人教版必修4英语课件：Unit 4 Period 4 Writing.ppt

Unit 4 　 Body language Period 4 　 Writing 关怀信 (A letter of concern) 即慰问信，属于应用文。它是向陷入困难或遭遇不幸的个人、团体或组织等表达关心或关爱的一种信件。注意写作时语气要真诚，态度要诚恳。此类信件一般采用 “ 三段式 ” 结构。 首段：描述对方所面对的困难或遭遇的不幸。 主体：帮助对方分析现象、原因，并表达自己对对方的关怀与关心。 尾段：表达祝愿或祝福。 [ 常用表达 ] 常用词汇： 看上去不安 look upset 忍受孤独 suffer from loneliness 厌烦某事 be/get tired of sth. 关心，在乎 care about 担心某事 be concerned about sth. 谨致以同情 offer one ’ s sympathy 无法预料的 unexpected 非常，极其 extremely 常用语句： 1 ． We are very sorry to learn that you are sick. 2 ． I felt very sorry indeed when I heard of your illness. 3 ． In the next few days ， I think you should take the doctor ’ s advice and have a good rest. 4 ． With best wishes for your quick and complete recovery. 5 ． If there is anything I can do ， give me a call. 6 ． I ’ d like to help you. 7 ． Everything will go well. [ 写作模板 ] Dear... ， ______ ( 时间状语 )I found that you looked very upset and you...I think there must be something wrong with you.______ ( 问句 1) ？ Or is it because______( 问句 2) ？ ______ ( 称呼 ) ， remember I ’ m your good friend and I will be with you whatever happens to you.If you need any help ， do turn to me.______ ( 提出建议或表达愿望 ) ． Best wishes to you! Yours ， Li Hua 假如你叫李华，今天下午你发现你的好朋友王立看起来很不安，在课堂上听课也不够认真。你认为他一定遇到了什么事情。于是你决定给他写一封信，表达你对他的关心。信的内容包括： (1) 是不是他的母亲又生病了； (2) 是不是因为这次考试没考好而心烦； (3) 提醒对方自己是他的好朋友； (4) 自己是否能够帮助他。 Dear Wang Li ， __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 　 Yours ， Li Hua [ 思路点拨 ] 时态：一般过去时、一般现在时和一般将来时； 人称：第一人称和第二人称； 写作要点： (1) 首段描述对方的状况：看起来不安、听课不认真。 (2) 主体段分析对方的问题和可能的原因并表达关怀：是不是他的母亲又生病了；或者因为这次考试没考好而心烦；提醒对方自己是他的好朋友；自己是否能够帮助他。 (3) 尾段表达祝愿。 [ 佳作展示 ] Dear Wang Li ， This afternoon I found that you looked very upset and in class you didn ’ t listen to the teachers carefully enough.I think there must be something wrong with you.Is your mother ill ？ Or is it because you didn ’ t get a good result in this exam ？ 假设你是李华。你的同班同学 Albert 因病住院已有两周，请你用英语给他写一封信。内容包括： 1. 询问病情，表示关心； 2. 介绍你班的近况； 3. 祝愿早日康复。 注意： 1. 词数 100 左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 信的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Albert ， __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ We are looking forward to your coming back. Yours ， Li Hua One possible version ： Dear Albert ， It has been two weeks since you went to hospital.All of us miss you very much.How are you feeling now ？ I am writing to tell you something that has happened in the last two weeks. As planned ， our sports meeting was held last week.Our whole class cooperated very well to compete with other classes.The boys did very well in the track event. Unit 4 Exercise 4 谢谢观看！