专题 41 书面表达三
一、 黄冈
七、书面表达
62.同学们，在初中三年的英语学习中，我们从课本中学习了有关 “Family”、 “Be polite to sb.”、
“Protecting the environmment”、 “Volunteering”等话题和功能。假定你是李磊，请参考这些话题和
功能，依据以下要点提示，写一篇题为 “I’m Proud of My Family”的英语短文，向校报投稿，讲述你的家
庭故事。
要点提示：
1、家人相亲相爱，努力学习、工作；
2、邻里和睦，礼貌待人；
3、爱护环境，从我做起：
写作要求
l、词数 90 左有（短文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数）；
2、根据要点提示，适当发挥；
3、短文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名。
参考词汇：Work hard; be friendly to each other, get on well with; protect the environment； be
volunteers
I’m Proud of My Family
My name is Li Lei.I have a happy family. There are four people in my family: my parents,
my sister and I.
【答案】My name is Li Lei. I have a happy family. There are four people in my family: my
parents, my sister and I.
My family love each other. (My parents love us and we love our parents.) My parents both work
hard. My sister and I study hard at school, too.
My family are kind and friendly to our neighbors. We are all polite to each other. We get
on well with each other.My family try our best to protect the environment in our daily life. My mom and my sister
usually bring a bag to go shopping. My father is used to taking the bus to work. I never order
takeaway food.
My family are glad to be volunteers at any time. My parents often help the children in poor
areas. (My sister helps in the school library twice a week.) Sometimes I read newspapers to the
old people.
What a happy family! I’m proud of my family!
【解析】
这是一篇话题作文，根据材料中的相关信息讲述一下你的家庭故事。所提供的材料中命好了题目：I’m Proud
of My Family。主要从 1、家人相亲相爱，努力学习、工作；2、邻里和睦，礼貌待人；3、爱护环境，从我
做起：这三个方面去介绍。时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，
并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符
合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，
符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。
【高分句型一】
My family try our best to protect the environment in our daily life. 我的家人尽力保护我们日常
生活中的环境。
该句话运用了：try one’s best to do sth. 尽力做某事。protect the environment：保护环境。
【高分句型二】
My father is used to taking the bus to work. 我父亲习惯乘公共汽车上班。
这句话运用了：be used to doing sth. 习惯于做某事。
总之，本文运用了大量的简单句，虽然没有复合句，但是这写简单句把作者的一家人的生活描写的入情入
理，就像是发生在我们的眼前一样。
二、 黄石
66.第二节书面表达
假如你是国际学校的学生李华，你的同学 Tom 写了一封邮件询问你暑假的安排，请给
Tom 回封邮件，告知你的计划，并邀请他来黄石游玩。
内容包括：1、读几本好书；2、参加社会实践活动；
3、帮父母做家务；
4、和朋友一起锻炼；
5、邀请 Tom。
注意： 1、词数 80 左右；
2、可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3、文中不能出现与本人相关信息；
4、开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
参考词忙：有意义的 meaningful
经典文学作品 classic literature works
社会实践活动 social practice activities
Dear Tom，
I'm very happy to hear from you.
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【答案】Dear Tom，
I'm very happy to hear from you. How are you going these days? Summer vacation is coming soon.
Here I’d like to share my holiday plan with you. First of all, I am going to read some good books
to open up my mind. What’s more, I’ll take part in some volunteer activities to raise awareness
of serving the society and improve my social communication ability. Of course, exercise is must.
I will run, play basketball, ride a bike and so on. Last but not least, I am about to invite you
to visit my hometown, Huangshi and I really want to meet you.
How about yours? I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua【解析】
本文属于材料作文，写信告诉汤姆你的暑假计划并邀请汤姆来黄石玩。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用
时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。
亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、
主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如 would like to do, share sth with, be going to, open up one’s
mind, take part in, awareness of serving the society, of course, and so on, be about to do, invite
sb to do, look forward to doing 以及 first of all, what’s more 和 last but not least,增强逻辑关系，增
加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。
三、 随州
61.书面表达
茶是中国传统饮食文化的组成部分，是生活中不可或缺的饮品。作为中学生，我们应了解茶并传播茶文化。
请根据以下要点提示，写一篇英语短文。
要点提示：1.历史悠久，约 5000 年前神农首次发现茶可以饮用；
2.种植广泛，安溪和杭州尤以茶闻名：
3.喝茶有很多好处：有利健康，醒脑提神等；
4.世界各地许多人喜欢喝茶并收集茶具。
写作要求：1.文章必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥以使行文连贯；
2.词数：80 词左右；（文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数）
3.文中不得出现真实姓名及校名。
China is famous for tea.
【答案】One possible version：China is famous for tea.Chinese tea has a long history.It's said
that Shen Nong was the first to discover tea as a drink about 5，000 years ago.Tea is produced
in many different areas Anxi and Hangzhou are widely known for their tea.
There are lots of advantages of drinking tea.It's good for health.A cup of ca can make you relaxed
and fresh.It seems that many people all over the world love drinking tea and collecting tea scts.
As middle schol students，we should kmow about tea culture and spread it around the world.
【解析】
茶是中国传统饮食文化的组成部分，是生活中不可或缺的饮品。作为中学生，我们应了解茶并传播茶文化。请根据以下要点提示，写一篇英语短文。这是一篇给材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是
用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容
可知本文主要是一般现在时态，主语是第三人称单数，注意时态语时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作
中正确使用比较形式，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。这篇短文是一篇优秀的作文，文中用到了一
些好的句型：There are lots of advantages of drinking tea.It's good for health.A cup of ca can
make you relaxed and fresh.It seems that many people all over the world love drinking tea and
collecting tea scts.这些给文章增色不少。
四、 武汉
七、书面表达
61.学校英语社团正在组织题为“My Family”的征文活动。假如你是李明，请根据以下内
容提示用英语完成征文。
内容要点如下：
1.三口之家，家庭幸福，邻里和睦；
2.父母为教师，在校深受欢迎；
3.分担家务，周末户外活动；
4.相互陪伴，经常交流，良好家规助我成长：
5.请补充说明一至两点与家庭相关的情况。
注意：
1．文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；
2．词数：60 - 80;
3．内容连贯，不要逐条翻译；
4．标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇： popular adj.受欢迎的 activity n.．活动 rule n．规矩
My Family
I’m Li Ming.
【答案】I’m Li Ming. I have a happy family. There are three people in it. They are my father,
my mother and me. My parents are teachers, they are popular among students. We get along well
with our neighbors. At home, I try my best to do some housework. On weekends, we often go out
for outdoor activities. We accompany with each other, communicate with each other. Good family
rules help me grow up. I study hard, all the teachers and classmates like me. My home is a warm
place.
【解析】
本文属于材料作文，介绍我的家庭。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，
可适当增加内容。
亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、
主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如 get along well with, try one’s best to do, accompany with,
communicate with, help sb do 以及 grow up，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，
行文连贯。
五、咸宁
九、短文写作
53.运动塑造健康，团结凝聚力量。5 月 10日，学校举办了春季运动会。你和班上的许多同学参加了比赛项
目，战绩显著。其他同学观看了比赛，并为选手们加油喝彩。请你根据下面四幅图片的提示，写一篇日记，
介绍运动会概况及班上同学参加的情况，并抒发自己的活动感受。
写作要求：
1．文章中勿出现真实的姓名和校名；
2．文章须包含图片所提供的主要信息，可适当发挥。行文连贯，条理清晰；
3．词数 80~100 个，文章的开头已经给出，不计入总字数。
参考词汇：teamwork Friday, May 11th, 2019 Sunny
It was sunny yesterday. Our school held a spring sports meet.
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【答案】例文
Friday. May 1lth,2019 Sunny It was sunny yesterday. Our school held a spring sports meet.
There were 4 events for both boys and girls. They were the long jump, the high jump, the l00-meter
race and the 400-meter relay race.
Everyone in our class felt very excited because we got a wonderful result. Sixteen of us took
part in the activity and we got 4 first prizes, 2 second prizes and 3 third prizes. My classmates
Yuan Ying and Fang Dan won the girls' long jump and the high jump without difficulty. So did I
in the boys'100-meter race. In the boys' relay race, three boys and I ran very fast, coming out
on top. In the meantime, all other classmates watched the matches, took photos and cheered us
on. From this sports meet, know that sports can keep us healthy. We should do sports every day.
Meanwhile, teamwork plays an important role in the relay race. As the saying goes, one tree
can't make a forest. So it made us learn to help each other in our daily life.
【解析】
这是一篇看图作文，根据图片中的相关内容介绍一下运动会概况及班上同学参加的情况，并抒发自己的活
动感受。所提供的卡片中列举了跳远、跳高、400 米接力和 100 米接力。主要从同学们的参加情况和自己的
活动感受这个方面去写。时态为一般过去时，人称为第一人称。注意日记中必须包含图片上的所有信息，
并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符
合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，
符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。
【高分句型一】
Everyone in our class felt very excited because we got a wonderful result. 我们班的每个人都很
兴奋，因为我们取得了一个很好的成绩。句子 because we got a wonderful result.是由 because 引导的原
因状语从句。
【高分句型二】My classmates Yuan Ying and Fang Dan won the girls' long jump and the high jump without difficulty.
So did I in the boys'100-meter race. 我的同学袁颖和方丹轻松地获得了女子跳远和跳高的冠军。我也
参加了男子 100 米赛跑。So did I in the boys'100-meter race.是由 so 引起的倒装句。
六、襄阳
七、书面表达
61.据了解，为了进一步引导中学生积极参加体育锻炼，提高身体素质，襄阳市教育主管部门正在研究制定
有关“中考”体育考试的改革方案( the plan)，考虑在原有项目的基础上增加篮球、排球或足球，总分(the
score)也由 30 分增加至 50 分。作为一名参加过体育“中考”的学生，你对这样的改革持什么样的态度。
请根据写作要点提示，用英语写一篇短文表述你的观点。
1．要点提示：
(l)观点明确（要么赞成，要么反对）：
(2)理由充分（可针对增加考试的项目和调整的分值，也可只选其一。限三条理由）；
(3)给出建议（围绕你的观点提出一条合理化建议）。
2．注意事项：
(l)字数：90 词左右： (2)行文应连贯流畅； (3)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
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【答案】In my poinion,I agree with the reform plan of“high school entrance examination”physical
education examination.
It is reported that most young people are getting unhealthy.Without regular exercise, students
are getting weaker and weaker.If the total score of "high school entrance examination" sports
is increased,Both teachers and students will undoubtedly attach great importance to physical
education,and it’s easy to imagine the phenomenon that PE is always taken away will never be seen.Students will be healthier and more energetic in their study.It is helpful to improve
students' comprehensive ability and quality.
I think every school should make a plan to cultivate students' interest in sports so as to improve
students' physical quality.
【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文。襄阳市教育主管部门正在研究制定有关“中考”体育考试的改革方案，考虑在原有
项目的基础上增加篮球、排球或足球，总分(the score)也由 30 分增加至 50 分。作为一名参加过体育“中
考”的学生，你对这样的改革持什么样的态度。要求根据写作要点提示，用英语写一篇短文表述自己的观
点。文章时态主要用一般现在时，人称主要用第一、第三人称。在写作时，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，要
层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达
习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正
确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。
七、宜昌
61.书面表达：
假定你是李华，你的英国朋友 Mike 得知你们开展了“做生态小公民，建设美丽家乡”的活动，他来信表示
很感兴趣并想了解具体细节，请给 Mike 写一封回信向他描述你（们）曾经做过的一件事或参与的一次活动。
要求：
(1) 内容应包括活动或事件的时间、地点、过程和你的感受：
(2) 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名：词数 80~100。开头和结尾己给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Milk,
I’m glad to hear that you are interessted in our environment protection activities. To be an
ecological eitizen(生态公民)，we did a good job. Last
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Now the environment around us becomes better and better. Welcome to my hometown one day.
Yours．
LiHua
【答案】Dear Mike, I'm glad to hear that you are interested in our environment protection activities.
To be an ecological citizen, we did a good iob. Last Sunday,I went to our community with my friends
to give the people there a speech. It was about how to protect our environment. After the speech,
they knew they should take a bus or ride a bike instead of driving to cut down air pollution.
To cut down waste pollution, they should take bags to go shopping. And they alsoknew to put litter
in different bins. Finally, we called them up/called on them to make a difference to our environment
together. We were tired but happy that day.
Now the environment around us becomes better and better. Welcome to my hometown one day.
Yours, Li Hua
【解析】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如 be glad to do，be interested in，ecological
citizen ， give a speech ， how to do ， take a bus ， ride a bike ， instead of ， cut down ， go
shopping，call them up，make a difference，become better and better 等。而 I'm glad to hear that
you are interested in our environment protection activities./ After the speech, they knew they
should take a bus or ride a bike instead of driving to cut down air pollution.等复杂从句结构的运用，
丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就
可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
八、鄂州
VII . 书面表达
58.现在越来越多的学生使用“作业帮”这个 APP 来搜查他们不会做的题目。对此，不同的人有不同的看法。
请根据以下文字的提示，并适当发表自己的观点，写一篇英语短文。
1.及时帮助学生解决在学习中遇到的困难；优点 2.在家就能学习，简单，方便；
3.可以选择自己喜欢的老师，学习兴趣更浓。
缺点
1.有的学生假装学习，事实上在玩游戏；
2.有的学生不想独立思考，直接照抄答案，他们根本不关心自己的学
习，只是虚度光阴。
你的建议 联系实际，给出自己合理的建议。
要求：
1. 80－100 词。（开头的首句已给出，不计算在词数内）
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称及其他相关信息，否则，不予评分。
参考词汇：convenient 方便的，便利的 pretend to do… 假装做…
think independently 独立思考
Today, more and more students are using the App zuoyebang. However, different people have
different ideas about it. Some people
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【答案】Today, more and more students are using the APP zuoyebang. Different people have different
ideas about it. Some people think it’s useful. The APP zuoyebang can help students to solve
difficulties in their studying in time. It’s easy and convenient for them.
They can study at home. They can choose their own teachers they like, and they will be more
interested in studying. However, others don’t think so. They think some students just pretend
to study, in fact they play games. They don’t want to think independently, but only copy the
answers. They don’t care about their studying at all. It’s a waste of time. I think it’s good for students who are hard-working. They can study better. But for students
who don’t want to study, it’s very bad.
【解析】
这篇作文要求我们对介绍不同人对“作业帮”这个应用软件的看法，并联系实际，发表自己的观点。题目
中利用表格的形式，列出了写作的主要内容，审题可知，短文应包括以下几个部分：作业帮的优点、缺点
以及个人观点。可以分为三段分别进行叙述，各自的理由在表格中都已呈现，学生们需要用正确的英语将
这些内容表达出来。最后一部分内容则需要学生们联系自己的实际生活，发挥想象力，自己来补充适当的
内容。文章应以一般现在时、第三人称和第一人称为主来叙述。写作时应注意：首先要将题目中要求的所
有内容都包括在作文中，不能遗漏要点。可以根据表达需要适当发挥，使文章内容更加充实、完整，但需
要注意合理性，要紧贴题目要求和文章主旨。其次应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不能逐词翻译表格
内容，写汉语式的英语。应从句子的整体结构出发，以简单句结构为基础，穿插并列句、复合句以及其他
复合结构的使用，提升作文档次。同时语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使行文连贯、自然。这是一篇优秀
是作文，短文作者根据题目要求，把人们对“作业帮”这个应用软件的不同看法进行了介绍，并在最后发
表了自己的观点。短文有以下几个特点：首先文章内容完整，包含了题目中要求的所有信息，没有遗漏要
点。各部分内容之间层次清晰，叙述有条理，三段式的作文，一目了然，每一段的主题也很明确。其次短
文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确，语言得体。句子结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。
除简单句结构外，短文里还使用了 and 连接的并列句、宾语从句、状语从句、定语从句等复合句，以及动
词不定式、动名词等非谓语动词结构。短文中较好的句型有 The APP zuoyebang can help students to solve
difficulties in their studying in time.、They can choose their own teachers they like, and they
will be more interested in studying.、They think some students just pretend to study, in fact
they play games.、I think it’s good for students who are hard-working 等等。
九、荆门
第三节 书面表达
57.为弘扬中华传统文化，你校举办了一次“戏曲进校园”展演活动。假定你是李华，请你将活动的相关情
况写信告知你的英国笔友 John。
要点：
1. 时间：5 月 16 日下午 2:30;
2. 地点：学校操场;3. 内容：校长在开幕式上致辞；戏曲知识竞赛；师生戏曲表演等；
4. 感受：对传统文化有了进一步的了解……
要求：
1. 文中不得出现真实的人名或地名；
2. 语言通顺，条理清楚，书写规范；
3. 要点齐全，内容可适当发挥；
4. 词数：80—100 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
参考词汇：戏曲 opera (n.) 开幕式 opening ceremony ( n.) 表演 performance ( n.)致辞 make a
speech
Dear John,
How is everything going? I’m writing to share with you an activity called Opera Entering
Campus in our school.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear John，
How is everything going? I’m writing to share with you an activity called Opera Entering
Campus in our school.
The activity was held at 2:30 pm on May 16 on the playground. In the beginning, the headmaster
made a speech at the opening ceremony, inspiring us students to learn more about Chinese culture.
After that, there was an exciting competition about opera knowledge. In the end, we enjoyed
wonderful opera performances put on by some teachers and students who are talented in opera.
Through this activity, we have a better understanding of opera and get closer to Chinese
traditional culture. I hope you can have a chance to come to China and experience Chinese culture
on your own.
Best wishes!Yours
Li Hua
【解析】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如 be hold，on the playground，in the beginning，
make a speech，at the opening ceremony，after that，in the end，put on，have a chance 等。而 we
enjoyed wonderful opera performances put on by some teachers and students who are talented in
opera./ Through this activity, we have a better understanding of opera and get closer to Chinese
traditional culture. /I hope you can have a chance to come to China and experience Chinese culture
on your own.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结
牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
十、孝感
八、书面表达
61.随着年龄的增长，你周围的事物也发生了很大变化。请根据以下提示，以“Great changes around me”
为题，写一篇短文。
写作要点：
1. 过去, 道路狭窄(narrow), 房展老旧, 空气…河水…
2.现在。路面洁净、宽阔, 交通便利；高楼林立；蓝天白云, 满城绿树鲜花, 小鸟歌唱；人们…
3.感受, …
写作要求：
1.要点齐全, 省略号处须作适当发挥, 但不要逐句翻译；
2. 语句连贯, 条理清晰, 详略得当, 书写工整；
3 文中不得出现任何宾实的信息（地名、校名和人名等）；
4.100 词左右, 短文的翅目和开头已给出, 不计入总词数。
Great Changes around Me
In the past few years, great changes have taken place around me.
____________________________________________________________________________________________
,____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________
【答案】例文
Great Changes around Me
In the past few years, great changes have taken place around me. The roads used to be narrow
and crowded. The houses were old and small. The air wasn't fresh enough. Sometimes, there was
terrible smell. The river was polluted badly and there was rubbish in it.
Nowadays, the roads are wide and clean. It's really convenient for people to go out. We can
choose different kinds of transportation to go anywhere. Lots of tall buildings have been built
in the city. Most of us have moved to big beautiful houses. The sky is blue and the cloud is white
.The birds are singing happily. My hometown looks like a big garden with green trees, grass and
colorful flowers.
Our country is rich and strong, we are living a happy life. I'm sure as time goes on, our
life will become better and better!
【解析】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如 take place，around me，used to be，convenient
for，go out，different kinds of，lots of，most of us，look like，live a happy life，go on，become
better and better 等。而固定句型 It's really convenient for people to go out.和固定句型 The river
was polluted badly and there was rubbish in it.以及 I'm sure as time goes on, our life will become
better and better!等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注
意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
十一、湖北恩施
61.书面表达
“Life is like a box of of chocolate.You never know what you are going to get next.”
----Forrest Gump 中文译名：《阿甘正传》
“Hope is a good thing. Maybe the best of things and no good thing ever dies.”
----The Shawshank Kedemption 中文译名：《肖申克的救赎》
“We are all running very hard. We are all dream chasers(追梦人).”----President Xi Jingping
以上材料告诉我们：生活是丰富多彩的，有快乐幸福也有伤心失落。但既然选择了远方，便只顾风雨
兼程。所以在学习和生活中，我们要满怀希望、努力奔跑、追逐梦想。请以 Dream Chaser 为题，谈谈你自
己的观点。
要点提示：
1.有自己的目标，并努力让它成为现实；
2.勤奋学习，使自己不断强大；
3.正确面对困难，积极参加社会活动；
4.补充自己的观点。
写作要求：
1.文中必须包含所有提示要点，可适当发挥使行文连贯；
2.条理清晰，字迹工整，词数不少于 80；
3.文章开头已给出，不计入总词数；
4.文中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息。
Dream Chaser
As we know, life is not always smooth. Sometimes we may feel satisfied and sometimes we may
feel upset.__________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________
【答案】As we know, life is not always smooth. Sometimes we may feel satisfied and sometimes we
may feel upset. In order to make our dream come true, firstly we should set a practical goal.
But just having a goal is not enough. More importantly, we need to study hard to make ourselves
stronger. Besides, as teenagers, it is necessary for us to take part in more social activities.
We can learn a lot from each other by joining in those social activities. However, there will
be many difficulties in both our daily life and study, so please keep patient and be brave to
face these challenges. Finally, all our efforts are meaningful and one day our dream will be
achieved.
【解析】
1.题干解读：这是一篇材料作文。主要说明要有自己的目标，努力实现目标应做到勤奋学习，使自己不断
强大；正确面对困难，积极参加社会活动。
2.例文点评：例文用第一人称来叙述主要内容；时态采用一般现在时为主，主要讲述如何实现自己的目标（Firstly,…More importantly,…Besides,…Finally,…）。承接文章开头，句意完整，避免汉语式英语，
叙述条理清晰。
3.高分亮点：
高分短语：feel satisfied；feel upset；come true；set a practical goal；both…and…；keep
patient。
高分句型：It is +adj. + for sb. +to do sth.；there be 句型；祈使句；need to do sth.。
十二、贵州安顺
86.请你根据上面五个问题的内容及你的回答，结合以下提示，以“How Can We Protect Ourselves at School?”
为题，写一篇 80-100 词的英语短文。文中不得出现真实校名和人名。
提示：
1. 谨慎交友。
2. 不参与打架斗殴。
3. 面对校园欺凌怎样自我保护。
参考词汇：1. self-protection（自我保护） 2. bully(n./v.欺凌）
3. personal safety（人身安全）4. have violent behaviors(打架斗殴）
How Can We Protect Ourselves at School?
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】How Can We Protect Ourselves at School?
School bullies happen in almost every school. In my school we sometimes have bullies and some
students are hurt, so it is really bad for us to bully others or be bullied at school.
We are supposed to stop any school bully when we are in the trouble of it. For example, we should
stay calm before a bullying behavior happens. We should always be friendly and helpful when making
friends with others. Here are some of my ideas about stopping school bullies. Firstly, we will
learn how to have a self-protection because our personal safety is the most important. Secondly,
we should be peaceful with others at all times and can't have any violent behavior. Finally, obeying
school rules is also a way to avoid school bullies.
I'm hoping that no school bullies will happen at school in the future ,do you think so?
,【解析】
这是一篇话题作文，以“How Can We Protect Ourselves at School?”为题，写一篇 80-100 词的英语短
文。本文人称主要第一人称，时态主要是一般现在时。仔细阅读所给材料，认真审题，确定主题，确定要
点，根据要点适当发挥，列出提纲。短文必须包含提示内容。字数 80-100 词。要运用合适的连接词或过渡
词，使文章具有连贯性。根据提示要点，列出本文的写作提纲。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无单词
拼写、标点、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。本文提纲：
在学校我们如何保护自己？
几乎每个学校都有欺负学校的行为。在我的学校里，我们有时会被欺负，一些学生会受到伤害，
所以在学校欺负别人或被欺负对我们来说真的很不好。
当我们遇到校园欺凌的麻烦时，我们应该阻止任何校园欺凌。例如，在发生欺凌行为之前，我们
应该保持冷静。与他人交朋友时，我们应该总是友好和乐于助人。以下是我关于制止学校欺负的一些
想法。首先，我们将学习如何自我保护，因为我们的人身安全是最重要的。第二，我们要时刻与他人
和睦相处，不能有任何暴力行为。最后，遵守校规也是避免学校欺负的一种方式。
我希望将来学校里不会发生欺负学生的事，你这么认为吗？
【点睛】书面表达题要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表
达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，语言要规范，
时态运用要正确，叙述清楚条里，信息表达清晰、完整，意思连贯。写作六步法：1.审题：文体，时
态，人称。2.抓住要点：要点是否齐全，适当补充。3.扩充句子：通过增加状语，定语，连词，使句
子意思饱满充实。4.连句成文，合理使用连词。5.改正错误：拼写是否错误，语法时态是否正确，连
词是否恰当等。6.誊写作文：注意书写工整美观整洁。
十三、贵州毕节
57.B.每年的 6 月 6 日是我国的“爱眼日”，可见保护中小学生的视力非常重要，为此，学校将在英语文化
节期间举行一场“爱眼日”英语演讲比赛。请你写一篇英语演讲稿，谈谈你对保护视力重要性的认识和建
议。
内容如下：
1. 保护视力的重要性（请写 1 点）；
2. 对保护视力的建议：（1）阅读时注意用眼卫生；（2）少用电子产品；（3）常看绿色植物；（4）做眼
保健操；（5）多做户外运动。要求如下：
1.结构完整，表达通顺，语言规范，书写清晰；
2.文中不得出现任何真实的人名，学校名等信息；
3.词数 80 左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：
Sight Day “爱眼日”；electronic products 电子产品；eye-protecting exercises 眼保健操
Dear friends,
June 6 is our country’s Sight Day.
______________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________
Thank you!
【答案】Dear friends,
June 6 is our country’s Sight Day. As we all know, eyes are windows of the soul. Everyone
understands the importance of the eyes. But now more and more students are getting near sighted.
So how to protect eyes still remains a question. Here is some advice on how to protect your eyesight.
You should not keep your eyes working for two long when reading, you should keep the book about
a foot away from you. After reading for an hour or two, you’d better have a rest by working in
the distance or looking at the green plants to make your eye relax. You ought to remember not
to read in dim light or in the sun. Don’t read in a moving bus or in bed. Besides, try to use
less electric products. What’s more, doing eye-protecting exercises will help you keep good eye
sight. Last but not least, we can also try to do more exercise in our spare time.
Only by doing these simple things can we keep good eyesight.
【解析】
本文属于话题作文，谈谈你对保护视力重要性的认识和建议。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上
下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。
亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、
主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如 windows of the soul, the importance of, 比较级 and 比较级, advice
on, had better do, have a rest, make sth do, besides, what’s more, last but not least 以及“only+
状语”放句首用半倒装，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。【点睛】写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：
认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。
构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放
的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。
初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及
简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自
然。
修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构
是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
十四、贵州遵义
第四部分 书面表达
61.假如你是遵义育才中学的大明，你们学校与上海阳光中学正在实施"山与海对话"
（ Dialogue Between Mountain And Sea）项目．今年暑假，你的"手拉手"活动伙伴小海将来遵义进
行首次交流活动．请根据下列提示给他写一封 80 词左右的书信．内容包括：
自我介绍 年龄、性格、爱好……
校园生活介绍 社团活动……
家乡介绍 自然环境，名胜古迹……
你的建议 上网了解更多有关遵义的历史与文化……
注意：1．文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
2．可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
3．书信的开头和结尾已为你写出，不计入总词数．
提示词：遵义海龙囤 Zunyi Hailongtun Castle 遵义会址 Zunyi Conference Site
Dear Xiaohai，
I'm glad to hear that you are coming
to Zunyi because of the project Dialogue Between Mountain And Sea． Now let me tell you something about me and my city． ______
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________
Welcome to my city! I'm looking forward to meeting you．
Yours sincerely，
Daming
【答案】Dear Xiaohai，
I'm glad to hear that you are coming
to Zunyi because of the project Dialogue Between
Mountain And Sea． Now let me tell you something about me and my city．I am
fourteen years old. I am outgoing and like making friends. I like sports, like playing balls
and running. I also like collecting stamps. Our school life is very colorful. We can not
only study very hard but also do all kinds of activities after class. After school, we often
do some sports such as playing basketball, volleyball, Pingpong and so on. I join basketball
club. I play basketball every Thursday afternoon after school.The natural environment in Zunyi
is beautiful and there're many famous scenic spots and historical sites in Zunyi, like Zunyi
Hailongtun Castle and Zunyi Conference Site. If you want to know more about Zunyi's history
and culture, you can go online for it.
Welcome to my city! I'm looking forward to meeting you．
Yours
sincerely，
Daming
【解析】
本题是一篇材料作文，也是书信作文。注意书信格式。本文人称主要是第一称，时态主要是一般现在时和
一般将来时。认为阅读材料，认真审题，确定主题，提示要点就是本文的提纲要点，根据要点适当发挥，列出提纲。短文必须包含提示内容，条理清楚。要运用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有连贯性。写完
以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无单词拼写、标点、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。本文提纲：
亲爱的小海：
我很高兴听到你来遵义是因为山与海的项目对话。现在让我告诉你一些关于我和我的城市的事情。
我今年 14 岁。我很外向，喜欢交朋友。我喜欢运动，喜欢打球和跑步。我也喜欢集邮。我们的学校生
活非常丰富多彩。我们不仅可以很努力地学习，而且可以在课后做各种活动。放学后，我们经常做一
些运动，如打篮球、排球、乒乓球等。我加入了篮球俱乐部。我每周四下午放学后打篮球，遵义自然
环境优美，有许多著名的风景名胜和历史古迹，如遵义海龙屯城堡和遵义会议遗址。如果你想了解更
多有关遵义的历史和文化，可以上网了解。
欢迎来到我的城市！我很期待见到你。
谨上，
大明
【点睛】书面表达要求将所规
定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。考生不能遗漏要点，要尽
量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。语
言要规范，时态运用要正确，叙述清楚条里，学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以
适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。
注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。写作六步法：1.审题：文体，时态，人称。
2.抓住要点：要点是否齐全，适当补充。3.扩充句子：通过增加状语，定语，连词，使句子意思饱满充实。
4.连句成文，合理使用连词。5.改正错误：拼写是否错误，语法时态是否正确，连词是否恰当等。6.誊写
作文：注意书写工整美观整洁。
十五、贵阳
第二节 书面表达
81.【卷号】2239054062428160
【题号】2243742310350848
【题文】
假定你是李华，请你以初三毕业生的身份给学弟学妹们写一封电子邮件。要求如下：
1.重点分享你在处理学习困难方面的经验以及你下一步学习或生活的打算；
2.邮件不少于 80 词，开头与结尾已给出，不计入字数；
3.不得出现真实的个人信息。
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【答案】I'm going to graduate from junior high school. Looking back on three years of junior high
school life, there are many gains and difficulties. I have many difficulties in learning English.At
the very beginning, listening seemed a little difficult for me. So I have been doing a lot of
listening practice, such as listening to tapes, watching English TV programs. And I found it really
helped a lot. In fact, there are some more helpful ways to learn English well. For example, I
enjoy singing English songs and I want to join an English club or find a pen pal from
English-speaking countries. I believe that nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it.I
am about to start high school life, I will continue to work hard, I hope you bravely face junior
high school life, have a happy junior high school life.
【解析】
考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。运用适当的短
语表达中心思想，增加作文的可读性。完成提示词时也要符合事实。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有
漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
【点睛】这篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短语,如:So I have been doing a lot of listening practice, such
as listening to tapes, watching English TV programs.，这些文章增色不少。学习中注意总结,牢记一
些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。
十六、贵州铜仁
76.写作
据报道，铜仁市的许多学校正在开展“提升文明素养，规范行为举止”的校园文明活动。作为中学生，请
根据以下内容提示及要求，用英语写一篇 80 字左右的宣讲文章。文章的开头和结尾均已给出，不计入词数。
内容要点如下：
⒈尊敬师长，明礼诚信，友善待人，乐于助人。⒉遵守交规，外出不乱扔垃圾，不随地吐痰和攀摘花朵。
⒊宣传脱贫攻坚带来的变化(如：人居环境的改善；教育支助的获得等)。
⒋弘扬中华传统文化，积极传播正能量，不信谣传谣，不说有损国家的话语。
提示词：respect 尊敬 publicize 宣传 the policy of accurate poverty alleviation 脱贫攻坚 living
conditions 人居环境 education support 教育支助 carry forward 弘扬 traditional culture 传统
文化 positive thoughts 正能量 rumour 谣言 be harmful to 有损于
Hello, boys and girls. It’s reported that many schools in Tonrgen are holding activities about
Behaving Yourself and Improving Your Civilization Quality. As students, what should we do? First,
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In short, wherever we are, we must be strict with ourselves in our words and behaviors. Try to
be a good student with civilization quality. Thanks a lot.
【答案】Hello, boys and girls. It’s reported that many schools in Tonrgen are holding activities
about Behaving Yourself and Improving Your Civilization Quality. As students, what should we do?
First, we should respect our teachers, parents and the old. We ought to be polite and honest.
It’s always good to be kind, friendly and helpful to others. What’s more, we must obey the traffic
rules. When we go out, we shouldn’t throw litter about or spit here and there. We’d better not
pick up flowers. In addition, we should publicize the changes that the policy of accurate poverty
alleviation has brought us, such as the improvement of living conditions, the acquirement of
education support and so on. Last but not least, we should carry forward traditional Chinese culture
and spread actively positive thoughts. We can’t believe rumour or spread it. We can’t say the
words which are harmful to our country.
In short, wherever we are, we must be strict with ourselves in our words and behaviors. Try to
be a good student with civilization quality. Thanks a lot.【解析】
短文第一句提示要做的是 First, we should respect our teachers, parents and the old. We ought to
be polite and honest. It’s always good to be kind, friendly and helpful to others.尊敬老师和
家长老人，有礼貌；接着介绍要遵守交通规则 What’s more, we must obey the traffic rules.；改善生
活条件；脱贫攻坚是改善居住环境的办法；we should carry forward traditional Chinese culture and
spread actively positive thoughts.提到要传播正能量，改进思想。最后一段总结说明从言行两方面要求
我们做文名学生。
十七、贵州黔东南等
X、书面表达．（满分 20 分）
41．（20 分）每年的 6 月 6 日是我国的"爱眼日"，可见保护中小学生的视力非常重要，为此，学校将在英语
文化节期间举行一场"爱眼日"英语演讲比赛．请你写一篇英语演讲稿，谈谈你对保护视力重要性的认识
和建议．
内容：1．保护视力的重要性（请写 1 点）
2．对保护视力的建议：
（1）阅读时注意用眼卫生；
（2）少用电子产品；
（3）常看绿色植物；
（4）做眼保健操；
（5）多做户外运动．
要求：1．结构完整，表达通顺，语言规范，书写清晰；
2．文中不得出现任何真实的人名，学校名等信息；
3．词数 80 左右．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
参考词汇：
Sight Day"爱眼日"； electronic products 电子产品； eye﹣protecting exercises 眼保健操
Dear friends． June 6 is our country's Sight Day ___________．
Thank you！
【解答】Dear friends．
June 6 is our country's Sight Day．As we know，"Eyes are the windows of the soul"． Everyone
understands the importance of the eyes．（保护视力的重要性）But now more and more students are
getting near﹣sighted．So how can we protect our eyes ？Here is some advice on how to protect
our eyes．
First，we should be cautious on the health of using eyes．We should not keep your eyes working
for a long time． While reading ，we should keep the book about a foot away from us．After reading
for an hour or two ， we had better have a rest by looking at the plants in the
distance．Second，using less electronic products is a good way to protect our eyes．【高分句
型一】 Besides，we should see green plants as often as possible．Finally， remember to do
eye﹣protecting exercises or do more outdoor sports ， which will help us keep good
eyesight．【高分句型二】 （对保护视力的几条建议）
十八、大庆
VIII. Writing
A
你即将成为一名高中生，应该怎样完善自己？请以第一人称“I”为主语，用完整的句子表述下列要点。
提示：
1.遵守学校规则
2.养成良好的学习习惯
3.学会分享，互相帮助
4.在家为父母做些家务活
5.保护环境、积极参加学校活动。
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A
71.【答案】At first, I will follow the school rules. I will go to school on time and I won't
smoke.
【解析】follow the school rules 遵守学校规则，需要列举一两个事例来加以说明，比如：按时到校，不
吸烟。句子的时态为一般将来时。故答案为 At first, I will follow the school rules. I will go to school
on time and I won't smoke。
72.【答案】It's also important to have good study habits. I will listen to the teachers carefully
in class.
【解析】good study habits 良好的学习习惯，先说一个好的学习习惯很重要，然后列举一个事例加以说明，
如上课认真听讲。句子的时态为一般将来时。故答案为 It's also important to have good study
habits. I will listen to the teachers carefully in class。
73.【答案】And I am going to learn to share things with my friends and help each other.
【解析】learn to do sth.学习做某事，share things with my friends 与朋友一起分享，help each other
相互帮助。句子的时态为一般将来时。两者句式“will+动词原形”和“be going to 结构”可以交替使用。
故答案为 And I am going to learn to share things with my friends and help each other。
74.【答案】At home, I will try to help my parents do some housework because they are very tired
every day.
【解析】do some housework 做家务活，try to do 设法做某事，help sb. do sth.帮助某人做某事。使用
because 解释帮助父母的原因。故答案为 At home, I will try to help my parents do some housework
because they are very tired every day。
75.【答案】I will protect the environment and take an active part in school activities.
【解析】protect the environment 保护环境，take an active part in 积极参加。句子的时态为一般将来时。
故答案为 I will protect the environment and take an active part in school activities。
B
76. 文娱、体育、户外等丰富多彩的课外活动为我们的生活增添了生机和活力。请以"After-class
Activities Make My Life Colorful"为题，为校园专栏写一篇英文稿件。
内容包括：1.简要描述你参加过的一项课外活动。
2.该课外活动给你带来的收获及感受(交朋友;放松自我)。
写作要求：
1.词数 80 词左右；开头已写好，不记人总词数。
2 文章不得出现真实的学校名称与姓名
After-class Activities Make My Life Colorful
Nowadays after-class activities are becoming more and more important_______________
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【答案】
After-class Activities Make My Life Colorful
Nowadays, after-school activities are becoming more and more important. There are many
different kinds of activities, for example, arts and sports. I joined a volleyball club last year.
I am used to playing volleyball after school.
In the volleyball club, I' ve made lots of friends. We often play volleyball after school.
Whether it is hot or cold, we never stop playing it. I feel happy while playing volleyball. And
it is also a good way to relax myself. I think I will continue to play volleyball after school
in the future.
All in all, after-school activities make my life more colorful and meaningful.
【解析】这是一篇话题作文，让我们写一篇关于 After-class Activities Make My Life Colorful 的英文
稿件，并鼓励同学们积极参加课外活动，这需要我们发挥英语思维，将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达
出来。写作需要用第一人称，注意各种时态的交替运用。内容要点包括：简要描述你参加过的一项课外活
动，时态用一般过去时；你参加过的课外活动给你带来的收获和感受，时态以一般现在时为主和一般将来
时为主；最后总结自己的心得体会。高分句型一：I am used to playing volleyball after school. 我习惯
放学后打排球。be used to doing sth.习惯于做某事。高分句型二：And it is also a good way to relax
myself. 这也是放松自己的好方法。动词不定式 to relax myself 用作后置定语。高分句型三：All in all, after-school activities make my life more colorful and meaningful. 总之，课外活动使我的生活更
加丰富多彩，更有意义。more colorful and meaningful 用作 my life 的宾语补足语。
十九、哈尔滨
80.书面表达
假如你是英语校报的编辑李平，请你根据以下信息，给新入学的学弟学妹们写一封信，欢迎他们来到新学
校，并对他们在学校如何做合格的中学生提出建议。
写作要点：
1. 欢迎他们来到新学校。
2. 介绍学校：
（1）课程有趣；
（2）有多名外教；
（3）活动丰富。
3. 请对他们在学校如何做合格的（qualified）中学生提出具体建议。
写作要求：
1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
3. 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
4. 至少 80 词。
Dear new friends，
It's my pleasure to write you this letter.
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Best wishes！
Yours，Li Ping
【答案】Dear new friends,
It's my pleasure to write you this letter. Welcome to our new school. Our school is clean
and beautiful. The classrooms are big and bright. All the subjects are very interesting. I am
good at English. There are many foreign teachers in our school. In our spare time, we can communicate
with them and improve our oral English skills. Our after class activities are also rich and colorful.
There are different clubs in our school. You can take part in all kinds of activities you like.
Now you are going to be middle school students. How to be a qualified middle school student?
At first, you should follow the school rules. It's also important to have good study habits. You
must listen to the teachers carefully in class. I think you should learn to share things with
your classmates and help each other.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ping
【解析】
这是一篇书信作文，内容是关于学校生活的。首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；提示内容就是本
文的写作要点。这些要点构成写作的基本框架。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发
挥想象提出自己的建议。不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态来写，
要注意主谓一致等问题。在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、
因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。
二十、龙东地区
第三部分 书面表达
Ⅵ. Writing
（注意，文中不能出现考生真实姓名，校名，否则不得分）
81.假如你是 Henry，昨天下午在学校打篮球时伤了左脚，医生让你卧床休息两天，因此向老师（Mr.Read）
请假。
Dear Mr. Read,
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【答案】Dear Mr. Read,
I’m sorry I can’t go to school today. I hurt my left leg when I played/was playing basketball
at school yesterday afternoon. The doctor told me to stay in bed for two days. So I want to ask
for two days off. /two day’s leave. Thank you.
Henry
【解析】
这篇作文要求我们给老师写一张请假条。请假条属于应用文的一种，在日常生活中比较常见，比较贴近学
生们的实际生活。写作时，应向老师说明请假的具体原因，因为是写给老师的，且是向老师表示请求，故
应注意语气要委婉。审题可知，这篇短文中应使用一般过去时和一般现在时两种时态，注意谓语动词的适
当形式，分清动词原形和动词的过去式，尤其不规则动词的过去式形式。语句要通顺，句式结构应完整，
符合英语的表达习惯。可以简单句为主，叙述清晰、简洁。可以使用一些平时积累的好的短语和句型，提
高作文档次。
82.话题作文：构建和谐社会，创建美丽校园是我们每一名中学生的责任，但在我们的身边经常看到一些不
文明的行为。请以“How to be a polite student”为题，谈谈在校内和校外如何告别不文明行为，做一名优
秀的中学生。
提示词： harmonious society（和谐社会）， behavior（行为）
【答案】How to be a polite student
As a student, it’s our duty to make a harmonious society. But we can often see the impolite behavior
around us. What should we do to be a polite student?
At school, we should not only study hard but also follow the school rules. We are supposed to
help others who are in trouble instead of troubling them in public. Also, we must respect our
teachers and the old people.
I think only when we all try our best can we be a polite student. Let’s take action now.
【解析】
这是一篇话题作文，要求学生们以 How to be a polite student 为题，谈一谈校内外应如何告别不文明行为，做一名优秀的中学生。文章中并没有规定写哪些内容，只给出了两个提示词，学生们在写作中要用上。
文章的具体内容应主要由学生们联想实际生活，发挥想象力，进行拓展和补充。审题可知，短文应包括以
下内容：首先点明在我们周围仍存在很大不文明行为，从而引出文章的主题；接下来是文章的主体，即介
绍如何抵制这些不文明行为，作为一名学生应该怎么做；最后发出自己的希望或者呼吁，让大家都来做文
明的中学生。写作时应注意：首先文章内容应充实、完整，符合题目要求，可以适当拓展，但你要紧扣文
章主题。其次应注意英语句式的表达，不能按照汉语思维逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语。应从句子的整体结
构出发，写完整的句子。简单句、并列句、复合句交替使用，为提升作文水平，可以使用较复杂的结构，
如非谓语动词、被动语态等。同时注意语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯、自然，表达流畅。
【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，谈论了如何做一名文明的中学生。短文有以下几
个优点：首先文章内容完整、充实，符合题目要求。短文共分三段：第一段引导文章主题；第二段具体介
绍了如何做一名文明的中学生；第三段重申主题，发出呼吁。结构完整，层次清晰。其次短文中使用了正
确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确，语言通顺。句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯，以简单句结构
为主，也使用了宾语从句、状语从句等复合句。表达清楚、自然。最后短文中使用了一些较高级的词汇和
好的句型，如 As a student, it’s our duty to make a harmonious society.、At school, we should not
only study hard but also follow the school rules、We are supposed to help others who are in trouble
instead of troubling them in public.、I think only when we all try our best can we be a polite
student.等等。
83.图示作文：仔细观察图片描述，展开合理想象，然后写一篇短文。
要求：1. 话题作文或图示作文任选其一。
2. 词数：80-100 之间。
3. 字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。____________________________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】Last Sunday morning, Henry told his dog to send some letters for him. It was easy for
his dog, because it often helped Henry do that. Then it ran to the post office quickly.
A moment later, the dog came back with a letter in his mouth. Henry was very surprised when he
saw it. He looked at the letter carefully, and then he found something was wrong with it. Henry
realized he had made a mistake—He was so careless that he forgot to stick a stamp on this letter.
Finally he thanked his dog.
【解析】
这是一篇看图作文，要求学生们仔细观察图片，并展开合理想象，将图片中的内容用正确的英语表达出来。
写作时应先仔细浏览图片，弄清楚每个图片想要传达的信息，并将其串联成一个完整的故事。审题可知：
短文应该是记叙文，讲述一件已经发生的事情，因此整篇文章应使用一般过去时，注意谓语动词变为过去
式，尤其注意不规则动词的变化；人称应为第三人称。写作时应注意：首先内容应符合图片描述，可以展
开合理的想象，但应符合图片传达的信息。其次应注意英语句式的表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能按照汉
语思维，逐词翻译。应从句子的整体结构出发，选择适当的句型、短语和词汇，可以简单句结构为主，穿
插并列句和复合句，提升作文档次。同时语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文章内容连贯、表达流畅。
【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者将图片中的这个故事用正确的英语讲述了出来。作文有以下几个
优点：首先文章内容符合图片描述的信息，叙述完整、清晰，逻辑清楚，文章中有事情发生的时间、涉及
的人物，按照事情发展的顺序讲述，比较有条理。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，文章以第三人称、
一般过去时为主来叙述，符合表达需要，语法规范，用词准确。句式结构完整，以简单句为主，也使用了
宾语从句、状语从句等复合句，调整了文章节奏，提升了作文档次。文章中使用了一些较好的句型和短语，
如 Last Sunday morning, Henry told his dog to send some letters for him.、 It was easy for his
dog, because it often helped Henry do that、Henry was very surprised when he saw it. 、He looked
at the letter carefully, and then he found something was wrong with it.、He was so careless that
he forgot to stick a stamp on this letter 等等。二十一、齐齐哈尔
Ⅵ. 书面表达
（注意：文中不能出现考生真实姓名、校名和老师名，否则不给分）
81.假如你叫 Tom，和 Jack 是同学。请用英语写一则邀请函，邀请他于本周五晚上 7 点来你家参加你的生日
聚会，并告诉他你家的地址（参看下图）。
提示：1 聚会内容：唱歌、吃生日蛋糕、玩游戏；
2. 内容要涵盖提示中的信息，字数 30-50 词。
Dear Jack,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
I think we will have a good time
Tom
【答案】Dear Jack,
I’ll have a birthday party at 7:00 p. m. this Friday. I’d like to invite you to my home. Let
me tell you the way to my home. Walk along green Street and take the second crossing on the
left/turn left at the second crossing At the party, we can sing, eat a birthday cake and play
games. I think we will have a good time.
Tom
【解析】
假如你叫 Tom，和 Jack 是同学。请用英语写一则邀请函，邀请他于本周五晚上 7 点来你家参加你的生日聚
会，并告诉他你家的地址（参看下图）。虽然主要内容已经列好，但是很多内容都需要我们自己去充实，让
它变得完整、合理，内容丰富，这就需要花费我们的想象力，以及我们平时积累的知识。另外，写作时，
还需注意语句间的衔接，使文意连贯，表达流畅。
【点睛】这是一篇比较不错的作文。文中需要发挥的内容写的不错，一些比较好的句型，如 I’d like to
invite you to my home. Let me tell you the way to my home. Walk along green Street and take
.the second crossing on the left/turn left at the second crossing 等。
82.初中生活，精彩纷呈。回首过去你是否感到充实和快乐，展望未来你是否对高中生活充满期待，请结合
以下提示谈谈你的感悟。
提示：1. 初中阶段你有哪些收获；
2. 初中阶段你有哪些遗憾或未实现的愿望；
3. 你对未来的高中生活有哪些计划或打算。
要求：1. 80-100 词，首句已给出，不计入总词数；2. 字迹工整，语言流畅，表达准确，逻辑清晰。
The life of my junior high school is coming to an end.
____________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】The life of my junior high school is coming to an end. Since I came to the junior high
school, I’ve gained confidence and happiness. With the help of our teachers, I’ve learned how
to be a good person as well as plenty of knowledge. I’ve also made some good friends.
However, there is still something that I feel sorry about. Because I was busy with my schoolwork,
I couldn’t keep on reading. Once in a while, I felt so upset and anxious that I quarreled with
my parents.
In the future, I’ll try to make good use of time and spend more free time reading books. Meanwhile,
I’ll get on well with my parents. I believe I’ll have a happy and colorful life.
【解析】
这是一篇提纲类作文，初中生活，精彩纷呈。回首过去你是否感到充实和快乐，展望未来你是否对高中生
活充满期待，请结合以下提示谈谈你的感悟，动笔前应先认真阅读材料，围绕所给材料组织内容，确定主
要短语，句式等问题。通过阅读材料可知这篇短文主要使用的人称就是第一人称，时态为一般现在时态，
这方面需要注意的问题比较少。动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写出关键单词。写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以适当使用连接词
【点睛】这篇短文不使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。.如 With the help of our teachers,
I’ve learned how to be a good person as well as plenty of knowledge. I’ve also made some good
friends.等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。
二十二、黑龙江绥化
七、写作
95.请仔细观察下面的图片，并根据所给提示和要求写一篇 80 词左右的短文。
提示：
（1） What are the boys doing in the pictures?
（2）What do you think of them?
（3） As a student, what else (其他的) can you do to become an excellent teenager (优秀的青少
年)?
要求：
（1） 短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。
（2） 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整。
（3） 文中不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名、地名等）。
【答案】
The boy in Picture I is visiting sick children in the hospital, and the other boy is helping
do the dishes in Picture 2. Both of them are good boys. I should learn from them. I can also do
many other things to be an excellent teenager.
In daily life, I must follow the rules in public. At school, I am supposed to study hard and
respect teachers. It’s necessary for me to listen to the teachers carefully in class. At home,
it’s my duty to care for parents and understand them. When my friends are in trouble, I should
give them a hand and help each other.
If I try my best, I am sure I can become an excellent teenager.
【解析】
本文属于图画作文，描绘图片的内容并评价他们，最后讲述如何成为优秀的青少年。根据要表达的内容确
定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。
亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、
主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如 both of them, learn from, daily life, follow the rules, be
supposed to, it is adj for sb to do sth, it’s duty to, be in trouble, give sb a hand 等，增强
逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。
【点睛】写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：
认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。
构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放
的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。
初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及
简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自
然。
修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构
是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
二十三、内蒙古包头
第二部分 书面表达(满分 15 分)假定你是李华，请给你的笔友 Alan 写封邮件，告诉他今年你将去他所在的城市游玩，并制定了旅行计
划。你想征求他的意见，同时询问他是否可以接机。
邮件还应包括以下内容：
Your arrive time 10:30 a.m. July 2
Your travel Plan go to concert
go camping
…
Means of transport(交通方式) during
your visit
by bike, by bus…
注意：1.词数 90 左右，开头和结尾部分已经写好，不计入总词数；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容。
Dear Alan,
How is it going?
____________________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
One Possible Version
Dear Alan,
How is it going?
I'm thinking of taking a trip to your city this summer vacation, I wonder if you will meet
me at the airport at 10:30 am, July 2, since it is my first visit there.
Besides, I’ve made a travel plan, including enjoying music at a concert, going camping and
visiting some places of interest. I've heard that there are some amazing sights in your city!
Would you please give me some advice? Either traveling by bike or by bus would suit me fine. It’s
environmentally friendly. Do you have any plans for the coming vacation?Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
二十四、内蒙古呼伦贝尔
71.书面表达
对于中学生在学校是否可以使用手机，不同的学生有不同的看法。请根据下面表格中的提示写一篇短
文。
观点 赞成 反对
理由
1. 易于和父母及朋友保持联系
2. 空余时间可以听音乐
……
1. 浪费时间
2. 对眼睛有害
……
你的观点及建议（至少用 2 至 3 句话进行阐述）
要求：1. 文章应包括所有要点并围绕要点适当发挥；
2. 文中不能出现真实的人名、校名和地名等；
3. 词数 90 词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Nowadays, more and more teenagers use mobile phones. Can middle school students use mobile
phones at school? Different students have different opinions about it. _______
【答案】Nowadays, more and more teenagers use mobile phones. Can middle school students use mobile
phones at school? Different students have different opinions about it.
Some students think they can use mobile phones at school. First, using mobile phones makes it
easy to keep in touch with their parents or friends. Second, they can also take photos or listen
to music to relax themselves in their free time. Besides, they can get information on mobile phones.
For example, they can look up new words and expressions.
However, some students disagree. They think using mobile phones at school is a waste of time. Many students spend too much time on games and QQ. It’s bad for their eyes and it also has a
bad effect on study.
In my opinion, we’d better not use mobile phones at school because it’s bad for our health and
study. We should spend more time on our study instead of using mobile phones.
【解析】
1.题干解读：该题目属于议论文写作，写作时要摆事实，讲道理。在写作时应承接短文开头；第二段把支
持用手机一方的观点和论据摆出来，进行论证；第三段是反对使用者的观点和论据；最后发表自己的看法。
2.例文点评：例文采用总分总的行文格式；时态采用一般现在时，论证时采用摆事实，讲道理结合；摆事
实时，先主后次，按顺序讲道理，用 first…, second, besides。转折连词 however 联系双方不同观点。最
后 We should spend more time on our study instead of using mobile phones.运用情态动词 should 使
文章语气委婉。
3.高分亮点：
短语：more and more；look up；keep in touch with； In my opinion；be bad for； instead of。
句型：using mobile phones makes it easy to keep in touch with；
句型 they can also take photos or listen to music to relax themselves in their free time.。
【点睛】首先要认真阅读题意要求，对于提示内容要仔细分析，从赞成和反对两方面进行论述。如赞成者
的观点的论据要充分，反对者的论据要摆事实，讲道理，列举害处。最后一定要表明自己对这一现象的看
法，并说明理由。最后提出希望。
二十五、内蒙古呼和浩特
81.初级写作：
临近毕业，学校在学习小组内开展了初中阶段自评和组评活动，假设你是 Rainbow 小组的组长 Zhang Hong,
请你为你的组员 Li Ming 进行综合素质的评价，写一份素质报告。
内容包括：1、他的爱好；
2、他的优点(两条)；
3、他的缺点或存在的问题；
4、你对他的建议(两条)。
要求：1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2. 要点必须包括所有相关信息，并适当发挥，但不得出现真实班级、姓名等；
3. 词数：不少于 80 词 (所给内容不计入总词数)。Li Ming is a member of my team called Rainbow.
【答案】Li Ming is a member of my team called Rainbow. Generally speaking, he is a warm-hearted
and outgoing boy. He is always ready to help others without asking for anything in return. He
can also get on well with teachers and classmates. In his spare time, he likes reading books on
history, so he knows a lot of knowledge about history.
But as a famous saying goes “Every coin has two sides”, sometimes he doesn’t work hard enough
on his lessons. I advise him to spend more time on the subjects from now on. What’s more, he’d
better answer questions in class actively so that he can make great progress.
I’m sure if he can try harder to improve himself. He’ll be an excellent student soon.
【解析】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如 a member of，warm-hearted and outgoing，
be ready to do，help others，ask for，in return，get on well with，a lot of，advise sb. to
do，spend more time on sth.，from now on，so that，make great progress 等。而非谓语动词结构 He
is always ready to help others without asking for anything in return.和 In his spare time, he likes
reading books on history, so he knows a lot of knowledge about history./ What’s more, he’d better
answer questions in class actively so that he can make great progress./ I’m sure if he can try
harder to improve himself.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在
学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条
理。
【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开
思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单
词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
二十六、内蒙古赤峰
八、书面表达（共 20 分）
你校正在开展主题为“What should a good student be like?”的讨论，校园小记者采访了一些者师
和家长。请根据采访内容，结合自己的观点，用英语写一篇短文与大家分享。要求
1、用上表格中所有要点,可适当发挥,100 词左右（短文开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
2.不得引用或抄袭试卷前面阅读材料中的语句，否则不予赋分。
3.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名、地名，否则不予 JR 分。
4.请在答题卡指定位置作答，否则不予赋分。
What should a good student be like?
Teachers and parents have different opinions about what a good student should be like.
As for teachers, they think________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
参考答案
1．Teachers and parents have different opinions about what a good student should be like. As for
teachers, they think that on the one hand, we should love our country and follow the school rules.
On the other hand, we should get on well with others and treat others politely.
As for parents, we are supposed to be not only healthy and happy but also kind and confident.
As far as I am concerned, to be a good students, we should protect the environment because we
only have one earth.
Even if there are many different ideas about what should a good student be like, we need to do
what we should do.
【解析】
本文属于话题作文，主要讲述不同的人认为一个好学生应该是什么样子的。根据要表达的内容确定并准确
运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。
亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、
主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如 on the one hand...on the other hand、follow the school
rules、get on well with、as for、be supposed to、not only...but also...、as far as I'm concerned
•
健
康
快
乐
•
善
良
自
信等，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。
【点睛】
首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的
表达，例如 follow the rules，get on well with, be supposed to 等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写
作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的
连词，如：on the one hand...on the other hand, as for,not only...but also, as far as I am concerned
等，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法
结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
二十七、重庆 A
IX. 书面表达。（满分 20 分）
你正在组织一项暑假期间到山区为期一周的游学和帮扶活动。作为发起人，请你写一篇发言稿，在你
校“英语时光”广播中号召更多的同学参加。
要求：
1. 80—100 词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考信息：
1. 活动缘由（孤独、帮扶、游学……）
2. 活动构想（时间、地点、内容……）
3. ……
Hello, everybody. I am planning a summer trip called “Be a Kid in the Mountain”._________
Thank you!
【答案】
Hello, everybody. I am planning a summer trip called "Be a Kid in the Mountains". It will
provide us with a meaningful week staying with the students in the mountains.
As many of their parents leave for the city development, these students might feel lonely
and some may even find it hard to go on studying. So we can bring them some school things like
books and pens for their study, and prepare some interesting stories to share. In the daytime, we can go hiking and do some teamwork. In the evening, we can do such activities as popular games
and group dance around the fire.
Isn’t that exciting? Come and join us. Lets be "a kid in the mountains". I believe it will
bring sunshine to the mountains as well as more confidence to us. Thank you!
【解析】本文主要用了一般将来时，运用了大量的词组，如：provide...with, leave for, feel lonely, go
on doing,in the day time,go hiking, such...as, as well as,高分句型有：find it hard to go on studying
等。
二十八、重庆 B
62.书面表达。
假如你参加了学校组织的“走近乡村”寒假社会实践活动。请根据要求，向某英语网站投稿，分享活动经
历。
要求：1.80~120 词，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考信息：
Have you ever got close to the countryside and had a special experience? Let me share mine!
【答案】Have you ever got close to the countryside and had a special experience? Let me share
mine.
During the winter vacation my classmates and I joined in the school activity “Get close to
the countryside”.
,We live in the famers’ homes. Their great living conditions surprised us a lot. Do you know
where vegetables come from? We got the answer when working with the farmers. Besides, we learned
about other plants and some farm animals. How interesting!
We experienced the life in the countryside, learned something that we couldn’t get from books
before, and felt the wonderful changes of the countryside. We realized how hard the farmers worked
and decided to save food. We were happy to see the farmers’ life was getting better and better.
We really hope we’ll have another activity like that this winter vacation!
【解析】
本文属于一篇图表作文，根据表格提供的信息来介绍“走近乡村”寒假社会实践活动的经历。人称为第一
人称，时态主要为一般过去时。动笔前先要注意认真阅读材料确定写作内容；文章必须包括要点中所给的
信息，既要写活动的过程，又要总结活动感受与收获。并补充两条个人的观点。表达要符合英语习惯，注
意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，
表达具有条理性。多种句式交叉使用来丰富文章的文采。高分句型：1.We experienced the life in the
countryside, learned something that we couldn’t get from books before. 我们经历了农村的生活，
学到了一些我们以前从书中得不到的东西。that we couldn’t get from books before.是定语从句，修饰不
定代词 something。2. We really hope we’ll have another activity like that this winter vacation!
我们真的希望今年寒假还能有这样的活动！hope 后面是省略 that 的宾语从句。
二十九、安徽
Ⅺ．书面表达
66.假定你是李华，你的英国笔友 Mike 最近因视力减退而感到不安，请你用英文给他写封电子邮件，
谈谈你在保护视力方面的一些做法。要点如下：
1.经常做户外活动；
2.很少用电子产品；
3.坚持做眼保健操；
4. ......
注意:1.词数 80-100；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.文中不能出现与本人相关的信息；
4.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计人总词数。Dear Mike
I'm sorry to learn that your eyesight is getting weaker.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
I’m sorry to learn that your eyesight is getting weaker. I’d like to share with you some
ways of protecting eyesight in my daily life.
At school, I often go out of the classroom to play with my classmates or do physical exercise
during the breaks. In my free time, I also try hard to avoid using the mobile phone or computer.
You know, the light they give off is harmful to our eyes. Besides, doing eye exercises plays
an important role in relaxing my tired eyes. Lastly, I usually have my eyes examined every term
to make sure my eyes stay healthy.
I hope you’ll find my ways helpful.
Yours,
【解析】
这篇作文要求我们以李华的身份，给自己的英国笔友 Mike 写信，给他介绍一下你在保护视力方面的做法。
审题可知，这篇短文应使用一般现在是，第一人称来叙述，内容应包括：首先讲述题目中 Mike 的视力减退
问题，并引出文章的主题；然后具体介绍自己在保护视力方面的做法，这一部分是文章的主体可以按照题
目中所列的内容进行介绍，并对第四条进行补充；最后提出自己的希望或祝愿。写作时应注意：短文按内
容表达的需要，分成三段，每一段一个主题；内容应包括题目中的所有要点，不能遗漏；课根据表达需要，
增加细节内容，使文章更加充实、丰富。其次应注意文章的表达，不能根据汉语思维逐词翻译，句式应符
合英语的表达习惯。句子结构应完整，可以简单句结构为基础，穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复杂句式和
结构的使用，提升作文档次。同时语句之间使用恰当的衔接成分，使行文连贯，表达流畅。
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，对 Mike 介绍了自己在保护视力方面的一些做法。短文
有以下几个特点：首先文章内容完整，包括了题目中要求的所有内容，没有遗漏要点。短文结构清晰，共分成三段：第一段将题目中的写作背景进行了介绍，并引出了文章的话题；第二段具体介绍了自己的做法，
这一段是文章的中心，所占篇幅最大。作者按照题目的提示进行表述，并对细节进行了拓展；第三段提出
了自己的希望。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确，句式结构完整，符合英语的
表达习惯。句式结构比较复杂，使用了很多较高级的表达方式，包括动词短语、介词短语、宾语从句、状
语从句、非谓语动词等。如 I’d like to share with you some ways of protecting eyesight in my daily
life、At school, I often go out of the classroom to play with my classmates or do physical exercise
during the breaks. 、 In my free time, I also try hard to avoid using the mobile phone or
computer.、Besides, doing eye exercises plays an important role in relaxing my tired eyes.等等。
三十、福建
71.书面表达
91. 假定你是李华，收到英国笔友 Harry 的邮件，获悉他在机器人制作比赛中获奖。请根据邮件内容给他
回复。词数 80 左右。
Dear Li Hua,
I’m glad to tell you that I’ve just won the the first place in a robot- making competition.
I love robots! They bring me great fun.
What do yo think of robots? Do you want to have your own
robot? Why? Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours
参考词汇：congratulation 祝贺
注意事项：
1. 回复邮件时可适当发挥，邮件格式已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。
Dear Harry,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear harry
Congratulations! How glad I am to share your good news!
I think robots are helpful in many ways. And in the future they’ll play more important roles
in our daily life. Plus, I’m dying to have a robot of my own. I can have it take care of my
grandparents when we are not at home. You see, my grandparents are old and cannot move easily.
It can help them do some housework such as cooking, cleaning the house and so on.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
本文属于应用文体，就英国笔友哈利在机器人制作比赛中获奖写一封回信。根据要表达的内容确定并准确
运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。
亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、
主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如 play roles in, daily life, be dying to, take care of, help sb
do, such as, and so on 以及 how glad I am 中 how 引导的感叹句，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，
用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。
写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：
认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。
构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放
的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。
初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及
简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自
然。
修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构
是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
三十一、海南Ⅺ.写作（满分 15 分）
42．（15 分）据悉，我国青少年的近视率居全球第一，70%的学生有视力方面的问题．为引起广大青少年的
重视，某英语报刊正在开展以" Saving Our Eyesight"为题的征文活动．请根据以下
提示写一篇短文投稿，分析造成青少年近视的原因并提出保护视力的合理建议．
要求：1．语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范．
2．所有提示须全部用上，并作适当发挥．
3．文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名．
4.80 词左右（文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）．
Saving Our Eyesight
As the saying goes， "Eyes are the window to the soul（心灵 ） "However， 70% of us have
poor eyesight． What has caused this problem？ ___________．
In a word, lets take care of our eyes so that we can see our bright future．
【解答】
Saving Our Eyesight
As the saying goes， "Eyes are the window to the soul（心灵 ） "However， 70% of us have
poor eyesight． What has caused this problem？ The main reason is the bad habits of using
eyes．For example， many of us read in wrong positions，such as reading in bed or keeping our
eyes too close to the book．Besides，taking less exercise can also cause poor eyesight． What's
more， some of us spend too much time playing computer games or watching TV． It's bad for our
eyes． So how can we protect our eyes ？Here is some advice on how to protect our eyes．（造成青少年近视的原因）
First，we should be cautious on the health of using eyes．We should not keep our eyes working
for a long time． While reading ，we should keep the book about a foot away from us．After reading
for an hour or two ， we had better have a rest by looking at the plants in the
distance．Second，using less electronic products is a good way to protect our eyes．【高分句
型一】 Besides，we should see green plants as often as possible．Finally， remember to do
eye﹣protecting exercises or do more outdoor sports ， which will help us keep good
eyesight．【高分句型二】 （对保护视力的几条建议）
In a word， let's take care of our eyes so that we can see our bright future．
三十二、天津
九、书面表达（本大题共 15 分）
44．（15 分）假如你是晨光中学的学生李华，平时坚持用英语写日记．请根据以下要点，描述你星期三放学
乘地铁回家路上看到的事情，并表达自己的想法．
（l） 一个男孩不舒服，开始呕吐，一位穿着漂亮的女士帮着擦拭地面，男孩表达感谢．
（2）地铁到站，有人挤向座位，有人下不去车，有人因此争吵．
（3）你认为…．
参考词汇： 开始呕吐 begin to vomit
挤向座位 push towards the seat
争吵 have a quarrel
要求：
（1）词数：80～100 个．
（2）日记格式和开头已给出，不计入总词数
（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥
Wednesday
When I took the underground back home from school ， I noticed
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【解析】高分句型一：
She helped him clean the floor．
help sb do sth 帮助某人做某事．这句话意为：她帮助他打扫干净地面．
高分句型二：
If all of us can do in this way，our world will be more beautiful．
If 引导的条件状语从句，遵循"主将从现"原则，即主句用一般将来时，从句用一般现在时态．这句话意
为：如果我们所有人都这样做，我们的世界将会变得更加美好．
【答案】Wednesday
When I took the underground back home from school， I noticed two things around me．（开
篇点明题意）
The first thing I met is about a boy．The boy didn't feel well．He began to vomit．A beautiful
girl saw the boy．She helped him clean the floor【高分句型一】．Then the boy thanked her for
helping ． The second thing is about the underground ． When the underground got to the
station ． a lot of people pushed towards the seat ． So some people couldn't get off the
underground．Some had a quarrel because of this．（介绍碰到的两件事情）
In my opinion，The girl did a good thing and we appreciated her action in this society．As
for the underground．It shows your quality there．If you wait in a line，others will get off the
underground easily．If all of us can do in this way，our world will be more beautiful【高分句
型二】．（表达自己的观点结尾）
三十三、北京
从下面两个题目中任选一题，根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于 50 词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不
计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
题目①
假如你是李华,你们学校正在开展“安全月”宣传活动，倡议大家制作关于安全教育的主题海报，你们班交
换生 Peter 给你发邮件询问相关事情。请用英语回复一封邮件，告诉他海报上交的时间，并分享你设计海报的一些想法。
提示词语: design，safety rule，careful，protect，picture
提示问题: When should you hand in the poster?
What would you like to share with Peter about designing the poster?
Dear Peter,
I'm glad to receive your email .
If there is anything more that I can help with, please let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Peter,
I'm glad to receive your email. As it is required，you are supposed to hand in the poster before
next Friday.
Being your close friend，I am extremely willing to share some ideas about designing the poster
with you. First and foremost，the basic safety rules are of great importance，which should be
included in your poster. In the second place，following the safety rules is so meaningful and
crucial that you had better remind your readers of its significance and advise them to be careful
both in and out of school. Last but by no means least，if I were you，I would add a few suggestions
about safety awareness，considering that better safe than sorry. In addition，it is a good idea
for you to draw a few pictures on your poster so as to make it more lively and acceptable.
If there is anything more that I can help with, please let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】这篇作文要求我们以李华的身份给 Peter 写一封邮件，告诉他关于制作关于安全教育的主题海报
的相关事宜。由题目中给出的提示问题可知，短文中应包括以下内容：首先告诉 Peter 海报上交的时间；
然后和他分享一些设计海报的想法。第二个内容应该是短文的主体。题目中并没有规定具体的写作内容，
学生们应联系自己的实际生活，展开合理的想象，将这些内容补充完整后，用正确的英语表达出来，这是
写作中的一个难点。短文应以一般现在时为主、第一、二人称来叙述。写作时应注意：首先要合理安排短
文内容，叙述应有层次、有条理。可以使用一些表示先后顺序的词或短语，如 First, Second, Last but not least 等等。题目中给出的提示词应该在短文中用上。其次应注意文章的表达，英语句式的结构与汉语是不
同的，因此不能根据汉语思维逐词翻译，应该从句式的整体考虑，先确定主干结构，然后添加修饰成分。
为提升作文档次，应注意使用一些高级词汇、短语以及复合句、非谓语动词等复杂结构。同时语句之间使
用恰当的连接成分，使文意上下连贯，表达流畅。
题目②
自律，即自我约束，是自我提升的一种途径，有助于我们成长，促使我们不断前行。
某英文网站正在开展以“自律”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈为了
增强自律意识，你做过什么，以及这样做给你带来的好处。
提示词语: self-disciplined(自律的)，plan，goal，habit，improve
提示问题: What did you do to be self-disciplined?
What benefits have you got from doing so?
Self-discipline plays an important role in our life .
【答案】Self-discipline plays an important role in our life. To be honest, I am a person who is
self-disciplined. I used to follow all kinds of rules and hand in the tasks appointed on time
at school. And I could not only respected all my teachers but also get on well with my classmates.
At home, I was able to balance housework and homework. I usually made a plan in advance to make
it easier to achieve my goal. After finishing all the task, I developed the habit of going to
bed early and going to bed early. In the society，I spared no effort to improve myself all the
time.
In a word. I have benefited a lot from being self-discipline. First of all, I have had many good
habits, which makes my life easier and more regular. Secondly, my life and my study have been
to high efficiency so that a lot of time has been saved. Thirdly, being self-disciplined has
prepared me for a better and brighter future. In the future, I will continue to be a self-disciplined
person.
【解析】这篇作文要求我们以李华的身份，用英语写一篇短文给某网站投稿，谈谈为了增强自律意识，你
做过什么，以及这样做给你带来的好处。根据题目中给出的问题可知，短文应包括以下内容：首先谈一谈
为了增强自律意识，你做过什么？然后谈谈这样做给你带来的好处。第一个内容应主要使用一般过去时；第二个内容应主要使用现在完成时。注意谓语动词的正确形式。题目中并没有规定具体的写作内容，学生
们应联系自己的实际生活，展开合理的想象，将这些内容补充完整后，用正确的英语表达出来，这是写作
中的一个难点。写作时应注意：首先注意内容的完整、充实，学生们可以结合自己的实际生活，写一写自
己平时的做法。注意叙述应有层次、有条理。其次应注意英语的表达问题，英语句式的结构与汉语是不同
的，因此不能根据汉语思维逐词翻译，应该从句式的整体考虑，先确定主干结构，然后添加修饰成分。为
提升作文档次，应注意使用一些高级词汇、短语以及复合句、非谓语动词等复杂结构。同时语句之间使用
恰当的连接成分，使文意上下连贯，表达流畅。
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