2017届高考英语二轮复习书面表达限时测验(7)含答案解析.doc

由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 www.ks5u.com ‎2017届高考英语二轮专题复习 书面表达限时测验7（含答案）‎ ‎1．‎ ‎2009年5月1日世博会志愿者招募仪式正式启动，志愿者是办好世博会的一支重要的工作力量。另外，志愿者或做家教，教小孩子阅读、算术，或打扫公园与街道，或到医院或疗养院帮忙。你愿意做志愿者吗？请陈述理由写一篇100字左右的短文。‎ ‎2．假设你是红星中学高三年级一班的学生李华，近日你班同学参加了世界自然基金会WWF组办的“我为哥本哈根减斤碳”活动，大家开始在日常生活中减少能源、纸张等的消耗。请根据以下四幅图提供的信息，给某英文杂志写一篇以“Low-carbon Living”为题的英文稿件，介绍你们参加此次活动第一天的具体做法并谈自己的看法。‎ 字数100-120字 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 ‎3．假如你所在的学校正在举办中学生英语征文比赛，主题为“微笑”。请你根据下面所列的内容要点，写一篇英语短文，作为参赛作品。‎ ‎ 1．学会对自己微笑：生活中会有不愉快的事，微笑使你自信；击败你的人有时是你自己；‎ ‎ 2．学会驻地他人微笑：微笑使人与人更亲近；‎ ‎ 3．微笑是一种语言：人人都能懂。‎ ‎ 注意：‎ ‎ 1．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎ 2．100词左右；‎ ‎ 3．题目自拟。‎ ‎4．假定你是张峰，一家英文报社邀请你调查一下中学生对网络使用的情况，并依据调查写一篇新闻报道。请根据下表提供的信息，对你的调查作简要介绍，发给报社。‎ 主要用途： 1、阅读国内外新闻， 学习英语。‎ ‎2、发e-mail，欣赏音乐，看电影，玩游戏等 ‎3、网上购物 出现的问题：1、过多的在网上玩游戏，浪费了时间，影响了学业 ‎2、浏览不健康信息，对身心有害 注意：1、词数：100左右 ‎ ‎2、可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 ‎ 3、文章开头已给出 As we all know, the Internet is playing an important part in our daily life._______‎ ‎______________________________________________________________________‎ ‎______________________________________________________________________‎ ‎5．富人做慈善事业近年来越来越受到社会的关注。有的人认为理所当然，有的人认为他们应当受到称颂。针对这种现象，你校英语俱乐部组织了一次英语辩论赛，请根据以下要点写一篇不少于120词的英语短文，陈述以下两种不同观点并发表自己的意见。文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。‎ 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 ‎ 富人做慈善事业是否理所当然 正方观点 反方观点 你的观点 ‎1. 富人财富来自社会；‎ ‎2. 富人应该回报社会，做慈善事业理所应当。‎ ‎1、 富人的财富是靠合法经营和辛苦劳动得来的；‎ ‎2、富人做慈善应该受到称颂。‎ ‎……‎ ‎ Nowadays, many rich people are enthusiastic about charities. ‎ ‎ ‎ 参考答案 ‎1．I would like to be a volunteer in my spare time. My reasons are as follows:‎ First of all, it is a good virtue to help others, even in modern society. We all need others’ help in case we get into trouble. Secondly, we are able to better ourselves by helping others because we gain valuable experience and build up our confidence while serving others. What’s more, volunteering makes us feel better about ourselves, thus making our life more enjoyable. More importantly, we can make the world a better place to live in by volunteering to improve it.‎ ‎       In summary, volunteering can make a difference to our life, so I think it is very rewarding to be a volunteer.‎ ‎【解析】‎ ‎2．‎ One possible version:‎ Low-carbon Living Recently, my classmates and I participated in the activity of Low–carbon Living organized by the WWF. On the first day, we chose to go to school by bike or on foot rather than by bus or car. Before we left the classroom, we made sure the lights and the computer were switched off. In order to make full use of paper, we began to write on both sides. Besides, while shopping, we no longer used plastic bags but carried environmentally friendly ones.‎ I think what we did on that day was meaningful, which can help us to form a good habit. We should also call on the people around us to do something for low–carbon living. Only in this way will the earth be a good place to live on. ‎ ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：这是一篇话题作文，这道题目有个特点就是要结合已给出的图片，所以首先必须看懂图，并且要用第一人称来写。写作时不能只是生硬的陈述图片内容，一定结合自己的做法谈谈自己的看法。需要注意不要偏离文章中心，写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意题目要求字数。‎ ‎【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如made sure, were switched off, make full use of, Only in this way，还运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句等等。并注意了句子的衔接如：In order to；Besides, What’s more等等。‎ 考点：话题作文。‎ ‎3．‎ 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 ‎【解析】略 ‎4．‎ As we all know, the Internet is playing an important part in our daily liffe. We often read news at home and abroad and learn foreign languages by ourselves on the Internet. Sometimes we send e-mails to our families as well as friends. Besides, we listen to music, enjoy films and play computer games on it. We can even do shopping without leaving our homes.‎ However, it has its disadvantages. Many students waste too much time playing computer games, which has a bad effect on their students. What’s worse, the bad information on the Internet does great harm to them. I hope every students can make use of the Internet properly for their students.‎ ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：本文是一篇说明文。文章给出了较详细的汉语提示，要求考生根据提示写出一篇完整的短文。成文时应注意：1.文章内容要齐全；主要用途： （1）阅读国内外新闻， 学习英语；（2）发e-mail，欣赏音乐，看电影，玩游戏等；（3）网上购物；出现的问题：（1）过多的在网上玩游戏，浪费了时间，影响了学业；（2）浏览不健康信息，对身心有害。2.人称：第一人称为主；3.时态：一般现在时；4.适当使用一些高级词汇、短语和句型，以提高文章的档次；5.使用一些连词和插入语使文章表达自然、流畅。‎ ‎【亮点说明】使用了从句：1.定语从句Many students waste too much time playing computer games, which has a bad effect on their students.2.宾语从句I hope every students can make use of the Internet properly for their students.使用了连词和插入语：Besides, However, What’s worse使用了短语：at home and abroad；have a bad effect on；do great harm to；make use of 考点：考查学生英语语言综合运用能力。‎ ‎5．‎ Nowadays, many rich people are enthusiastic about charities. Some people take it for granted that the rich have the responsibility to contribute to charities. However, others maintain those wealthy people deserve praise for their selfless honored behaviors. ‎ ‎ Those people who hold the first opinion believe the rich can not get rich without others in the society and that they should give back to society. ‎ ‎ However, others think differently. In their opinions, the wealthy people’s success is the result of their hard work.. They also argued that charity is not only the duty of rich people but every citizen’s duty.‎ ‎ Personally, I agree with the latter. After all, the rich people are successful because they have worked hard and have a legal business. I think we should praise 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 ‎ and respect those who have made or are making contributions to charities.‎ ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：本篇书面表达为对比型议论文。论题为：富人做慈善事业是否理所当然。文章结构为：现象（富人做慈善事业近年来越来越受到社会的关注）引入句（有的人认为理所当然，有的人认为他们应当受到称颂→②正方观点阐述→ƒ反方观点阐述→④自己的观点，本文章要求论述两种不同观点并给出自己的看法。引入句已写好，可以直接写支持者的观点和反对者的观点然后写自己的看法。‎ ‎ 常用结构 1．有一些人认为。。。 2．另一些人认为。。。3．我的看法。。。‎ ‎ The topic of ①-----------------（主题）is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions of it. Some people say A is heir favorite. They hold their view for the reason of②-------------（支持A的理由一）What is more, ③-------------理由二). Moreover,④------------(理由三).‎ ‎ While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,-------(支持B的理由一). Secondly (besides),⑥-------------（理由二）. Thirdly (finally),⑦--------------(理由三) From my point of view, I think ⑧----------------（我的观点）. The reason is that...‎ 考点：图表作文 点评：对比型议论文结构典型，要记住基本结构，另外多记忆一些模板句。如：‎ We have had a heated discussion/debate on/about....Different people have different opinions.Every coin has two sides.some people think.....while others...,及短语in favor of ,be for ,be against ,in agreement with ,in my opinion/view,as far as I’m concerned,personally 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费