湖北省黄冈中学2016届高三英语综合测试（十一）
命题人：
第二部分 阅读理解（共两节，满分40分）
第一节 （共15小题；每小题2分，满分30分）
阅读下列短文，从每题所给的四个选项（A、B、C、和D）中，选出最佳选项，并在答题卡上将该项涂黑。
A
NSE Summer School is suitable for those who are at, or are about to start university. It will begin accepting applications in January, 2013.
Courses: Accounting and Finance; Economics; Management; Law; International Relations; Government and Society.
Dates: Session 1: 7 July—25 July Session 2: 28 July—15 August
Rate: Standard Rate: One session: $ 1,400; Both sessions: $ 2,400
Reduced Student Rate: One session: $ 1,100; Both sessions: $ 1,875
The reduced student rate applies to ful-time students registered at a university or college anywhere in the world. Accommodation is not included, and fees range from $ 500 to $ 1000 for 20 nights.
Applicant requirements:
If you have studied in the USA, you do not need any additional English qualifications. Students from other countries will generally not be required to have a visa to study at Summer School. However, you will enter the USA as a “Student Visitor”. You are permitted to change courses before the start of the program and within the first three days of the session.
Contact hours and teaching methods:
Summer School courses are full-time and normally consist of 48 contact hours over the three-week period, taking the form of 36 hours of lectures and 12 hours of classes. Lectures, attended by all students, take place in either the morning or afternoon supplemented by small one-hour classes, of approximately 15 students.
Assessment and examinations:
Assessment for Summer School is based upon the results of either two written examinations, or a final written examination and assessment work. Everyone is required to take the examinations and no exception can be made for any reason.
Summer School lecture series:
Famous economists—Tony Giddens and David Held—have agreed to give lectures to Summer School participants in July, 2013.
If you have any questions, please click here to see our Frequently Asked Questions／Contact US Page.
21. From the passage, we can 1earn that .
A. the program is specially designed for foreign students
B. NSE Summer School is a university-level program
C. students can change their courses whenever they want to
D. a visa is required to study at the NSE Summer School
22. The purpose of the advertisement is to .
A. attract students to NSE Summer School
B. introduce famous economists to students
C. help students to pass the final exams
D. advertise for new staff for the university
23. You will most probably find this passage .
A. in a newspaper B. in a guidebook
C. on a webpage D. in a magazine
解析：
考点：应用文
难度系数：3
【解题导语】本文主要是介绍一个培训学校的招生信息。
21.答案：B
考点：推理判断。
解析：根据Applicant requirements中的You are permitted to change courses before …and within…可知 C项不正确; 根据If you have studied in the UK…可知这个项目不仅仅是针对外国学生举办的，故A不正确；根 据will not be required to have a visa可知英国之外的学生在报名时不是必须带有签证，故D不正确。由文章的首句可知B正确，故选B。
22.答案： A
考点：推断能力。
解析：本段广告介绍了LSE Summer School 2013的课程、上课时间、费用、入学要求、考试等各个方面的内容，旨在吸引学生到这个学校去学习。故选A。
23. 答案：C
考点：细节理解题。
解析;根据文章末句If any questions, please click here to see our Frequently Asked Questions/ Contact US Page可知文章是来自网页上的内容。故选C。
长难句解析：
Lectures, attended by all students, take place in either the morning or afternoon supplemented by small one-hour classes, of approximately 15 students.注意句子中的attended by all students为后置定语。谓语是take place。
B
I had an experience once which taught me something about the ways people made a bad situation worse by blaming themselves. One January, I officiated (主持) at two funerals for two elderly women. Both died a natural death. At the first home, the son of the deceased (已故) woman said, “If only I had sent my mother to Florida and gotten her out of this cold and snow, she
would be alive today. It’s my fault that she died.” At the second home, the son said, “If only I had not insisted her going to Florida, she would be alive today. That long airplane ride was more than she could take. It is my fault.”
When things don’t turn out as we would like them to, we tend to assume that had we done things differently, the story would have had a happier ending. Any time there is a death, the survivors will feel guilty. Because the course of action they took turned out bad, they believe that the opposite course, for example, keeping mother at home, would have turned out better. After all, how could it have turned out any worse?
There seem to be elements involved in our readiness to feel guilty. The first lies in our belief that the world makes sense—there is a reason for everything that happens.
The second is the thought that we are the cause of what happens, especially the bad things that happen. The roots of this feeling may lie in our childhood. A baby comes to think that the world exists to meet his needs, and that he makes everything happen in it. He wakes up in the morning and calls the rest of the world to its tasks. He cries, and someone comes to attend to him. When he is hungry, people feed him, and when he is wet, people change him. Very often, we do not completely abandon that childish thought that our wishes cause things to happen.
24. What is true about the two deceased elderly women?
A. They died from accidents.
B. They both died of old age.
C. They died due to lack of care by family members.
D. They weren’t accustomed to the change in life.
25. People feel guilty for the death of their loved ones because .
A. they cannot find a better way to express their sorrow
B. they don’t know that natural course of events
C. they believe that it is their fault
D. they don’t know things often turn out in the opposite direction
26. The underlined word “they” in Paragraph 2 probably refers to .
A. the things B. the stories C. the opposites D. the survivors
27. What is the main idea of this passage?
A. Two sons blamed themselves for their mother’s death.
B. Things don’t always go well as we expect.
C. Two factors account for guilty sense.
D. Baby’s wishes lead everything to happen.
解析：
考点：记叙文
难度系数：4
【解题导语】本文介绍了人们经常把一些不好的事情发生的原因归结在自己身上，并分析这样的想法的两个原因：第一个是这个世界的每一件事情的发生都是有道理的；第二就是童年的经历让我们认为自己就是一切事情发生的根源。
24. 答案 B
考点：推理判断题。
解析：根据第一段2, 3行One January, I officiated(主持) at two funerals for two elderly women. Both died a natural death.可知这两位老人都是自然死亡的，也就是说她们都是年纪很大了以后自然去世的。故B正确。
25. 答案 C
考点： 细节题。
解析：根据第一段最后3行If only I had sent my mother to Florida and gotten her out of this cold and snow, she would be alive today. It’s my fault that she died.”和“If only I had not insisted her going to Florida, she would be alive today. That long airplane ride was more than she could take. It is my fault.”可知这两位儿子都认为母亲的去世是因为自己的过失导致的。故C正确。
26. 答案：D
考点：词义猜测题。
解析：根据上文可以推断 “they” 指代 “the survivors” 故D正确。
27. 答案：C
考点：主旨大意题。
解析: 本文介绍了人们经常把一些不好的事情发生的原因归结在自己身上，并分析这样的想法的两个原因：第一个是这个世界的每一件事情的发生都是有道理的；第二就是童年的经历让我们认为自己就是一切事情发生的根源。故C正确。
长难句解析：When things don’t turn out as we would like them to, we tend to assume that had we done things differently, the story would have had a happier ending. As引导方式状语，had we done things differently是倒桩句，相当于if we had done things differently。
C
The Republic of Vanuatu is an island nation located in the South Pacific Ocean. It was one of the poorest nations in the region. Within the last five years, however, it has become a hot spot for adventure travelers. In 2006 it was voted the happiest place on Earth. The reason is not that Vanuatu are the richest but that Vanuatu has white-sand islands, clear waters, the world’s most accessible live volcano, great diving and food that grows faster than it can be picked.
With a population of about 221,000, Vanuatu has 113 languages, which is a result of 3,000 years of immigration from many Pacific countries. There are three official languages: English, French, and Bislama. Bislama developed from South Pacific English, a simplified language that traders and other foreigners used it to communicate with speakers of the many local languages.
Most of the islands are mountainous and of volcanic origin. There are several active volcanoes in Vanuatu, including Yasur on the island of Tanna, one of the world’s most accessible volcanoes. If you’ve ever fancied getting close to a volcano, here’s your chance.
Vanuatu Post’s Underwater Post Office has quickly become one of the busiest post offices for postcards in the world! Visitors from around the world want to experience the world’s first under- water post office. The Post Office is only 50 meters offshore and at just three meters below the surface, very appealing to the young and young at heart. Since opening in 2003, the underwater post office has received about 100,000 visitors. They have posted one of the waterproof（防水的）postcards available in Vanuatu; these cards are collected regularly by one of Vanuatu Post’s four
trained divers. The underwater branch is manned daily for usually about an hour, longer with demand.
28. Vanuatu was voted the happiest place on Earth because .
A. it’s the poorest nation in the region
B. it’s Vanuatu that is the richest
C. it’s a favorite place for adventurers
D. it’s blessed with abundant nature
29. Which of the following is true about Vanuatu?
A. Bislama developed from local Pacific French.
B. Yasur is one of the live volcanoes in Vanuatu.
C. Vanuatu has more than 113 official languages.
D. Underwater Post Office has opened for 5 years.
30. Which of the following would be the most proper title for the text?
A. Working at the underwater branch.
B. Great diving in amazing Vanuatu.
C. A hot spot for adventure travelers.
D. The busiest post office on Earth.
31. What is most likely to be discussed in the paragraph that follows?
A. Various languages. B. Underwater diving.
C. Food in Vanuatu. D. History of Vanuatu.
解析：
考点：说明文
难度系数：4
【解题导语】文章主要介绍了现在非常热门的旅游胜地瓦努阿图的自然景观、旅游特色、语言及风土人情等。
28.答案： D
考点：细节理解题。
解析:根据In 2006 it was voted the happiest place on Earth. The reason is not that Vanuatu are the richest but that Vanuatu has white-sand islands, clear waters, the world’s most accessible live volcano, great diving and food that grows faster than it can be picked可知选D。
29.答案：B
考点：细节理解题。
解析：根据There are several active volcanoes in Vanuatu, including Yasur on the island of Tanna, one of the world’s most accessible volcanoes可知选B。
30. 答案：C
考点：主旨大意题。
解析：根据全文内容以及Within the last five years, however, it has become a hot spot for adventure travelers.可知这篇文章主要讲了冒险旅行者最喜欢去的地方，故选C。
31. 答案：C
考点：推理判断题。
解析：这道题目问接下来的自然段最可能写什么，A、B和D前面文章已经讲过了，结合文中的第一段
最后一句可知答案为C。
长难复杂句：The reason is not that Vanuatu are the richest but that Vanuatu has white-sand islands, clear waters, the world’s most accessible live volcano, great diving and food that grows faster than it can be picked. 句子中有一个not…but…表示不是……而是……。
D
Modern inventions have speeded up people’s lives amazingly. Motor-cars cover a hundred miles in little more than an hour, aircraft cross the world inside a day, while computers operate at lightning speed. Indeed, this love of speed seems never-ending. Every year motor-cars are produced which go even faster and each new computer boasts (吹嘘) of saving precious seconds in handling tasks.
All this saves time, but at a price. When we lose or gain half a day in speeding across the world in an airplane, our bodies tell us so. We get the uncomfortable feeling known as jet-lag; our bodies feel that they have been left behind in another time zone. Again, spending too long at computers results in painful wrists and fingers．Mobile phones also have their dangers, according to some scientists; too much use may transmit harmful radiation into our brains, a consequence we do not like to think about.
However, what do we do with the time we have saved? Certainly not relax, or so it seems. We are so accustomed to constant activity that we find it difficult to sit and do nothing, or even just one thing at a time．Perhaps the days are long gone when we might listen quietly to a story on the radio, letting imagination take us into another world.
There was a time when some people’s lives were devoted simply to the cultivation of the land or the care of cattle. No multi-tasking there; their lives went on at a much gentler pace, and in a familiar pattern．There is much that we might envy about a way of life like this. Yet before we do so, we must think of the hard tasks our ancestors faced: they farmed with bare hands, often lived close to hunger, and had to fashion tools from wood and stone．Modern machinery has freed people from that primitive existence.
32. The new products become more and more time-saving because .
A. time is limited B. our love of speed seems never-ending
C. the prices are increasingly high D. the manufacturers boast a lot
33. What does “the days” in Paragraph 3 refer to?
A. Simple life in the past. B. Imaginary life.
C. Times of inventions. D. Time for constant activity.
34. What is the author’s attitude towards the modern technology?
A. Objective. B. Critical. C. Optimistic. D. Negative.
35. What does the passage mainly discuss?
A. Machinery and human beings. B. The present and past times.
C. Imaginations and inventions. D. Modern technology and its influence.
解析：
考点：议论文
难度系数：4
【解题导语】现代科技的快捷给人们带来的方便同时也带了危害。
32. 答案 B
考点：细节理解题。
解析：由第一段中Indeed, this love of speed seems never-ending.可知是人们对速度的狂热追求使产品更加省时。故选A。
33.答案 A
考点：推测指代意义。
解析：由第三段Perhaps the days are long gone when we might listen quietly to a story on the radio, letting imagination take us into another world．可知the days指过去的简单生活。故选A。
34. 答案A
考点：推测作者态度题。
解析：全文第一段提到了现代科技的快捷，第四段提到了科技对人类的解放；而第二，三段介绍了现代科技会给人类带来健康损害，会让人们闲不下来，所以作者客观地阐述了现代科技的利弊，故选A项。
35. 答案 D
考点：主旨大意题。
解析：:全文主要介绍了现代科技的利弊及人类生活的影响，故选D。
第二节 （共5小题；每小题2分，满分10分）
根据短文内容，从短文后的选项中选出能填入空白处的最佳选项，并在答题卡上将该项涂黑。选项中有两项为多余选项。
As children, we grow up thinking that our parents are heroes and perfect, but as time goes on we come to realize that they are just as human as we are. However, a change in your knowledge of your father doesn’t have to be the end of your strong connection to him.
＊ 36 You thought that you knew exactly who your father was. Now that something has changed that，you feel shocked and lost. Whatever has caused this change in your knowledge has caused your father to never be the same in your life. 37
＊ Handle the anger. When the shock of this change of view wears off, you may slide into anger. Feeling angry at this point is natural but it is important that you deal with it appropriately and constructively. You don’t want to damage your other relationships, for example.
＊ Take some time to look in the mirror. This is a time for self-reflection. Has your father really changed? If so, why are his changes so hard for you to accept compared to those of other people in your life? 38
＊ Communicate. When you have a firm handle on your emotions, you need to communicate with your father. You need to speak to him about how you are dealing with this big change.
39 He may not even be aware of the change, because to himself he is simply human. Discuss things honestly.
＊ Rebuild. The relationship between your father and you as a child is gone. 40 Accept that it is gone and start building a different relationship with him. If you give it a chance, your new relationship will be truer, deeper and more loving than the one you had before.
A. Does it make sense to hold on to your childish belief that he is perfect?
B. Acknowledge the shock.
C. Most importantly, you need listen to him.
D. Speak to a third party to get a different point of view of him.
E. The longer you hold on to it, the harder it will be to build something new.
F. Ignoring or hiding from your pain isn’t going to help anything.
G. A father is the first male relationship we have in our lives and so is part of who we are.
解析：
考点：议论文
难度系数：3
36．答案 B
解析：根据下文的小标题和本段内容可知36题处应是一个短小的祈使句，故答案选B。
37. 答案 F
解析:根据上句的Whatever has caused this change in your knowledge has caused your father to never be the same in your life.及标题Acknowledge the shock.可知答案为F。
38. 答案 A
解析:根据标题和上文两个问句及A项含义可知A也是反思内容。故答案为A。
39. 答案 C
解析： 根据上文中的两个need 及C项的含义与上文确为递进关系，可知答案为C。
40.答案 E
解析：根据标题rebuild和空后中的build可知答案为E.
第三部分 英语知识运用（共两节， 满分45分）
第一节：完形填空（共20 小题；每小题1.5分，满分30分）
阅读下面短文，从短文后各题所给的四个选项（A, B, C, D）中，选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项，并在答题卡上将该项涂黑。
Even as I write this story, I am still smiling. The past few weeks have been rather 41 , but when a large number of Smile Cards arrived in my 42 the other day, having traveled all the way from the United States to my home in the Netherlands, I knew things were about to
43 .
I plotted where to leave the cards as I went to bed that night: the train, benches at the station, at work, libraries, mailboxes, the gym—the possibilities were 44 .
I woke up, went to work, and afterwards, I went 45 to the shop to buy some candy bars, planning to leave them as anonymous (匿名的) 46 for people on the train. 47 , my train home was extremely crowded, which made my plan difficult. An elderly man must have seen me searching for a place to 48 a Smile Card, because he asked me 49 I was looking for something.
Right then I 50 that my first Smile Card would not be anonymous. With a big smile and cheeks 51 with excitement, I told him that I 52 what I was looking for,
53 him the candy bar and Smile Card I had in my hands. He had only just finished reading the card 54 I arrived at my stop, but he was still smiling and 55 his candy as I waved at him from the 56 .
Despite having worked a full day, I almost bounced (跳) home. Before I entered my apartment, I 57 a few more Smile Cards and candy bars to people's mailboxes. I added an
58 candy bar for a neighbor who I knew was in a difficult financial 59 , but who I saw working hard everyday to get the very best for her young son. I figured they both 60 a tasty little treat.
41. A. pleasant B. simple C. tough D. common
42. A. office B. room C. mailbox D. hands
43. A. turn away B. turn around C. turn up D. turn down
44. A. small B. important C. specific D. endless
45. A. slowly B. smoothly C. freely D. straight
46. A. mailboxes B. gifts C. cards D. flowers
47. A. However B. Besides C. Therefore D. Anyway
48. A. drop B. give C. leave D. hide
49. A. when B. where C. whether D. how
50. A. wondered B. decided C. doubted D. suggested
51. A. filled B. faced C. satisfied D. content
52. A. found B. invented C. forgot D. remembered
53. A. transporting B. delivering C. sending D. handing
54. A. when B. while C. until D. once
55. A. reading B. enjoying C. buying D. carrying
56. A. entrance B. office C. platform D. bench
57. A. discovered B. delivered C. purchased D. commanded
58. A. affordable B. available C. extra D. excellent
59. A. situation B. company C. staff D. matter
60. A. admired B. deserved C. won D. rewarded
解析：
考点：夹叙夹议的文章
难度系数：3
文章大意：本文主要讲作者日子艰难的时候，收到别人寄来的微笑贺卡。他效仿这种做法，在火车上送给陌生人微笑卡片和棒棒糖。给朋友、邻居寄去卡片和棒棒糖，同时也给别人送去好的心情。
41.答案 C.
考点：考查形容词词义辨析
解析：过去的几周日子一直很艰难，但是几天前，当我的邮箱收到大量的微笑卡片时，…… 我知道事情会好转。but是转折连词，因此41空与43空句意相反。
42. 答案C.
考点：考查名词词义辨析
解析: 句意同上。根据后文 having traveled all the way from the United States to my home in the Netherlands及最后一段I delivered a few more Smile Cards and candy bars to people’s mailboxes.可知答案。Office等缺乏语境支持。
43. 答案B.
考点：动词短语意义辨析
解析： 句意同上。turn away “转过脸去；转身离开”；turn around “转身；变得完全不同”；turn up “出现，露面”；turn down “调小，拒绝”。
44.答案D.
考点：形容词词义语境辨析
解析：可能性是“无穷无尽的”。故选D项endless。
45. 答案D.
考点：副词词义语境辨析
解析：我“直接”去商店买一些棒棒糖。Slowly“慢慢地”；smoothly“顺利地”；freely“自由地”；straight“径直地，直接地”。
46. 答案B
考点：名词词义语境辨析
解析：计划把他们作为匿名的 “礼物” 送给火车上的人们。
47. 答案A.
考点：副词词义辨析
解析： “然而”，我回家的这趟火车极其拥挤, 这使我的计划变得困难。故选A项However。
48. 答案C.
考点：动词词义辨析
解析：一位老人一定是看到我寻找地方“放”微笑卡片。根据第二段where to leave the cards和第三段的planning to leave them as…可知选C项leave。
49. 答案C.
考点：连词词义辨析
解析： 一位老人一定是看到我寻找地方“放”微笑卡片，因为他问我“是否”在找什么东西。
50. 答案B.
考点：动词词义辨析
解析：就在那时，我“决定”我第一张卡片不再匿名。
51. 答案A.
考点：形容词词义辨析
解析：脸上带着微笑并“洋溢着”兴奋，我……。Be filled with意为 “充满”，这里直接是-ed分词作后置定语表被动。
52. 答案A.
考点：动词词义辨析
解析：我告诉他我“找到了”我想找的东西。
53.答案D.
考点：动词词义辨析
解析： “递给”他我手里的棒棒糖和卡片。Transporting“运输”；delivering“运送”；sending“发送”；handing“递给”。
54. 答案A.
考点：连词用法
解析：他刚刚看完卡片我就到站了。had just done… when…固定句式，意为“刚……就……”。
55. 答案B.
考点：动词词义辨析
解析： 他还在微笑着 “品味（吃）着”那支棒棒糖。
56. 答案C.
考点：名词词义辨析
解析：我在 “站台上” 挥手向他致意。Platform “站台”。
57. 答案B.
考点：动词词义辨析
解析：作者在回到自己的房间之前，给很多人“送去”微笑卡片，其他选项不合语境，句末有to people’s mailboxes提示。
58. 答案C.
考点：形容词词义辨析
解析： 我 “额外多加了” 根棒棒糖给我的邻居，我知道他处于很艰难的经济“状况”，但是他每天努力工作，为他的小儿子创造最好的一切，我认为他们俩都“应该得到”这美味的款待。
59. 答案A.
考点：名词词义辨析
解析：句意同上。in a situation 处于……状况。
60. 答案B.
考点：动词词义辨析
解析：句意同58。Admired “羡慕”；deserved “应得”；won “赢得”；rewarded “回报”。
第Ⅱ卷
注意事项：用0.5毫米黑色签字笔将答案写在答题卡上。写在本试卷上无效。
第三部分 英语知识运用（共两节， 满分45分）
第二节：语法填空（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
阅读下面材料，在空白处填入适当的内容（1个单词）或括号内单词的正确形式。
My wife is addicted to shopping on the Internet. 61 seems that she can’t control herself well, just clicking constantly with the mouse. Let me tell what happened last night. It was the fourth time she 62 (shop) online for hours. I had already reminded her 63 (think) twice before buying anything, but my wife ignored what I said and replied confidently, “With the New Year 64 (approach), preparation is necessary. Besides, I haven’t bought things on the Internet for a WHOLE week.” Hearing her words, I was really 65 (speech). In most cases, the things she bought aren’t good value for money. Maybe she just enjoys 66 process of buying online.
Nowadays, 67 the development of technology, online shopping is becoming more and more convenient. Those 68 stay at home can buy whatever they want. In the meanwhile, it causes a series of 69 (problem). One of them is more spending, because people are
70 (easy) attracted by the discount. So how to keep a good state of mind in front of temptation is an important lesson many people need to learn.
解析：
难度系数：3
61.答案： It
解析：考查it seems that 的句型
62. 答案：had shopped
解析：考查固定句型里的时态的运用。
63. 答案：to think
解析: 考查固定搭配remind sb to do sth。
64. 答案：approaching
解析: 考查with 结构，approach与前面的宾语是主动关系。
65. 答案：speechless
解析：考查名词变形容词作表语，speech的形容词是speechless.
66. 答案：the
解析: 考查定冠词的用法，特指网上购物的过程。
67. 答案：with
解析：with the development of technology，随着科技的发展。
68. 答案：who
解析: 考查定语从句。
69. 答案：problems
解析： 考查名词的单复数。
70. 答案：easily
解析: 修饰动词用副词。
第四部分 写作 （共两节，满分35）
第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加： 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除： 把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改： 在错词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
On a Friday night, a poor young artist was playing with his violin at a street corner with a large piece of paper on the ground. Before long, he was surrounding with people, who were all attracted by the word on that paper. It said, “Last night, a gentleman put an important thing into my hat with mistake. Please come to claim them soon.” Seeing this, people wondered why it could
be. Some time later, a man came and take back his lottery which won a prize of ＄500,000. When asked why he didn’t keep it for himself, artist said, “While I don’t have much money, I live happy. However, if I lose honest, I won’t be happy forever.”
解析：
难度系数：2
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On a Friday night, a poor young artist was playing with his violin at a street corner with a large piece of paper on the ground. Before long, he was surrounding with people, who were all attracted by the word on that paper. It said, “Last night, a gentleman put an important thing into my hat with mistake. Please come to claim them soon.” Seeing this, people wondered why it could be. Some time later, a man came and take back his lottery which won a prize of ＄500,000. When asked why he didn’t keep it for himself, ∧artist said, “While I don’t have much money, I live happy. However, if I lose honest, I won’t be happy forever.”
第一处错误：play his violin是固定搭配。
第二处错误： be surrounded with 是固定搭配，他被围着。
第三处错误: 被纸上的话吸引了，考查名词的复数。
第三处错误： by mistake 为固定搭配。
第五处错误： 这里指上文中an important thing，所以应该用单数。
第六处错误： 人们想知道这个重要的东西是什么呢？考查连词的用法。
第七处错误： and连接的 前后动词一般保持时态上的一致。
第八处错误：指代上文弹小提琴的艺术家，所以要特指。
第九处错误： 副词修饰动词。
第十处错误： lose 后应该接名词。
第二节 书面表达(满分25分)
假如你是一位心理教师，即将给国际夏令营的学生做一次心理健康方面的演讲，请你写一份演讲材料，内容包括：
1. 心理健康的重要性；
2. 引起心理疾病的原因；(考试失败，压力及感到孤单等)；
3. 关于预防心理疾病的建议；
4. 提出希望。
注意：1. 词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Hello, everyone,
It is a great honor to be invited here today.
解析：
考点：演讲类的作文
难度系数：4.5
写作指导：
1.演讲稿是介绍性说明文，在语言使用一定要准确简洁，通俗易懂，层次清楚，条理分明。介绍说明事物的内容关系要明确，要求逻辑性强。发言稿印版有开头语，正文和结束语三部分组成。开头语一般来说比较简单，目的就是吸引听众或读者的注意力。
演讲稿的开头和结尾一般都有固定的的格式，如：
Dear friends,
I’m glad to introduce myself to you
.___________________________
That’s all. Thank you.
如果是熟悉的听众，头尾可以活泼一些，灵活一些，如：
（1）Good morning,/Good afternoon,everyone…
That’s all. Thank you.
( 2 )Good evening!Ladies and gentlemen..
That’s all. Thank you.
2.正文是演讲稿的主体，主要是提供论点和相关的论据等，论点要明确，论据要充分有力。发言稿的正文常见形式：
第一部分：开门见山提出本人要谈的问题及对问题的看法；
第二部分：说明理由，常见的关联词有：First of all , Secondly, Finally等；
第三部分：照应开头，总结全文。最后可以做简明扼要的总结，也可以谈自己的希望或看法等。常见的句式有：In short, In a word…等。
3.演讲稿的语句表达要直接面对听众，尽量不要用复杂啰嗦的句子，更不要采用深奥难懂的句子。话要说的准确易懂，最好用大众语言。除了要求以简单句为主的同时，可以适当穿插一些复合句结构。由于文章要求以简单句为主，所以不要把文章写成单句的罗列，适当的使用关联词承前启后，可以使文章前后连贯，浑然一体。演讲稿的时态一般以现在时态为主。
Hello, everyone,
It is a great honor to be invited here today. Indeed, psychological health should be paid more attention to, because it has caused a lot of health problems.
Generally speaking, many experiences can disturb the psychological balance. Firstly, failing an exam is terrible news to you. Secondly, you may be anxious if you are under stress. In addition, you will break down when you are feeling lonely.
Therefore, I think you should look at problems from every aspect. Like a garden with weeds, the good side is below the bad side, and your just need to turn it over. Besides, you must distract your attention from the truth when you lose your balance. You can take exercise when you like or communicate with your good friends.
In a word, psychological health is of extraordinary significance. And I believe all of us can manage it very well as long as we face problems positively.
That’s all. Thank you for listening!
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