2017届高考英语二轮复习书面表达限时测验(5)含答案解析.doc

由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 www.ks5u.com ‎2017届高考英语二轮专题复习 书面表达限时测验5（含答案）‎ ‎1．全体高三学生目前正处在紧张复习迎考的氛围中。假如你叫李华，是江西泰和中学一名高三学生，面对目前的压力，想和父母说说知心话，请你用英文在你的博客上用书信形式表达出来。主要内容如下：‎ 知心话 感 恩 关切鼓励，倾注爱心 对父母的期望 ‎1. 多交流，使自己保持良好状态 ‎2. 创造条件，给自己提供适时帮助 学习打算 ‎… …‎ 注意：1. 短文须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥。‎ ‎ 2. 词数：120左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。‎ ‎2．假设你是图①中的男孩。请根据以下图画提供情节线索，以Sharing Housework为题，用英文叙述你帮妈妈做家务的经过及感想。‎ 注意；1．必须包括图画所表现的主要内容，可以适当增减细节，使其连贯、完整；‎ ‎2．词数：不少于100词。‎ Sharing housework ‎4．阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。‎ As we all know, the “(passenger) transport during the Spring Festival period” has been a hot phrase all through the China land. ‎ The volume of passenger traffic(客运量) reaches its climax before and after the Spring Festival. Especially, the number of those who decide to go back to their hometown by train is increasing rapidly, so it promotes the short of the tickets of passenger train. Luckily, the Ministry of Railways(铁道部) has come up with solutions. For instance, it arranges extra trains during the peak time for passenger transport as well as opens 24-hour ticket sales windows for passengers in order to ease the traffic pressure. Moreover, it helps to deliver train tickets to the doorsteps, providing convenience for passengers. ‎ One thing that has to be mentioned this year is about start of selling tickets on-line this year. For one thing, it to some degree shortens the time of purchasing tickets. However, most of the passengers are migrant workers returning home for Spring Festival. They are not familiar with the process of buying tickets and as a result cannot buy the tickets on time. What is worse, many computers selling tickets broke down under too much pressure of operation. Therefore, many people blame such a method in that it doesn’t suit nowadays’ situation. ‎ 写作内容]‎ 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。‎ 以约120个词对“春运”进一步叙写，内容包括：‎ 自己亲身经历或者听闻的一次火车春运的状况；‎ ‎“网上售票”引起人们不满的原因；‎ 给铁道部或者农民工提出解决“网上购票”问题的合理化建议。‎ 写作要求]‎ 作文中可以使用亲身经历或者虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；‎ 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。‎ 评分标准]‎ 概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语句连贯。‎ ‎5．‎ 你的同学刘芳乐于助人(helpful),积极乐观(positive)。她在上星期日下午回校途中帮助了一位受伤的老人。请根据题示,用英语写一篇短文向英语报 English Times投稿,简要叙述她做好事的经过,并谈谈你的感想。‎ 注意:(1)短文须包括上述全部要点,应适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; ‎ ‎ (2)词数:100左右。短文开头已给出(不计词数)。‎ ‎ Nowadays, a lot of people are reportedly unwilling to help others. However, Liu Fang acted differently. ‎ ‎ ‎ 参考答案 ‎1．one possible version:‎ Dear Mom and Dad,‎ ‎ The annual University Entrance Examination is around the corner. On this special occasion, how I wish I could have a heart-to-heart talk with you. ‎ ‎ Throughout these years, I always feel grateful to you for your unfailing help, care and love. I have been making remarkable progress in my studies thanks to your constant encouragement. It’ll be no more than one year before I take the University Entrance Examination, which makes me under greater pressure. I need frequent support. Good learning conditions and timely help from you will do me a lot of good.‎ ‎ Mom and Dad, my dream is the very one you always have. I’m fully aware of the responsibilities I am bearing. I plan to make a detailed study schedule for this coming examination so that I can review lessons and practice solving problems of different subjects. It is also necessary that I do some physical training once in a while so that I can keep fit. If possible, as a family member, I will also help do some housework to make you relax a little bit.‎ ‎ I am quite confident of my study. I do wish you good health and a happy life.‎ 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 ‎                                                           ‎ ‎ Yours ever,‎ ‎ Li Hua ‎【解析】略 ‎2．略 ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：本文的写作首先对自己一天的打算进行描写，如本打算去打球的，看到妈妈正在打水准备洗衣服，自己感到妈妈肯定很累，所以决定帮助妈妈干活，然后在洗衣服时，朋友来叫我去打球，我委婉的拒绝了，感到自己要先帮助妈妈干活再去玩，最后当妈妈回家时看到衣服都洗干净了特别的开心，还夸耀我是个懂事的好孩子，我尽管很累但是非常的高兴。‎ 考点：图画类写作 点评：本文难度不大，写自己的情况一般都有话可说，写作过程中写作条理性要把握好，对于自己从不同方面的改变，写的过程中通过变换句式和用词上来提高语言的美度。在一件事情写完后要用上表关系的连接词，或平时积累的各类表递进、并列的连词来是文章富于活力。在平时的练习中要多去背诵范文，对表达好的句子，短语要进行积累，并默写，考试前再集中看一下，这样做到有备无患。‎ ‎3．‎ Dear teacher，‎ Words fail me when I want to express my thanks to you. You have taken good care of me since I came to this school. When I am in trouble，you always encourage me and cheer me up. You are kind but strict with us.You never allow us to pretend that we know what we don't know. You often tell us that it's no use memorizing new words without understanding. With your help，my English has greatly improved. Thank you for caring about me，and I will work harder in the future.‎ Best wishes.　　 ‎ ‎ Li hua ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：考查应用文中的感谢信的写作。用英语给老师写一封感谢信，表示你对老师关爱和帮助的感谢，要点是提纲，具体的内容要自己拓展，注意把握中心，围绕中心展开论述，审题时注意本文使用一般现在时，描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。‎ ‎【亮点说明】Words fail me when I want to express my thanks to you. 这句话里面的fail的用法很好，比“I don’t know”要好多了，You have taken good care of me since I came to this school.这句话用了since引导时间状语从句， When I am in trouble，you always encourage me and cheer me up.这句话用时间状语从句和be in trouble和cheer sb up词组，You never allow us to pretend that we know what we don't know. 这句话有两个宾语从句，You often tell us that it's no use memorizing new words without understanding. 这句话用了it做形式主语， Thank you for caring about me，and I will work harder in the future.这是并列句和动名词的用法。‎ 考点：考查感谢信的写法 ‎4．‎ Although it is as crowded as usual during the “transport during the Spring Festival period”, many solutions have been raised. But this year, with another problem of ‎ 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 buying tickets on-line appearing, many are dissatisfied. ‎ Last year, I, together with my parents, went to our hometown by train. At that time, you can imagine how crowded it was in the railway station and how difficult it was for us to buy a ticket. Worse still, it was raining and we had to wait in queue patiently for our turn to buy tickets. This year, things are much better. We can buy tickets through Internet. However, some other problems appear. ‎ Reasons for the problems of buying tickets on-line are divided. For migrant workers, lacking the knowledge of handling computers has trapped them into trouble. Also, the ticket-selling system is not advanced enough to cope with difficult situations.‎ To solve the problem, I suggest that not only should the Ministry of Railways update or better the ticket-selling system regularly but also provide more convenient and easy ways for migrant workers to buy tickets. As for migrant workers, they can learn to purchase their tickets on-line with the help of Internet or co-workers. Choosing other means of transportation to return back is also available. ‎ ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：本文属于读写任务写作，动笔前，一定要认真阅读原文，并理解内容。认真看清题目要求，这篇书面表达给了一段材料：先要求以约30个词概括上文的主要内容，要求有很高的概括提炼的能力，要抓住文章的主题，再以约120个词写一篇短文，按照要点去表达，不能有遗漏，写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。写作时尽量使用自己会的单词、词组和句型，同时也要注意使用一些高级语法和句型，使自己的文章更有文采。‎ ‎【亮点说明】文章简洁的总结了所给材料，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯，使用了词组和句型：cope with 处理，As for 至于，with the help of 在…的帮助下，Worse still更糟糕的是, But this year, with another problem of buying tickets on-line appearing, many are dissatisfied. 这句话用了with复合结构， At that time, you can imagine how crowded it was in the railway station and how difficult it was for us to buy a ticket.这句话用了宾语从句和it做形式主语， For migrant workers, lacking the knowledge of handling computers has trapped them into trouble. 这句话用了动名词做主语， To solve the problem, I suggest that not only should the Ministry of Railways update or better the ticket-selling system regularly but also provide more convenient and easy ways for migrant workers to buy tickets.这句话用了不定式做目的状语。‎ 考点：考查读写任务式书面表达 ‎5．Possible version:‎ Nowadays, a lot of people are reportedly unwilling to help others. However, Liu Fang acted differently.‎ Last Sunday afternoon, on her way back to school, Liu Fang came across an old man lying on the ground, seriously hurt in the leg. She immediately stopped, called 120 and practiced first aid. Soon, the ambulance came. When everything was Ok, she left for school.‎ Such is Liu Fang, a helpful, positive and determined person. Although there might be misunderstanding or even trouble when we do good, I strongly believe that she has done the right thing. As responsible citizens, it is our duty to help people in need. Also, helping others means helping ourselves in a sense, doesn’t it?‎ ‎【解析】考查了记叙文的写作 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 试题分析：本文考查了记叙文的写作，故事的梗概已经给出。刘芳乐于助人，看见老人摔倒，他主动提出帮助，并对老人进行适当的包扎治疗和救助。并拨打120急救电话，协助医生对病人进行护理。‎ 考点：考查记叙文写作 点评：近年来对记叙文写作的考查不是很多，记叙文的写作要求考生以故事方式的梗概为顺序，审题时注意使用一般过去时，合理的组织要点，运用合适的连接词和高级的句型如倒装句，强调句，省略句等来让文章有所变化。‎ 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费