人教版必修4英语课件：Unit 1 Period 4 Writing.ppt

Unit 1　Women of achievement Period 4 　 Writing 人物介绍类记叙文的写作 写人的记叙文要求我们抓住人物的典型事例、典型行为来刻画人物的特征。行文中要把握好时间、地点、人物事件等记叙文的要素，写作过程中要注意以下几个方面： 1 ．人物的基本要素要全面立体地反映出来，对所描述的情节要突出重点，详略得当，不能记 “ 流水账 ” ； 2 ．写作时要根据需要采用顺叙、倒叙、插叙等不同的叙述方式，以突出重点信息； 3 ．写作过程中要注意人称的变化和时态的正确运用。描写人物的外貌、性格、兴趣等常用一般现在时，而描写人物的出生、教育背景、经历、事迹等常用一般过去时。 [ 常用表达 ] 1 ．年龄 He was born in 1996 and is 20 years old now. Born in 1986 ， he is now a thirty year old student ， studying in a university. He began to make a living at the age of 14/at an early age. In his fifties ， he began to feel his age. 2 ．外貌特征 She is a lovely girl ， with a round face ， big eyes ， white teeth and long wavy hair. He is a good looking man ， with a thick moustache. He is a tall man ， with blue eyes /deep set eyes/ bright eyes and blond hair /brown curly hair/ broad shoulders... 3 ．家庭背景、教育状况 He was born in a poor /rich family and lived a hard/ happy life... He started school in 1984 and left school 12 years later. He went to study in Peking University in 2004 and 4 years later he graduated. He got his bachelor ’ s (master ’ s ， doctor ’ s) degree in mathematics from... 4 ．生平事迹 He devoted his lifetime to... He received/obtained a prize in... He made up his mind to do... He made great progress in... 5 ．对人物的评价 He is one of the most important/outstanding persons... He is honored /regarded/ considered as... He makes great contributions to.../sets an example to... 你接受了一项写作任务，即为英语校报写一篇人物介绍。请根据以下信息，介绍一位传奇人物。 姓名： Allan Stewart 国籍：澳大利亚 出生日期： 1915 年 3 月 7 日 世界纪录： 2006 年以最高龄获得硕士学位 学习态度：挑战自我，永远为时不晚。 第一个学位： 1936 年获得 第二个学位：医学博士 第三个学位： 80 多岁时决定学习法律， 2006 年获得硕士学位。 第四个学位： 2012 年通过网络学习获得，善于合理安排学习时间，受到老师表扬。 参考词汇：硕士学位　 master ’ s degree 博士　 doctor [ 思路点拨 ] 这是一篇人物传记，属于记叙文的范畴。在描述过去的经历时，用一般过去时。对于其学习态度的描述，可以用一般现在时。在介绍其多个学位时，要注意时间的先后顺序，可以尝试用不同的句式表达。在写作过程中，要使用一些复杂的句型和过渡词，以使行文流畅。写作时要注意要点的整合。 [ 佳作展示 ] Version 1 ： Allan Stewart ， of Australian nationality ， was born on March 7th,1915.He got his first degree in 1936 ， and then his second degree － Doctor of Medicine.He believes that one is never too old to challenge himself.Therefore ， in his eighties ， he decided to study law ， and in 2006 he set a world record for becoming the oldest person to get a master ’ s degree.Because he was good at arranging his study time ， he got praise from his teacher ， and in 2012 he managed to get his fourth degree by online learning. Version 2 ： Born on March 7th,1915 ， Allan Stewart ， of Australian nationality ， became the oldest person to obtain a master ’ s degree in the world in 2006.He believes that one is never too old to challenge himself.He got his first degree in 1936 and then his doctor ’ s degree in medicine.In his eighties ， he decided to study law ， after which he obtained his third degree in 2006.In 2012 ， he managed to get his fourth degree by online learning and won praise from his teacher for his good time management in study. 请根据所给信息写一篇关于海伦 · 凯勒 (Helen Keller) 的短文，要求包括以下三部分内容： 1 ．对该人物的简单介绍； 2 ．喜欢该人物的理由； 3 ．从该人物身上得到的启示。 词数： 100 个左右。 [ 妙笔成篇 ] One possible version ： Every time I read “ ...if I had the power of sight for three days... ” ， I cannot help being moved by its author Helen Keller ， an ordinary but great American woman. I admire Helen because she is optimistic about life.She became deaf and blind when she was 19 months old.From then on she lived in a world of darkness and silence ， and communication seemed only a dream for her. Unit 1 Exercise 4 谢谢观看！