Unit 5 First aid Period 5 Writing
Learning aim :1. Learn the method of writing a survey report.
2. Grasp some typical sentence patterns and expressions.
Learning important point: Use some typical sentence patterns and expressions correctly.
Learning difficult point: Make sentences after the useful sentence patterns in a limited time.
【使用说明与学法指导】熟读并背诵调查报告类写作常用短语、句式等,总结所学,自己动笔开始写作。
² 预习案Previewing Case
Task 1 翻译下列相关短语
1. ______________________ 至于怎样… 2. update the website ________________________
3. _______________________ 排在第一位 4. next in line __________________________
5. ______________________ 同…比起来 6. ________________________ 与…交流
7. ______________________ 占(多少比例) 8. be in favor of _________________________
9. ______________________ 就某人看来 10. ________________________ 有很多共同点
11. _____________________ 与…相处融洽 12. arouse their interest ______________________
13. ______________________更好地了解… 14. _________________________ 把…放在第二位
Task 2 相关句式
1. Last week, we did a survey among 2, 600 students on “Who Is Your Idol”.上周我们就“谁是你的偶像”在2, 600人中进行了调查。
2. Recently our League Committee has carried out a survey, whose results are as follows.最近我们团委进行了一次调查, 其结果如下。
3. According to the survey, about half of the students will go to their classmates or friends when in trouble. 根据调查结果, 大约一半的学生有困难的时候会去找他们的同学或朋友。
4. Different persons may have different choices on how to spend pocket money.关于怎样用零花钱, 不同的人有不同的选择。
5. A recent survey suggests that students are different from each other in learning styles.最近的一项调查显示, 学生在学习方式上是各有差异的。
6. As is shown in the survey, drunk driving may result in serious accidents. 正如调查所显示的那样, 酒后驾驶会导致严重事故。
Task 3 调查报告写作要点
1.认真审题,明确写作内容 2.时态——现在时(常用)
Beginning——时间、对象、内容(1句)
3. 写作内容 Body——调查结果(3句) 过渡衔接
Ending——个人观点及理由(1句)
关键:1. 对比分析,找出异同点;2. 表达多样,避免重复罗列数据。
我的疑惑
² 探究案Exploring Case
最近,你对班里60名同学(男女各半)进行了关于上网目的的调查(survey)。以下是此次调查的结果:
上网目的
男生 (30)
女生 (30)
看新闻
25%
17%
发电子邮件
20%
15%
聊天
10%
40%
学习
10%
10%
3
玩游戏
35%
18%
写作要求:1. 调查时间、调查问题以及调查对象;2. 男女生上网时在最感兴趣的事情方面有何不同;
3. “看新闻”在男女生上网目的中的排序差异;4. 男女生在以“学习”为上网目的方面的共同点
5. 你自己的上网目的及理由。
Part1----Beginning:调查时间、对象、问题
Useful expressions:① Recently, I’ve conducted/made/ carried out a survey among…on…to find out…
② Last week, a survey was conducted among… to see/ find out…
eg. 1.最近,你对班里60名同学(男女各半)进行了关于上网目的的调查。
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Part2---- Body:调查结果分析
Useful expressions:① 25%的学生25% of/ a quarter/ one-fourth of the students
② …排第二位…rank the second (for…) ③ 占总数30% account for/ take up 30% of the total
④ 多数…;少数…;只有…;多达…most (of…),few (of…) ,only,as many/much as
⑤ 倍数The number of …is twice/doubles that of…
⑥ 百分率The percentage of the boys who like… is the same as that of the girls. or:10% of the boys like… and so do the girls.
eg. 2. 男女生上网时在最感兴趣的事情方面有何不同 The girls’ favourite is…, while what the boys like to do most is... _______________________________________________________________________________
3. “看新闻”在男女生上网目的中的排序差异 … ranks the second for…, but the third for…
_________________________________________________________________________________________
4. 男女生在以“学习”为上网目的方面的共同点The percentage of the boys using Internet for… is the same as that of…________________________________________________________________________________
Part3---- Ending:个人看法及理由
Useful expressions: ① As far as I am concerned, I agree to… because...
or: Personally, I think it is a wonderful idea(to do..) because….
② As far as I’m concerned,…As for me/myself… In my opinion,…Personally,…From my point of view…
5. 你自己的上网目的及理由。
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Part4---- 添加过渡词
Useful expressions:
① From/ According to the survey, …② As the survey/data shows, …③ The survey shows that…
④递进:besides/ what’s more/ moreover/ in addition⑤转折:However,…/ On the contrary/…while…/ …but…
eg. Recently, I’ve conducted a survey among… on .... ______________________, the girls’ favourite is …, while what the boys like to do most is ... ________________, … ranks the second for…, but (it ranks)… ___________, only 10% of the boys…, and so do the girls. _________________, I often go online to … because I think ...
² 训练案 Exercise
上周, 我们以“谁是你的偶像”为题, 在2600名考生中进行了一次调查(survey)。以下是调查数据:
偶像(idol)
女生
男生
伟人
18%
18%
父母
25%
11%
3
影视明星
50%
14%
体育明星
6%
48%
没有偶像
1%
9%
[写作内容]根据以上数据, 用五句话写一篇短文, 包括以下内容:
1. 调查时间、调查问题以及调查对象;2. 男女生在以明星为偶像方面的差异;
3. “父母”在男女生偶像中的排序差异;4. 男女生在以伟人为偶像方面的异同;5. 你的偶像及理由。
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