2017届高考英语二轮复习书面表达限时测验(10)含答案解析.doc

由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 www.ks5u.com ‎2017届高考英语二轮专题复习 书面表达限时测验10（含答案）‎ ‎1．‎ 第一节 情景作文（20分）‎ 假设你是红星中学高三(1)班的学生李华，‎10月25日你和你的朋友王伟参加了 “2009北京外语游园会” (Beijing Foreign Language Festival 2009)，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，以日记的形式记录当天的活动。词数不少于60。‎ October 25 Sunday Sunny Today I took part in Beijing Foreign Language Festival with my friend Wang Wei. ‎ 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 ‎______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎2．阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。‎ ‎ A peacock was very unhappy with his ugly voice; and he spent most of his days complaining about it. ‎ ‎ "It is true that you cannot sing;" said the fox, "but look how beautiful you are!"‎ ‎ "0b，but what good is all this beauty;" cried the bird, "with such an unpleasant voice!"‎ ‎ "Listen," said the fox, "each one owns something good: You have such beauty; the nightingale has his song; and the owl has his eyes. Even if you had a sweet voice, you would still complain about another thing. Why can't you just be happy about what you have already got?"‎ ‎【写作内容】‎ ‎1.以约30个词概括短文的主要内容。‎ ‎2.以约120个词就“停止抱怨并珍惜自己所拥有的“这一主题发表你的看法，内容包括：‎ ‎ （l）你或你身边的人的类似事例；‎ ‎ (2）谈谈你对该主题的看法。‎ ‎【写作要求】‎ ‎1.作文中可以使用自己的亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得 直接引用原文中的句子：‎ ‎2.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。‎ ‎【评分标准】‎ 概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。‎ ‎3．假定你是李华，准备参加学校举办的主题为“健康成长”的英语作文大赛。请按要求写一篇短文，主要内容包括：‎ ‎ 1 ．积极乐观的人生态度；‎ ‎ 2 ．勤奋求实的良好习惯；‎ ‎ 3 ．热爱体育锻炼。‎ 注意：1 ．词数100 左右； ‎ ‎2 ．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎3 ．开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。 ‎ ‎4．随着“开心农场”“QQ农场”等娱乐游戏风靡互联网，许多中学生也加入了偷菜的行列。请你根据下表的内容，用英语写一篇短文，并谈谈你个人的看法。‎ 现 象 ‎1. 沉迷其中，乐此不疲；2. 身在课堂，心在农场；‎ ‎3. 作业拖拉，成绩下降。‎ 原 因 ‎1. 寻找农耕的乐趣； 2. 释放学习的压力；3. 拉近朋友的距离。‎ 你的看法 ‎……(至少两点)‎ 注意： 1. 不要逐字翻译表格提示内容，应适当发挥。2. 开头已给出，不算入总词数。‎ ‎ 3. 词数：120左右。‎ 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 Nowadays, QQ Farm and Happy Farm are very popular among people from all walks of life. A large number of middle school students are also involved in the game. ‎ ‎5．请根据以下的情景说明，使用5个规范的英语句子描述所给的全部信息内容。‎ ‎【写作内容】‎ 假如你是一名中学生，叫李晓华，请根据下表内容用英语写信给某报社Just Ask栏目的主持人Ralph，请求帮助解决一个长期困扰你的问题。‎ 你的情况 学习成绩好 爱母亲。‎ 有点害怕母亲。‎ 你母亲的情况 对你很严，易发脾气。‎ 很少有时间和你说话。‎ 你的问题 很少交流。‎ 希望互相了解。‎ 不知如何沟通。‎ ‎【写作要求】‎ ‎1.必须使用5个句子介绍所给的全部内容;‎ ‎2.将5个句子组织成连贯的短文;‎ ‎3.参考词汇：发脾气lose one’s temper；‎ ‎4.开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总句子数。‎ ‎【评分标准】‎ 句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。‎ Dear Ralph,‎ I’m a middle school student. ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ I do hope we’ll be closer.What can I do?Looking forward to your reply.‎ Best wishes!‎ Yours sincerely,‎ LiXiaohua 参考答案 ‎1．‎ One possible version:‎ October 25, Sunday Sunny ‎ Today I took part in Beijing Foreign Language Festival with my friend Wang Wei. We arrived there by bike in the morning sunshine. First we attended a lecture introducing effective methods for learning English. The audience were absorbed in it and took notes carefully. Then we went to the English Corner, where a lot of people were chatting with foreigners in small groups. Wang Wei and I joined them with great interest. It was amazing to find myself talking with a native speaker and we got on quite well. Time passed quickly. Before leaving, we bought some books and dictionaries. ‎ The Festival gave me a good chance to practice English, as well as confidence and encouragement for my study. ‎ 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 ‎【解析】‎ ‎2．‎ This story is about a peacock who complained about his ugly voice while actually he is very beautiful. A fox advised him to be content with what he was blessed with.‎ The peacock reminds of my friend Mike, who is always upset. He complained his parents are too busy to stay at home with him, He complains he is too short to play basketball well. But he never realizes that his parents love him so much, and how beautifully he can play the violin, which makes him the envy of his classmates.‎ Many people around us focus on what they want instead of what they have. As a result of their endless desires, they are often dissatisfied. In my opinion, we should stay positive and value what we have instead of complaining too much. If we remain grateful for what we already have and what we can fulfill, we may live a happier life.‎ ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：本文属于读写任务写作，动笔前，一定要认真阅读原文，并理解内容。认真看清题目要求，这篇书面表达给了一段材料：先要求以约30个词概括上文的主要内容，要求有很高的概括提炼的能力，要抓住文章的主题，再以约120个词写一篇短文，按照要点去表达，不能有遗漏，写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。写作时尽量使用自己会的单词、词组和句型，同时也要注意使用一些高级语法和句型，使自己的文章更有文采。‎ ‎【亮点说明】范文的一大特点是词汇高级，句式富有变化：remind sb of sth提醒某人…，focus on 专注于..，As a result of由于， In my opinion在我看来, This story is about a peacock who complained about his ugly voice while actually he is very beautiful. 这句话用了定语从句和while表示转折，A fox advised him to be content with what he was blessed with.这句话用了宾语从句， The peacock reminds of my friend Mike, who is always upset.这句话用了非限制性定语从句， He complained his parents are too busy to stay at home with him, 这句话用了too…to句型， how beautifully he can play the violin, which makes him the envy of his classmates.这句话也是非限制性定语从句， Many people around us focus on what they want instead of what they have. we should stay positive and value what we have instead of complaining too much. If we remain grateful for what we already have and what we can fulfill, we may live a happier life. 这三句话都用了what连接的宾语从句。‎ 考点：考查读写类书面表达 ‎3．‎ We all want to grow up happily and healthily, and for this goal we must do several things. Firstly, we should develop a positive attitude towards life. Life consists of not only sunshine but also hard times. We should be brave in front of difficulties. Secondly, we must study hard because knowledge is power. If we have the power, we can help to build our country and enjoy life better. In order to study well, we need to do sports so that we can keep fit. We can go running, play ball games or simply take a walk after a day’s study. If we do those things well, we will be able to grow up happily and healthily.‎ ‎【解析】略 ‎4．不唯一 One possible versions:‎ 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 Some of them are addicted to it and take great delight in stealing vegetables online. In class, their minds are still wandering around the farm. They waste too much time on it so that they fail to hand in their homework in time and there is a sharp decline in their grades. ‎ ‎ Many factors contribute to the popularity of the game. To begin with, it enables students to experience the pleasure of farming , which is beyond their reach in reality. In addition, students are under great pressure and farming online is a good way for them to relax. It can also bring friends closer and closer. ‎ ‎ As far as I am concerned, though the game is really great fun, as senior students, we are supposed to focus on our studies. Also, I suggest schools starting after-school farming activities. Only in this way can students experience real happiness in farming.‎ ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：这是一篇话题类作文，所以首先要明确所要讨论的话题，并且需要用第一人称来写。需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，适当发挥使文章看起来更充实，并且一定要写出自己的观点。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合作文的主题与开头，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数120左右，不要太多也不要太少。‎ 考点：提纲作文 点评：本文属于话题类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。‎ ‎5．：‎ Dear Ralph,‎ I’m a middle school student.I’m writing to tell you my problem that the relationship between my mother and I has troubled me for a long time.My mother who is strict with me finds little time to talk to me.I love her and I do well in my studies,but I still feel a little afraid of her because she loses her temper easily,so I don’t know how to communicate with her.Maybe it’s because we seldom sit down and exchange our feelings and thoughts.I hope we can know more about each other and understand each other better.‎ I do hope we’ll be closer.What can I do?Looking forward to your reply.‎ Best wishes!‎ Yours sincerely,‎ Li Xiaohua ‎【解析】：本文的话题是成长的烦恼，讲述与母亲之间的问题。文章的要点都已经给出来了，考生只需要翻译即可，在选词的时候注意选择一些高级词汇，也要使用3,4个高级句型，让文章更有文采。要力求用简洁的语言表述出句意，不要啰嗦。同上使用合适的连接词，让文章更有条理。‎ 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费