2017届高考英语二轮复习书面表达限时测验(14)含答案解析.doc

由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 www.ks5u.com ‎2017届高考英语二轮专题复习 书面表达限时测验14（含答案）‎ ‎1．‎ 第一节 基础写作（共1小题，满分15分）‎ 写作内容］‎ 今天，电影院放映电影《卧虎藏龙》（英译：Crouching Tiger，Hidden Dragon），‎ 你没能去看，觉得很遗憾，请写一篇日记，应包括以下内容：‎ ‎1.没看电影很遗憾。‎ ‎2.原因之一是要准备下周的考试。‎ ‎3.另外，最近学习很忙，有时只吃面包、喝开水。‎ ‎4.结果累坏了身体，病倒了。‎ ‎5.电影放映时，只得躺在床上看书。‎ 日记的格式已经给出：‎ June 19, 2010, Saturday Rainy ‎------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------‎ 写作要求］‎ ‎1.只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。 2.注意日记的格式。‎ ‎2．‎ ‎2月4日‎，星期天上午，你们班同学骑车到学校附近的公园组织了一次环保活动。请根据下表内容，写一篇日记，发表你对此次活动的看法。‎ ‎1组 扫除：清理废纸、烟蒂、塑料袋等废弃物 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 ‎2组 宣传：树立标牌，告诉游客要爱护花木 ‎3组 演讲：向游客宣传“白色污染”的害处以及保护环境的重要性 你的看法 ‎……‎ ‎．参考词汇：烟蒂cigarette end ‎3．假设你是李华，明年要去英国留学，想通过一家英国留学生机构寻找寄宿家庭。请你写一封电子邮件，说明你的要求：‎ ‎1．房间的条件；‎ ‎2．房子所处的位置和地段；‎ ‎3．你喜欢的房东类型；‎ ‎4．其它。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1．词数100左右；‎ ‎2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎3．结束语已为你写好。‎ Dear Sir/Madam,‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ Looking forward to your early reply.‎ Yours Li Hua ‎4．高三年级是高中生活的最后一年， 这一年中，学生们面临着沉重的升学压力。因此，很多学生课间也坐教室里用功，但学习效率和成绩并不理想。由此你想告诉他们：适当的休息很有必要。现在就请你以“A Ten-minute Break”为题，按下列要点写一篇短文，让这些同学从中有所启发。要点如下：‎ 十分钟的课间休息很有必要。 2．要注意适当的休息方式。 3．你是怎样利用这十分钟的。 注意：词数120左右。‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎5．国际文化交流中心将组织一次由各国学生参加的“和平·友谊”夏令营活动，要求报名者提交英文个人 简介。假设你是王珊，请根据下列信息写一篇个人简介。‎ 姓名：王珊 性别：女 年龄：16岁 学校：陕西阳光中学 其他：爱好音乐，摄影；善于与人交流，乐于助人；热爱自然，热爱和平 参加夏令营的目的：结交朋友，了解外国文化 注意：1. 词数不少于100。2. 可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ 参考答案 ‎1．‎ ‎ June 16, 2006, Saturday Rainy It's really a pity that I didn't go to see the film "Crouching Tiger, Hidden Dragon" when it was on show today. One of the reasons was that I was very busy with my study preparing for the exams 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 ‎ next week. Besides, I was so busy last week that sometimes I just ate a piece of bread plus a ham and drank some water as a meal. As a result, I got very tired and fell ill. So when the film was on show today, though I longed to see it, I had to remain/stay in bed reading my textbooks.‎ ‎【解析】‎ ‎2．‎ February 4, Sunday Fine ‎ This morning our class organized an environmental protection activity in the nearby park. On arriving there, we were divided into three groups .The first group collected the rubbish ,such as the waste paper ,cigarette ends ,plastic bags and so on. The second group set up several boards to remind the visitors to take care of the flowers and trees. The last group gave a speech to the visitors on the danger of “white pollution” and the importance of protecting the environment.‎ ‎ I think it is very important for us to protect the environment .For the sake of people’s health and happiness ,measures should be taken to control and prevent pollution and everyone should make a contribution to it.‎ ‎【解析】‎ ‎3．‎ One possible version:‎ Dear Sir/ Madam,‎ I am a Chinese student who is going to study in London next month. I ‘m writing to ask you for finding a host family for me. Here are my requests.‎ First, I’d like a room of my own, which is clean and comfortable. Second, the apartment should not be far away from the center of the city. That is to say, it is convenient for me to get around. Third, the family can speak fluent English. In addition, I’d appreciate it if the host family can provide a washing machine and some cookers without additional charges so that I am able to wash my clothes and cook my own meals.‎ Looking forward to your early reply.‎ Yours Li Hua ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：本文是篇材料作文，材料非常简单，学生很容易把握写作要求和写作目的。考生在写作之前必须认真审题， 要求让你写一封信说明对寄宿家庭的要求，对房子的位置和地段以及房间的要求和房东类型都需要以第三人称来说明。时态是一般现在时即可。还有就是应该注意句子的衔接和高级词汇的应用，以提高作文的档次。‎ ‎【亮点说明】文章结构清楚，有条理，并使用了非常好的词语和句子为文章增色不少，比如 additional charges， It is convenient for… to do sth.; I’d appreciate it if …,以及which引导的非限制性定语从句等等。并注意了句子的衔接如：That is to say，In addition等等。值得学习借鉴。‎ 考点：提纲作文。‎ ‎4． ‎ As a Senior Three student, time seems much limited. As a result, more and more students try to study from early morning till late afternoon, even during the ten-minute break. In my opinion, to take a ten-minute break between classes is necessary. Otherwise we will feel tired both physically and mentally.‎ During the ten-minute break, we do something to get rid of tiredness. What we need 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费 ‎ is to have a real rest, inste-ad of getting more tired. So doing nothing tiring in that period is really good for us.‎ My ten-minute break is always pleasing. Sometimes I do some simple exercises. Sometimes I have a free chat with my classmates or just take a walk outside. When the next class begins, I feel fresh again.‎ ‎【解析】 ‎ 试题分析：本试题给定的题目是A Ten-minute Break，但是按照题目要求，是要告诉他们适当的休息是非常有必要的。在这课间十分钟内，可能能够写几道题目，但是高中生活压力太大，放松的时间本来就少，如果能够抓住这课间十分钟休息一下，反倒能够提高效率。‎ 亮点分析：本文抓住了中心和重点，围绕课间十分钟能够做的事情来对大家进行一个号召。运用了较多的短语如as a result ，in my opinion，insteadof，otherwise等来连接显示了作者扎实的基本功。本文还运用了主语从句如 What we need is to have a real rest来为本文增色。本文作者通过自己的亲身经历来告诉大家，这十分钟用来休息是非常有效的，增强文章说服力。‎ 问题说明：本文虽然运用的特色词汇较多，但是句式过于单一，没有很多两点，所以建议能够添加一些复合句如定语从句等，还能加一些强调句或者倒装句来增色。‎ 考点：论述性文章写作。‎ ‎5．I’m Wang Shan, a girl of sixteen, presently attending Beijing Yangguang Middle School. I like music, especially classical music. I’m also interested in photography because it allows me to record the beautiful moments in my life. Through my hobbies, I’ve made many friends. In fact, I like meeting new people and enjoy talking with them. Believing we all need help from each other, I appreciate friends’ help, and I’m willing to help anyone in need.I love life; I love Mother Nature; and I love peace. I hate any form of violence.‎ I would like to join the Peace & Friendship Summer Camp since it would be a great opportunity to make friends with young people from different countries and learn about their cultures.‎ ‎【解析】‎ 试题分析：本文属于提纲类作文，1.本文主题引入自然，而且把学生学校生活与社会生活紧密结合在一起。2.要求明确，整体难度适中。3.本文写作注意以下几点:  A.要求写一篇简历，注意结构和语言上的特点。B.注意表中“其它”和“目的”两项应该是重点要表达到位的内容。文字提示里所出了要点，考生可以翻译，并且做适当的发挥，在写作的过程中，一定要注意使用合适的连接词来连接全文，让文章成为一个整体。同时注意使用高级词汇和高级句型提升问的文采和层次。‎ 考点：考查提纲类作文 点评：提纲类作文最重要的是要把所有的要点都包括在内，不能有遗漏或省略。本文所给要点很全，不需要考生做较多的发挥，在写作时，注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，让文章更有文采。‎ 由莲山课件提供http://www.5ykj.com/ 资源全部免费