专题13 书面表达
1.【2018年四川省宜宾】初中三年即将过去，你在这三年中一定有没有实现的愿望。为此，校园广播站特向全校 初三学生征稿。请你根据下面提示，写一篇广播稿。
1. 没有实现的愿望(如:学会吉他)；
2. 没有实现愿望的原因（至少两个）；
3. 进入高中后为实现愿望的计划。 要求：
1．短文应条理清楚，行文连贯，段落分明，90 词左右。（开头己给出，不计入 总字数）
2．短文中不能出现真实的姓名、学校、地名等信息。
3．短文应包括全部信息，可围绕主题适当发挥。
How time flies! Three years of junior high school has gone by before we know it.
【答案】How time flies! Three years of junior high school has gone by before we know it.
Each time I look back on my school days, I feel regretful, because one of my wishes hasn’t been realized. That is to learn how to play the guitar.
Although I am really interested in playing the instrument, I was busy working at my lessons. Besides, there was much homework to every day.
The end of junior high school is the beginning of new life. If I can enter the senior high school, I will take part in after-school activities to learn to play the guitar. I believe I’ll live a colorful life in the senior high school.
34
2.【2018年浙江省金华】在即将举行的中学生国际文化交流活动中，你将代表学校介绍中国的传统节日，请你从所给的卡片中任选一张，用英语写一篇发言稿，介绍该节日。
注意：①发言稿中必须包含卡片上的信息，并适当发挥；②文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；③词数80～100；④文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
【答案】Ladies and gentlemen,
Welcome to the Chinese culture tour. Now allow me to introduce one of the Chinese traditional festivals the Spring Festival.
The Spring Festival falls in January February. It is Chinese New Year and also the biggest day of year.So people come back home from different places and get together for a big dinner. Many people stay up late to welcome the new year,hoping they will have a bright new start.
During the festival, people visit their relatives and friends and wish each other good luck for the new year, Children can often get hongbao from their elders. Do you think it interesting?
That’s all. Thanks for listening
34
【高分句型一】
Many people stay up late to welcome the new year, hoping they will have a bright new start. 许多人熬夜迎接新年，希望他们有一个光明的开端。
动词不定式to welcome the new year用作目的状语，分词短语hoping they will have a bright new start.用作伴随状语。
【高分句型二】
Children can often get hongbao from their elders. 孩子们通常可以从长辈那里得到红包。此句写出了春节的传统习俗，也是孩子们最开心的事情之一。get sth. from从……得到某物。
3.【2018年浙江省绍兴中考】你校英语社团正在开展主题为“ How do students find study partners？”的讨论，为此你采访了一些学生，请你根据下表内容用英语写一篇短文进行交流，并说明你自己的方式及理由。
注意:（1）短文必须包括表中所有内容，可适当增加细节；
（2）你的理由至少两条；
（3）词数:80-100；
（4）短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。
参考词汇:学伴 study partner方便的convenient
短文首句: I have recently done a survey about how students find study partners.
【答案】I have recently＇done a survey about how students find study partners.
34
Some students find study partners through the Internet. They believe it＇s convenient to find partners to study with online. Besides， they can get help from study partners whenever necessary. Some students Prefer to Join clubs to find study partners so that they can share experience face to face. What＇s more， they think working out problems together helps learn more easily.
As for me， I＇d like to get study partners by going to summer camp because I can learn something new while having fun. Also， it＇s a good way to learn how to get on well with others.
题目中已经给出；接下来我们来介绍两种不同的方式以及理由；最后阐述自己的方式及理由。所以短文可以分成三段来叙述。时态应该是一般现在时态为主，人称以第一人称和第三人称复数为主。写作时，应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不能逐词翻译，而应从句子整体考虑，使用恰当的词汇、句型和短语，写完整的句子。句式结构以主谓宾和主系表为主，辅以并列句和复合句以及其他复杂句式，提升文章档次。语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文章意思连贯。
点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整，包含了题目中要求的所有信息。短文共分成三部分，第一部分是题目中给出的一句概括的句子，点明了文章的主题。第二部分中作者介绍了不同学生们寻找学伴的不同方式以及他们的理由；最后作者介绍了自己的方式及理由。分段叙述，使文章结构清晰，有条理。其次短文使用了恰当的英语表达方式，句式符合英语的表达习惯，语言地道、得体。文章以一般现在时态为主，第二段使用了第三人称叙述，最后一段使用第一人称，语法规范、准确。最后短文中使用了较丰富的句型和短语，如They believe it＇s convenient to find partners to study with online中使用了宾语从句，和非谓语动词作主语的句型；再如Some students Prefer to Join clubs to find study partners so that they can share experience face to face中使用了目的状语从句；再如I＇d like to get study partners by going to summer camp because I can learn something new while having fun.中原因状语从句等等。同时文章中使用了恰当的连接成分，如Besides, What’s more, As for me, Also等等，使文章意思连贯、表达流畅。
4.【2018年甘肃省白银】书面表达
34
“读万卷书，行万里路”，旅行是学习的最好方式之一。请以“Travelling”为题，根据以下思维导图的提示，写一篇短文，发表你的看法。
注意：1．要点齐全，适当发挥；
2．从思维导图Saying部分选择恰当的格言合理利用在短文中；
3．句子及篇章结构准确、连贯，书写规范；
4．词数：80-100词左右；
5．文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、学校及其它任何个人相关信息。
【答案】Travelling
Travelling is one of the best ways for learning. You may have read or heard about something, but you can never get an exact picture of it until you see it yourself. Seeing is believing. Furthermore, if you are a careful observer, you can learn much during your travel about the geography, biology and history of the places you visit. While travelling, you can meet more people and make more friends. You can also create great memories for your lifetime. No matter how well educated you are, there is always a lot for you to learn through travelling.
34
5.【2018年河北省中考】请仔细观察下面的图片，并根据所给提示和要求写一篇短文。
提示：（1）What are the man and the woman doing?
（2）What should you do when you see people litter like this? Why?
要求：（1）短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。
（2）短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
（3）词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：throw, environment, civilized(文明的
I can see a man and a woman in the picture. The man is_______________
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】I can see a man and a woman in the picture. The man is throwing his rubbish in the
34
public place.The other woman is stopping him and telling him to put it into the dustbin.The city is our home. We should protect it. Therefore, when we see someone litter like this, we should act like the woman.The environment should be protected by everybody.We should be civilized citizens.
点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
6.【2018年湖北省黄冈市中考】美丽中国,美丽长江。黄冈是长江边一座美丽的城市。假如你是黄冈某中学的一名中学生李明,请你以“美丽的黄冈”为话題,向你的英国笔友Tom介绍一下你美丽的家乡——黄冈。
要点提示：1.黄冈位于长江之边,大别山之南；
2.黄冈历史悠久,名人辈出；
3.黄冈风景迷人,乡村秀美;
4.人人参与,从小事做起,黄冈人正在努力地保护黄冈的自然环境;
5.邀请Tom来中国,欣赏黄冈更美好的绿水青山、蓝天白云。
写作要求：1.词数90左右(短文的开头已经给出,不计入总词数);
2.根据要点提示,可以适当发挥;
3.短文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名。
参考词汇:lie(位于); Dabie mountains; plant; clean up; clear river and green mountains
Dear Tom,
Thanks for your last letter. You asked me about my hometown, now let me tell you. _______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours,
34
Li Ming
【答案】Dear Tom,
Thanks for your last letter. You asked me about my hometown. now let me tell you.
My hometown is Huanggang. It lies by the Yangtze River and at the southern foot of Dabie Mountains.
It's a beautiful city with a long history. A number of famous people come from our city, such as Li siguang, Li shizhen, Wen Yiduo and so on. There are lots of beautiful mountains, rivers and lakes. They are so fascinating that thousands of tourists come to visit Huanggang every year. You can also see beautiful villages everywhere. We are proud of our hometown.
Now the people in Huanggang are trying to protect the natural environment. We plant trees as many as possible every year. We stop factories from throwing rubbish into the rivers. Volunteers go to the mountains, forests, parks and streets to clean them up on the weekends. Everyone is playing a role in making our city more and more beautiful. We are taking action!
Tom, would you like to come to Huanggang? You can see clear rivers and green mountains as well as blue skies and white cloud. I believe you will fall in love with our city and have a wonderful time. Looking forward to your visit!
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ming
点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了黄冈的地理位置，接下来介绍黄冈的历史、风景和环保情况，最后邀请Tom来中国,欣赏黄冈更美好的绿水青山、蓝天白云。此处ask sb about sth, a number of, be proud of, as…as possible, play a role in doing sth, fall in love with, have a wonderful time等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
7.【2018年湖北省宜昌中考】为了更好地开展八年级学生的研学旅行( study travel)，学校现面向全年级征集活动意向。假如你是李华，请谈谈你建议的时间和地点并陈述理由，简要介绍打算开展的活动。
34
要求：
（1）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
（2）词数80左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear leaders,
I am Li Hua from Class, Grade 8. _________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
We can discuss the details(细节)later.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear leaders,
I am Li Hua from Class 3, Grade 8. Here is my advice about our study travel.
I suggest going to Wufeng Houhe Forest Park. It is a beautiful park with green water and
mountains. There are many different kinds of plants, birds and other animals. We can get closer to the nature. I think June is the best time to get there. Because there is not too much rain at this time of year and the weather in the forest park is much cooler.
We will have lots of activities, such as climbing the mountains and studying about plants. I'm sure the travel will be both pleasant and educational
We can discuss the details(细节) later.
Yours
Li Hua
点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
34
8.【2018年湖南省郴州市中考】假如你是李华，上周六上午，你们班全体同学在特殊教育学校做了一次志愿者活动。请根据下表中提供的信息，用英语给你的笔友 Sandy写一封信。
What You See
What You Do
What You Feel
1.School: clean, tidy
2. Students:
◆blind, deaf
◆speak/read/write, difficult follow teacher, carefully
1.paly games learn paper cutting
2. give books, snacks, toys
……
要求：
1.文中须包含要点提示中的所有信息(不要逐字翻译)，并适当发挥；
2.词数：80词左右(短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；
3.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
Dear Sandy,
Last Saturday morning, our class went to the Special Education School to have a volunteer activity. ______________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Do you have anything special to tell me? I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Last Saturday, my class organized a volunteer activity to the special school. My classmates and I took a lot of presents to them,such as books,snacks and toys. The school is clean and tidy.Some students are blind.Others are deaf.Some students can’t speak or read or write.It is difficult for them to do everyday things.But they followed the teacher to do things carefully.After arriving there,some of us began playing games with them. Some of us taught them to learn paper cutting .We also performed wonderful programs，such as singing, dancing. We also asked them to join us and they were very happy. All of us were happy because we did something good to others. In my opinion, we should spend more time helping them. Helping others is Chinese people’s virtue.
34
9.【2018年湖南省衡阳市中考】假如你是刘伟，你在英国的笔友Jim对中国的传统节日很感兴趣，他来信询问有关情况。请你给他回一封电子邮件，简单介绍中国的传统节日。今天是端午节，请你重点介绍中国人一般是如何过端午节的。
注意：1. 80~100词左右。
2.可以结合自己的情况适当增加细节，以便行文连贯。
3.开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
I’m glad to receive your e-mail.
.
What do you think of the Dragon Boat Festival? Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Liu Wei
【答案】Dear Jim,
I am glad to receive your e-mail.The Dragon Boat Festival ,also called the Duanwu Festival,is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese calender.People always eat rice dumplings and watch dragon boat races to celebrate it.
The festival is best known for its dragon-boat races,especially in the southern places where there are many rivers and lakes.It’s very popular.
The rice dumpling is made of rice,meat and so on.You can eat different kinds of rice dumplings.They are very delicious .And Dragon Boat Festival is for Qu Yuan.He is an honest minister who is said to have drown himself in the river.
Overall,the Dragon Boat Festival is very interesting!
What do you think of the Dragon Boat Festival?Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
34
Liu Wei
点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
10.【2018年甘肃兰州】假设你是李华，今天正逢端午节，你的英国笔友Jack对中国传统文化很感兴趣，写信向你询问端午节的有关情况。请你根据以下内容提示，给他写一封回信。
1.中国的传统节日之一，已有2000多年的历史（the Dragon Boat Festival; one of the Chinese traditional festivals; two thousand years of history）；
2.为了纪念著名诗人屈原（honor the great poet Qu Yuan）；
3.中国南方有赛龙舟的习俗（Dragon Boat races）；
4.家人团聚听懂粽子和其他美食（eat Zongzi and other delicious food）；
5.有三天假期，可以外出旅游（a 3 day holiday）。
要求：1.80词左右，书信格式；
2.内容合理，要点齐全；句子及篇章结构正确、连贯；书写规范。
注意：不得出现学校，姓名等个人信息（除所给身份外）。
【答案】Dear Jack,
How’s it going? I am very glad to introduce the Dragon Boat Festival to you. it is one of the Chinese traditional festivals which has about two thousand years of history. The festival is celebrated to honor the great poet Qu Yuan. On that day, people often get together with their family to eat Zongzi and other delicious food. In southern parts of China, people often have the Dagon Boat races. It is so exciting to watch this activity on TV. Besides, we also have a 3-day holiday during the festival. So we can have a short journey to relax ourselves. How interesting the Dragon Boat Festival is and I like it very much.
Best wishes.
34
Yours,
Li Hua
【点睛】写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1.认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想。2. 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络。3. 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。4. 最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
11.【2018年湖北省咸宁】.“中国核潜艇之父”黄旭华院士，是央视王牌节目“开讲啦”开播以来最年长的演 讲者。上周五下午，全校师生观看完该视频后，都眼含热泪。
为了学习英雄的先进事迹，请你根据提示内容，以 “Huang Xuhua — the Father of
China’s Nukes”为题，写一篇人物介绍。 写作要点：
1. 他出生于富裕家庭，但为了祖国强盛，放弃成为一名医生的机会，学习建造核潜艇；
2. 在当时条件艰苦的环境下，他专心于核潜艇的研究和建造；
3. 为了保护国家安全，他曾隐姓埋名工作，30 年不为人所知，现虽年过 90 仍奋斗不止；
4. 他的行为向我们诠释了什么是对国家和人民的热爱。
写作要求：
1. 文章不能出现真实的姓名和校名；
2. 文章必须包含所提供的主要信息，必要时可作适当发挥；
3. 词数 80 个以上，文章的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总字数。 参考词汇：
核潜艇 nuke; 国家安全 national security; 隐姓埋名 conceal one’s identity
Huang Xuhua — the Father of China’s Nukes
Last Friday afternoon, all the teachers and students in the school watched the video about
Huang Xuhua – the father of China’s nukes.
We were all inspired by his heroic deeds.
【答案】Huang Xuhua — the Father of China’s Nukes
34
Last Friday afternoon, all the teachers and students in the school watched the video about
Huang Xuhua – the father of China’s nukes.
He was born in a rich family. In order to make our country stronger, he gave up the chance to be a doctor, but tried to learn how to make/build the nukes. Although the conditions were very hard at that time., he concentrated on studying the knowledge of making/ building the nukes.
To protect the national security, he used to conceal/concealed his identity. For about 30 years, he was unknown for others. And now he still keeps working hard even if he is over 90 years old.(And now he doesn’t stop working/struggling even if he is over90 years old)
His story explains to us what is the great love for the people and country.
We were all inspired by his heroic deeds
12.【2018年山东东营】在你的成长历程中，一定收到过礼物。有件礼物不一定贵重，但是在你看来却非常珍贵。
某英语杂志以“A Precious Present(一件珍贵的礼物)”为题举办征文活动，请写一篇短文，跟大家分享。内容包括：
1.这件礼物是什么？
2.你为什么觉得它珍贵？
3.它背后有什么故事？
要求： 1.100词左右； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名及校名。
【答案】A precious present
The title “A Precious Present” reminds me of quite a few gifts I’ve got. Yet, the first come to my mind is the book, the Adventures of Tom Sawyer.
On my tenth birthday, my father gave it to me as a gift. Because I didn’t like reading, I
34
put it on the bookshelf. One boring day, I picked it up and looked through it. Unexpectedly, the story interested me greatly. I found pleasure in reading books. From then on, I became fascinated in reading.
Though the book is not valuable, it’s precious. I’ll regard it as a treasure forever.
【解析】
这是一篇命题作文，以“A Precious Present”为题与大家分享一件自己所拥有的珍礼物。人称为第一人称，时态以一般过去时为主。写作时要注意作文的整体框架。首先介绍这件礼物的名字是什么，附带着说明它的来历，接着讲述这件礼物背后的故事，最后可以总结说明为什么这件礼物对你来说非常珍贵。另外，写作时还需注意语句间的衔接，语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
13.【2018年广西贺州】 假设你是Susan,在家里你的父母总是对你有很多要求,有时你是否感到厌烦?你是怎样解决的?请你根据下列表格提示用英语写一篇短文。
父母的要求
每天打扫房间；不能玩电脑游戏；晚上10点前必须睡觉……
你的看法
虽太严厉，但理解他们……
你的解决方式
与父母多交流，为父母做些家务……
要求:1.文章必须包括表格中所给提示内容,可以展开思路,自由地适当发挥。
2.不能出现真实的校名、人名和其它真实信息。
3.词数80词右。前两句已经给出,不计入词数。
【答案】My name is Susan. There are too many rules in my family. I have to clean the room every day. I am not allowed to play computer games in my free time. I can't go out on school nights. I must go to bed by 10 pm. I think my parents are too strict with me. Sometimes I feel bored, but I understand they really love me. I communicate with my parents as much as possible, sharing my happiness and sadness with them. And I often help them do housework. These are my good ways to get on well with them.
34
【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别适用一些亮点词句，如there be，be allowed to，free time，be strict with，communicate with，as much as possible，share ... with，get on well with等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。
【点睛】写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：
认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。
构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。
初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。
修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
14.【2018年黑龙江龙东地区】Writing
(注意：文中不能出现考生真实姓名、校名，否则不得分)
81. 为了绿化环境,打造花园城市，你校将组织学生去北山公园植树。请你以学生会的名义写一则通知。要求同学们明天上午8点在学校门口集合，乘坐校车一起前往；穿好校服；自备午餐；不要迟到。
Notice
All the students,
Students' Union
【答案】Notice
All the students,
In order to make our city more beautiful, we are going to plant trees in Beishan Park, We'll meet at the school gate at 8: 00 tomorrow morning and take the school bus there together. Please wear your uniforms and take your lunch. You must be on time.
Students’ Union
34
【点睛】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如：In order to；plant trees ；at the school gate ；take the school bus；on time.等；采用祈使句，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理；同时语言流畅，内容完整，是一篇不错的范文。
15.【2018年黑龙江龙东地区】话题作文：为了促进中小学生身心健康发展，我省自2018年3月1日起延迟中小学生到校时间，请你联系生活实际，谈谈对这一举措的看法。请以“My Opinions about the New Policy”为题，写一篇英语文章。
提示:1.原来的学习生活
2.延迟后的学习生活
3.个人感受（看法）
提示词：policy(政策)， the time of arriving at school
【答案】My Opinions about the New Policy
As we know, there is a new policy about putting off the time of arriving at school in the morning in our province.
I remember I had to get up early on school days and sometimes felt sleepy in class. If I got up late, I needed to have a quick breakfast.
Now I don' t need to get up so early that I can have enough sleep. I can keep energetic in class. What's more, I can also make good use of this period of time Reading books and doing exercise are good choices.
In a word, the new policy is good for our life and study.
【点睛】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如：put off； get up ；in class.； make good use of ；be good for等；As we know ；Now ；What's more,；In a word等的运用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理；同时语言流畅，内容完整，是一篇不错的范文。
34
16.【2018年黑龙江龙东地区】 图示作文：仔细观察下列三幅图片,展开合理想象,然后写一篇短文。
要求：
1.话题作文或图示作文任选其一。
2.词数在80~100之间。
3.字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。
【答案】It was Monday yesterday, Li Bing went right home after school. While he was doing his homework, he felt some drops of rain. After a while, it rained more and more heavily. He looked at the clock, it was only 4: 00 p.m.. His mother was still at work at that time. He was afraid she would get wet. So he put on his raincoat and rain boots, then went out to the bus stop with another pair of rain boots and umbrella. Though he felt cold in such rainy and windy weather, he was very happy. What a good boy!
【点睛】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如：after school.；more and more； at that time ；put on等；While；After a while；. So； then ；Though的运用使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理；同时语言流畅，内容完整，是一篇不错的范文。
17.【2018年湖北省黄石市】假设你是李华，你的朋友刘明在学习、生活等方面遇到了一些问题和困难，所以他经常感到焦虑和郁闷。请你根据以下内容给他发一封电子邮件，帮助他克服焦虑情绪，轻松、快乐地学习和生活。
内容包括：1. 每个人都会有苦恼、焦虑的时候；
2. 一定要告诉别人你的烦恼；
3. 遇到任何困难时，与同学交流和老师、家长及时沟通；
34
4. 可就如何轻松、快乐地学习和生活等适当发挥。
作文要求：1. 不得照抄原文，不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名；
2. 语句连贯，计数80个左右。作文开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：焦虑的 anxious 与……沟通 communicate with 变得轻松 get relaxed
解决问题 solve problems
Dear Liu Ming,
Everyone may feel worried or sad sometimes._______________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Liu Ming,
Everyone may feel worried or sad sometimes. It’s all right to tell others when you are anxious. It’s good to communicate with your classmates, teachers or parents when you are in trouble. Thus, you can solve the problems from study or life easily.
Listening to music or taking part in outdoor activities is another way to help you get relaxed.
Try to smile at yourself and never keep silent about your problems.
Please do remember: you’re not alone. No matter how many difficulties we have, I believe all of them can be overcome in the end.
Yours
Li Hua
34
【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
18.【2018年湖北省荆州】 请以“My hohby”为题写一篇短文，必须包含以下要点和词语提示信息。
1. What is your hobby?
2. How do you develop your hobby?
3.Share your happiness you get from your bobby.Give at least one example.
提示词语：practice，different，forget，no longer
要求：
l、可以适当发挥，文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
2、语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
3、词数：80词左右。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My Hobby
Everyone has his or her own hobby and so do I.
34
【答案】My Hobby
Everyone has his or her own hobby and so do I.
It may give him lots of happiness. My hobby is listening to music. When I was a child I enjoy listening to music especially the cartoon music, though I'm not good at it, I often lose myself in it. When I am in trouble, music can make me calm down. When I am very tired, it can make me comfortable. When I am angry with something, it also can make me happy again. Listening to music keeps me in a good mood and it's good for my health.
Do you like listening to music? If not, I hope you can have a try, you will find it beneficial.
【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文中作者根据题目要求介绍了自己的爱好—听音乐。文章开头用一句话Everyone has his or her own hobby and so do I，引出了短文的主题，从Everyone过度到自己，非常合适。然后作者重点介绍了自己如何培养了这一爱好，以及他从中得到的快乐。在文章的最后，与读者互动，再次重申主题。整篇文章内容完整、充实，结构清晰，叙述有条理。而且短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，句子表达符合英语的习惯，语法规范，用词准确。另外，文章中还使用了一些较好的句型，如Everyone has his or her own hobby and so do I、When I was a child I enjoy listening to music especially the cartoon music, though I'm not good at it,、When I am in trouble, music can make me calm down.、 If not, I hope you can have a try, you will find it beneficial.等等。尤其是When I am very tired, it can make me comfortable. When I am angry with something, it also can make me happy again.这几个排比句的使用，增强了文章的表现力。
19.【2018年湖北省孝感】本周一是端午节，你校外教Tony对中国文化很感兴趣，你陪他去槐荫公园观看了龙舟比赛。请根据以下提示写一篇日记。
写作要点：
1.现场情况。人多拥挤，16支龙舟队竞争激烈，人们欢呼，队员们闭队合作，最终“勇气队”获胜。
34
2.赛后活动：我给Tony介绍端午节，下午带他参加有关端午节的其它活动，如……
3.感想：Tony……，我……
写作要求：
1.短文内容必须包括所有要点、语句通顺，条理清晰；
2.省略号处须作适当发挥(1-2句即可)；
3.100词左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
June 18th
Today is the Dragon Boat Festival.
【答案】Today is the Dragon Boat Festival For the reason that Tony has a strong interest in Chinese traditional culture. I invited him to come to watch the dragon boat races which was held in Huaiyin Park this morning When we arrived, it was crowded. There were 16 colorful dragon boats floating in the river. During the race, the dragon boat teams competed with each other, while people on each bank cheered up. Both Tony and I felt the exciting atmosphere. At last, the Courage Team won.
After the competition, I introduced the Dragon Boat Festival to Tony and welcomed him to many other activities about the festival. We went to learn how to make zongzi and admire a picture exhibition.
At the end of the day, tired as we were, we felt excited. Tony though our traditional Chinese culture was so amazing and I am proud of my great motherland.
写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练、要点齐全。文中invite sb.to do, during the race, compete with, cheere up, at last, both…and…; at the end of the day, be proud of等词汇的恰当使用，使上下文意连接紧密；本文还采用了丰富的句型，比如：运用了there be句型；定语从句、宾语从句、时间状语从句等复合句，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，这是一篇不错的范文。
20.【2018年湖南省张家界】你班将于本周六组织同学们去张家界国家森林公园进行科普小活动。请你根据下面的提示，以班长李华的名义给同学们发布一则通知。
34
要求：1.内容必须包括所提示信息，可适当发挥。
2.文中不能出现自己的真实姓名和学校名称。
3.不少于50词（文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear classmates,
May I have your attention please? We will have scientific activities in Zhangjiajie Forest Park this Saturday.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you!
【答案】Dear classmates，
May I have your attention please? We will have scientific activities in Zhangjiajie Forest Park this Saturday.
We are going to meet at the school gate at 8:00 in the morning. We will go to the forest park by bus. When we get there, first we should listen to a talk about the forest park. Then we will go to the forest to know about plants. We should take some notes about what we have learned. We
34
will return at 3:00 in the afternoon.
That’s all. Thank you!
【解析】
【详解】写作亮点：这则通知的开头已经给出，已经说明了“我们将要于本周六前往张家界森林公园进行科普活动”，所以写作的重点在于正确组织给出的素材，首先可以介绍集合的地点和时间，注意这件事还没发生，要正确使用一般将来时We are going to meet…我们将要见面…。然后可以介绍前往公园的方式，在写公园的活动的时候可以借助first首先，then然后这样的词语来增强逻辑性，最后写返回的时间，这篇写作的难点在于正确根据事件发生的先后顺序组织材料进行写作，写作的时候要注意逻辑性，语言的条理性，总体说这篇作文完成了既定的写作任务。
21.【2018年江苏省苏州】现在，越来越多的外国友人开始关注中国文化。假定你是苏华，你的加拿大笔友Ryan是一个中国迷，他想在中秋期间来中国看看。请认真阅读他写给你的邮件，根据邮件内容及你的了解用英语回复。
To: suhua@ china.com
From: ryan2003@canada.com
Subject: Chinese culture
Dear Su Hua,
How are you? I hope you are well. As a fan of Chinese culture, I’m thinking about
going to China during the Mid-autumn Festival. Would you please tell me the following
things?
• How do you usually celebrate the Mid-autumn Festival?
• Which city in China is most worth visiting? Why?
34
• What is the best way to travel between cities in China?
• What gift can I buy for my friends?
Please write back and tell me everything.
Best wishes,
Ryan
注意：1．词数90左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数；
2．回复须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；
3．文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Ryan,
I’m glad to hear you’re coming to China. China is a country with a long history and rich culture. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope my reply is of some help to you. Looking forward to seeing you in China.
All the best,
Su Hua
【答案】Possible version one:
Dear Ryan,
I’m glad to hear you’re coming to China. China is a country with a long history and rich culture.
The Mid-autumn Festival is a traditional festival in China. On that day, families get together and have a big dinner. We eat moon cakes and enjoy the full moon. It’s great.
There’re many beautiful cities in China. Beijing is one of the best choices. It’s the capital of
China and it has many famous sights like the Great Wall, the Summer Palace and the Palace Museum
After visiting Beijing, you can take a high-speed train to visit other cities. And you can buy Chinese knots or chopsticks for your friends.
I hope my reply is of some help to you. Looking forward to seeing you in China.
34
All the best,
Su Hua
【解析】
【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，给笔友Ryan回复了电子邮件。这篇短文的特点如下：首先文章内容完整、充实，全面、清楚地回答了Ryan的疑问。短文主要分为四段，每一段是一个话题，层次清晰，包括中秋节的习俗、推荐他去北京旅行、旅行方式以及给朋友带的礼物，最后表达了自己的祝愿。其次短文使用了正确的时态和人称，文章以一般现在时态、第二人称为主，语法规范，语言得体。句式结构以简单句为主，也使用了并列句、复合句和一些高级句型。如There’re many beautiful cities in China. 、Beijing is one of the best choices. 、It’s the capital of China and it has many famous sights like the Great Wall, the Summer Palace and the Palace Museum、After visiting Beijing, you can take a high-speed train to visit other cities.等等。
22.【2018年内蒙古通辽市】根据提示，以“How to keep safe”为题写一篇80词左右的英语作文，要求层次清晰，语句通顺，书写规范。
要求：
34
1.文中不能出现真实校名和人名，否则不得分。
2.题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Safety is important. As a student, we should learn to protect ourselves and keep safe. _____________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Safety is important. As a student, we should learn to protect ourselves and keep safe.
First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially on line. Second, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe. Also, we ought to eat healthily and safely. Eating food that goes bad will do harm to our health. Last but not least, we should follow the traffic rule. We may get hurt or lose our lives if we don't.
In short, safety must come first!
【解析】
【详解】这篇作文要求我们根据提示写一篇题为How to keep safe的作文，介绍一下在我们的日常生活中，我们应该注意些什么，来保证安全。题目中利用图示告诉我们写作的大概内容，从以下的几个方面来介绍：交通安全、饮食安全、遇险报警及其他方面。这些只是对我们写作的一个提示，而具体的内容，需要注意什么，这些都需要学生们自己发挥想象力，组织语言，串联成文，还要注意层次清晰，这对于学生们来说是一个难点。其次要注意英语句子表达和汉语的习惯是不同的，不能按照汉语的思维逐词翻译，应从句子的整体考虑，使用恰当的句子结构，如主谓宾或主系表结构，同时穿插并列句和复合句，调整文章的节奏，长句、短句结合使用。同时应注意语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使整篇文章有连贯性。
【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文。首先作文的内容充实、完整，符合题目要求。文章中作者从网上交友、遇险报警、饮食、交通等方面，介绍了我们应如何保证安全，保护好自己。这些内容的安排也比较合理，叙述清楚，有层次、有条理。文中用First, Second, Also, Last but not least等词和短语，将这些内容呈现出来，既使分清了文章的层次，又使整篇文章的内容很连贯。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，动词形式准确，还使用了一些情态动词，如must, should, ought
34
to等。语言得体，语句通顺，句式符合英语的习惯。另外，文章中还使用了一些较好的短语和句型，如First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially on line.、 Second, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe.、Last but not least, we should follow the traffic rule.、In short, safety must come first!等等。
23.【2018年青海省西宁】学校英语报社正在开展题为“The Greatest Help”的征文活动。什么人或物给了你最大的帮助?你取得了哪些进步?有什么感想或受到了哪些教育?请写一篇80词左右的英语短文进行投稿,文中不得出现真实校名和姓名。
The Greatest Help
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】The Greatest Help
I have got lots of help, but my father gives me the greatest help of all.
Though my father is a very kind man, he is very strict with me. He always pushes me to study hard and tries to find mistakes in everything I do. Sometimes, I doubt if he is my father. He leads me to read plenty of books. He says, "The more books you read, the better person you will be." He also says that health is the most important thing for everybody. So I am made to do lots of exercise. Anyway, we have left our happiness and laughter everywhere, on the playground, in the swimming pool, on the mountains and so on. When I meet any difficulties, he encourages me and helps me out. He is always there for me.
As I grow older, my thoughts change from misunderstanding to understanding. He is not only my father and a sincere friend but also my guide and helper. I will never forget the greatest help and deepest love from his strictness and exceptions because they make some big difference in my life.
【解析】
34
【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容符合题目要求，文章中作者介绍了对自己帮助最大的一个人—父亲，具体介绍了父亲如何对自己严格要求，促使自己不断进步的。也介绍了自己的感受，从开始的误解到后来的理解。整篇文章内容充实、完整，叙述也很有条理。其次短文中使用了正确的时态、人称，语法规范，语言得体，句式表达符合英语的习惯。文章中长短句结合，简单句和复合句穿插使用，使文章富有节奏感，表达也很流畅。短文中使用了较丰富的短语和句型，如Though my father is a very kind man, he is very strict with me.、He says, "the more books you read, the better person you will be." 、He also says that health is the most important thing for everybody.、When I meet any difficulties, he encourages me and helps me out.、He is not only my father and a sincere friend but also my guide and helper.、 I will never forget the greatest help and deepest love from his strictness and exceptions because they make some big difference in my life.等等。
24.【2018年山东省菏泽】假如你是王宁，你的英国笔友Linda想了懈你的周末生活。请根据下面的内容提示，给Linda写一封电子邮件，告诉她你是如何度过上个周末的。内容提示：
1.上周六上午，你和父母一起骑自行车去了一家草莓采摘观光园；
2.听采摘观光园主人讲述自己的人生故事：16岁时一场车祸夺去了她的双腿，在
政府和家人的帮助下创建草莓采摘观光园，每年收入近百万元，吸引大量游客：
3.和采摘观光园主人合影，在采摘观光园餐馆就餐；
4.你的感受。
要求：
1．语言规范，语句通顺，内容充实；
2．字数：不少于100词；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
可能用到的词汇：Picking and Sightseeing Garden采摘观光园；strawberry草莓；
government地方政府；attract吸引；tourist游客
34
Dear Linda,
Thanks for your last email. ____________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours
Wang Ning
【答案】Dear Linda，
Thanks for your last email．
Last Saturday morning， I went to a strawberry Picking and Sightseeing Garden with my parents． We rode bikes there because it was not far from my home． We listened to the story of the owner of the Picking and Sightseeing Garden． At the age of 16， he lost both of his legs because of a car accident． With the help of the government and her family， she set up the Picking and Sightseeing Garden．The annual income is close to one million yuan and it attracts a large number of tourists．
We also took photos with the owner and had lunch at the Picking and Sightseeing Garden．
It was a great weekend and I had a wonderful time．
Yours
Wang Ning
【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
25.【2018年山东省临沂】亲爱的同学,在你三年的初中生活中, 总会与有些同学成为朋友。请以 “My
34
Best Friend and I” 为题, 根据以下要求与提示, 用英语写一篇短文。
要求:
1. 如果你最好的朋友是女生,请用名字Mary; 如果是男生, 请用Jeff。短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息,否则不予评分。
2. 不少于60词。
提示:
I. Who is your best friend?
2. How long have you been friends? And how did you become friends?
3. How are you the same as and different from your best friend? And what do you like about him / her?
My Best Friend and I
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
【答案】My Best Friend and I
We are graduating from school soon. I miss so many good friends, especially my best friends Jeff. We’ve been friends for three years. Three years ago, I was a new student in our class. I felt very lonely. My English was very poor. Jeff often helped me learn English. With his help, I made much progress in English. So we became friends. Though we are both tall and thin, we are different. Jeff is more outgoing than me and he is good at playing soccer. But I’m quieter than him. I’m good at playing basketball. We often help each other. He is very kind and friendly. So we get on well with each other.
I hope he will have a bright future and that our friendship will last forever.
【解析】
【详解】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如so many good friends，graduate from school，feel very lonely，help sb. do sth.，in English，tall and thin，be good at，each other，get on well with，last forever等。而Though we are both tall and thin, we are different./ I hope he will have a bright future and that our friendship will last forever.等多种从句结构的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样，是本文的最大亮点。
34
【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
26.【2018年四川省凉山州】每个人生活中都要面对各种各样的困难。该怎样缓解自己的压力呢?请你以Less Pressure, Better life为题，根据下表内容写一篇演讲稿。
Stress
人们会因困难觉得失望，疲惫或者忧伤，承受着巨大的压力。
Ways to relax
改变你的想法。
想一想你最喜欢的人或事。
而不是想那些麻烦。
你还可以这样做。
听音乐、唱歌、锻炼等，这些都能让你高兴起来。
寻求帮助，和父母、老师或朋友多沟通。
My points
耐心一点。其实困难也许并不可怕，压力可能并不严重。说不定谁能帮到你，也说不定等等就好了。相信我们的生活会更美好。
要求：1.语言表达准确、连贯、通顺；2.短文应包括所有内容，可适当发挥，不要逐句翻译。3.词数80左右。文章开头、结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数。
Ladies and gentlemen,
Thank you for your coming today. I'm very glad that all of you are full of hope for the future. And yes, everyone has to face difficulties in his life.
34
That’s all. Thank you.
【答案】Ladies and gentlemen,
Thank you for your coming today. I'm very glad that all of you are full of hope for the future. And yes, everyone has to face difficulties in his life.
Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. But how to solve the problem? You should change your mind. First, you can think about exciting things and persons instead of worries. Second, you can listen to music ,sing or do exercise to cheer yourself up.Third, I think a conversation with parents , teachers or friends is helpful. Finally be patient. In fact, the difficulties may not be terrible, the pressure may not be serious. Maybe someone can help you, or maybe just wait. Believe that our lives will be better.
27.【2018年云南省昆明】A small thing
提示：请根据所给题目“A small thing”写一篇英语短文，叙述一件你经历过的小事。
要求：
1.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁,词数不少于60个；
2.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计；
3.请将短文写在答题卡上,写在本试题卷上无效。
【答案】A small thing
There are many small things in life that make you moved． I had a very unforgettable thing on June 11 th，2012． It was a sunny day．On the way to school，my friend did something rude to me．It made me sad．What's worse，I got a"C"in my favorite subject．After school，I went home unhappily．It was dark in the room．Suddenly the lights were on，and I heard the song"Happy birthday"．I was surprised to see many people and a big cake．"Oh，it's my birthday．"I was so excited and
34
happy．It was my first time to have a birthday party． I'll never forget that day．
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇命题作文，给出的题目是“A small thing”（一件小事），需要叙述一件经历过的小事，写作的时候要注意描述过去的事情要正确使用过去时态，描述一件事情要有条理，有内容，有时间地点人物以及具体的事件，描述要尽量具体一些，事情要有条理，避免流水账，同时要注意相关短语的正确使用，注意开头和结尾要自然。
34
微信/支付宝扫码支付