2017届高考英语二轮复习书面表达限时测验(4)含答案解析.doc

由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 www.ks5u.com ‎2017届高考英语二轮专题复习 书面表达限时测验4（含答案）‎ ‎1．‎ 书面表达（满分25分）‎ ‎ 假如你是某家英文报社的编辑，昨日收到一位中学生读者李华的来信。请根据来信内容和所给的要点提示用英语写一封回信。词数100左右。‎ Dear Editor,‎ ‎ I am a hardworking boy and want to be the number one in my class. But in the exams, I always make mistakes that I should have avoided. I really worry about it. What can I do to improve my performance in exams?‎ ‎ Li Hua 提示：1．不要压力太大；‎ ‎ 2．如有问题，请教老师或同学；‎ ‎ 3．考试时合理分配时间并尽量抽出几分钟检查。‎ 注意：1．可以适当增加细节以使行文连贯；‎ ‎ 2．书信的开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。‎ ‎ 3．词数：100—120。‎ 参考词汇：分配——distribute Dear Li Hua,‎ ‎ It’s good that you know what prevents you achieving satisfying scores in exams.‎ ‎_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ Editor ‎2．请根据以下提示, 结合生活中的一个事例, 就“乐观”这一话题, 用英语写一篇短文。‎ Optimism always leads to happiness, health and success while pessimism, by contrast, results in hopelessness, sickness and failure. That’s because optimists and pessimists deal with the same challenge and disappointment in very different ways. ‎ 注意: 1.不得照抄英语提示语; 2.内容必须结合生活中的一个事例; ‎ 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 ‎3. 词数为100-120左右。‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎3．假如你校要举办一次主题为“朋友”的英语演讲比赛，请你用英语写一篇120词左右的演讲稿，‎ 开头已给出，不计人总词数。要点如下：‎ ‎ 1.朋友的真谛，尊重并信任朋友；2.择友的标准；3.如何对待朋友，至少两点；‎ ‎ 4.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；5.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。‎ ‎ Good morning, everyone. I'd like to share my ideas about friends with you ‎4．根据提示写一篇120—150 的英语短文，发表在某中学生英文报上。‎ 假如你校开展了中学生学习生活的讨论，请根据以下提示发言：‎ ‎　　1. 合理安排学习和生活 2. 融洽同学之间的关系 3. 积极参加校园社团活动 ‎　　注意：字数120—150 ‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________‎ ‎5．假如你是李华，女，17岁。请根据所给中、英文提示，用英文邮件形式向学生会写申请。‎ 情况简介 申请理由 英语成绩优异；英语家教经验两年；‎ 愿意帮助儿童；‎ 学校“英语俱乐部”成员 增长见识，了解社会；‎ 其它：‎ 注意： 1.词数：100左右。‎ ‎2.邮件开头和结尾已为你写好。‎ ‎3.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎4.参考词汇：tutor vi. & n.家教 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 Dear Student union,‎ I am Li Hua, a girl of 17. I have just read the ad on the school bulletin and ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ I’m looking forward to your early reply and please email me at lihua@ yahoo.com.cn.‎ Yours sincerely,‎ Li Hua 参考答案 ‎1．‎ One possible version：‎ Dear Wang Li,‎ It's good that you know what prevents you achieving satisfying scores in exams. But remember, even the very best can make mistakes sometimes. Moreover, while it is true that a student’s most important goal is to do well in his or her studies, it doesn’t need to be the only goal. So, don't put too much pressure on yourself.‎ Learning from the errors you've made in the past exams is an effective way to avoid making the same mistakes next time. If you have problems you cannot solve, you’d better turn to your teacher or classmates for advice.‎ When you attend the exam, plan how to distribute your time according to the number of questions. Spare a few minutes to review your work in order that you can spot the silly mistakes.‎ Enjoy the challenge each new exam brings. I believe a good learning habit can eventually help you gain success.‎ Editor ‎【解析】‎ ‎2．‎ Optimism plays an important role in all aspects of one’s life. If you can change yourself from a pessimist to an optimist, you are sure to change your fate. ‎ Until the beginning of Senior Grade Two, I did poorly in English, but I was unwilling to give up struggling because I was always encouraged by both the people around me and myself. I kept practicing speaking, listening, reading and writing. When I was ‎ 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 fed up with listening, I usually entertained myself by reading some interesting English stories and jokes or seeing English films. When I had trouble getting words flowing on paper, I turned to word games or English songs. Whatever setback I encountered, I welcomed it and was always able to make myself cheerful and optimistic, dreaming about a splendid future and believing that hard work would eventually pay off. Gradually, I made progress beyond belief in my English. ‎ Thanks to optimism, I have become one of the top English learners in my class now. ‎ ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：考查开放性作文写作,开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，如besides, further, last but not least等。在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。‎ ‎【亮点说明】文章使用了很好的短语和句子：play an important role in在…方面起着重要的作用，be unwilling to 不愿意，give up 放弃，be fed up with厌倦于， have trouble （in）doing做…有困难，made progress beyond belief 取得难以置信的进步，Thanks to 多亏了，Whatever setback I encountered, I welcomed it and was always able to make myself cheerful and optimistic, dreaming about a splendid future and believing that hard work would eventually pay off. 这句话用了让步状语从句。‎ 考点：考查开放式作文 ‎3．‎ Good morning, everyone. I'd like to share my ideas about friends with you Friends are the people who can share our happiness and sorrow. As friends, respect and trust are the most important factors. They will accept you for who you are without trying to change you. Trust is another aspect. A true friend will be honest and be someone you can depend on.‎ When it comes to making friends, I would like to make friends with those who are kind, honest and responsible.‎ But how to treat friends is the key to making good friends. First, understand them more. I usually put myself in their shoes so that we can share lots of ideas together. Second, listen to them more. I like listening and talking things over with them.‎ Thanks for listening.‎ ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：试题贴近考生实际生活，给出的要点比较简略，主要围绕“朋友”这个话题展开，其中如何对待朋友，要求给出自己的观点，属于半开放性话题,故需要自由发挥的地方较多.需要注意不要偏离文章中心.在写作时注意把握好以下几点：(1)书写规范，卷面整洁。(2)行文紧凑，过渡自然。(3)要点完整，表达清楚。(4)语法正确，时态准确。(5)用词无误，控制得当(120词之间)。(6)认真复查，胸有成竹。尤其是如何对待朋友，部分要求给出自己的建议，要注意不要偏离文章中心 ‎【亮点说明】(1)使用一些如Firstly,second,等承接词进行连接,层次清晰。(2)词组的使用和多变的高级句式：depend on.Friends are the people who can share our happiness and sorrow. 这句话用了定语从句， They will accept you for who you are without trying to 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 ‎ change you. 这句话用了宾语从句，When it comes to making friends, I would like to make friends with those who are kind, honest and responsible.这句话用了固定句型和定语从句，I usually put myself in their shoes so that we can share lots of ideas together.这句话用了结果状语从句。‎ 考点：考查提纲类书面表达 ‎4． Attention, please. Now I have the chance to express my opinion on our school life.‎ ‎ As middle school students, we are living a completely busy life. So here is something you should pay much attention. First, arrange your time properly. You’d better make a timetable so that you will know what to do and how to do it and make full use of every minute. It will make your work more effectively.‎ ‎ Living in the school, sometimes you may face some problems that you can’t work out by yourself. Help from others will make everything easy for you. So get along well with all the people around you. Always be open-minded and warm-hearted. Don’t speak ill of others behind his or her back. You should always bear in mind that we are in a big family. ‎ ‎ At last, take an active part in societies at school, which are your second teachers. It will not only provide you the chances to make friends and challenge yourself, but also make your school life rich and colorful as well.‎ ‎ Here hope all of us can enjoy our school life. Thank you!‎ ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：这是一篇发言稿，所以在语言的使用上要大众化，另外注意题目的要求1.合理安排学习和生活 2. 融洽同学之间的关系 3. 积极参加校园社团活动。所以要按照这样一个顺序去写，注意不要有遗漏。本作文中给出的要点比较简略,故需要充实文章内容，需要注意不要偏离文章中心。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式。‎ 考点：发言稿 点评：本文属于发言稿，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。并且注意字数限制 ‎5． ‎ One possible version：‎ Dear Student Union,‎ I am Li Hua, a girl of 17. I have just read the ad on the school bulletin and the moment I saw it I took an interest in becoming one of the volunteer English teachers. Now I’m writing here to apply for this opportunity.‎ I have a good command of English. For two years I have been tutoring primary school kids in English. Presently I work as a member of the English Club in our school.‎ In my opinion, being a volunteer teacher at the SOS village is obviously more than just teaching; furthermore, it is helpful to broaden our horizon and improve our understanding of the world. Besides, voluntary work will build our confidence and good communication skills. By helping those kids, I feel I can make a big difference to their future and make a small contribution to society.‎ I’d appreciate it so much if you could possibly consider my application.‎ I’m looking forward to your early reply and please email me at lihua@ yahoo.com.cn.‎ 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 Yours sincerely,‎ Li Hua ‎【解析】 ‎ 试题分析：本文是要求写一封电子邮件，邮件的开头和结尾已写好，只需要根据提示内容组织语言要点即可，而且电子邮件是一种常见的写作体裁，内容也贴近学生生活，是一篇较容易的作文。在写作时要注意：1.要点要全面，包括自己情况的简介以及申请的理由，可以适当增添细节，以使行文连贯；2.时态使用一般现在时；3.用第一人称；4.为了提高作文档次，要增加亮点词汇和多种句式的使用。‎ ‎【亮点说明】本篇书面表达段落层次清晰，作者开门见山提出写信的目的---申请做为志愿者，然后在以下两段分别介绍自己的情况，讲述自己申请当志愿者的理由。在文中作者使用了表示层次顺序的副词besides，介词短语in my opinion , by helping those kids 动词短语look forward to , have agood command of , apply for 等，而且还使用了倒装句By helping those kids, I feel I can make a big difference to their future and make a small contribution to society，条件状语从句I’d appreciate it so much if you could possibly consider my application.时间状语从句the moment I saw it I took an interest in becoming one of the volunteer English teachers等。‎ 考点：考查提纲作文 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费