时间:20~25分钟/篇
命题规律
分析全国近3年的中考真题可知,书面表达对“观点看法类”的话题考查比重仅次于“做法建议类”,也是各地市高频考查方向。此类话题,通常在背景材料中说明某种“好/坏/新/……”的现象,或以表格或图示展示不同人群的“不同或对立”的观点,由此让学生最终陈述自己的观点,并说明理由(注意理由要有理有据、条理清晰)。
同时,该话题涉及的现象往往与热点话题(如:二孩政策、真人秀节目、“低头族”等)结合,因此学生在平时的复习过程中也不要忽略这一方面。
好词好句
1. Nowadays, more and more people use mobile phones.
2. Different people have different ideas/opinions about it.
3. Some people think...Others....
4. However, I think we should be honest in the exam.
5. In my opinion, we shouldn't cheat others.
6. It's important/necessary to do our things by ourselves.
7. Although computer games are interesting for most of the children, they shouldn't spend much time on them.
8. In my opinion, it's natural to follow the fashion, but the most important thing is how to use the mobile phone in a right way.
写作练兵
第1篇(2018河北)
(15分)关于“说英语”问题,李华和他的英语老师Miss Wang持不同的观点。请你仔细阅读下图中的对话内容,从中选择一个角色,按照所给要求写一篇短文。
要求:(1)用“Li Hua”或“Miss Wang”补全短文首句;
(2)写出所选角色的观点,并续写理由;
(3)短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名或地名;
(4)词数80个左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇: shy; make a mistake; believe in
第2篇(2018广东)
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(15分)现在很多学生不能好好管理时间以致影响了学习。请你就此写一篇短文谈谈你的看法。
内容包括:1.你或你的同学一次未能按时完成学习任务的经历(任务内容、拖延的原因及后果);
2.对如何管理好时间提出两点建议。
作文要求:1.不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。
2.语句连贯,词数80个左右。作文的开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
Nowadays, many students can't make good use of their time and this has a bad influence on their study.________________________________________________________________________
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第3篇(2018山西)
(15分)向他人表达善意并帮助他人体现了一个人良好的品格。当你向别人表达善意并给他人提供帮助时,你希望得到回报(repay)吗?针对这一话题,九年级六班的同学们展开了辩论。
假设你是正方或反方的一员,请围绕你的观点,结合自己的亲身经历,说出2至3条理由来说服同学们(只需选择一方观点表达即可)。
要求:1. 词数不少于80词;
2. 文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
When I show kindness and help others, I________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
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第4篇(2018福州)
(15分)你的学校正在开展“诚信”教育,英语俱乐部为配合这次活动将举行一次演讲比赛。请根据下表所提示的要点,写一篇演讲稿。
朋友李雷
★爱踢足球、玩游戏,考试舞弊
★学习退步,不被信任
你的观点
★诚信考试,独立完成作业
★说实话、做诚实孩子
★(请补充一点)
要求:1)短文应包括表格中的所有内容,可适当发挥;
2)词数90左右,不包含已给出句子的词数;
3)演讲稿中不得出现你的真实姓名和校名。
参考词汇:cheat in the exam; fall behind (落后)
Hello, everyone! It's a great honor to give a speech here.________________________________________________________________________
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________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
That's all. Thank you for listening!
第5篇(2018烟台)
(15分)每个人对交友都有不同的看法,请根据图示提供的信息,以“Good Friends in My Eyes”为题,写一篇100词左右的短文,首先分享大众观点,然后从中选出你最看重的两方面进行阐述,并说明理由。
要求:1. 短文语句通顺、意思连贯,可适当发挥;
2. 题目与开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 文中不得出现个人真实信息。
参考词汇:some...others...; not only...but also...; both... and...; work together
Good Friends in My Eyes
Everyone needs friends. Different people have different ideas about making friends.________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
第6篇(2018南充)
(15分)对于“中学生在校是否可以使用手机”,不同学生有不同的看法,请你根据下面表格中的提示写一篇短文,向某英语报社投稿。
观点
赞成
反对
理由
1. 便于联系:……
2. 获取信息:……
1. 浪费时间:……
2. 危害身心健康:……
你的观点及理由
要求:①包含所有要点,不逐字翻译,围绕要点适当发挥;
②书写规范、工整,条理清晰;
③文中不得出现真实人名、地名、校名等;
④词数:80-100词,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Can middle school students use mobile phones at school?
Nowadays, more and more teenagers use mobile phones. Can middle school students use mobile phones at school? Different students have different opinions about it.________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
第7篇(2018天水)
(10分)随着手机使用的日益广泛,“作业帮”等手机运用软件的出现,现在,手机又有了新的用途——随时查找作业答案。
部分学生认为:有时作业太多,太难,不得不向手机求助。
自己的观点:1. 抄写答案不能提高学生的学习能力,只能阻止学生思考;
2. 恰当运用网络,不依赖网络。
注意:1. 文中应包括提示观点,可以适当发挥,增加自己的看法,使内容更连贯,更合理;
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2. 词数约80词左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
(参考词汇:the students' abilities, make proper use of)
Some students now have a new use for the Internet—use mobile phones to find out the answers to their homework. But different people have different ideas about it.
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第8篇(2018随州)
(15分)目前,家长开车接送孩子上学已经成为一个普遍现象,人们对此做法褒贬不一,家长们也有自己的看法。
观点1: 省时;安全;提供更多与孩子交流的机会。
观点2: 学校周围更拥挤;最近发生了几起交通事故;污染的空气对身体有不良影响。
你的观点:(必须用2至3句话作适当发挥)
注意:1. 文章必须包括所有内容要点,要求语句通顺,意思连贯;
2. 词数:80词左右;(文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数)
3. 文中不得提及具体人名、校名及地名。
Nowadays it's common for parents to drive their children to school and back home, which has caused a heated discussion.
Some parents think________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
第9篇(2018衡阳)
(10分)荣光学校九年级(2)班就“环境问题”召开了一次班会,并且以“Our Environment in Ten Years: for Better or Worse?” 为题进行了一次讨论。许多同学对未来表示乐观,但也有些同学对未来有些担心。请根据表格中的内容提示,用英语写一篇短文。
乐观者的观点
1. 越来越多的人将成为环保主义者。
2. 政府将采取更多的措施改善环境。
担心者的观点
1. 大量的树木仍将被砍伐。
2. 私家车将越来越多。
你的观点及你的打算
学生自拟(至少两点)
提示:1. 短文中不得出现真实的人名和地名。
2. 短文中应包含至少4个要点。
3. 书写工整、语句通顺、连贯,词数不少于80。
注意:文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:optimistic adj. 乐观的 government n. 政府 take measures to 采取措施 private adj. 私有的
Our Environment in Ten Years: for Better or Worse?
Many_students_are_optimistic_about_our_environment_in_ten_years.____
________________________________________________________________________
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第10篇(2018黔西南)
(30分)当今社会,无论在大街小巷,餐馆,还是聚会场所,
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你都能看见一些人正在低头玩手机。网络上给他们取了一个有趣的名字叫“低头族”。作为中学生,对此现象,你有什么看法?请写一篇80~100词的文章。
写作要求:1. 书写工整,语句通顺。
2. 文章中请勿使用真实人名或地名。
3. 自拟作文标题。
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
第11篇(2018抚顺)
(15分)对于全国积极推广的“足球进校园”活动,你班的同学可能有各自不同的观点。请根据下面的提示写一篇短文,并谈谈你的看法。
内容提示:
Some students
Some students
My opinions
1. make...healthier and stronger
1. get in the way of...
2. make...rich and colorful
2. be dangerous
3. have a chance to...
3. be hard to...
…
要求:①语言准确,行文连贯,层次清晰,书写规范。
②文中不得出现真实姓名、校名。
③作文应包括上述所有相关信息并可适当发挥。
④文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Different students have different opinions for the activity “Soccer Enters School”. Some students in my class think________________________________________________________________________
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第12篇(2018葫芦岛)
(15分)目前,有越来越多像Running Man 这样的明星真人秀节目(true man shows)在电影上热播,对此同学们众说纷纭。请根据如下提示,以“Different Ideas on True Man Shows”为题,写一篇英文短文并发表自己的观点。
most students
a few students
my ideas
◆relaxing, funny, a lot of stars
◆know more about stars' daily life
◆learn many cool games from them
◆spend too much time watching TV
◆too many ads(广告) in shows
…
要求:①语言准确,行文连贯,层次清晰,书写规范。
②作文应包括上述所有相关信息,可做适当发挥。
③开头已给出,不计入总词数。文中不能出现真实的人名和地名。
Different Ideas on True Man Shows
Different students have different ideas on true man shows.________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
第13篇(2018达州)
(10分)中共十八届五中全会提出一对夫妇可生育两个孩子政策后,全社会展开了热烈的讨论。某校也就“是否想要个弟弟或妹妹”对部分学生进行了一次问卷调查。请你根据此结果写一份调查报告,并适当阐述你的观点。问卷调查结果如下:
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注意:1. 全文字数90词左右。
2. 条理清楚,书写工整,句式规范,标点符号和大小写使用正确。
3. 短文中不能出现真实的人名、地名。文章开头已给出,不计入单词总数。
Recently, a survey has been made in our school on whether you want a little brother or sister. The opinions are different.________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
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专项训练四 观点看法类
第1篇
【审题指导】
1. 本文写作围绕的话题是:“说英语”,但是写作的关键是根据图片和要求,首先确定从谁的立场来阐述(注意:横线上先填所选角色,再续写理由);
2. 写作时,尽量从自己熟悉的人或事入手,以便展开叙述。同时注意写作时要结合图片中所给的对话提示,可适当发挥;
3. 选择的角色不同,人称的使用也不同。
【写作指导】
对“说英语”的看法
要点提示
素材串联
正文:阐述“我”的观点
1. 你的英语不好是因为你不说英语(poor, because)2. 说得越多,你的英语变得越好(the+比较级+...,the+比较级+...)3. 每天尽量多说英语(every day, as much as possible)4. 不要害羞或怕犯错误,你的老师和同学愿意帮你(be afraid of, make a mistake, be ready to)5. 重要的是,相信你自己,不要放弃(believe in yourself, never give up)
结尾:总结
记住:熟能生巧(practice makes perfect)
【高分范文1】
I am Miss Wang. Your English is poor because you don't speak English. English, like any other language, is a tool of communication. The more you speak it, the better your English will become. So you should try to speak every day as much as possible. And don't be shy or afraid of making a mistake. Your teacher and classmates are always ready to help you. The most important thing is that you must believe in yourself and never give up! Always remember: practice makes perfect!
【高分范文2】
I am Li Hua. I don't speak English because my English is poor. I find it hard to speak English. I am a little shy and afraid of making a mistake. I always feel nervous when I stand up speaking English in class. I'm afraid that my classmates may laugh at me when I speak English. To tell you the truth, I don't believe in myself. The less I speak, the worse my English will be. When my English improves, I will enjoy speaking it.
第2篇
【审题指导】
1. 本文要求对“很多学生不能好好管理时间以致影响了学习”这一现象谈自己的看法,根据所给的两点内容提示可知,本文写作思路很明确:首先,讲述你或你的同学一次未能按时完成学习任务的经历;然后,表明自己的观点,并给出合理的建议;
2. 讲述经历时,因为是过去的事情,用一般过去时;表明观点则用一般现在时。
【写作指导】
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对“不好好管理时间影响学习”的看法与建议
要点提示
素材串联
正文:自己的经历
时间:上周末(last weekend)2. 事件经过:好朋友Jim教我一种新的电脑游戏,我玩了很长时间以至于忘记写家庭作业(play a kind of computer game; forget to do homework)3. 事件结果:父母和老师都很生气,我也很沮丧(be angry with sb.;upset)
结尾
看法与建议
看法:我认为要做好周计划(make a weekday plan)
1. 建议:记录要做的事情,放在显眼的地方,可以很好地帮助我们(write on the paper and put up some place we can see it easily )
【高分范文】
Nowadays, many students can't make good use of their time and this has a bad influence on their study. I had an experience like this. Last weekend, my good friend, Jim taught me how to play a kind ofcomputer game. It was interesting. So I spent more time on it. I forgot to do my homework in the end. My teachers and parents were angry with me. I was also upset.
How to make good use of our time? I think we should make a weekday plan. We should make a plan before we do something. And we should write it on the paper and put it up some place where we can see it easily. It can help us to remember what we have to do next.
第3篇
【审题指导】
1. 根据所给的背景材料,学生首先要确定是围绕“正方”或“反方”其中之一展开写作;
2. 本文的写作思路也很清楚,即:阐明自己的观点(正或反)→讲述自己的经历→说出2至3条理由,由图片人物对话的内容进行联想,注意语篇的连贯性。
【写作指导】
帮助别人是否期待回报?
要点提示
素材串联
开头:阐明观点
1. 帮助别人不希望得到回报(expect, repay)2. 我认为,帮助别人给我一种强烈的被需要的感觉,并给我带来快乐(a strong feeling, bring happiness)3. 每个人都会陷入困境,需要帮助(get into trouble)
正文:讲述经历
几天前,在公园里散步发现一个小男孩哭泣(have a walk);他找不到妈妈,我给他妈妈打了电话(can't find);他妈妈想给我买礼物表示感谢,我拒绝了(thankful, want to buy me a small gift, refuse
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);我感到很高兴(feel quite happy)
结尾:发表感慨
1. 世界需要爱,我们要时刻准备帮助别人(be ready to)2. 一句“谢谢”就足够了(enough)
【高分范文】
When I show kindness and help others, I never expect them to repay me. In my view, helping others gives me a strong feeling of being needed and brings me happiness. On the other hand, everyone may get into trouble and need help, too.Several days ago, while I was having a walk in the park, I found a little boy crying. Then I asked him what the matter was, and he told me he couldn't find his mom. Luckily, he remembered his mother's phone number. So I called her immediately. Ten minutes later, the boy saw his mom and became excited. His mom was so thankful that she wanted to buy me a small gift, but I refused. At that time, I felt quite happy because I did something really good.All in all, the world needs love and we should be ready to help others without expecting any repay. If you wanted repay, a “Thanks” would be enough.第4篇
【审题指导】
1. 本文围绕“诚信”教育写演讲稿,所给的表格要点提示已明确给出写作思路:首先介绍朋友李雷的情况,然后表明自己的观点,补充的内容要合理,注意句子结构准确,篇章结构连贯;
2. 介绍别人的情况,用第三人称;表明自己的观点则用第一人称。
【写作要点】
朋友李雷
爱踢足球、玩游戏、考试作弊(likes playing football and computer games; often cheats in the exams)
学习退步、不被信任(gradually falls behind other students; isn't trusted by others)
我的观点
诚信考试,独立完成作业(should be honest in the exam; do homework by ourselves)应该讲实话(ought to tell the truth)努力做到遵守诺言(try our best to keep the promise)
【高分范文】
Hello, everyone! It's a great honor to give a speech here. I'd like to tell you something about my friend Li Lei. He likes playing football and he also likes computer games. To get good grades, he often cheats in the exams. As a result, he gradually falls behind other students. What's more, he isn't trusted by others. So I think we should be honest in the exam. And it's important to do homework by ourselves. We ought to tell the truth and be honest students. If we promise to do something, we'd better try our best to keep the promise.That's all. Thank you for listening!
第5篇
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【审题指导】
本文写作围绕的观点是“Good Friends in My Eyes”,所给背景材料已经给出了写作思路:首先根据所给提示阐述大众观点,然后选出两个方面阐述自己的观点与理由。考生要注意语篇的连贯性,理由的合理性。
【写作指导】
我眼中的好朋友
要点提示
素材串联
开头:大众观点
1.一些人认为:诚实、开朗(honest; outgoing)2.一些人认为:热爱运动(sports)、乐于助人(be ready to)3.其他人认为:努力学习(study hard)、和睦相处(get on well with)
正文:我的观点及理由
1.最重要的是:诚实守信(honest)2.应该交流与合作(communicate, cooperate)3.由于我很害羞并且安静,希望朋友有趣、幽默(funny and humorous)
结尾:总结感受
希望所有人能找到好朋友(wish that all of us can find friends)
【高分范文】
Good Friends in My Eyes
Everyone needs friends. Different people have different ideas about making friends. Some people like the friends who are not only honest, but also outgoing. Some want friends that are good at sports and always ready to help others. Others like friends who study hard and get on well with others.
In my opinion, I think it is important for my friends to be honest. What's more, good friends should communicate and cooperate with each other. At the same time, I am a little shy and quiet. So I expect my friends to be funny and humorous. In this way, I hope my friends can make me laugh.I wish that all of us can find friends.第6篇
【审题指导】
1. 本文的话题是“中学生在校是否可以使用手机”,因此文体是议论文。根据表格提示可知写作重点有:赞成及反对的理由,自己的观点及理由;
2. 本文对“中学生在校是否可以使用手机”进行讨论,以一般现在时为主。描述别人的看法和理由时使用第三人称,表达自己的观点和理由时,使用第一人称。
【写作指导】
中学生在校是否可以使用手机
要点提示
素材串联
开头:表明观点
已给出
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正文:正反两方面的看法
赞成1. 便于与家长、老师或朋友进行联系(it's convenient for students to call their parents, teachers or friends)2. 运用手机获取信息,如查询生词、浏览新闻(look up new words; look through news) 反对1. 花费太多时间在QQ和游戏上,浪费时间(spend too much time on...; a waste of time)2. 危害身心健康,如:伤害眼睛,结交坏朋友(be unhealthy for...)
结尾:自己的看法和理由
我认为,学生不能使用手机,因为对身体健康和学习没有好处(In my opinion;be bad for...)
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Can middle school students use mobile phones at school?
Nowadays, more and more teenagers use mobile phones. Can middle school students use mobile phones at school? Different students have different opinions about it.Some students think they can use mobile phones at school. First, it's convenient for students to call their parents, teachers or friends. Second, they can search what they need on mobile phones. For example, they can look up new words and look through news.However, some students disagree. They think using mobile phones at school is a waste of time. Many students spend too much time on games and QQ. Besides, it's unhealthy for the mind and the body, such as hurting eyes, making some bad friends.
In my opinion, students can't use mobile phones at school. It's bad for our health and study.
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【审题指导】
本文要求考生对“作业帮”等手机运用软件这一现象给出看法,文中给出的几条信息提示必须都涉及到,可以适当拓展。
【写作指导】
对“作业帮”的看法
要点提示
素材串联
开头:表明观点
现在,一些学生对网络有了一个新的使用方法……(Some students now have a new use for the Internet...)
正文:陈述理由
1. 一些学生认为他们有太多的作业……(Some students say/think that they have so much homework...)2. 并且还有一些问题对于他们来说解决出来很困难。(And some of the problems are too hard for them to work out.)3. 然而,查找作业答案不能提高学生的能力……(However, I think copying the answers can't improve the
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students' abilities...)
结尾:自己的看法
在我看来,我们可以更合理地使用网络……(In my opinion, we can make proper use of the Internet ...)
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Some students now have a new use for the Internet—use mobile phones to find out the answers to their homework. But different people have different ideas about it. Some students think that they have so much homework every day that they don't have enough time. And some of the problems are too hard for them to work out. So they have to use mobile phones to find out the answers.
However, I think copying the answers can't improve the students' abilities, and may make them stop thinking. In my opinion, we can make proper use of the Internet and can't depend on it. Studying online can be a way to help study, but the best way is studying (to study) by oneself.
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【审题指导】
1. 本篇书面表达已经给出了写作思路:首先,分别阐述家长们的观点(1和2);其次,表明自己的观点,要求用2~3句话适当发挥;
2. 阐述观点的文章时态主要用一般现在时,发表个人意见可适当使用情态动词;
3. 写作时主要使用第三人称,发表个人意见可用第一人称。
【写作指导】
对“家长开车接送孩子上学”的看法
要点提示
素材串联
开头:阐述普遍现象
已给出
正文:表明家长观点
观点1:省时(saves time);安全(safe);提供更多与孩子交流的机会(offer more chances to communicate with children) 观点2:学校周围更拥挤(more crowded around schools);最近发生了几起交通事故(traffic accidents);污染的空气对身体有不良影响(the polluted air is bad for health)
结尾:自己的观点
自己的事情自己做,我们应该乘公共汽车或步行去上学(go to school by bus or on foot),可以减少污染(reduce pollution)
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Nowadays it's common for parents to drive their children to school and back home, which has caused a heated discussion.Some parents think it saves time. It is very safe. And it offers more chances to communicate with their children. So they can get along well with their children. However, other parents think it's more crowded around schools. There have been several traffic accidents recently. And the polluted air is bad for our health.
I think we should do our things by ourselves. We can go to school by bus or on
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foot. And it can also help reduce pollution.
第9篇
【审题指导】
1. 本文要求就“环境问题”发表观点,根据所给的表格内容可知,本文适合采用三段式写法:第一段介绍乐观者的观点,第二段介绍担心者的观点,最后一段介绍自己的观点;
2. 本文讨论的是将来的环境问题,因此时态应以一般将来时为主,人称为第三人称。
【写作指导】
十年后的环境:是更好还是更坏?
要点提示
素材串联
乐观者的观点
1. 越来越多的人将成为环保主义者(more environmentalists)2. 政府将采取更多的措施改善环境(take more measures)
担心者的观点
1. 大量的树木仍将被砍伐(cut down)2. 私家车将越来越多(more private cars)
我的观点
1. 我对未来感到乐观(feel optimistic about our future)2. 一些发达国家在环保方面做得很好(some developed countries have already done well in)3. 我们也能做到(make)
【高分范文】
Our Environment in Ten Years: for Better or Worse?
Many students are optimistic about our environment in ten years. They think there will be more environmentalists in the future. What's more, our government will take more measures to protect the environment. So they are sure that our future will be better.
However, others are pessimistic. They think trees will still be cut down by people. Besides, with the development of our society, there will be more private cars in our life. Thus the environment will be even worse than it is now.
In my opinion, I feel optimistic about our environment in ten years. Because some developed countries have already done well in the protection of their environment. We can also make it.第10篇
【审题指导】
1. 本篇写作为一篇议论文,写作的主要内容就是谈论中学生如何正确使用手机,并且要有自己的看法和建议;
2. 写作时,使用第一人称,时态用一般现在时。
【写作指导】
中学生怎样正确使用手机
要点提示
素材串联
开头:引出话题
1.手机在日常生活中广泛使用(be widely used)
正文:如何正确使用手机
1.对眼睛有害(is harmful to)2.沉迷手机,做其他事情的时间不够了(be addicted to)应该怎么做:面对面交流(face to face)
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结尾:强调观点
2. 总之,正确使用手机,才能生活更健康(in a word)
【高分范文】
How to use mobile phones properly?
Mobile phones are widely used in our daily life nowadays. But as middle school students, how should we use mobile phones properly?We shouldn't spend too much time using mobile phones. First, playing with phones is harmful to our eyes. Second, we won't have enough time to do other things if we are addicted to mobile phones. So, we'd better talk to each other face to face instead of chatting on the phone.
In a word, we ought to use mobile phones correctly. Then we can live a healthier life.
第11篇
【审题指导】
1. 要求写一篇议论文。文中以关键词和短语形式给出了正反两方的观点,写作时需将正反方所有观点均涵盖,然后简单阐述自己的看法。写作时,可以使用使役动词、连词及连词词组,使文章过渡自然;
2. 写对立双方的观点,用第三人称;阐述自己的看法,用第一人称;时态用一般现在时。
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Different students have different opinions for the activity “Soccer Enters School”. Some students in my class think this activity is good for them. It can make them healthier and stronger. It also makes their spare time rich and colorful. Especially for some students, they may have a chance to become professional soccer players. Other students think this activity will waste their time and get in the way of their study. Sometimes it's dangerous. They may get hurt while playing soccer. What's more, it's hard to become a professional soccer player.In my opinion, I think this activity is good for us. It will make more students love soccer.
第12篇
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Different Ideas on True Man ShowsDifferent students have different ideas on true man shows. Most of them think the shows are relaxing, funny and have a lot of stars. They can not only know more about stars' daily life but also learn many cool games through the shows. However, a few students hold the opposite view. They think it's not good for our study and health to spend too much time watching TV. Besides, there're too many ads in shows, which is a waste of time.In my opinion, we can choose to watch some good and healthy true man shows, which can make us relaxed and learn something from them, such as teamwork spirit.
第13篇
【审题指导】
1. 本文就“二孩政策”进行了问卷调查,要求根据结果写一份调查报告。所呈现的调查报告已明确给出写作思路:支持一方的观点,反对一方的观点,最后阐述自己的观点;
2.陈述他人观点时用第三人称,说明自己的观点时用第一人称。
【写作指导】
对“是否想要个弟弟或妹妹”的看法
要点提示
素材串联
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开头:引出话题
对“是否想要个弟弟或妹妹”的意见不同
正文:陈述观点及原因
正方:赞成原因:①不再感到孤单(not feel lonely any more)②相互帮助,分享喜怒哀乐(help each other, share happiness and sadness)反方:反对原因: ①带走父母的爱(love)②打扰学习(bother their studying)
结尾:表明自己的观点
1. 很难说二孩政策是好还是坏(hard to say)2. 尊重父母的选择( respect our parents' choices)
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Recently, a survey has been made in our school on whether you want a little brother or sister. The opinions are different.
Here are the results:40% of the students want a little brother or sister, because they think that they won't feel lonely any more, and if they have a little brother or sister, they will help each other and share the happiness and sadness with each other. What's more, they think they will get more freedom, because their parents will not pay all their attention to them. But the rest of students disagree with this point. They worry about the little brother or sister will take away the love of their parents. They are also afraid that their little brother or sister will bother their studying.
In my opinion, it is hard to say whether it is good or bad to have a brother or sister, but we should respect our parents' choices. After all, they are the persons who should make the final decision.
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