2017届高考英语二轮复习书面表达限时测验(8)含答案解析.doc

由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 www.ks5u.com ‎2017届高考英语二轮专题复习 书面表达限时测验8（含答案）‎ ‎1．‎ 阅读下面一则广告，按照要求完成写作任务。‎ EIL International English Summer Camp Volunteer Wanted ‎ EIL was founded in Britain in 1936 with the fundamental aim of international understanding “Learn to live together by living together”.‎ Requirements: Over 16; good knowledge of English; outgoing; working well with children ‎ between 7-12‎ Activities: Language study, outdoor recreation and travel Campers: Students from different countries Camp site: ‎Mount Wuyi‎, ‎Fujian Time: July 26-August 9‎ Application deadline: July 15. 2008‎ ‎ If interested, please e-mail to info@eiuk.org 写作内容]‎ ‎ 假设你是李华，这则广告引起了你的兴趣，请用英文写一封自荐信。要求如下：‎ 对夏令营主题的理解；‎ 根据招聘要求自我介绍；‎ 参加夏令营的目的。‎ 注意：1. 信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；‎ ‎2.词数100左右。‎ Dear sir,‎ I’m Li Hua from Fujian. ‎ I am looking forward to your early reply.‎ ‎ Sincerely yours,‎ ‎ Li Hua ‎2．请根据下列提示，以“Making friends”为题，用英语写一篇100词左右的短文。‎ 每个人都需要朋友，友谊非常重要。‎ 交朋友首先要对别人友善；要使他人感到亲切。‎ 从内心真正关心别人。‎ 如果有分歧，不争吵，和朋友商量解决。‎ 注：可以自由发挥。‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎______________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎3．一年一度的校园文化节又拉开了序幕，但今年学生却没有表现出像往年的兴趣和热情面对这一现象，有人提出校园文化节还要不要举办的问题，这引起了同学们的讨论。上周末你班也进行了一场讨论。大多数同学都支持校园文化节，请你根据下面所提供的内容将讨论结果做一总结，字数100左右。‎ 支持的原因：1. 给学生创造了展示自我才华的舞台；‎ ‎2. 有利于提高学习兴趣；‎ 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 ‎3.丰富校园文化，活跃校园气氛。‎ 注意：1. 行文连贯，内容完整；‎ ‎2. 题目和开头语已给出，不计入总词数；‎ ‎3. 总词数100左右。‎ To be continued ‎ The annual campus cultural festival has drawn back its curtain again, but this year students did not show their great interest and passion for it as before.__________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎4．请根据以下提示写一篇关于早起有益的议论文。‎ ‎1. 早起锻炼可使身体健康、强壮。‎ ‎2. 早起朗读，有助于记住学过的的东西。‎ ‎3. 可为一天的活动做好准备，有充足的时间洗漱、吃早餐。坚持早起对培养性格也很有用。‎ 词汇：记住： memorize 培养性格：character-training ‎ 坚持：stick to 刷牙：brush our teeth ‎（开头已经给出,不需逐字逐句翻译。）‎ Getting up early is a good habit。 ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 ‎5．在高三阶段，学习比较紧张，正确的学习方法尤为重要。下表显示了两位同学不同的学习方法，请简述并发表你的观点，字数在120词左右。文章开头已给出。‎ 学习方法 李华 王海 你的观点 白天 上课专心听讲，尽可能经常向老 师请教疑难问题。‎ 上课打瞌睡，漏掉了 许多要点。‎ 晚上 花较少的时间完成作业，早点休息，上课经常保持旺盛的精力。‎ 花较多时间完成作业，熬夜学习，导致注意力无法集中。‎ 参考词汇：①attentively 专心 ②energetic 精力旺盛 ‎③concentrate on 集中注意力于 ④effectively有效地 Li Hua and Wand Hai are two students of Senior Three. Both them work but they have different learning methods. ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ 参考答案 ‎1．‎ Dear sir,‎ I’m Li Hua from Fujian. When I was reading the advertisement , the aim of this activity impressed me greatly, I think it instructive to learn to live together by living together. It is a good opportunity for the only child like me to learn to share and work together. Therefore I recommend myself to you without hesitation.‎ As a boy of 17, I am outgoing, good at English and have experience of working well with children aged from 7 to 12, I think it is a kind or win-win activity. For one thing, I can help take care the children. For another thing, I can improve my English, make more friends, and enrich my life during the summer vacation.‎ I am looking forward to your early reply.‎ ‎ Sincerely yours,‎ ‎ Li Hua ‎【解析】写作行文要非常流畅，要把握所给所有要点，同时掌握夏令营的详细内容及招聘的具体要求，详细说明自己的具体情况及兴趣爱好，以此表达清楚自己的原因。要用词恰当，表现要比较充分，具备一定的说服力。词汇和语句的运用要正确。‎ ‎2．‎ Making friends Everyone needs friends and friendship is very important in our life.‎ To make friends , above all, you must be friendly to others .Everyone likes friends who are kind and warm-hearted . At the same time, you should think more of others than of yourself . Remember never judge a person by his appearance and clothes.‎ When you don’t agree with someone, don’t quarrel , but discuss with him or her , try to find a good solution to the problem.‎ Finally we should help those who are in trouble . A friend in need is a friend indeed .‎ This year, in Chong qing there are more than ten thousand students who have not entered for the college entrance examination.‎ 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 ‎【解析】略 ‎3．‎ One possible version：‎ To be continued ‎ The annual campus cultural festival has drawn back its curtain again , but this year students did not show their great interest and passion for it as before .Many students believe that campus cultural festival can offer a wonderful stage for students to show their talents.Apart from helping students promote their interest in study, a series of activities also enrich the campus culture and make campus atmosphere more active. ‎ ‎ In addition , more students will be motivated to develop their potential abilities which will make them qualified for their future positions .On the other hand , students will find it a good chance to relax themselves as well as gain much knowledge that can’t be found in the book.‎ ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：此篇书面表达要求对校园文化节还要不要举办的讨论结果做出总结。在写作时同学们要注意先要说明讨论的事件，然后再讲述讨论结果。在讲述事件时可以用一般过去时态，而在发表个人见解时须采用一般现在时或者根据需要使用一般将来时态。此外在写作时注意不要遗漏要点，而且还要恰当选用连接词以使行文连贯，结构紧凑。‎ ‎【亮点说明】文章要点全面，语言丰富。短文中高级词汇motivated，qualified，promote以及长句的使用显示了作者较高的语言运用能力，而且短语Apart from helping students promote their interest in study, In addition，On the other hand 等的恰当使用不仅使文章上下衔接紧凑，语句连贯，而且也避免了文章句式的单一，总之这是一篇不错的范文。‎ 考点：考查提纲作文。‎ ‎4．不唯一 Possible version: ‎ Getting up early is a good habit. It is of great importance to our health, our study and our life. First, getting up early helps to keep us fit and strong. We can improve our health by doing morning exercises in the open air. Second, getting up early to read aloud helps us memorize what we have learned in class. Third, getting up early helps to prepare our work of the day. We can have enough time to wash our faces, brush our teeth and do other preparations. Before we go to school we can have our breakfast in no hurry. If we stick to getting up early every day, we will find it very useful for our character-training.‎ ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，首先要认真阅读题目。请根据以下提示写一篇关于早起有益的议论文。1. 早起锻炼可使身体健康、强壮。2. 早起朗读，有助于记住学过的的东西。‎ ‎3. 可为一天的活动做好准备，有充足的时间洗漱、吃早餐。坚持早起对培养性格也很有用。‎ 应该用用一般现在时来写。需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。‎ 考点：提纲类作文 点评：本文属于提纲类 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。‎ ‎5．‎ One possible version:‎ Li Hua and Wand Hai are two students of Senior Three. Both of them work hard but they have different learning methods. Li Hua listens to her teachers attentively, trying to catch everything that the teachers say in class. Besides, she often consults her teachers as often as possible if she has some problems. Because of this, she spends less time doing her homework, so it is certain that she can go to bed earlier and she always keeps energetic in the day. However, Wang Hai has quite a different way of learning. He likes to sit up late at night doing his homework, so he often feels sleepy in class. As a result, he misses lots of key points and it is usually takes him more time to finish his homework, which makes it difficult for him to concentrate on what he is doing.‎ In my opinion, Li Hua learns more effectively in class and has more free time to enjoy herself. So I prefer her learning method.‎ ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文，需要写的大部分内容已经给出，考生可以在个人观点方面做进一步第发挥。直接表示出对于前一种做法的支持。写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。‎ 考点：提纲作文 点评：本文属于提纲作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。‎ 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费