2017届高考英语二轮复习书面表达限时测验(12)含答案解析.doc

由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 www.ks5u.com ‎2017届高考英语二轮专题复习 书面表达限时测验12（含答案）‎ ‎1．一位中学生在自己班级就关于穿着校服进行了问卷调查。下面是对部分学生调查的统计表，请参照该表写一篇题目为“Report on the Survey about Our School Uniform”的报告，并简要发表你自己的看法。‎ 字数120左右。‎ Groups Opinions Percentage Reasons A like ‎60‎ ‎1 很帅，颜色很好 ‎2 表明是学生，整洁 ‎3 平等，不赶时髦 B dislike ‎30‎ ‎1 不舒服，颜色不好 ‎2 不好看，太过时 ‎3 样式单调 C no idea ‎10‎ ‎2．‎ Part six: Writing (‎10 pts.)‎ 作为一名学生，你肯定经历过多次考试，体验过成功，也遭遇过失败。请你根据提示内容，简要概括学生中普遍存在的对考试失败的两种态度，并结合自身实际，说明你的观点。‎ 消极态度 ‎ 积极态度 你的结论 当考试结果不尽如人意时，情绪低落，丧失信心，不再继续努力。‎ 当考试失败时，鼓励自己，分析考试失败的原因。‎ ‎……‎ 注意：‎ ‎1．题目自拟 ‎2．词数120左右 ‎3．参考词汇 分析：analyze 情绪低落；in low spirits ‎3．‎ ‎ 结合材料，按要求用英文写作，词数不少于60。‎ ‎ In your English class, your teacher shows you the picture beside. Please describe it and say something about it.‎ ‎ 要求：‎ ‎（1）就此材料发表你的感想；‎ ‎（2）应紧扣材料，有明确的观点；‎ ‎（3）请在答题卡上作答。‎ 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 ‎4．Directions: Write an English composition in 120 - 150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.‎ 上周一，你在一所小学观摩了小女孩Amy所在班级的两堂绘画课（如图所示），回家后你用英语写了一篇日记，内容包括：‎ ‎● 对两堂绘画课的具体描述；‎ ‎● 你从中获得的启发。‎ ‎5．最近，你校组织高三学生进行了一场讨论。主题是：要不要集中进行晚自习。根据下图提供的信息，写一篇150字左右的英语短文，客观地介绍一下讨论的情况，注意要涵盖所有要点。‎ 参考答案 ‎1．‎ I did a survey about school uniform. I asked some of my classmates what they thought about our uniform.‎ ‎ The majority like it. 60% of them say it is very fashionable and the color is nice. They think it is neat and tidy and a symbol for students. In some students’ opinion, when we wear our school uniforms, we feel equal and no need to follow fashion.‎ ‎ Others don’t like the school uniform. Some of them feel it is uncomfortable and the color is too dull. Some consider it old-fashioned. In they eyes of others, its style is very simple. The rest of them have no idea about it.‎ 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 ‎【解析】‎ ‎2．‎ Failure Is the Mother of Success ‎ We middle school students have had many tests or exams. We have achieved success and suffered from failure. As for failure, different students take different attitudes towards failure.‎ Some are in low spirits when they don't do well in the exams. They usually lose heart and no longer study as hard as before. But most students take an active attitude towards failure. They encourage themselves to be self-confident, trying to find out and analyze the causes so that they will not make similar mistakes again in future.‎ I agree with those with active attitudes. As we all know, failure is the mother of success. Even great people have failed many times before they succeed. So we must deal with our failure correctly.‎ ‎【解析】‎ ‎3．不唯一 In the picture, two hunters are arguing about the way to have their game cooked, but anyhow, they are ignoring that their chance is flying away. How foolish they both are. In our daily life, we on occasion encounter the same situation. What we are focusing on is not the way to accomplish the task, but only the achievement yet to be obtained, which surely wastes our chances and energy without any actual result of our effort. So we must try to avoid such kind of things happening in our life.‎ ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：仔细阅读图画及文字说明，首先应确定文章体裁。这类文章一般以记叙文或说明文为主。记叙文：要抓住记叙文的六要素：时间(when)、地点(where)、人物(who)、事件(what)、原因(w～)和过程(how)。即：五个“W”和一个“H”。根据图画提示把这六个问题写清楚了，至少可得及格分数。说明文：一般先要把图画联系起来，弄清楚图画的目的、意图；然后进行抽象概括，找出一个说明对象，接着根据图画从时间、过程、步骤等方面加以解释、说明；最后进行总结，得出结论。对事物进行说明时，一定要做到条理清楚，明了易懂。根据图画内容及所采用的文章体裁，确定文章所要用的时态。切记全文时态的一致性。‎ 考点：图画作文。‎ 点评：对于图画中的内容，该详细叙述、描写的，就必须要详细、具体；可以一笔带过的就一笔带过。也就是平常我们所讲的有时要泼墨如水，而有时又要惜墨如金。如图画中所有的时间、数字或言论需一词不漏地写清楚，而有些过程或原因则可适当简略。‎ ‎【答案】‎ Date: June 8, 2012‎ ‎　　Last week, I sat in on two painting classes at a primary school. In one class a student dipped her feet in ink and made a painting out of footprints. By contrast, the same student used a brush to make a breath-taking landscape painting—so vivid that one could almost smell the refreshing rivers and hear the chirping birds.‎ ‎　　Though standing in stark contrast, the two paintings both intrigued me. In fact, they reminded me of what Facebook founder Mark Zuckerberg said, “Keep your eyes on the stars and your feet on the ground.” It’s this maxim on success that lends insight into the two paintings. The first painting represents that we should remain grounded and be cautious of being carried away with temporary success. A kite stays afloat because it’s attached to a reel; otherwise it will instantly lose its balance before eventually crashing into the ground. So it is with us.‎ 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 ‎　　However, success requires more than being simply down-to-earth, with a lofty ideal being another crucial factor. So grand was the scenery portrayed in the second painting that it embodied the reach of our dreams. Instead of ignoring the gleam of light, the spark of wisdom that flashes across our mind and worshipping the luster of the sky of geniuses, we’d be better off trusting that the gleam and the spark will one day shine as brightly as a search light if we have faith in ourselves.‎ ‎　　The paintings taught me to dream big and act small. And I believe, by doing so, the warm light of success will cascade into my life.‎ ‎【解析】这是一篇看图写话，体裁是日记的形式。内含两个要点：介绍对两堂绘画课的具体描述和你从中获得的启发。文章要紧紧围绕这两个要点展开。各个要点表达要清晰，要点要根据图的内容进行具体描述。然后谈谈自己的启发。层次要分明，衔接要自然。需要考生自己做合理的联想，启发要有新意，内容要符合图的逻辑。‎ ‎【考点定位】考查看图写话。‎ ‎5．‎ Recently there was a heated discussion among Senior 3 students in our school. The students were questioned whether they were willing to have the evening self-study at school or not. Here is the result according to the survey.‎ ‎60 percent of the students think it’s a good idea to have the evening self-study at school. They think they can do better in their study with the help of the teachers. Also, they can concentrate on their lessons better in the classroom and with company of their fellow classmates.‎ There are 25 percent of the students who think they prefer to study at home. They suppose that they may get disturbed by others and there are possible dangers on their way home alone.‎ At the same time, still 15 percent of the students don’t have a clear answer to the question. They say they will go to school to have evening self-study if they are asked to, but they promise they can also do well at home.‎ ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：考查数据分析类型短文写作。要求考生根据所给数据筛选出文章的要点，再转换成英语。本题在写作的时候要注意百分数的表达法，不要出现中国式的英语表达。在组织要点的时候，仍然要注意使用多种句式如强调句，倒装句等让文章充满了变化。在发表个人观点的时候也要注意使用谚语，让文章更为地道，有英语的味道。‎ 考点：考查数据分析类短文写作 点评：本文属于图表题的一种，要求考生根据图表，筛选出要点。注意分数百分数的表达法，在本文的写作中，尽量避免出现中国式英语的句式，要灵活运用各种倒装句，强调句等方式，让文章充满变化。‎ 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费