. They often 24 the resources needed to pay for participation fees, 25 , and transportation to practices and games. 26 , their communities do not have enough resources to build and 27 sports fields and facilities (设施).
Organized youth sports 28 appeared during the early 20th century in the United States and other
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developed nations. They were originally developed 29 some educators and developmental experts 30 that the behavior and character of children were 31 influenced by their social 32 and everyday experiences. This 33 many people to believe that if you could organize the experiences of children in 34 ways, you could influence the kinds of adults that those children would become.
This 35 that the social surroundings greatly influenced a person‘s overall development was very 36 to people interested in progress and reform in the United States 37 the beginning of the 20th century. It caused them to think about 38 they might control the experiences of children to produce 39 and productive adults. They believed strongly that a great democracy (民主国家) depended on responsibility and that a 40 economy depended on the productivity of workers.
21. A. distribute B. spread C. defend D. sponsor
22. A. access B. entrance C. chance D. route
23. A. small B. poor C. big D. rich
24. A. shrink B. tighten C. limit D. lack
25. A. sightseeing B examination C. equipment D. schooling
26. A. In short B. In all C. In addition D. In brief
27. A. preserve B. exchange C. contain D. review
28. A. last B. first C. later D. finally
29. A. before B. unless C. until D. when
30. A. realized B. admired C. expected D. exhibited
31. A. specifically B. slightly C. strongly D. exactly
32. A. skills B. environment C. position D. status
33. A. advised B. conducted C. commanded D. led
34. A. accurate B. precious C. casual D. particular
35. A. worry B. belief C. attitude D. chance
36. A. encouraging B. disappointing C. upsetting D. surprising
37. A. for B. with C. over D. at
38. A. what B. how C. whatever D. however
39. A. ambitious B. aggressive C. responsible D. modest
40. A. growing B. dropping C. raising D. declining
第二部分：阅读理解（第一节20小题，第二节5小题；每小题2分，满分50分）
第一节：阅读下列材料，从每题所给的四个选项（A、B、C和D）中，选出最佳选项，并在答题纸上将该选项标号涂黑。
A
In this age of Internet chat, videogames and reality television, there is no shortage of mindless activities to keep a child occupied. Yet, despite the competition, my 8-year-old daughter Rebecca wants to spend her leisure time writing short stories. She wants to enter one of her stories into a writing contest, a competition she won last year.
As a writer I know about winning contests, and about losing them. I know what it is like to work hard on a story only to receive a rejection slip from the publisher. I also know the pressures of trying to live up to a reputation created by previous victories. What if she doesn't win the contest again? That's the strange thing about 英语试题卷·第 4 页（共 10 页）
being a parent. So many of our own past scars and dashed hopes can surface.
A revelation (启示) came last week when I asked her, ―Don‘t you want to win again?‖ ―No,‖ she replied, ―I just want to tell the story of an angel going to first grade.‖
I had just spent weeks correcting her stories as she spontaneously (自发地) told them. Telling myself that I was merely an experienced writer guiding the young writer across the hall, I offered suggestions for characters, conflicts and endings for her tales. The story about a fearful angel starting first grade was quickly ―guided‖ by me into the tale of a little girl with a wild imagination taking her first music lesson. I had turned her contest into my contest without even realizing it.
Staying back and giving kids space to grow is not as easy as it looks. Because I know very little about farm animals who use tools or angels who go to first grade, I had to accept the fact that I was co-opting (借用) my daughter‘s experience.
While stepping back was difficult for me, it was certainly a good first step that I will quickly follow with more steps, putting myself far enough away to give her room but close enough to help if asked. All the while I will be reminding myself that children need room to experiment, grow and find their own voices.
41. What do we learn from the first paragraph?
A. Many senseless activities compete for children‘s time nowadays.
B. Children do find lots of fun in many mindless activities today.
C. Rebecca benefits a lot from the online materials for her writing.
D. Rebecca is much too busy to enjoy her leisure time.
42. What did the writer say about her own writing experience?
A. She did not quite live up to her reputation as a writer.
B. Most of her stories had been rejected by publishers.
C. There are pains as well as gains in her writing career.
D. She could no longer stand any pressure from writing.
43. Why did Rebecca want to enter this year‘s writing contest?
A. She believed she possessed real talent for writing.
B. She simply intended to share her story with readers.
C. She was sure of winning with her mother‘s help.
D. She had won a prize in the previous contest.
44. From the underlined part in Paragraph 4 we can infer that the writer ________________.
A. had unconsciously done too much while correcting her daughter‘s story
B. had already offered practical suggestions for her daughter‘s story
C. had nearly replaced her daughter to take part in the contest
D. had successfully turned her daughter into a young writer
45. What‘s the writer‘s advice for parents?
A. Parents should spare no effort to make their children successful writers.
B. Parents should keep an eye on the activities their children engage in.
C. Children should be given proper guidance to become more excellent.
D. Children should be allowed more freedom to grow through experience. 英语试题卷·第 5 页（共 10 页）
B
The British Museum is a museum dedicated to human history, art, and culture, located in the Bloomsburyarea of London. Its permanent collection, numbering some 8 million works, is among the largest and most comprehensive in existence and originates from all continents, illustrating and documenting the story of human culture from its beginnings to the present.
The British Museum was established in 1753, largely based on the collections of the physician and scientist Sir Hans Sloane. The museum first opened to the public on 15 January 1759 in Montagu House in Bloomsbury, on the site of the current museum building.
Admission and opening times • Free, open daily 10:00–17:30.
• The Museum is open every day except for 24, 25 and 26 December and 1 January.
• Museum galleries are open daily 10:00–17:30, and most are open until 20:30 on Fridays. Closing starts from 17:20 (20:20 on Fridays).
Tips for your school visit
It‘s a good idea to come and see the Museum before your visit. Whatever your plans, please book in advance via the Ticket Desk to make sure you get the most out of your trip.
• Booking your visit
Contact the Ticket Desk at+44 (0)20 7323 8181 or tickets @ britishmuseum.org
• Cancellation
If you are not able to attend a session you must inform the Ticket Desk at least three weeks before the session date. Failure to do so may incur a charge.
• Gallery availability
Please book at least one term in advance and wait for confirmation before making travel plans. Greek and Egyptian galleries book up quickly. Opening times of some galleries may be limited at short notice –- you will be contacted if necessary.
• Access and special educational needs
The majority of galleries and all special exhibitions are fully accessible. There is a range of facilities for visual, hearing and mobility impaired students.
Parking
There is little on-street parking available. The nearest car park to the Museum is located at Bloomsbury Square, WC1A 2RJ. There is limited parking in the Museum‘s forecourt for disabled visitors only. To make arrangements please telephone +44 (0)20 7323 8299 at least 24 hours in advance. You will be asked to provide the registration number, make and model of your vehicle and the date of your visit.
Support us
Your support is vital in enabling the Museum to fulfill its mission to share its collection with the world. The British Museum relies on funding from a wide range of sources and there are many ways that you can donate to help ensure the display, care and preservation of the collection for future generations.
Please consider supporting the British Museum today. 英语试题卷·第 6 页（共 10 页）
46. Who can be admitted to the British Museum?
A. Mary arriving at the museum at 12:00 on December 26
B. Jennifer reaching the museum at 10:00 on New Year‘s Day
C. George getting to the museum at 13:15 on Monday
D. Elizabeth coming to the museum at 20:25 on Friday
47. The underlined word ―incur‖ in the passage can best be replaced by ______________.
A. avoid B. free from C. escape D. bring about
48. What do we know about the British Museum?
A. Sir Hans Sloane donated 8 million works to the museum.
B. All the cars can park in the Museum‘s forecourt.
C. Greek and Egyptian Galleries are quite popular with the school visitors.
D. Disabled students are limited to some special galleries and exhibitions.
49. What does the museum mainly depend on to operate?
A. Money from selling its admission tickets.
B. Income from selling some famous works.
C. Donation and fund from a wide variety of sources.
D. Fund from different international organizations.
C
When University of California-Berkeley released a study this month showing alarmingly high teacher turnover (人员流动) rates at Los Angeles charter (特许) schools, I wasn‘t surprised.
That‘s not shocking news at local charter schools. It‘s just that the study reminded me of something I‘d observed many times, starting with my niece.
Bright and cheerful, my niece longed to teach high-needs children. She started out in the San Francisco public schools, where she was assigned to the district‘s toughest elementary school. Fifth-graders threw chairs across the room — and at her. Parents refused to show up for conferences.
She wasn‘t willing to deal with this level of indifference and teacher abuse, so she switched to a highly regarded charter elementary school in the Bay Area where she poured her energy into her job and it showed. Her students‘ test scores were as high as those in a nearby wealthy school district, despite the obstacles these children faced.
By her fourth year, however, my niece was worn out, running out of the energy it took to work with a classroom of sweet but deeply needy children who begged to stay in her classroom when it was time to leave. The principal‘s offer of a $10,000 raise couldn‘t stop her from giving notice. She went to work at that wealthy school district next door — for less money.
Over the years, I‘ve met many teachers who have a passion for their work at charter schools, only to call them the next year and find they‘ve left. The authors of the Berkeley study hold the belief that the teachers leave because of the extraordinary demands: long hours, intense involvement in students‘ complicated lives, continual searches for new ways to raise scores. Even the strongest supporters of the reform movement acknowledge that raising achievement among disadvantaged students is the most challenging task.
It‘s unlikely that we can build large-scale school reform on a platform of continual new demands on teachers — more time, more energy, more devotion, more responsibility — even if schools find ways to pay them better. 英语试题卷·第 7 页（共 10 页）
This is the bigger challenge facing schools. We need a more useful answer to the Berkeley study than ―Yeah, its really hard work.‖
50. Why wasn‘t the author surprised at the problem?
A. She had been informed of the problem by her niece.
B. She had participated in the Berkeley study.
C. She had noticed the phenomenon repeatedly.
D. She had been warned of the problem by the media.
51. What can we learn about the students in the public school the author‘s niece taught?
A. They were clever and cheerful. B. They were not disciplined.
C. They were indifferent to each other. D. They were forced to learn by their parents.
52. The author‘s niece left the charter elementary school in the Bay Area because ______________.
A. her hard work and devotion didn‘t pay off
B. her work was not well received by the children
C. the demanding work made her exhausted
D. the mean principle offered her a low salary
53. Which of the following is probably the most difficult for teachers?
A. Raising disadvantaged students‘ scores. B. Frequent involvement in students‘ lives.
C. Indifference from students‘ parents. D. Long working time and much energy.
54. What is the author‘s comment on the current school reform movement?
A. It will have a positive impact on education. B. It tends to be unsuccessful.
C. It will make teachers more motivated. D. It demands more fund to meet the challenge.
D
Mine was, at times, a lonely childhood. Born in Chungking, China, of missionary (传教士) parents, I lost my mother at birth. I was two months old when my father sent me to Mother's favorite sister in Morgantown, West Virginia. There I grew up in the house where Mother had spent her girlhood.
In the evening, before Aunt Ruth came home, I often sat on the floor beneath a picture of my mother — a sweet-faced young woman of 20, with dark eyes and black curly hair. There was one question always in my mind: What was my mother like? If only I could have known her!
Twenty years passed. I had grown up, married and had a baby, named Lucy for her grandmother — the mother I'd so longed to know.
One spring morning, 18-month-old Lucy and I boarded a train for Morgantown to visit Aunt Ruth. A woman offered me half her seat in the crowded car. I thanked her and busied myself with Lucy, while the woman turned her attention to the landscape speeding by.
After settling my baby in my arms for a nap, I started to talk with the woman. She said she was going to Morgantown to see her daughter and brand-new grandson. ―Surely you know my aunt, Ruth Wood,‖ I said. ―She‘s had a real-estate office in Morgantown for years.‖
―No,‖ she answered. ―I‘ve been away a long time, and that name is not familiar to me.‖
For several minutes, the woman looked out of the window. Then, without turning her head, she began to speak.
―There was a Miss Lucy Wood, a teacher, in Morgantown years ago. She probably left there before you were 英语试题卷·第 8 页（共 10 页）
born. You said the name Wood, and, suddenly, I can't stop thinking about her. I haven‘t thought of her for years, but once I loved her very much. She was my teacher. My parents owned a bakery on Watts Street. They were on the verge of divorce. They fought and quarreled all the time. I had to work very hard at home and in the bakery, too.
―I loved school, though I didn‘t make good grades. Miss Wood‘s room was a happy place; it seemed like heaven to me. One day, after my folks had a big fight at breakfast, I came to school late, holding back the tears. Miss Wood kept me after school. I thought she would scold me but, instead, she let me tell her my troubles. She made me feel how much my brothers and sisters, and even my parents, needed me and from that day on, my life was worth living.‖
―A few months later, I heard a little girl say: ‗Miss Wood‘s going to marry a missionary and live in China!‘ I went home crying. My parents stopped in the middle of a fight to ask me what was wrong, but they could not know how great a light was going out in my life. I couldn‘t sleep that night.
―The next day, Miss Wood again kept me after school to see what was wrong. When I told her, she looked surprised and tender. ‗Please don‘t go way off to China!‘ I begged.
―‗Viola‘, she answered, ‗I can‘t give up China. I‘m going where my heart calls me, with the man I love. But I swear I‘ll think of you often, and I‘ll send you a postcard.‘
―I‘d never had any mail of my own, so that made me feel better. When I told my mother, she shook her head, saying. ‗Don‘t feel too bad, Viola, if she forgets; she‘ll have so many folks to write to.‘
―Two months later, I got a postcard with a picture of the Yangtze River, postmarked Chungking, China. ‗Are you still making me proud of you, my little brave one?‘ it asked. If anyone had given me a million dollars, it couldn‘t have made me more proud. Right after that, my parents broke up and we moved away from Morgantown.
―Goodness, we are almost there! I‘ve talked too much. I do hope I haven‘t bored you.‖
Then, for the first time, she turned to me and saw the tears in my eyes.
―Would you like to see Lucy Wood‘s granddaughter?‖ I asked. My baby was waking from her nap. My heart was singing. The burning question of my childhood had been richly answered.
55. Morgantown was the place where _______________.
A. the author‘s mother passed away B. the author spent her childhood
C. the author was born D. the author‘s father grew up
56. What can we learn about Viola‘s childhood?
A. She got excellent grades in school. B. Her parents didn‘t love her.
C. She grew up in her Aunt‘s house. D. Her parents‘ marriage was in trouble.
57. In what way did Miss Wood influence Viola?
A. She helped her improve the grades. B. She solved all her troubles.
C. She convinced her to value life a lot. D. She helped her get along with schoolmates.
58. Viola‘s mother was ___________ when Viola told her about Miss Wood‘s promise.
A. doubtful B. trustful C. indifferent D. optimistic
59. What might be the ―burning question‖ that had been richly answered?
A. Why did father send me to Aunt Ruth? B. Why did mother go to China?
C. What kind of person was mother? D. What did mother leave to her students?
60. What would be the best title for the passage?
A. An Unforgettable Train Trip B. An Ordinary but Great Teacher
C. The Student My Mother was Proud of D. The Day I Met My Mother 英语试题卷·第 9 页（共 10 页）
第二节：下面文章有5个段落需要添加首句（第61—65题）。请从以下选项（A、B、C、D、E和F）中选出适合各段落的首句，并在答题纸上将该选项标号涂黑。选项中有一项是多余选项。
A. Stay busy.
B. Beat the heat.
C. Get going with goals.
D. Seek help from a dietitian.
E. Think about what and how you eat.
F. Stick to a schedule.
Tips to fight summer weight gain
When we think of summer, most of us think of outdoor fun. So it seems like we should naturally lose weight over the summer --- not gain it. In reality, though, summer isn‘t all beach volleyball and water sports. Lots of summer activities can work against our efforts to stay at a healthy weight. The good news is that it‘s easy to avoid problems if we know what to look out for. Here are 5 ways to beat summer weight gain:
61. _____________________ When we don‘t have a plan, it‘s easy to spend summer moving from couch to computer, with regular stops at the fridge. Avoid this by setting a specific aim, like volunteering, mastering a new skill, or working at a job. Just be sure to plan for some downtime so you can relax a little!
62. _____________________ With school out, we lose our daily routines. If you don‘t have a specific job or activity to get up for, it‘s easy to sleep late, watch too much TV, and snack more than usual. Make sure your summer days have some structure — like getting up at the same time each day and eating meals at set times. Plan activities for specific times, like exercising before breakfast, for example. If you have time on your hands, offer to make dinner a couple of nights a week so your family can enjoy a sit-down meal together.
63. _____________________ When we‘re bored, it‘s easy to fall into a trap of doing nothing and then feeling low on energy. In addition to helping you avoid the cookie jar, filling your days with stuff to do can give you a sense of accomplishment. That‘s especially true if a dream summer job or planned activity fell through. Limit your screen time — including TV, computer, and video games — to no more than 2 hours a day.
64. _____________________ Don‘t let hot summer days prevent you from carrying out exercise plans. Move your workout indoors. If a gym isn‘t your scene, try bowling or an indoor climbing wall. If you love being outdoors, try joining a local pool or move a regular run or soccer game to early morning or evening.
65. _____________________ Summer means picnics and barbecues — activities that revolve around an unlimited spread of food. Pace yourself. Don‘t overload your plate. Avoid going back for seconds and thirds. Choose seasonal, healthy foods like fresh fruit instead of high-sugar, high-fat desserts. Make catching up with family and friends your focus, not the food. Another good tip for summer eating is to limit frozen treats like ice cream to no more than once a week.
第Ⅱ卷（非选择题 共40分）
第三部分：写作（共两节，满分40分）
第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。 英语试题卷·第 10 页（共 10 页）
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 例如：
It was very nice to get your invitation to spend ∧ weekend with you. Luckily I was
the am
completely free then, so I‘ll to say ―yes‖. I‘ll arrive in Bristol at around 8 p.m. in Friday
on
evening.
2016届浙江省六校联考
英语答案
第一部分：英语知识运用（共两节，满分30分）
第一节：单项填空（共20小题；每小题0.5分，满分10分）
1-5：AABAD 6-10: BCBDD 11-15: CBDAA 16-20: AAADD
第二节：完形填空（共20小题；每题1分，满分20分）
21-25: DABDC 26-30: CABDA 31-35: CBDDB 36-40: ADBCA
第二部分：阅读理解（第一节20小题，第二节5小题；每小题2分，满分50分）
第一节：41-45: ACBAD 45-49: CDCC 50-54: CBCAB 55-60: BDCACD
第二节：61-65：CFABE
第三部分：写作（共二节，满分40分）
第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
Last Saturday I went to the Great Wall with some of my friends. In our way up, we saw many
On
volunteers working in the sun. They helped the elders with their bags, took photos for some tourist
tourists
and answered people’s questions. Because they were very tired, they didn’t stop to have a rest.
Although/Though/While
Just at the moment, we saw a little boy standing alone, cried. We went over and asked what is the
crying was
matter. From his answer we knew he couldn’t find his mother. We told him not to worry and then
we tried to get in the touch with his mother with the phone number he gave us. Twenty minutes
late, his mother turned up. When she saw her son, she got relieved but thanked us again and again.
Later and
That day we not only enjoyed the beauty of the Great Wall, but felt the warm of the society. If
warmth
everyone can reach ∧a helping hand to others, the world will be more harmonious.
out
第二节：书面表达（满分30分）
One possible version
Dear Li Hua,
It’s time to say goodbye. It’s time to recall those beautiful days we spend together. You are the very person who gives me a hand when necessary. You are the most considerate person who
knows exactly what I need.
Still remember that night two years ago? When I suddenly fell ill, it was you who carried me on your back to a nearby hospital. You took good care of me while I was having an injection. Later, you managed to help me with my lessons. Without your help, I would have failed in the examination.
I still have hundreds of stories to share with you. I still have thousands of blessings for you. May all your dreams come true! May our friendship last till the end of the universe! 2
Yours,
Wang Ping
书面表达评分标准
一、评分原则
1、本题总分为30分，按5个档次给分。
2、评分时，应根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。
3、词数少于80和多于120的，从总分中减去2分。
4、评分时，应注意的主要内容：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、上下文连贯性及语言的得体性。
5、拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。
6、如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。
二、内容要点：(略)
三、各档次的给分范围和要求：
第五档次（很好）：（25-30分）完全完成了试题规定的任务。
-覆盖所有内容要点。
-应用较多的语法结构和词汇。
-语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；
具备较强的语言运用能力。
-有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。完全达到了预期的写作目的。
第四档（好）（19-24分）
完全完成了试题规定的任务。
-----虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。
------应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
------语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试复杂语法结构或词汇所致。
------应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。达到了预期的写作目的。
第三档（适当）：（13-18）
基本完成了试题规定的任务。
------虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。
------应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
------有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。
------应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯。整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。
第二档（较差）：（7—12分）
未恰当完成试题规定的任务。
------漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。
------语法结构单调，词汇知识有限。
------有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。
------较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。信息未能清楚地传达给读者。 3
第一档（差）：（1-6分）
未完成试题规定的任务。
------明显遗漏主要内容，写一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求。
------语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。
------较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解。
------缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。信息未能传达给读者。
0分
未能传达给读者任何信息；内容太少、无法评判；写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。
四、说明
1. 内容要点可用不同方式表达
2. 对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分
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