2017届高考英语二轮复习书面表达限时测验(6)含答案解析.doc

由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 www.ks5u.com ‎2017届高考英语二轮专题复习 书面表达限时测验6（含答案）‎ ‎1．‎ ‎ (2010·吉林长春十一中高三上期中考试)‎ 最近一项调查表明如今中国青年的人生目标比过去要显得多元化。这种选择的变化表明社会在进步，人们的生活目标较以前更为实际。‎ 参考上述信息及下表，以“Chinese Young People’s Life Goals Today”为标题，写一篇词数不少于80的短文。‎ 比例 目标 手段 ‎53.5%‎ 挣钱给自己买一房一车 ‎71.9%的人说将努力拼搏以实现人生的目标 ‎44%‎ 提高生活质量 ‎43.7%‎ 成为富人 ‎23.9%‎ 找一份好工作 参考词汇：多元化的 diversified; 调查对象：respondent ‎2．某英语杂志社举办“建设节约型校园”征文比赛。请针对目前许多校园内部的浪费现象，写一篇短文，号召同学们从我做起，杜绝浪费。‎ ‎ ‎ 浪费现象 危害 建议措施 ‎1.水、电 ‎2.餐厅食物 ‎3.其它（由考生添加）‎ ‎1.造成支出增加 ‎2.浪费自然资源 ‎3.养成不良习惯 ‎（考生自行发挥）‎ 注意：‎ ‎1、词数：100-120词。 ‎ ‎2、可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎3、不要逐字逐条翻译。‎ ‎4、标题和第一句已为你写好，不计入总词数。‎ Building up a Saving Campus ‎ Our school campus is becoming more and more beautiful. But did you notice ‎_______________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎3．书面表达(25分)‎ 根据下面提示, 以Healthy Diet为题写一篇120词左右的短文。‎ ‎ 提示：‎ ‎1. 健康饮食的重要性。‎ ‎ (1)有助于保持健康与正常体重; ‎ ‎ (2)有助于保持体力, 精力充沛地进行学习与劳动; ‎ ‎ (3)有助于提高生活质量。‎ ‎2. 什么是健康饮食？‎ ‎ (1)合理的饮食结构; ‎ ‎ (2)绿色蔬菜与水果的优越性; ‎ ‎ (3)愉快的心情、适量的体育锻炼与健康的饮食同等重要。________________________‎ ‎______________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎4．‎ 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 假设你是李红,你的一位美国笔友Robert写E-mail问及你高考后暑假的安排,请根据以下要点,写一封100词左右的email回复他, 可以适当增加细节。‎ ‎ 1. 学开车 2. 参加英语培训课程 3. 去北京看奥运会 4. 游览北京的名胜 ‎ 注意:1.根据以上内容写一篇短文,不要逐句翻译,可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。‎ ‎ 2.要准确使用语法和词汇;使用一定的句型、词汇,清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思;3. 词数:100个左右。开头已给出,不计词数。‎ ‎ Dear Robert,‎ How time flies! ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎5．据调查，人们对学生网上交友持不同意见。请以“Should students make friends online?”为题，用英语写一篇短文，介绍不同看法，并表达自己的观点。‎ 赞成方认为 反对方认为 你的观点 ‎1．可以广交朋友 ‎1．浪费宝贵时间 ‎?‎ ‎(请考生列举一到二点)‎ ‎2．自由表达思想 ‎2．影响正常学习 ‎3．利于学习外语 ‎3．容易上当受骗 注意：1．对所给要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。‎ ‎2．词数120左右。‎ ‎3．作文中不得提及考生所在班级和本人姓名。‎ 参考词汇：网络朋友 online friend(s)；上当受骗 get cheated；‎ Should students make friends online?‎ Some people say yes.　　　　 　　　　　　　　　‎ ‎　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　_________________________________________‎ 参考答案 ‎1．‎ One possible version:‎ ‎ Chinese Young People’s Life Goals Today ‎ A recent survey shows that in today’s society, Chinese young people’s life goals have become more diversified than before. When young people are asked what they will struggle for, more than half of the respondents choose to earn money to buy a house and a car for themselves. In addition to this practical goal, some people, about 44%, pick up their life goals as improving their life quality or to be a rich person while 23.9% of the respondents are simply satisfied to have a good job.‎ ‎ As for how to achieve their life goals, most of them prefer struggling to realize their dreams. The survey shows that the society is making progress and people’s life goals have become more practical.b10‎ ‎【解析】‎ ‎2．‎ Building up a Saving Campus ‎ Our school campus is becoming more and more beautiful. But did you notice with the improvement of people’s living standard, how much is wasted on campus? For example, some students leave the lights on in the daytime, water running after washing dishes. In the dining-hall,‎ 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 ‎ you can see a lot of food thrown away every day.‎ The habit of being wasteful has a bad effect on our character. We have to pay for those things wasted, and this adds to our expense. What is worse, we are wasting the earth’s limited resource. So it’s high time we dealt with this problem.‎ How to reduce the waste? In my opinion, it is everybody’s duty to save energy and resource. We must start with ourselves from now on! Then our society will go on developing and our life will bebetter.‎ ‎【解析】考查提纲类作文的写作。话题校园内部的浪费现象，，要点是以表格的形式表示的，‎ 要适当增加细节，不能只是把要点翻译成英语、，注意改变文章的样式。难度在于选择合适 的词汇和句型表达文章需要的意思，可以变换使用一些容易驾驭的句子或者词汇实现同样的 目的。In the dining-hall, you can see a lot of food thrown away every day.‎ 这句话用了过去分词做宾语补足语句型，So it’s high time we dealt with this problem.‎ 这句话是用的虚拟语气，还要使用合适的连接词来连接各要点，使文章成为一个整体。For example,In my opinion, What is worse等 ‎3． Healthy Diet ‎ Healthy diet is very important for us, firstly because it helps to keep us fit and have a proper weight; secondly because it helps us to be energetic enough to study and work hard; finally because it helps to improve the quality of our life. ‎ ‎ In order to have a healthy diet, we should first have a reasonable and scientific diet structure which consists of enough green vegetables and fruit, and as little as possible the food high in fat, sugar and salt, which does great harm to our health. ‎ ‎ Besides, a cheerful state of mind and proper physical exercise are equally important to our health as healthy diet. ‎ ‎【解析】略 ‎4．不唯一 Dear Robert:‎ ‎ How time flies! The happy days we shared often shines in my memory. What about you? As you know, my college entrance exam is approaching, which also announces the end of this sort of pressing study life. However,I intend to have a meaningful summer vacation. First, I will learn to drive to get a driving license, which is a new activity for a high school graduate in China. I will have a good rest, enjoying my hobbies. Then I will take some English courses to improve my English communication ability, With the 2008 Olympics beginning, I will be a participant of it, watching the basketball match between China and the US. I have been dreaming of Kobe’s performance long. After that, I will pay a visit to some tourist attractions to widen my horizon.‎ ‎ That is the plan for my vacation. I am looking forward to being told about your arrangements of vacation. Give me your quick reply soon, OK?‎ ‎ Best wishes!‎ ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：考生应不难理解写作要求和写作目的，信的格式和开头语已给出，这降低了写作难度，但同时要注意第二句要接好，这也增加了难度。考生首先要仔细审题，包括以下几个方面：（1）层次结构（2）句子的时态 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 ‎（3）内容要点。尤其是内容要点要把握准确到位，这是半开放性作文，要点需要考生拿捏准确以及正确，这加大了写作难度。再者考生要注意尽可能使句子的表达形式多样化，适当的使用一些高级句式和高级词汇，以提高书面表达的档次和可读性。‎ 考点：提纲作文。‎ 点评：应避免句式过于单一呆板，应该有长有短、错落有致；有抑有扬，使文章有很强的节奏感，这就要求懂得灵活运用富于变化的各种句式。例如强调句、倒装句、with复合结构、非谓语动词、恰到好处的被动句、高级的定语从句、what引导的主语从句等。文中使用一些极佳的词语和句子为文章增色，注意使用高级词汇及句型句式等。‎ ‎5．‎ Should students make friends online?‎ ‎ Some people say yes. The Internet helps students make many friends. Chatting online, students can express their feelings and opinions more freely and even get help with their foreign language studies.‎ ‎ Others, however, think students should not make online friends. They think it a waste of time to make friends online, which should be spent more meaningfully on their studies. Otherwise, their normal studies will be much affected. Besides, some students may even get cheated online.‎ ‎ From my point of view, making friends online is harmful rather than helpful. Students should think of their study, health and safety first. As for friendship, we can easily find it in our classmates and other people around us.‎ ‎【解析】略 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费